2020-2021年中考英语书面表达专题复习

1、2020-2021年中考英语书面表达专题复习一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1 .假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及 你自己本人的计划及原因。比例计划原因50%去国内外旅游1.放松;2.欣赏美景30%多读一些书1.增长知识；2.培养兴趣20%参加社会实践1.锻炼自己；2.结识朋友你的计划?（至少一个）?（请你补充）汪思：（1）邮件应包含所有要点（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分注： 社会实践

2、 social practice activitiesDear DavidI'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidI'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the s

3、tudents plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social prac

4、tice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 how to do, spend a meaningfu

5、l summer vacation , half of, plan to do , travel at home and abroad , enjoy the beautiful scenery , take part in , social practice activities , make new friends 等。而斗£谓语动 词结构 The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart a

6、nd develop interests.和宾语从句 They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。 在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻 辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。2.假定彳是David,来自美国

7、，你的 QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他来 信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容和实际用英语 回复，可以有适当的发挥。To: davidwoodlandschoolFrom: limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David,about it.I ' m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I interested in it very much. I

8、' m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know littleCould you help me answer the following questions? Why do you want to be a volunteer? What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? Do you have any problems with volunteering? If my parents don ' t allow me to do so, what

9、sdo?ld II ' m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishes,Li Ming注意：1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数2 .回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. L

10、ooking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】 Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting act

11、ivities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.It s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can balance my study and work. If your parents don t allow y

12、ou to volunteer, you should have a goodtalk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming 回信，介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： I&

13、#39;m glad;-we can； It ' sOK to , If your parents don ' t allow you tyou should-. ,-1 hope 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴，接下来介绍我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题，最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工作。此处 would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look a

14、fter, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3 书面表达李华所在的国际学校正在开展"My Favourite Traditional Festival交流活劭，假定你是李华，请你向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日一一端午节，内容包括：1 .今年庆祝时间（6月18日）2 .节日由来：纪念（be in memory of）屈原3 .吃粽子，赛龙舟，挂菖蒲和艾草（ calamus and Ay Tsa0 4 .欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日注意：1.词数80100;5 .可适当增加细节，

15、以使行文连贯；6 .文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；7 .开头已写好，不计入总词数。Dear fellows,The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.【答案】Dear fellows,The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth

16、day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragon-boat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragon-boat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat

17、 Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the day.We welcome to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日一一端午节。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结 构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：People celebrate;People hold ； We can watc

18、h , We welcome to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了今年端午节庆祝时间，接下来介绍端午节的 由来以及庆祝活动，最后欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日。此处 according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, welcome to do sth, all over the world 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不 少。8 .书面表达根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。基本情况张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生兴趣爱好1 .喜欢阅读。每周花

19、七个多小时阅读各种类型的书，因为2 .喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面 的变化。优秀事迹上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程木米梦想1 .希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师2 .每个人为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如：.（举1例）要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Suns

20、hine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket

21、money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like reading , mo

22、re than , all kinds of, spend time doing , enjoy doing , the number of , twice a year, be the chief engineer of 等。而 He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合

23、运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样 化，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。5.书面表达初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提示，写一篇题为Our school life in Grade Nine的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。在校老师工作认真负责，充满爱心学生（至少发挥两点）周末作业作业多.舍弃爱好其它活动锻炼，电

24、视愿望（发挥一到两点）要求：1 .所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：2 .文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3 .语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4 .文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than h

25、alf a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for stud

26、ents, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I

27、 feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短 语， 例如 at school, work hard , mo

28、st of, patient enough , help sb. with sth. , all kinds of problems , in our life , as a result, as for students , listen to , be busy doing , try to do , spend a lot of time doing , not any more , play basketball 等。而 It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more car

29、efully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达 多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要 点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。6.书面表达同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计 划。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示

30、用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。内容提示：暑假计划学习博览群书；学习技能（或自拟一点）生活健康饮食；坚持锻炼（或自拟一点）其它热爱公益；亲近自然（或自拟一点）汪思：1 .表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2 .词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3 .表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.s all. Thank you.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That 【答案】D

31、ear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I'm interested in cookin

32、g, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be

33、kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know un

34、healthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如I'd like to do ， help me open my mind ， at least ， be interested in ， during theholiday ， plan to do ， join in ， be kind

35、to someone in need ， pay more attention to ， be close to nature ， search the Internet 等。而 First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someo

36、ne in need. 等表顺序词和综合句式的运用，既使 短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。7 书面表达假如你是李明，彳的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail 。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天

37、气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数 80 左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze.Yours,Li Ming【答案】 Dea

38、r Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. NowI d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the

39、 doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for m

40、e, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protectthe environ ment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；

41、然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含

42、了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 People all over the

43、country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 The government suggests that people go towork or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. 等。8. 美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她 ”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的 改观，人人积极参与双创活动

44、，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写 一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。广be polite,.should Y_ _ 一_clean upJ/ create tlie civilized and vlZJIfl_-houldn*t ymake noise.+,IJ要求：1 .语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2 .必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；3 .行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4 .词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city,

45、 our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,Let ' s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】 Since the government created civil

46、ized and healthy city, our living environment hasimproved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be politeto others and try to behave well. It'

47、 s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can helpclean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep offgrass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn ' t do. We shouldn ' t make a lot ofnoise loudly in the public. We can&#

48、39; t spit anywhere and we shouldn' t throw rubbish everywhere.At the same time, we shouldn ' t break traffic rules.Let s take action now. Our actions can make a differecne and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【详解】琼海正在进行 “双创 ”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到 “双创

49、”活动中来。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称we 来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，

50、向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市 “双创 ” 活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如 We should be polite to others andtry to behave well. 、 It s kind of you to help people in need、.

51、Meanwhile, We can help clean upour city in order to make it clearer and tidier. 、 We can t spit anywhere and we shouldn t throwrubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn' t breOk traffic rules.9 假如你叫李华，最近你班里的美国交换生Lucy 想要感受中国的传统文化。周末你和父母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时何地见面。提示词语： Laosh

52、e Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示问题： Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?kucyHi, Iuq;11躯ar 】口h t限 Chines traiiiQnai ensure.【答案】 Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to LaosheTeahouse this Saturday morni

53、ng. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy PekingOpera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinesetraditional culture there. Let' s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我通过微信告诉Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何时何地见面。结合所给材料，可知本文主要

54、考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I wantto , We are going to , -We can , Let ' s meet at 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代 词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要邀请你去老舍茶馆，接下来介绍我们去那里做什么，最后指出我们要在何时何地见面。此处 want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb dosth, at the gate of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。10 .书面表达假如你是英语俱乐部的 Cathy