高中英语必修二unit2writing

1、会计学1高中英语必修二高中英语必修二unit2writing第1页/共38页第2页/共38页Enjoy some pictures. Do you know these athletes? What sport are they good at?第3页/共38页basketballJordan第4页/共38页football/soccerMessi第5页/共38页tennisLi Na第6页/共38页table tennis/ping-pongZhang Yining第7页/共38页badmintonLin Dan第8页/共38页gymnasticsLi Xiaopeng第9页/共38页swi

2、mmingSun Yang第10页/共38页runningLiu Xiang第11页/共38页1.Whats your favorite sport? 2.When&why do you like this sport?3. What do you do to improve your skill?4. Who is your favorite athlete? 5. Whats your hope or dream?第12页/共38页A. Whats your favorite sport? B: I like_best.A: When & why do you like t

3、his sport? B:I became interested in_ when I was_ I like_ because_A:What do you do to improve your skill? B: I often practice it_A:Who is your favorite athlete? B: My favorite athlete is_ I like _because_ A: Whats your hope or dream? B: I hope in the future I can_第13页/共38页单元写作单元写作- My Favorite Sport

4、如何描写最喜欢的一项运动如何描写最喜欢的一项运动 (说明文说明文,可穿插记叙和讨论可穿插记叙和讨论)第14页/共38页第15页/共38页 My Favorite Sport Of all sports, I like badminton best. I became interested in it when I was a kid. I am fond of playing badminton because it can not only build our bodies, but also train our brains. Therefore, I join the Badminton

5、 Club in our school. To improve my skill, I often practice it whenever Im free. Besides, I play games with my friends after school. My favorite athlete is Lin Dan, who is a world champion. I admire him because he is so skillful with the ball. Although I am not good enough now, I really hope I will b

6、e a good player like him in the future. 第16页/共38页第17页/共38页第一步第一步：第18页/共38页 My Favorite Sport Of all sports, I like badminton best. I became interested in it when I was a kid. I am fond of playing badminton because it can not only build our bodies, but also train our brains. Para1 what, when and why第

7、19页/共38页 Therefore, I join the Badminton Club in our school. To improve my skill, I often practice it whenever Im free. Besides, I play games with my friends after school.Para2 how to improve第20页/共38页 My favorite athlete is Lin Dan, who is a world champion. I admire him because he is so skillful wit

8、h the ball. Although I am not good enough now, I really hope I will be a good player like him in the future.Para3 favorite athlete & dream第21页/共38页第二步第二步：第22页/共38页1. Of all the sports, I like . best.2.I became interested in . when I was . At the age of ., I showed great interest in .3. I like/am

9、 fond of/fall in love with . because . The reason why I like . is that .4. I often practice it . Whenever I have time/I am free, .5. My favorite athlete is . I like because .6. I hope I can . in the future . I really want to be a(n) . when I grow up.最喜欢的运动最喜欢的运动喜欢该运动的时间喜欢该运动的时间喜欢该运动的原因喜欢该运动的原因现怎么从事现

10、怎么从事/提高该运动提高该运动最喜欢的运动员最喜欢的运动员梦想梦想第23页/共38页第三步第三步：第24页/共38页递进递进besides, whats more, in addition not onlybut also对等对等on one hand, on the other hand, 让步让步although, even though/if, whenever因果因果so, thus, therefore 转折转折however, but 列举列举such as, for example并列并列also, as well总结总结altogether, all in all, in a

11、word.第25页/共38页e.g.“喜欢喜欢” like, love, be fond of, fall in love with, have a fancy for, be crazy about when引导时间状语从句引导时间状语从句I became interested in when I was同位语、表语从句同位语、表语从句The reason why I like .(同位语)is that .第26页/共38页Pay attention to： spelling mistakes(拼写错误) logical and grammatical mistakes(逻辑、语法错误)第

12、四步第四步：查漏补缺查漏补缺(check the mistakes)第27页/共38页题目：My Favorite Sport要求：字数100左右 限时15分钟 第28页/共38页 自评自评+互评互评 15 Main points(要点齐全语句通顺要点齐全语句通顺) 5 Structures(结构紧凑过渡自然结构紧凑过渡自然) 3 Words &Sentences (高级词汇句式多样高级词汇句式多样) 3 Handwriting (书写工整美观书写工整美观) 1 Paragraphs (分段分段) 链接链接:高考英语作文评分标准高考英语作文评分标准25第29页/共38页档次档次语法结构

13、、词语法结构、词汇汇复杂结构、高复杂结构、高级词汇级词汇连接成分与结构连接成分与结构写作目的完成情写作目的完成情况况第五档第五档（2125分）分）应用较多应用较多语法结构或词汇语法结构或词汇有些许错误有些许错误有效使用连接全文有效使用连接全文结构紧凑结构紧凑完全达到完全达到第四档第四档（1620分）分）满足要求满足要求语法结构或词汇语法结构或词汇方面基本准确方面基本准确简单使用连接全文简单使用连接全文结构紧凑结构紧凑达到达到第三档第三档（1115分）分）满足要求满足要求语法结构或词汇语法结构或词汇方面的错误有一方面的错误有一些，但不影响理些，但不影响理解解简单使用连接全文简单使用连接全文内容连

14、贯内容连贯基本达到基本达到第二档第二档（610分）分）语法单调，词汇语法单调，词汇有限有限语法结构或词汇语法结构或词汇方面的错误有一方面的错误有一些，影响对写作些，影响对写作内容的理解内容的理解较少使用连接成分，较少使用连接成分，内容缺少连贯内容缺少连贯信息未能清楚地传信息未能清楚地传达给读者达给读者第一档第一档（15分）分）语法单调，词汇语法单调，词汇有限有限语法结构或词汇语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多，方面的错误较多，影响对写作内容影响对写作内容的理解的理解缺乏连接成分，内缺乏连接成分，内容不连贯容不连贯信息未能传达给读信息未能传达给读者者第30页/共38页What have you learnt today?第31页/共38页Correct and finish your writing -My Favorite Sport.第32页/共38页第33页/共38页basketballJordan第34页/共38页table tennis/ping-pongZhang Yini