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1、Presented by Dorothy LV第四章第四章 医学论文英文摘要医学论文英文摘要Objective写作写作结构式英文摘要要求用高度简明、准确的语言表结构式英文摘要要求用高度简明、准确的语言表达完整、科学并且方便检索的信息，因此基本上达完整、科学并且方便检索的信息，因此基本上采用一个动词不定式短语来表达目的（我们知道，采用一个动词不定式短语来表达目的（我们知道，在英语中动词不定式常常被用来表示目的）。这在英语中动词不定式常常被用来表示目的）。这里，动词不定式短语实际上是里，动词不定式短语实际上是“The purpose of the present study is to”、“The

2、 objective of this paper is to ”这一类完整句式的省略。而这一类完整句式的省略。而且，在表示目的的动词不定式里，且，在表示目的的动词不定式里， study、explore、investigate之类的动词也不具有重要之类的动词也不具有重要的意义，重要的是动词后面的具体内容，也就是的意义，重要的是动词后面的具体内容，也就是动词的宾语和状语，以及宾语的定语。目的往往动词的宾语和状语，以及宾语的定语。目的往往是和标题紧密相关的。是和标题紧密相关的。Objective 一般为单数。不少人错写成Object。注意，在英语表达中不要使用汉语特有的标点符号，特别是顿号“、”。一

3、、表述方法手段研究一、表述方法手段研究二、表述可行性及证据研究二、表述可行性及证据研究三、表述经验总结三、表述经验总结四、表述效果作用影响研究四、表述效果作用影响研究五、表述原因机制相关性研究五、表述原因机制相关性研究六、表述特征性能规律研究六、表述特征性能规律研究七、表述比较研究七、表述比较研究八、表述复合目的八、表述复合目的一、表述方法手段研究一、表述方法手段研究探讨提高斜形肌腱损伤修复强度的有效方法。探讨提高斜形肌腱损伤修复强度的有效方法。To investigate an effective method 提高提高斜形肌腱损伤修复强度Increase. A general word t

4、hat means to become or to make greater in some respect, such as size, quantity, number, degree, value, or intensity. Improve. To advance to a better state or quality; to make better. The patients condition did not improve after chemotherapy. Although the insulin concentration increased, the insulin/

5、glucose ratio decreased. Blood pressure was increased by intravenous injection of epinephrine. 提高提高斜形肌腱损伤修复强度Increase the repair strength撕裂撕裂,裂口裂口 laceration lsrein斜形肌腱损伤斜形肌腱损伤oblique lacerations of tendonstendons with oblique lacerationsincrease the repair strength of tendons with oblique laceratio

6、ns/ oblique lacerations of tendons increase the repair strength in treatment of tendons with oblique lacerations探讨提高斜形肌腱损伤修复强度的有效方法。探讨提高斜形肌腱损伤修复强度的有效方法。To investigate an effective methodincrease the repair strength in treatment of tendons with oblique lacerationsTo investigate an effective method of

7、 increasing the repair strength in treatment of tendons with oblique lacerations.Or: To investigate an effective method that （which） can increase repair strength in treatment of tendons with oblique lacerations. （定语从句）探讨提高斜形肌腱损伤修复强度的有效方法。探讨提高斜形肌腱损伤修复强度的有效方法。To investigate an effective methodincrease

8、 the repair strength in treatment of tendons with oblique lacerationsOr: To investigate an effective method to increase the repair strength in treatment of tendons with oblique lacerations.（不定式表示目的）(for increasing)Or: To investigate an effective method for increased repair strength in treatment of t

9、endons with oblique lacerations. 二、表述研究可行性及证据二、表述研究可行性及证据 To study the feasibility of adopting temporary revascularization during the course of limb replantation in order to shorten ischemia time and accelerate functional restoration of the severed limb.vascular 脉管的脉管的, 血管的血管的revascularization n. 血管

10、的再形成血管的再形成探讨在断肢再植术中采用临时血运重建的方法以缩短断肢缺血时间，促进断肢功能恢复的可行性。Or: To study the feasibility of adopting during the course of limb replantation temporary revascularization that （which） can shorten ischemia time and accelerate functional restoration of the severed limb. （注意定语从句的用法：它不仅仅有修饰的作用，还往往表达目的、原因和结果。） 四、表

11、述效果作用影响研究目的探讨胶质瘤术后癫痫发生的影响因素。目的探讨胶质瘤术后癫痫发生的影响因素。Objective To explore the related factors of postoperative epilepsy in gliomas.聋儿成功康复的聋儿成功康复的相关因素有哪些相关因素有哪些 引起引起“鼻咽癌鼻咽癌”相关因素有哪些相关因素有哪些 predisposing factor 诱病因素诱病因素Objective To explore the predisposing factors for postoperative epilepsy in patients with g

12、liomas.“predisposing factors for” 3,830,000 ; “predisposing factors of”; 2,140,000；Predisposing factors of varicose and telangiectatic leg veins. Sadick NS. Department of Dermatology, Cornell University Medical College, New York, New York. ./pubmed/14305431. 骨科200812 程文俊以新型可注射生物

13、材料壳聚糖-磷酸三钙为支架，负载富血小板血浆（PRP）构建成复合体，观察其体内成骨效应。To study the effect of a novel injectable scaffold material chitosan- beta-TCP combining PRP on repairing bone defect of goat.To study the effect of a novel injectable scaffold material, chitosan-beta- tricalcium phosphate (TCP) combined with platelet-rich

14、 plasma (PRP), on repairing bone defects in goats.论著题名中一般不用缩略词，论著题名中一般不用缩略词，摘要少于摘要少于3 3个，个，并在首次出现时写明全称并在首次出现时写明全称 目的目的 探讨应用血管内皮细胞生长因子与肿瘤坏死因子受体联合治疗股骨头坏死的治疗效果。Objective To explore effect of the therapy of avascular necrosis of the femoral head with vascular endothelial growth factor and tumor necrosis

15、 factor receptor.Objective To evaluate the effect of vascular endothelial growth factor (VEGF) and tumor necrosis factor receptor (TNFR) for treatment of avascular necrosis of the femoral head in rabbits.五、表述原因机制相关性研究五、表述原因机制相关性研究探讨载脂蛋白E基因多态性与原发性骨质疏松症、骨质疏松性骨折的相关性。To study the relationship （correlati

16、on） between Apolipoprotein E Gene polymorphism and primary osteoporosisstiup:rusis and fracture of osteoporosis.To study the relationship （correlation） between Apolipoprotein E Gene polymorphism and both primary osteoporosis and fracture of osteoporosis. 七、表述比较研究七、表述比较研究通过对通过对128例拇外展功能受损患者的病例统计，列例拇外

17、展功能受损患者的病例统计，列出常用手术方法，并通过比较得出不同方法的使用出常用手术方法，并通过比较得出不同方法的使用频率及结果优劣。频率及结果优劣。To statistically analyze the 128 cases of thumb abductor defects so as to learn common operative methods and by comparison understand their application frequencies and advantages and disadvantages respectively.To statistically

18、 analyze the 128 cases of thumb abductor defects so as to understand application frequencies and advantages and disadvantages of the commonly used operative methods for them.通过对通过对128例拇外展功能受损患者的病例统计，列例拇外展功能受损患者的病例统计，列出常用手术方法，并通过比较得出不同方法的使用出常用手术方法，并通过比较得出不同方法的使用频率及结果优劣。频率及结果优劣。To statistically analyze the 128 cases of thumb abductor defects and evaluate （compare） the commonly used operative methods for them.八、表述复合目的报告一组少见的病例，研究这种情况对病人的症状报告一组少