高考英语读后续写提升特训小专题

1、优生优培之高难点突破读后续写提升特训小专题Part I General remarks ：读后续写制高点Example 1:It was Christmas Day. Robin was working alone fixing an old lantern in the back room when he heard the ringing of his bell on the shop door. The bell, which produced a uniquely pleasant sound, had been in Robin*s family for over a hundred

2、 years. He valued it dearly and enjoyed sharing its song with all who came to his shop. Although the bell was hung on the inside of the main door, Robin had tied a wire to the screen door so that it would ring whether the inner door was open or not. Hearing the bell ring, he left the back room to gr

3、eet his customer.“How can I help you, little lady?” Robinfs voice was joyful.“Hello, sir. The little girl spoke almost in a whisper. She looked at Robin with her big brown eyes, and then slowly scanned the room in search of something special. Shyly she told him, Id like to buy a present, sir.”“Well,

4、 lets see J Robin said, “who is this present fdr?“My grandpa. Its fbr my grandpa. But I dont know what to get.”Robin began to make suggestions. How about a pocket watch? Its in good condition.The little girl didnt answer. She walked to the doorway and put her small hand on the door. She shook the do

5、or gently to ring the bell. Robins face seemed to glow as he saw her smiling with excitement.“This is just right J the little girl said. Momma says my grandpa loves music.”Just then, Robins expression changed. Fearful of breaking the little girfs heart, he told her, Tm sorry, missy. Thats not fbr sa

6、le. Maybe your grandpa would like this little radio.” The girl looked at the radio, bowed her head, and sadly sighed, No, I don*t think so.”In an effort to help her understand, Robin told her that the bell had been his only companion, for the rest of his family were all gone now, except for his estr

7、anged （疏远的）daughter whom he had not seen for nearly a decade.Paragraph 1:With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl looked up at him. Paragraph 2:如何衔接内容衔接.看懂原文，理清文章的脉络结构。.阅读原文的过程中确定文章的体裁理清文章的结构及作者的写作意图一明白原文的 情节一推敲已给出的续写段首，推理下文的发展方向一揣摩作者原文的语气，判断作者 的情感态度。I诊断角色、视角错误转化Para 1 : Seeing this, my son bec

8、ame confused and surprised.Para 2 : On that day, my son performed an act that most adults wouldnt have done.II处方.与原文情节相契合：故事情节发展合理，逻辑性强，符合故事主线。Falling Jkation73，is w/wn ! characters work to sBv。problem or conflict.Rising Action 7his includes the 3C trading up to the main problem or con/Hcf.backgroun

9、d irmlud9s 1 introduction of characters and setting.Resolution 7his is how things end up in j/ory.Climax7his is vA 逻辑合理(follow logically)等方面。四、如何结尾？(结尾篇)一.读后续写结尾的特点简洁明快，干净利落2.逻辑周密，结局自然3.首尾呼应，主题突出4.回扣原文，蕴意丰富.读后续写结尾的作用,揭示故事结局或至少有结局感；.与前文伏笔照应，使人觉得故事发展结局在情理之中；.与前文形成对比，点明主旨，突出主题；.塑造较为完整的人物形象(心理、性格、品质、经历、

10、命运、能力等)；.在故事情节上，照应标题和开头，使读后续写结构较为完整。.读后续写结尾的方法1.自然式结尾2.哲理式结尾3.呼应式结尾.自然式结尾自然结尾是顺着文中所叙之事的自然发展，以它的必然结果作结尾 没有套话，没有空话，简单，自然，可使文章的结构显得十分完整。作为读后读 写的文章，常常不一定含有某种深刻的道理，这时只要将故事补成完整 就足够 了。因此，自然式结尾是续写故事中最常见的结尾方式。案例 1 山东模考 One possible version:One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg.I noti

11、ced that one of the dogs legs was bleeding. I immediately realized our Spotty was injured. I ran up to comfort him and tied to bandage around his injured leg, and then gave him some food to eat. I felt very sad. Spotty was till as cute as ever though he had a lame leg. After that, Spotty and I becam

12、e more friendly. I really appreciated his courage.Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. I came out to see what had happened. Maybe there was a thief near our house. Maybe there was a robbery nearby. I didnt know. The next morning, wc couldnt find our Spotty. I looke

13、d for him everywhere, but could find him nowhere. I cried and waited for him. But this time he was gone and never came back.案例2潍坊一模2020.4结尾：.With gratitude, we bid farewell to this kind woman , setting out on our journey home.带着感激之情，我们告别了这位善良的人，踏上了回家的旅程。.哲理式结尾哲理性结尾往往总结出文章的中心思想，并用客观语言表述，它能使 作文具有一定的思想

14、含量，能给读者送去一份宝贵的精神财富。他可以通过以小 见大、从物到人、由事及理、从点到面、由一及众的方式生华文章主题。 哲理 虽然占得篇幅小，但它常常使一件平凡的小事变得耐人寻味，嘻嘻生辉，起到画 龙点睛的效果。案例1.潍坊一模My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance. In no time did we find ourselves heading for it. We were filled with hope and excitement to find such a building i

15、n the middle of nowhere. We climbed up the hill at a swinging pace as if all the pains were gone. As we approached, a sign came into sight, which read: Administration Office. However, it was not open for business. The empty hall made us nervous all at once. We stood there hopelessly, wondering what

16、to do next.Just then, a friendly woman appeared, saying, Hello/51 could barely hold back my enthusiasm and blurted out, Were lost!” She comforted us and opened a room for us to take a break. Seeing we were cold and hungry, she treated us with hot chocolate. After studying the map, we figured out tha

17、t our car was parked over three kilometers away. She offered us a ride back to our car and we accepted gladly. I felt relieved to see our rental car again. What a blessing to have such an unforgettable experience 写作指导： 运用哲理式结尾，一定注意事件是哲理的基石和依托，哲理则是事件内核的深化 和升华。通过哲理性的语言结尾点明中心，生华主题，一定不能脱离原文故事、 故事背景、故事发生

18、的场景。同时，还要注意把控理论生华的度，不要太大，也 不要离题。理论一定是积极向上，宣扬正能量。.呼应式在文章开头或中间提到一次相应内容，结尾时再呼应一次。使文脉相通，结 构更加紧密严谨、自然明确，强调主题，让读者加深印象，引起共鸣。 案例LHarry Black was tired of the daily routine and always desired for something new to happen. One weekend in August Harry Black and his wife walked down to a river near to their hous

19、e. It was hot and they did not walk quickly.“Theres nothing new here,“ Harry said. Its always the same. Lefs go somewhere else.” His wife laughed. Look over there on the ground/9 she said. “Isnt it a key?” Harry walked over to the key and looked at it. The key was not very large and it had the numbe

20、r 164 on it. Obviously, it was neither a car key nor a door key but a key to a box and they decided to take it to the police station.The railway station was near to the police station. There was a hotel in the railway station. “Shall we have a drink in the hote? Harry said.Harry and his wife began t

21、o walk through the railway station to the hotel. They came to some lockers （寄存柜）.Each locker had a number, a lock and a key. People put things in these lockers, and left them there for an hour or two. The people locked the doors and took the keys away with them.When she saw the lockers, Harrys wife

22、said, “I know what that key is. Its the key from one of those lockers. Someone put something in a locker, locked the door, took the key away and then lost it.”Hairy took the key out of his pocket and wondered whether therewas a locker number 164 there. They went to the lockers and soon found number

23、164. Harry looked at the key and the locker number 164. He told his wife that he was going to open the locker but his wife didnt like that.Im not going to take them,“ Harry said. “Im only going to look at them.”“Please dont, his wife said. Lets go and have our drink and then take the key to the poli

24、ce station.,9Paragraph 1 ： But Harry wanted to see what was in the lockerParagraph 2: Harry turned quickly and two policemen were standing next to him.One possible version：But Harry wanted to see what was in the locker. Neglecting his wifes disagreement, Harry inserted the key into the lock and easi

25、ly unlocked the locker. There was a small wooden box in it. Curious, Harry stared at it for a while, attempting to figure out what was in it. Harry took out the box and was about to open it when his wife uttered in a trembling voice, Please dont. Lock it and go to the police station, please. Hesitat

26、ing for a while, Harry decided to follow his wife. However, just at this moment, another voice emerged. Please put the box down, sir, and turn around. Give us the key to the number 164 locker please/9Hany turned quickly and two policemen were standing next to him. Harry soon realized something was w

27、rong. The small box was still in his hands and the man standing beside the police seemed to be the owner. Overwhelmed with fear, Harry could feel his heart pounding wildly in his chest and blood racing through his veins. His wife was frozen to the spot with an unusual pale face. Harry was clear he m

28、ust give an explanation, so he gathered his courage to open his mouth JTm sorry. We found it in the railway station and I just want to check it. Were going to take the key to the police actually. Im sorry. The owner nodded his head and said, I know. I heard your wifes words. Anyhow, thank you. Harry

29、 sighed with relief and thought “ I will not desire anything new to happen any longer. 写作指导：注意原文中的一些重点伏笔，在行文中，或者结尾处再次重申，使文章内容前 后照应，突出重点，宣扬主题。方法补充:借物抒情法；名言警句法；反转对比法；决心祝愿法Part III Bonus tips:续写高分的诀窍Part one: Bonus tipsBonus tips.锁定关键词.有框架感.有血、有肉、有灵魂.避免汉式思维.构建专属语料库Part Two: Detailed tinsPart Two: Detai

30、led tinsTipi:锁定关键词- “5W1H2020年4月潍坊一模考试读后续写Deep in the forest, my husband and I had fun climbing over and crawling under the downed trees that blocked the dirt path before us. It was May, yet we walked up a snow-covered hill. When we noticed our jeans were wet up to our knees, it did not dampen our s

31、pirits. Not once did we say, “Lets turn around. This was our vacation, and we were on an adventure. Little did we know this was the beginning of many more surprises.The trail was marked as an easy one-kilometer hike, yet we were already walking a long distance. Our lightheartedness stopped when we c

32、ame out into a clearing and saw a parking lot without our rental car in it. As my eyes scanned the sun-oundings, nothing looked familiar. My heart raced. I realized we were lost in a national park that did not officially open for another week.Usually, I am the calm one in the relationship, but my hu

33、sband surprised me with his calmness. This did not comfort me; in fact, it heightened my fear. As we walked, I asked my husband to call for help, but there was no cell-phone signal in this isolated （偏僻的）area.It was awfully quiet except for our footsteps hitting the road, and my heavy breathing. My h

34、usband suggested we conserve energy and walk slower. With each step on the road, my feet and thighs hurt while my mind raced with thoughts about people who got lost in the Canadian woods for days.My vision sharpened. I noticed everything around me: the trees, rocks and snow. I thought we could eat t

35、he snow on the ground in case we needed water. For the first time in my life, I was ready and willing to get a ride, but we did not meet with a single car on the road. Silently, I prayed multiple times. We focused on each other, made joint decisions and connected through gratitude. We managed to sta

36、y on the main road and walked straight on.Tip 2有框架感- “分析两段首构建续写框架1Paragraph 1:My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance.Paragraph 2Just then, a friendly woman appeared saying, Hello.”Tip3.有血、有肉、有灵魂-“情感、情节、主题”Paragraph 1.My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a h

37、ill in the distance.Paragraph 2Just then, a friendly woman appeared saying, “Hello.”Tip 4.避免汉式思维gratefulgratefulWe became good friends with the woman, whom we paid a visit to once a year from then on.We were so thankful to the woman that we determined to find a better job in the town for her.Later t

38、hat evening when Robin was closing up the shop, he heard a familiar ring. Example 1:Deep in the forest, my husband and I had fun climbing over and crawling under the downed trees that blocked the dirt path before us. It was May, yet we walked up a snow-covered hill. When we noticed our jeans were we

39、t up to our knees, it did not dampen our spirits. Not once did we say, Lets turn around. This was our vacation, and we were on an adventure. Little did we know this was the beginning of many more surprises.The trail was marked as an easy one-kilometer hike, yet we were already walking a long distanc

40、e. Our lightheartedness stopped when we came out into a clearing and saw a parking lot without our rental car in it. As my eyes scanned the surroundings, nothing looked familiar. My heart raced. I realized we were lost in a national park that did not officially open for another week.Usually, I am th

41、e calm one in the relationship, but my husband surprised me with his calmness. This did not comfort me; in fact, it heightened my fear. As we walked, I asked my husband to call for help, but there was no cell-phone signal in this isolated （偏僻的）area.It was awfully quiet except for our footsteps hitti

42、ng the road, and my heavy breathing. My husband suggested we conserve energy and walk slower. With each step on the road, my feet and thighs hurt while my mind raced with thoughts about people who got lost in the Canadian woods for days.My vision sharpened. I noticed everything around me: the trees,

43、 rocks and snow. I thought we could eat the snow on the ground in case we needed water. For the first time in my life, I was ready and willing to get a ride, but we did not meet with a single car on the road. Silently, I prayed multiple times. We focused on each other, made joint decisions and conne

44、cted through gratitude. We managed to stay on the main road and walked straight on.Paragraph 1:My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance. Paragraph 2:Just then, a friendly woman appeared, saying, “Hello.” .11.紧扣“一件事、文中人”；.前呼后应，不留“遗憾二=.絮絮叨叨，记流水账；.堆砌辞藻，狂显摆。.空发议论，无病呻吟;Part

45、II Useful guidelines:读后续写语言提升的方法和技巧一.如何使语言生动形象，具有画面感？（词汇篇）: poem appreciation沙扬娜拉-赠日本女郎最是那一低头的温柔，像一朵水莲花不胜凉风的娇羞，道一声珍重，道一声珍重，那一声珍重里有蜜甜的忧愁一一沙扬娜拉！: sentence correctionWith eyes thumping with thrill, I suggested that we come into it to ask for help.In the middle of the way, drops of rain struck my face a

46、nd the daylight became deeper and deeper.With a basin of cold water pouring down, we sat on the ground, exhausted.Our energy came back to our body.She treated us to a meal.ee: tips on writing小词用出高级感I made it.The courage escaped from me at the moment and words failed me.We arrived home, safe and soun

47、d.The clock read 9:33 a.m.求实避虚He is a good man.He is a generous man.He is a good-looking man.He ate a slice of bread.He wolfed down a slice of bread.He cut a potato.He sliced a potato.He peeled a potato.He pushed in, with a bunch of flowers in hand.He pushed in, with a bunch of roses in hand.We are

48、playing a game in the backyard.We are playing seek-and -hide in the backyard.He is wearing a pair of shoes.He is wearing a pair of boots.He walked out of the room.The thief slipped out of the room.The boy skipped out of the room.The lady stormed out of the room.动态动词的使用David gave the door a kick and

49、it was opened.David gave the door a kick and it flew open.动态动词+非谓语的使用Steve nodded, gently squeezing her handCovering Brittany with a blanket, she kissed her cheek and went to bed.Oh, its so hot in here,“ said the thief, attempting to rise again.“Sit down; don*t be in such a hurry/ replied the grocer

50、, pushing him back into the chair once more（山东模拟）Suddenly, Spotty barked breathlessly in the midnight. I rushed to him , knelt down and patted him on the head, calling his name. Instead of looking up at me, he dropped his head, struggling to open his eyes Years later, the flowers on the tree always

51、reminded me of Spotty , who used toleap the gate and ran across the field, who once lit up my life.巧用习语Hearing these words, I was on top of the world.The issue of migration has been a hot potato in the US.Then, just when his opponents began to smell blood, he would pull himself together .（潍坊一模）My hu

52、sband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance. Look!” he yelled , pointing to the house. Thrilled with the sight, we hugged each other and found our energy recovered. Immediately, we headed for it. The clock read 6:30 pm and night was falling. To make things worse, it rained cats

53、 and dogs. We rushed toward it against all odds. We finally made it to the top of the hill. We hurried to the building and knocked at the door. But, to our suiprise, no one answered. Overwhelmed by a sense of loss, we stood at the gate of the door, exhausted and depressed.Just then, a friendly woman

54、 appeared saying, “Hello.” With tears welling up my eyes, I told her we were lost. She comforted us and showed us in. She boiled a pot of hot chocolate and treated us to freshly baked cakes. After wolfing down a cake, I asked her the way out. She showed us the map of the park. After studying the map

55、, we figured out where our rental car was parked. Then she offered us a ride back there. At the sight of our car and familiar surroundings, I felt on top of the world. Thanks to her help, we arrived home safe and sound. What an adventure!（济宁一模学生例文）He said his beloved wife partially lost her eyesight

56、 because of diabetes （糖尿病）and she was no longer able to apply her make-up. She was so depressed. She used to be a beautiful lady and everyone liked her and admired her beauty. Now she felt so sad that she wouldnt go out and she seldom talked with him.（济宁一模老师范文）He said his beloved wife partially lost

57、 her eyesight because of diabetes （糖尿病）and she was no longer able to apply her make-up. That tossed her into great depression. She used to be a beautiful lady with wavy blond hair and delicate make-up, who never failed to attract attention and admiration. Now What she could do was lying on the sofa

58、and listening to the FM 98.8-an extremely popular make-up program, imaging the scene of putting lipsticks on her beautiful but white lip. Sometimes when she was left alone, she would throw herself onto the bed and sobbed, which hurt his heart.参考资料：（济宁一模续写）The Make-up GuyDave was a make-up （化妆）artist

59、 who regularly held makeup artistry classes at the local community college. He was well known as an excellent trainer and enjoyed great popularity.Usually, the majority of his students were middle-aged housewives, who wanted to fine-tune their make-up skills so as to make themselves more attractive.

60、 But this time, it was beyond him that his class was attended by a man as well.The new student was a gentleman in his best years with a seemingly boundless interest in make-up artistry. He was keen to learn as much as he possibly could and asked questions whenever and wherever possible. He was so ab