高考英语写作的有效复习(刘景军)

1、北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司高考英语写作的有效复习2014.12 刘景军北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司内容目录n 高考对写作的要求n 学生现状及存在的问题n 高三第一轮写作复习n 高三第二轮写作复习n 高三第三轮写作复习北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司 Reading makes a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man. 读书使人渊博，交谈使人机敏，写读书使人渊博，交谈使人机敏，写作使人严谨作使人严谨 培根培根 高考对写作的要求北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司 课程标准对写作的要求课程标准课程标准8 8级的写作要求级的写作

2、要求1. 能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要；2. 能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告；3. 能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；4. 能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。 谋篇技巧谋篇技巧行文连贯行文连贯思维能力思维能力辨析能力辨析能力文化知识文化知识写作经验写作经验北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司要求考生根据题示进行书面表达，考生应能：清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达意思；有效运用所学语言知识。 高考说明对写作的要求(山东)北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司u 短文写作（日记、小故事等）u 实用性写作（卡片、信件、说明、留言、 填写表格等）u 图文信息转换（图表描述、信息解读、写配图

3、说明）u 接续完成文字 课标建议文体形式北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司年份年份内容（山东）内容（山东）载体载体文体文体2014从所给的两句谚语中选择一句为题写一篇征文，解释该谚语的含义并讲述能体现该谚语含义的个人经历文字型应用文(夹叙夹议)；开放式2013给美国朋友Tom回复邮件谈谈未及时回信的原因及假期打算文字型应用文2012为校报写一篇稿件，介绍课外学习英语的经验文字型应用文2011写一封向美国朋友Tom 求助的电子邮件文字型应用文2010给英国朋友Tom 写一封因故不能赴约旅游的道歉信文字型应用文北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司年份年份内容（课标卷内容（课标卷I）载体载体文体文体2014针对一

4、篇英语学习的广告，写一封信询问暑假去英国学习英语的有关情况文字型应用文(全英文)；2013给笔友Peter写信，请他到机场接叔叔李明文字型应用文2012写一封申请参加夏令营的电子邮件文字型应用文2011给学校辅导中心写信预约帮助文字型应用文2010给外教Smith女士写一封邀请信。邀请她作英语演讲比赛的评委。文字型应用文北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司年份年份内容（课标卷内容（课标卷II）载体载体文体文体2014写一篇征文，主题是“十年后的我”。文字型应用文(夹叙夹议)；开放式2013给开网店的美国朋友Tom写信，请他代卖中国结文字型应用文2012写信邀请外教Susan 参加学生生日聚会文字型应用

5、文2011以读者身份给Global Mirror周报主编写信文字型应用文2010给外教Smith女士写一封邀请信。邀请她作英语演讲比赛的评委。文字型应用文北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司问题： 很多考生对写作存在畏难情绪 写出来的作文错误百出（语法、拼写） 篇章不连贯，主题不明确 内容不全，篇章意识较差 学生现状及存在的问题北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司 where there is a will, there is a way. This is the proverb I love the most, which encouraged me through the valley of life.

6、It was a spring full of charm while the challenges in the whole world seemed to come at me. The deadline of the School Magazines release, the preparation for a students film exhibition and the imminent mid-term exams were not so attractive or friendly to me as usual, but like three 北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司 wh

7、ere there is a will, there is a way. monsters at the same time driving me down to the deepest valley. However, I was not so weak as the “monsters” thought that they could have beaten me down easily. The proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way.” lit me up to fight against and surmount them. No

8、t only did I organize the matters in a logical way, but put them into effect according to my schedule 北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司 where there is a will, there is a way. as well. Whenever I felt too much pressure, I wrote to myself and said, “try hard and keep on”. It truly made sense. The busy life lasted for ab

9、out one month that I didnt fall into asleep before midnight even once during that memorable period. It couldnt make me more proud that I made it with flying colors. The printed magazine appealed to many readers, the exhibition showed the spirit of 北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司 where there is a will, there is a way

10、. Students films and my scores of the exams was more than satisfying. Never would I realize my potential unless I push myself hard and keep on like that. Besides, I didnt give up so that I accomplished the mission impossible. Looking back to my steps, I thankfully admit that it was the proverb that

11、played the significant role. I have realized that no matter how challenging the 北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司 where there is a will, there is a way. task may seem, only do we insist on what we have faith in and never give up will the way to our goal show up sooner or later. 北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司u整体规划 全面复习u循序渐进 扩大积累u限时训练

12、范文引路u评改多样 反馈有效总体原则训练要点北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司九月英语学科授课安排周次周次语法语法模块模块写作写作周五早周五早读词汇读词汇早读早读听力听力统一统一练习练习203-08专题三M1U1-3应用文1-感谢信determine-distinction 周三5周四3310-15专题四M1U1-3人物类distinguish-emperor周三6周四4417-22专题五M2U4-6应用文2-申请信employ-expectation周三7周四5524-29专题六M2U4-6地点类expense-firework周三8周四6北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司u 第一轮：提高基础读写能力

13、u 第二轮：微技能训练与应用u 第三轮：文体写作强化冲刺北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司句子成分基本句型（5种）写作词汇表达积累第一轮：提高基础读写能力北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司掌握一门外语对我们的生活很有帮助。（动名词做主语）Mastering a foreign language can be of great help in our life. 使我印象最深的是他们都经过了专业培训。（主语从句）What impressed me most was that they had had professional training. 1. 句子成分北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司1、主语+谓语（不及

14、物动词）2、主语+谓语（及物动词）+宾语3、主语+系动词+表语4、主语+谓语（及物动词）+间接宾语+直接宾语5、主语+谓语（及物动词）+宾语+宾语不足语 基本句型（5种）北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司作为一名中学生，我认为英语是非常重要的一门学科。As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. 显而易见，一个好的学习习惯能帮助我们尽快达到我们的目标。Obviously, a good learning habit can help us speed up to reach our goals. 北京华夏

15、天天教育科技有限公司admire 词性：动词 词义：崇拜，羡慕I admire him for his success in business. I really admire the way she brings up those kids all on her own. We took time to stop and admire the beautiful view. He was much admired for his great scientific achievements. (钦佩)She gazed upon him with great admiration. (名词)H

16、is speech called forth admiration from all the people present. 写作词汇北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司It is a common problem shared by many people. You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents.I still have hundreds of stories to share with you.Women must receive their fair share of training for goo

17、d-paying jobs. 北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司表示增加的词increase / raise / rise / go up / grow up 表示减少的词decrease / go down / drop / fall / decline / reduce 表示稳定的词remain stable go on steadily stay the same表示变化的形容词、副词表示变化的形容词、副词 rapid/rapidly sharp/sharplysteady/steadily slight/slightlyslow/slowly dramatic/dramatically 表达

18、积累北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司被忽略的积累宝典1单选与写作1. Tsinghua University, founded in 1911, is home to a great number of outstanding figures. 2. Life is like a long race where we compete with others to go beyond ourselves. 北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司被忽略的积累宝典2课文与写作3. I normally wake up about five minutes before my alarm clock goes of

19、f. 4. It takes me less than fifteen minutes to wash, get changed, have breakfast, leave home and get on a bus.5.They have already expressed a keen interest in working in design after their tennis careers come to an end. (注意含冠词词组的固定搭配)北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司被忽略的积累宝典3完形填空与写作被忽略的积累宝典4阅读理解与写作北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司u 三大从句

20、的写法u 含it 的高级句型u 非谓语动词的写作u高级表达法的渗透（词汇、句式）u衔接与过渡（句子、段落）第二轮：写作微技能训练北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司u使用高级句式的几个策略：u使用被动语态、强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句、with复合结构、虚拟语气 高级句式策略北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司uAbove all, we must do something to stop pollution.uAbove all, something must be done to stop pollution.uI realized the importance of English when I en

21、tered senior high school.uIt was when I enteredthat I realized. 北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司uWe dont know its value until we lose health. uNot until we lose health did we knowuIf its not well organized, the meeting will be a failure. uIf not well organized, the meeting北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司uBecause there was too much noi

22、se, I couldnt go on studying. uWith too much noise going on, I uI didnt take his advice, so I failed in the exam. uIf I had taken his advice, I wouldnt have failed in the exam. 北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司1首先，需要休息，因为我们应该以饱满的精力迎接新的一天。_，a good rest is needed _ we are supposed to embrace a fresh day energetically. 衔

23、接与过渡First of allbecause北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司2就我自己而言，我正准备上大学，就要离开我学习了三年的母校了。_ ，Im preparing to enter a university _ leaving the high school where Ive been studying for three years.As far as Im concernedand北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司4.As a new way of shopping，online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily

24、 life.(1)On one hand，online shopping has many advantages.First，online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things. Instead of searching a crowded store，we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like.(2) Second，it is much faster for us to do shopping. We dont have to spend

25、a lot of time going to shops. Third，we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time.北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司(3)On the other hand，online shopping also has many disadvantages. The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are.(4) As result，we can be cheated

26、easily.(5)Whats worse, we cannot see the things in detail.(6)In a word (7) despite the disadvantages of online shopping，I think it is an advanced way to do shopping.So we should develop it.北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司我会永远爱读书，因为书籍在我的生命中既像良师又像益友。_I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise tea

27、chers as well as good friends in my life. 翻译北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司总之，条条大路通罗马。我相信有付出就有回报。_All in all，every road leads to Rome. I believe hard work pays off.北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司应用文分类指导大作文专题细化步骤与方法指导统练作文全覆盖分类整理作文夹第三轮：文体强化训练北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司 小作文分类指导理清应用文分类，各个击破分别训练信件类信件类感谢信感谢信其他类别其他类别通知通知申请信申请信海报海报祝贺信祝贺信广告广告邀请信邀请信招领招领慰问

28、信慰问信演讲稿演讲稿投诉信投诉信留言条留言条道歉信道歉信发言稿发言稿电子邮件电子邮件北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司应用文写作策略和方法（北京）1. 仔细审题，看懂题目的意思，整理要点，决定语言形式；2. 开头直截了当，尽快入题，不要拐弯抹角，拖泥带水；3. 行文一般以10个句子为宜。若用少于8句容易表达不清；若多于10句则零乱琐碎，缺乏整体感；北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司应用文写作策略和方法4. 用最有把握的词语句型将规定内容加以表达，并始终注意达意；5. 应按照合理顺序，适当使用一些过渡性的连接词，将句子连珠成串；6. 结尾要干净利落，既不能拉杂，也不能草率，要显得自然，恰当得体。北京华夏天天

29、教育科技有限公司应用文书信写作“模板”书信的类型可能千变万化，如建议信、邀请信、申请信、求职信、感谢信、道歉信、批评信、抱怨信等（以建议信、邀请信和感谢信为主）；在掌握了掌握了英语书信的基本格式的基础上，还要根据写作对象和目的组织核心写作部分的内容，充分考虑到交际性原则和应用型选择。北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司 大作文专题细化提纲类作文（观点类议论文）图表作文（说明议论）图画作文（描述议论）图画作文（故事叙述）北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司专题一：主题先行+双线并行北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司专题二：注意矛盾冲突/心理发展/动作全程北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司专题三：对画面细节进行联想、扩充北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司专题四：注意起承转合、场景转换北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司 步骤与方法指导书面书面表达表达审审抓抓扩扩连连改改抄抄北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司书面表达六步走 审题: 明确体裁，掌握格式 抓要点, 一一对应 选词造句, 点石成金 连句成文 检查修改, 删繁就简 认真眷写, 书写规范，卷面整洁 北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司好文章的标准 整洁的卷面；-书写工整 丰富的表达；-语言丰富 流畅的结构； -逻辑合理 独到的见解；-思想积极北京华夏天天教育科技有限公司His brother, who is a tour