高中英语--祝贺信-(公开课)

1、Dear Henry, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your admission into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduate. As your close friend, I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your admission. In my view, you work ha

2、rd and besides that, you are a very intelligent person. This admission is a reward which you richly deserve. I am sure you will make greater progress in your study and obtain a bright future in your life. I wish you greater success in your school career and I am looking forward to good news from you

3、 soon. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 大声朗读大声朗读Dear Henry, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your admission into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduate. As your close friend, I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am

4、at your admission. In my view, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligent person. This admission is a reward which you richly deserve. I am sure you will make greater progress in your study and obtain a bright future in your life. I wish you greater success in your school career and

5、I am looking forward to good news from you soon. Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua祝贺信祝贺信“三步走三步走”：观察思考：观察思考： 文章的体裁？文章的体裁？ 写作目的？写作目的？ 结构（几个层次？）结构（几个层次？） 时态？时态？1. 过渡词？过渡词？1.1.写信的目的和表达听到写信的目的和表达听到喜讯的心情；喜讯的心情；2.2.对喜讯进行积极评价对喜讯进行积极评价（包括肯定被祝贺人过去（包括肯定被祝贺人过去的努力和优点）；的努力和优点）；3.3.表达衷心的祝福及未来表达衷心的祝福及未来的祝福。的祝福。 （注意：语气要真诚、自（

6、注意：语气要真诚、自然、亲切动人）然、亲切动人） 作文训练之祝贺信作文训练之祝贺信 常用语块常用语块 恭喜恭喜/祝贺祝贺 _ 2. 实现实现/成真成真_3. 很高兴听到很高兴听到_4. 我想表达我对我想表达我对的祝贺的祝贺I would like to express my congratulations oncongratulations oncome trueHow happy I am to hear 5. 我知道这肯定是因为我知道这肯定是因为6.我希望我希望I know this is surely owing toI hope (that)I wish .套用句式套用句式 我很高兴听

7、到你梦想成真。我很高兴听到你梦想成真。1. 2. 我想表达我对你被北京大学录取的祝贺。我想表达我对你被北京大学录取的祝贺。How happy I am to hear that your dream has come true.I would like to express my congratulations on your admission into the Peking University.3. 我希望你在大学中取得更大的成功，将来为家乡服务。我希望你在大学中取得更大的成功，将来为家乡服务。I wish you greater success in the university an

8、d servethe hometown in the future . 假定你是李华，得知你的好假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学友王强今年考上了北京大学(Peking University)，他来，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信祝贺信要点如下：要点如下：1. 考上理想大学，父母骄傲。考上理想大学，父母骄傲。2. 努力学习将来为家乡服务。努力学习将来为家乡服务。3. 对未来祝福。对未来祝福。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。文连贯。根

9、据题目要求审题：根据题目要求审题： 文章的体裁？文章的体裁？祝贺信祝贺信2. 写作目的？写作目的？ 祝贺王强考上北京大学祝贺王强考上北京大学3. 结构（几个层次？）结构（几个层次？） 3个个 4. 时态？时态？ 一般现在时一般现在时5. 过渡词？过渡词？ ？ 实战演练：实战演练：假定你是李华，得知你的好友假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学王强今年考上了北京大学(Peking University)，他来自，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信贺信要点如下：要点如下：1. 考上理想大学，父母骄傲。考上理想大学，父

10、母骄傲。2. 努力学习将来为家乡服务。努力学习将来为家乡服务。3. 对未来祝福。对未来祝福。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。文连贯。实战演练：实战演练：根据题目要求审题并列根据题目要求审题并列出提纲：出提纲：1. .写信的目的和表达听到写信的目的和表达听到喜讯的心情喜讯的心情2.2.对喜讯进行积极评价对喜讯进行积极评价（包括被祝贺人过去的努（包括被祝贺人过去的努力和优点）；力和优点）；3.3.表达衷心的祝福及未来表达衷心的祝福及未来的祝福。的祝福。 （注意：语气要真诚、自（注意：语气要真诚、自然、亲切动人）然、亲切动人）

11、祝贺信祝贺信“三步走三步走”：写作：写作：15分钟完成分钟完成互评作文（互评作文（2分钟）分钟）任务任务：1. 看看别人如何表达你的疑难点；看看别人如何表达你的疑难点； 2. 看看同学的作文里有哪些模板中的核心句型。看看同学的作文里有哪些模板中的核心句型。评判依据：评判依据： 1. 字数字数: 100词左右。词左右。 2. 卷面是否整洁？卷面是否整洁？ 3. 内容是否齐全？内容是否齐全？ 4. 句子结构是否完整？句子结构是否完整？ 5 . 用了哪些核心句型？用了哪些核心句型？评分档次评分档次：第一档：第一档：21-25 (优秀）内容齐全，错误很少；优秀）内容齐全，错误很少；第二档第二档: 16

12、-20（良好）内容齐全，错误较少；（良好）内容齐全，错误较少；第三档第三档: 11-15 （及格）内容基本齐全，错误较多；（及格）内容基本齐全，错误较多；第四档第四档: 6-10 （较差）内容不齐全，错误很多；（较差）内容不齐全，错误很多；第五档第五档: 1-5 （差）只写了一两个相关词句。（差）只写了一两个相关词句。Dear Wang Qiang, Congratulations! I would like to express my congratulations on your admission to Peking University, your ideal one! As your

13、 close friend, I just want you to know how happy I am to hear your success. This is a new start for you and its good for you to study with so many excellent students and learn from top professors. As for as Im concerned, you are intelligent. Besides, you have worked very hard in the past years, so I

14、m really happy to know that you become the first college student of your village from the poor areas. I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you. I wish you greater success in the university and serve the hometown in the future. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua Homework：熟读范文和关于祝贺信：熟读范文和关于祝贺信的核心短语、句型。的核

15、心短语、句型。课堂练习课堂练习 假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学北京大学(Peking University)，他来自贫困地区，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：要点如下：1. 考上理想大学，父母骄傲。考上理想大学，父母骄傲。2. 努力学习将来为家乡服务。努力学习将来为家乡服务。3. 对未来祝福。对未来祝福。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和

16、结束语已为你写好。Dear Wang Qiang, Congratulations! I have learned with delight that you are admitted to Peking University, your ideal one! I know you have worked very hard in the past years, so Im truly happy to know that you become the first college student of your village from the poor areas. I am sure yo

17、ur parents are greatly proud of you. I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success. This is a new start for you and its good for you to study with so many excellent students and learn from top professors. I wish you greater success in university and serve for the hometown in the f

18、uture. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua课外作业课外作业 假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了获得了“汉语桥汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：1. 天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。2. 继续努力，有机会来中国留学。继续努力，有机会来中国留学。3. 希望见面和交流。希望见面和交流。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细

19、节，以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。参考词汇：参考词汇：“汉语桥汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contestDear Peter, I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest. I know that you were not good at Chi

20、nese at first. However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”. Finally, you succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student. So Im so surprised that you become champion of this competition. If you go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other. Sincere congratulations to you again!Yours,Li HuaDear Henry, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your admission in