怎样写好英语作业

1、词汇词汇,句型句型 （高级）和（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语法多样化（较复杂） 1.覆盖了所有的覆盖了所有的要点要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构应用了较多的语法结构和词汇和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要要点点全全连连接接词词 拼写和标点拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。考虑。 词数词数少于少于80和和多于多于120的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2分。分。 如如书写较差书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降，以至影响交际，将分数降

2、低一个档次。低一个档次。书面表达如何写？书面表达如何写？五个步骤1、审题、审题文字信息文字信息图画信息图画信息题材、人称、时态、要点题材、人称、时态、要点2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。话的细节要点。3、联词成句：用连词成句的方法将上述要点、联词成句：用连词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。的词语扩展成句子。4 连句成文：连句成文：注意：注意：主语和谓语主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）逻辑关系逻辑关系开头与结尾开头与结尾语篇衔接语篇衔接5、检查修改，规范抄写、检查修改，规范抄写给阅卷人

3、以好的第一直观印象给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分整体三部分 Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3. Ending 小结；呼应主题 技技 巧巧1. 使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3. 使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文

4、章很重要，能使文章上下衔接重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。自然、紧凑。2. 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a

5、 failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇一、怎样使用较高级的词汇We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students 1 When he arrived, he gave me an e-mail.（使用介词短语形式）.2. To his surprise, the little girl kno

6、ws so many things.（使用名词性从句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句)4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）On his arrival, he gave me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl

7、 knows so many things. 二二 、怎样使用较丰富的句式、怎样使用较丰富的句式Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)7.

8、They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)8.I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Fol

9、lowed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid 三、高考大纲中常用的三、高考大纲中常用的连接词连接词1. 表示递进表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示转折关系表示转折关系

10、但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.3. 表示因果关系表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示条件关系表示条件关系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that );as long as 除非: unless 否则: or else 5. 表示时间关系表示时间关系 当 的时候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: befo

11、re 直到: until 一就 : as soon as 后来， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近来: lately; recently 自从 :since 从那时起: from then on6. 表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系 首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end7. 换一种方法表述换一种方法表述 换句话说: in other words; that is to say;8. 进行举例说明进行举例说明 例如，比如: for instance; fo

12、r example; like; such as9. 用于陈述事实用于陈述事实 实际上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth10. 对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word 其它常用到的副词其它常用到的副词 Therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afte

13、rwards ; personally;书面表达中学生常见错误类型一 散乱型不着边际胡乱写；二 逻辑混乱型多出现在语句或情节描绘中；三 语法不通型一般出现在语句中；四 误用词语型语句中用词错误五 粗心大意型不认真阅读提示，或错写内容或丢三落四六 喧宾夺主型不分主次信马由缰丢掉主要内容而将非主要内容大写特写示例一 、散乱。 2001年的书面表达是一封信.向澳大利亚朋友迪克介绍学校的减负给你的学校与生活带来的变化,表格提示中明确说明是周末活动.然而,有的同学却大谈为什么减负和应怎样减负,虽写了不少,语句也通,但是,评卷老师因其不着边际而给了很低的分.二、 逻辑混乱。 2000年要求考生写一篇交通事

14、故的报告, 其中有这样一个情节, “ 我见到一老者从公园出来欲过马路”, 原本应 I saw an old man walking out of the park and he was to cross the street. 但是,相当多的同学写成 I saw an old man walking out of the park and was to cross the street. 这样句子的逻辑就不对了.三 、语法不通。 2004年北京卷的第一篇作文要求考生根据图表提供的信息描述每天的课余活动. 有同学这样写And then, in the spare time, students a

15、lso watch TV and listen to music, use the computer as well, costing half a hour more or less I think student should take part in physical exercises more often rather than spending time on computer or TV programs.四、 误用词语。 2002年北京卷是一篇关于生存训练的日记.其中有这样一个情节:我们生火做饭. 本应And then we made a fire to cook our me

16、al.然而,竟有人写为We set fire to cook our meal.五、 粗心大意。 2004年全国卷之一有这样一题，加拿大一所学校学生今年暑期来你校访问。期间,Andy Smith 将住你家，你写欢迎信。原本应Im glad to hear that you are coming to China and stay at my home.但是有人写成 I am glad to know that you will go to China and live in my home.六、 喧宾夺主。 1998年要求学生根据图画写一篇关于参观红星农场的日记，参观是主题，应写Today w

17、e visited a farm. Early in the morning we gathered at the gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic in the sunshine. After a short rest, we

18、had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. 实际情况是，相当多的学生将农场的活动写的少而又少，却用了许多笔墨大写特写吃午饭的内容，好象不是参观，而是去野炊！ 高考满分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework was reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was th

19、e only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I

20、 also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.20012001年春季高考作文年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。 I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes every day

21、. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspapers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.1717分分 联合国教科文组织某考察团正联合国教科文组织

22、某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：的形式简要介绍这个村的情况： 1)大小：近大小：近100户人家，约户人家，约500口人。口人。 2)变化：过去很穷，变化：过去很穷，78年后变年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。现已旧貌换新颜。 3)教育：原来的学校很小，现教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。儿童在

23、此免费就读。 注意：注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：）词数：100- -120之间。之间。Practice 书面表达：书面表达：Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school.This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it

24、 is taking on a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome

25、to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/wh

26、ich has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . 书面表达：书面表达：Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small . Now it has

27、been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 store