高中英语外研版选修8 writing 部优课件

1、Writing孝义四中 武俊花Pros and cons essay孝义四中武俊花选修八 Model4 Which EnglishwritingLeading inWatch a vedio about our key wordEnglish . global maina for learning English “ English represents a better future where the world has a common language.” Writing Requirements “It would be much easier if everyone in the

2、world just spoke English” Do you agree ? Why or why not?Write a composition giving your ideas about this statement.Discussionforagainst Discuss in groups and write down your ideas about reasons why you are for and why you are against municationinternational relationshiptraveltradeeconomyloss of cult

3、ure diversityunemployment of translatorModel AnalysisIs the Expansion of Enrollment a Good Thing? Many colleges and universities have expanded their enrollment since 1998 to meet the needs of the rapid development of society, college students and the nation as a whole. On the one hand, they want to

4、train more qualified people to satisfy the need of the job market. On the other hand, the expansion has entitled many high school graduates to the right of receiving higher education so that the intellectual standards of our nation will be raised. However, many problems have been brought about. Firs

5、tly, the development of the teaching facilities and accommodation capacities of many colleges and universities cannot keep pace with the expansion of enrollment. Secondly, the average quality of the freshmen is declining because the criteria of selection are lowered. In the long run, this will defin

6、itely deteriorate the higher education. Model Analysis Despite these problems, I am still confident that the expansion of enrollment is of great benefit to our society. With the development of our national economy, the problem as mentioned above will be solved if proper measures are taken. Model Ana

7、lysisWhats the style of the passage ?A. Narration (记叙文）B. Exposition（说明文）C. Argumentation（议论文）D. Description （描写文）pros and cons essayModel Analysis Arguementation Layout What is each paragraph about? Part1 Many colleges and universities have expanded their enrollment since 1998 to meet the needs of

8、the rapid development of society, college students and the nation as a whole.The theme of the essayArguementation LayoutPart2 On the one hand, they want to train more qualified people to satisfy the need of the job market. On the other hand, the expansion has entitled many high school graduates to t

9、he right of receiving higher education so that the intellectual standards of our nation will be raised. Opinion1Reasons1,2ArgumentationLayout Part2 However, many problems have been brought about. Firstly, the development of the teaching facilities and accommodation capacities of many colleges and un

10、iversities cannot keep pace with the expansion of enrollment. Secondly, the average quality of the freshmen is declining because the criteria of selection are lowered. In the long run, this will definitely deteriorate the higher education.Opinion2Reasons1,2ArguementationLayout Part3 Despite these pr

11、oblems, I am still confident that the expansion of enrollment is of great benefit to our society. With the development of our national economy, the problem as mentioned above will be solved if proper measures are taken. Personal opinionArguementationLayoutPart1Part2Part3The theme of the essayOpinion

12、1Opinion2Reasons1,2Reasons1,2Personal opinionArguementation Transitional words Find out the transitional words used to express following meanings.(a) used to introduce your first idea(b) used to intrduce your next idea (c) used to add an extra idea (d) used to introduce your final idea(e) used to sh

13、ow a contrasting idea(f) used to finish the textArguementation Transitional words (a) used to introduce your first idea (b) used to intrduce your next idea On the one hand, they want to train more qualified people to satisfy the need of the job market. On the other hand, the expansion has entitled m

14、any high school graduates to the right of receiving higher education so that the intellectual standards of our nation will be raised.Arguementation Transitional words (a) used to introduce your first idea (b) used to intrduce your next idea (e) used to show a contrasting idea However, many problems

15、have been brought about. Firstly, the development of the teaching facilities and accommodation capacities of many colleges and universities cannot keep pace with the expansion of enrollment. Secondly, the average quality of the freshmen is declining because the criteria of selection are lowered. In

16、the long run, this will definitely deteriorate the higher education.nevertheless on the other handArguementation Transitional words(d) used to introduce your extra idea (e) used to show your final ideawhats more, besides, in addition, furthermorelastly, finally, last but not leastArguementation Tran

17、sitional words (f) used to finish the text Despite these problems, I am still confident that the expansion of enrollment is of great benefit to our society. With the development of our national economy, the problem as mentioned above will be solved if proper measures are taken.in my opinionModel Ana

18、lysisvocabulary The vocabulary used in the passage is A.formal B.informalModel Analysis Richness of languagewords and phrases: Find out words and phrases you think are used perfectly. Many colleges and universities have expanded their enrollment since 1998 to meet the needs of the rapid development

19、of society, college students and the nation as a whole. On the one hand, they want to train more qualified people to satisfy the need of the job market. On the other hand, the expansion has entitled many high school graduates to the right of receiving higher education so that the intellectual standa

20、rds of our nation will be raised. Model Analysis Richness of languageModel Analysis Richness of language However, many problems have been brought about. Firstly, the development of the teaching facilities and accommodation capacities of many colleges and universities cannot keep pace with the expans

21、ion of enrollment. Secondly, the average quality of the freshmen is declining because the criteria of selection are lowered. In the long run, this will definitely deteriorate the higher education.Model Analysis Richness of language Despite these problems, I am still confident that the expansion of e

22、nrollment is of great benefit to our society. With the development of our national economy, the problem as mentioned above will be solved if proper measures are taken. diverse sentence Find out which of following sentence patterns are used?Model Analysis Richness of languagea.long plex sentencese.si

23、mple sentencef.passive voiceh.inverted sentence pound sentence pod-uncomplex sentence g.nonfinite formsi.emphatic patternModel Analysis Richness of language Many colleges and universities have expanded their enrollment since 1998 to meet the needs of the rapid development of society, college student

24、s and the nation as a whole. On the one hand, they want to train more qualified people to satisfy the need of the job market. On the other hand, the expansion has entitled many high school graduates to the right of receiving higher education so that the intellectual standards of our nation will be r

25、aised. a.long sentence c.simple sentencea.long sentence pound sentencef.passive voice Model Analysis Richness of language However, many problems have been brought about. Firstly, the development of the teaching facilities and accommodation capacities of many colleges and universities cannot keep pac

26、e with the expansion of enrollment. Secondly, the average quality of the freshmen is declining because the criteria of selection are lowered. In the long run, this will definitely deteriorate the higher education.f.passive voiceg.nonfinite formspound sentenceModel Analysis Richness of language Despi

27、te these problems, I am still confident that the expansion of enrollment is of great benefit to our society. With the development of our national economy, the problem as mentioned above will be solved if proper measures are taken. pound sentenceg.nonfinite formsf.passive voiceCriteria of a good comp

28、ositiona.clear layoutb.cover all main per transitional words to link ideasd.formal languagee.rich and accurate words and phrasesf.diverse sentenceg.no grammar mistakesh.appropriate punctuationi.neat and clear handwritingData from Data from Data from Sample assessmentSample assessment I dis

29、agree with this statement. Although it will make communication more convenient, it will also promote the development of education.That will promote the development of related fields between countries.For example, trade, culture, tourism, etc.But that would result in the loss of a large number of languages and the reduction of culture.That will make some English translators lose their jobs and make some English software stop using.So it has both advantages and disadvantages.P3P