作文课件：writingane-mailtogiveadvice

1、Skills building 3:Skills building 3:Writing to give advice 【写作任务】 电子邮件电子邮件 【写作分析】 第一步：认真审题第一步：认真审题 一审体裁：电子邮件一审体裁：电子邮件 二审格式：电子邮件格式，包括：信头二审格式：电子邮件格式，包括：信头 称呼，称呼， 正文正文 （人称和时态），结束语，（人称和时态），结束语， 签名。签名。 三审结构：三段式三审结构：三段式 How to write an English e-mail of advice? It is usually made up of five parts. 1.Headi

2、ng2.Greeting 3.Body 4.Closing 5.Signature Tips for writing (1)writers name, address, date“Dear ., My .”“Mr. ., Miss ., Mrs. .”.“All the best”, “Best wishes” “Im looking forward to receiving your reply/ answer letter/hearing from you“your friend/sister.,” “Truly/Sincerely/Faithfully Yours” “Yours,” “

3、Yours sincerely/truly/ faithfully/ever,”Dear Miss Verinder, (A sample) Im glad to have known you at your home a few days ago. Im writing this letter to make an apology to you I feel very sorry. During the investigation, I made mistakes when I found you had been always refusing to answer my enquiries

4、 about the Moonstone.Then Godfrey had stolen it from Franklins bedroom, The next morning, Godfrey left for London where he was murdered. Now I have known the truth. I fell terribly sorry and guilty. I must make an apology to you for my mistakes. I hope you can forgive me. And we will still be good f

5、riends. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours sincerely, Sergeant Cuff BodyclosingsignatureHeadinggreeting 1. A formal letter should be short and clear.1. A formal letter should be short and clear. 2. You should use simple and polite language. 2. You should use simple and polite languag

6、e. How to write a formal letter Tips for writing (2)1. I am truly sorry that 2. I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.3. I am terribly sorry to4. Much to my regret5. I am afraid that6. Excuse me forPara 1 Briefly state the purpose of th

7、e e-mail.Para 2 Give some details/reasons.Para 3 Restate the purpose.Tips for writing (2) writing an e-mail with advice writing an e-mail with adviceuDont forget to present your information clearly, simply and giving the points in order of importance.uExpress the advice politely, like asuggestion.Us

8、eful words and expressions: I would advise you to buy. I would recommend the first one to you . I think you may/ could/ would buy . It seems to me that . In my opinion . 第二步：提炼要点第二步：提炼要点 Mark 204D: Language： _ Number of words included:_ Weight: _ Size: _ Price: _ Extra functions: _ _Chinese and Engl

9、ishOver 100,00096 grams1047215mm650yuana voice function, a search function, exam revision, radio and games, spelling check, a pronunciation guide Uncles Requirements:Weight and size: _Price: _Appearance: _Translation: _Pronunciation: _Extra functions: _no more than 700 yuan English to Chinese andChi

10、nese to EnglishEnglishTry to cover the following aspects of the electronic dictionary in your email.1. the price2. the word capacity3. the language4. extra functions and features5. appearance and weight6. the battery and the guarantee of it.About the content of the email价格价格词汇量词汇量语言语言其他功能和特点其他功能和特点外

11、形和重量外形和重量电池和保证书电池和保证书Dear Uncle: I would advise you to buy Mark 204D for your son. First of all, this electronic dictionary gives Chinese- English translation, which will help him improve his language study. In addition, it includes a spell Check function, pronunciation guide and a list of words wit

12、h similar and opposite meanings. Lastly, it will be convenient for him to carry because of its small size, and at 650 yuan, the price is reasonable. In conclusion, I think you may find this model more suitable for your son. Yours, Li HuaDear Miss Verinder, (A sample) Im glad to know that you have co

13、me back from your honeymoon a few days ago. Im writing this letter to make an apology to you for my mistakes about accusing you of taking the Moonstone. I feel very sorry. During the investigation, I made mistakes when I found you had been always refusing to answer my enquiries about the Moonstone.

14、I misunderstood that you might have debts to be paid off with the diamond and that you had taken the diamond yourself. But now I have learned about the fact that Franklin had moved the Moonstone to his bedroom to keep it safer for you during his dream without awareness. Then Godfrey stole it from Fr

15、anklins bedroom. The next morning, Godfrey left for London where he was murdered. Now I have known the truth. I feel sorry and guilty. I must make an apology to you for my mistakes. I hope you can forgive me. And we will still be good friends. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours sincerely, Sergeant Cuff Say sorry againExplain in detailState the purposeLanguageLanguageSimple and