如何在写作中避免句式单一

1、1如何在写作中避免句式单一如何在写作中避免句式单一一、如何做到句式灵活？一、如何做到句式灵活？1)1)并列句并列句2)2)复合句复合句 ( (定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句) )3)3)强调句型强调句型4)4)非谓语动词非谓语动词5)5)倒装句倒装句6)6)其他句型及结构其他句型及结构Ex:按要求改写下列句子。1) English is widely used in the world. Most business letters are written in English. (合并为并列句) English is widely used in the worl

2、d and most business letters are written in English. 2) People thought of some ways to solve the problem. These solutions didnt work. (合并为并列句) People thought of some ways to solve the problem but these solutions didnt work.3) I suggest that you visit the Great Wall. It has a history of more than two

3、thousand years. (合并为定语从句) I suggest that you visit the Great Wall, which has a history of more than two thousand years.July 11 has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005. He began his famous voyage on July 11. (合并为定语从句) July 11, when He began his famous voyage, has been named the Saili

4、ng Day in our country since 2005. 5) I will not be able to meet you at the airport. I have some experiments to do that day.(合并为状语从句) I will not be able to meet you at the airport because I have some experiments to do that day.The problem was complicated. He solved it in only two hours with a compute

5、r. (合并为状语从句) Though the problem is complicated, he solved it in only two hours with a computer.7) In the past five years, there have been changes in peoples diet. It is a fact.(合并为名词性从句) It is a fact that in the past five years, there have been changes in peoples diet.8) The weather was fine. We wen

6、t to visit the ZhongShan Park. (独立主格结构) The weather being fine, we went to visit the ZhongShan Park.9) You should never give up when you are faced with difficulties. (非谓语+倒装句) Never should you give up when faced with difficulties.10) When a man and a woman meet, the woman first offers her hand. (改为强

7、调句) When a man and a woman meet, it is the woman who first offers her hand.11) 众所周知, 吸烟危害健康。（一句多译）a. It is known to all that smoking does harm to peoples health.b. As is known to all, smoking harms peoples health.c. Everyone knows that smoking is harmful to peoples health.Rewrite the sentences 1. Th

8、ey arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法一方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the

9、happy atmosphere.If I am given another chance, I will succeed.Given another chance, I will succeed. In order to improve his English, he studies hard.方法一方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动非谓语动词词) 听到这个消息听到这个消息,他们变的很激动他们变的很激动. _the news, they got excited.2.

10、尽管被告知许多遍尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错他仍然重复这个错. _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀请发言除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默你应该在会议上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.Hearing Having been toldinvitedTranslate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非谓语动词非谓语动词)1,1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。面对困难时，他从

11、不放弃。2 2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。3 3，做完作业后，他回家了，做完作业后，他回家了。Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.Introduced to the market, the product made a great success. Having finished his homework, he returned home.方法二方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力1. He didnt realize his foolishness until he

12、 returned home. Not until2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live. Only 3.He is clever but he does not work hard. as/though4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the streetComplete the sentences he returned home did he realize his foolishness.by ch

13、anging the way we live can we save the earth.Clever he is, he does not work hard.stands the clock tower.方法二方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒倒装句装句)1. 他从不说关于他家庭的事他从不说关于他家庭的事. 2. 只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性, 我们才能生活得更好我们才能生活得更好. 3.只有用这种方式只有用这种方式,

14、 我们才能有足够的精力好好学习我们才能有足够的精力好好学习.Never did he speak about his own family.Only when each of us realizes the importance of water， can we live a better life.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.方法二方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力5.5. 他是个孩子，却知道很多。他是个孩子，却知道很多。6.6. 墙上有个通知，上面写着墙上有个通知，上面

15、写着“请节约用水请节约用水”.Child as/though he is, he knows a lot.On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water”. As soon as As soon as Li Ming and his wife arrived at Li Ming and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed .the airport, they were warmly welcomed .On arriving On arriving at th

16、e airport , Li Ming and at the airport , Li Ming and his wifehis wifeLi Ming and his wife were warmly welcomed Li Ming and his wife were warmly welcomed the moment the moment they arrived at the airport.they arrived at the airport.No sooner No sooner had Li Ming and his wife arrived had Li Ming and

17、his wife arrived at the airport at the airport than than they were they were Hardly Hardly had Li Ming and his wife arrived at had Li Ming and his wife arrived at the airport the airport whenwhen they were they were 方法三方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式尝试多样化表达方式 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All

18、 these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful._ which_With the development of _ _so _ that_In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful. Nowadays, Beij

19、ing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.句式多样句式多样文章增文章增“靓靓”一一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档二二. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力巧用倒装增强句子表现力三三. 尝试多样化表达方式尝试多样化表达方式为了增强短文的连贯性，使表达流畅自然，要巧用关联词。请熟记和用好以下的为了增强短文的连贯性，使表达流畅自然，要巧用关联词。请熟记和用好以下的关联词语：关联词语： A、表并列：、表并列：besides, in addition,

20、whats more, moreover, or, and, also, too, as well as B、表转折：、表转折：however, nevertheless, yet C、表原因：、表原因：because of, thanks to, owing to, due to D、表结果：、表结果：thus, therefore, as a result E、表列举：、表列举：namely, for example, for instance, that is to say F、表结论：、表结论：to conclude, in a word, in brief G、表时间顺序：、表时间顺

21、序：first, second, then, soon, finally, at last H、表空间顺序：、表空间顺序：here, there, in front of, at the back of, next to, on one side, on the other side I、表对称关系：、表对称关系：for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand, on the other hand如何使文章连贯？如何使文章连贯？(过渡词的使用过渡词的使用)5、请看下面两篇短文的对比情况：、请看下面两篇短文的对比情况：短文短文1：Dear Mr.

22、Principal, Im a senior student of our school. Id like to say something about the canteen service in our school. We are satisfied with the clean and tidy canteen , the delicious food and the good service.We are not satisfied that the price of the food is a little too high and that we have a limited v

23、ariety of dishes to choose from. And we have to wait a long time to get the meal.The problems should be solved as soon as possible. Thanks for your consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 短文短文2：Dear Mr. Principal, Im a senior student of our school. Id like to say something about the canteen service i

24、n our school. In general, we are satisfied with the clean and tidy dinning hall, its delicious food and the good service. However, what is not to our satisfaction is that the price of the meal is a little too high and that we can only have a limited variety of dishes to choose from. In addition, we

25、often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time it is to us students. Therefore, may I suggest that the problem be solved as soon as possible so that we can all enjoy our meals at school? Thanks for your consideration. Sincerely yours, L

26、i Hua5、全面检查，避免失误。、全面检查，避免失误。 主要从以下几方面入手： 1）文体格式是否正确。）文体格式是否正确。 2）人称是否符合要求。）人称是否符合要求。 3）有无单词拼写错误。）有无单词拼写错误。 4）大小写、标点符号是否有错。）大小写、标点符号是否有错。 5）语法是否正确。（句子的时态、语态、主谓一致、）语法是否正确。（句子的时态、语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词、单复数、指代词等）非谓语动词、单复数、指代词等） 6）过渡词是否使用自然。）过渡词是否使用自然。 7）要点是否齐全。）要点是否齐全。 8）书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁。）书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁。基础写作实践基础写作实践

27、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。1、标题：Top Meal of the Day2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。原因：晚上学习太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡一会。结果：上课总想睡觉。注意力下降。考试成绩不理想。建议：早餐不可少，它提供全天所需的能量的30%， 青少年健康应从早餐抓起。Some students study late into the night.Some students study late into the night.They choose to miss breakfast so that They choose

28、to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed.they can have a few extra minutes in bed.As a result, they tend to be sleepy all As a result, they tend to be sleepy all day. They have bad memories. day. They have bad memories. It is hard for them to get high marks in It is hard fo

29、r them to get high marks in all kinds of exams. all kinds of exams. As a matter of fact/In fact, morning meal As a matter of fact/In fact, morning meal plays an important part in our daily life.plays an important part in our daily life. It can provide 30% of the whole days It can provide 30% of the whole days energy.energy. We students should start with a regular We students should start with a regular breakfast.breakfast.二