江苏专转本英语作文评分标准及范文模板

1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上作文评分标准2分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。字数不足应酌情扣分：Part One 背诵范文1观点类作文对命运的两种看法自己的观点结论：命运掌握在自己的手中 My View on FateDifferent people have d

2、ifferent views on fate. Some people think that fate is predestined and nobody can change it, while others argue that everybody is the master of his fate and he can change it with his own hands. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe all men are bor

3、n equal and nobody is destined to always succeed or fail in his life. For another, if a person is diligent and determined, he will realize his dream no matter how poor, humble or unlucky he may be. Just think of Nobel, who invented dynamite after countless experiments during which lost his brother a

4、nd got seriously injured himself.Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that there is no such thing as destined fate in our life. Only if we hold on to our dream can we turn it into reality, just as the saying goes, “ Everybody is the architect of his own f

5、ortune.”2利弊类家教的好处家教的坏处结论 Advantages and Disadvantages of Family TutoringRecently more and more people begin to engage family tutors for their children. They argue that family tutoring brings several advantages. First, family tutoring can help weak students to keep up with others in class. Second, th

6、e society is developing at a high speed and family tutoring can help the child make preparations for the future competition.Family tutoring also brings many problems. Firstly, students may not welcome family tutoring at all because many of them are already overburdened. Secondly, the quality of the

7、teacher and teaching remains a potential problem, as the main aim of most tutors is to earn money. Finally, the student may depend too much on family tutoring and overlook learning at school.From what has been discussed above, we can see clearly that the disadvantages are more obvious. Teachers and

8、parents should help students improve efficiency both in and out of class experience tells us that the best students need no family tutoring. 3办法类毕业生关注找工作问题找工作的三个解决办法总结How to Get a Job After GraduationThe past decade has witnessed a more and more fierce competition in the job market. Consequently stu

9、dents voice growing concern over how to get a job after graduation. To this problem, in my mind, there are at least the following approaches.First of all, the main approach is to take part in grand recruiting fairs in big cities. The students hands in his resume and waits for the notice of an interv

10、iew. Secondly, the student can go over the advertisements on newspapers, TV or the Internet to find a satisfactory job. Of course, he should also wait for replay after sending out applications. Finally, going directly to an ideal company is a brave behavior, which sounds pretty rare among the job hu

11、nters.Personally, I would like to choose the second method in my own practice. On the one hand, I dont want to have a try at those companies which have not advertised in the mass media. The success rate is so rare that I cannot afford the time and energy. On the other hand, I would not like to go to

12、 those crowded recruiting fairs, which often provide only poor-paying posts which are neither challenging nor promising. As long as I am sure of making sufficient preparations and distinguishing myself during interviews, it is out of question for me to get the ideal job which I have been dreaming of

13、.4时政类奥运将在北京召开奥运对中国的巨大影响作为大学生我们能为奥运做什么Beijing Olympics and IThe Olympics Games will be held in Beijing on August 8, 2008. All the Chinese feel very proud of this great event. As the historic sports meeting, Beijing Olympics will not only bring along splendid sport competitions, but also offer golden

14、opportunities for the development of China.To start with, Beijing Olympics will great boost Chinas economic development. According to experts, the Olympic Games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. More importantly, Beijing Olympics will greatly enhance our international infl

15、uence. During the games, large numbers of tourists will visit China and experience Chinese culture, thus improving the communication between Chinese people and people from all over the world.As college students, we should contribute our share to this historic event. For example, we can carry out Oly

16、mpic education among citizens, familiarizing them with Olympic spirits and Olympic knowledge.5. 应用类-通知An English speech contest sponsored by the University English Club will be held on May 4th at the university auditorium to memorize the 86th anniversary of the May 4th Movement. Any of full-time stu

17、dent in this university is entitled to take part in the speech. The student interested in the activity is required to submit a draft of his/her speech before April 30th to the Speech Organization Committee Office at Room 1512 of the No.2 Student Dormitory. Please email your speech draft to . For fur

18、ther information please contact us at .Part Two 结构与模板作文开头部分1. 开门见山The Best Way to Stay HealthyThe best way to stay healthy is to develop a good quality of psychology. 2. 正反表态Advantages/Disadvantages of Advertising on TelevisionNowadays more and more advertisements are seen on TV every day. Some peop

19、le think that advertising on TV can bring us a lot of benefits, but others hold the different opinions. In my opinion, I am in favor of the former.3. 让步法Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?Nowadays, young people choose to phone each other rather writing letters. Some are worried that letter writing will

20、 be useless in the future. Even so, I still maintain that letter writing will never be killed by phones. .4. 提问法Factors Influencing Young AdultsOf the different factors that can have influence on young adults, the family and friends stand out most. Which of the two is more important? My view is that

21、 it is friends who have the most important influence on young adults. 常用句型1. When it comes to , some think/believe/hold 2. There is a public debate today that 3. Recently, . has been brought into focus.4. Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to 5. Nowadays, it

22、is heatedly discussed topic to many people that .6. . has aroused much public concern in 7. In my opinion/Personally .8. From my point of view, I think .9. My view is that .10. As for myself/For my part, I would like to say .11. As far as I am concerned, I .12. We can assume 作文主体部分段落的展开主题句: 本段要说什么问题

23、; 具体; 简洁扩展句: 说明和支持该主题 表示各种逻辑关系的过渡词连接各个句子1. 列举时常用词语: for example, for instance, such as, like, thus, takeas an example, to illustrate.2. 分类时常用词语：to begin with, first, second, furthermore, besides, in addition, moreover, finally, 3. 因果关系常用语汇: because of, so, owing to, thanks to, thus, as a result of,

24、hence, for this reason, consequently, is caused by, lead to, result in4. 比较常用语汇：at the same time, similar to, accordingly, both, similarly, the same as, in the same way作文结尾部分1. 总结归纳Advantages/Disadvantages of Advertising on TelevisionFrom the above, we can see that TV advertising is beneficial both

25、to manufacturers and consumers because of the information it provides.2. 再次强调Factors Influencing Young AdultsGenerally speaking, in most cases, friends are the most important influence on young adults.3. 提出建议GlobalizationIn order to survive the competition of globalization, we must go along with the

26、 historic tide of globalization, and actively cope with the opportunity and challenge that the economic globalization brings.常用句型1. In summary, 2. In short, .3. In brief, .4. To sum up, .5. In conclusion, .6. All in all, .7. On the whole, .8. In a word, .9. From what has been discussed above, we may

27、 draw the conclusion that.10. Thus, it can be concluded that.11. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that .12. We can conclude from the foregoing reasons and examples that .常见作文模板Nowadays ,there are more and more . It is estimated that Why have there been so many ?

28、Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that .Besides,. The third reason is.To sum up ,the main cause of .is due to . .It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,.On the other hand ,. All these measures will certainly.For most of us today, .From above ,we can find that the reasons why .are as follows.The primary reason , I think,is Second, .The third reason is .Therefore, .These days we often hear that .It is common that.For one thing ,.For another,.What is more, .Since ., it is natural that .To solve the