中考英语作文突破指导的课件

1、中考书面表达突破1 听力152 单项-83 完形104 阅读-255 词语短语句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。五、作文一般框架： 文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。六、常见的作文类型提纲模板：1.图表、数字比例型A）概要介绍：提出讨论或调查的背景（譬如时间、地点、人物、调查的原因等）In the first paragraph，you have to demonstrate the general situation of what h

2、as been reflected in the table or graph例如：Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to) Here are the results. B）根据图表分析：把图表中需要表达的内容表达出来；In the second paragraph，you have to analyse carefully the numbers，lines or curves，and point out the rate of increase or discrease例如：Most students think While

3、20% of them choose to. Another 15 believe There are also some saying that C）总结概括：对于图表需要表达的意思做一个总结或者表达一下个人的观点或者评论 In the end，you have to write your own opinion or comment.例如：As a student, I agree to例文：Directions：Write a composition based on the title and the following chart in no less than 120 words.

4、The causes are given under the horizontal line and the precentage of the total of 80 fire incidents is given in the vertical column on the left.write clearly. Leading Causes of Fires in China（1987） 50% 38% 12% Smokers Defective insulation Children playing with matches 解题思路：Basic Writing Process of t

5、he Composition1）Have a correct understanding of the given information，and grasp the main idea；2）Make a careful analysis of the information，for example，ask yourself the questions like：a.Who or what caused the fires？b.What is the relationship between cause and frequency of fires？3）Write an outline；4）U

6、se the right technique of writing.（The most common techniques used in this kind of writing is：comparison and contrast.）Analysis of the Sample Test ItemThe main idea of the graph is：Fire causes.From the graph，we know that there are three main causes of fires：a.Smokers （nearly50）b.Defective insulation

7、 （38）c.Children playing with matches （12）Thus，we can，by comparing the above information，make a comment of the main topic，then reach a conclusion.例文： From the graph above，we can see that fire，one of the most terrible killers in China，is mainly caused by smokers，defective insulations or children playi

8、ng with matches.In 1987，80 fire incidents took place in China.While nearly 50were caused by smokers，38were caused by defective insulation，and12were caused by children playing with matches. No matter what the type of the fire，we can almost be sure that they were caused by carelessness.From the graph，

9、we can conclude that smokers are the leading cause of fires，but we also need to educate our children，warning them of the dangers of playing with matches and instruct workers be more careful with insulation.六、常见的作文类型模板：2.应用文书信Dear ., Im glad to receive your letter - Best wishes! Yours, Lucy a书信开头常用语

10、I am very glad to receive your letter (hear form you). Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well? /How is everything going (on)? Im writing to you for some advice on how to Im writing to ask if you can . How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. Thank you for inviting me to . b 书信

11、结尾常用语 Best wishes (to/for you). Wish you good luck. (I am) looking forward to hearing from you.例文：假设你是Li Ping，深圳中学的一名学生。 请根据提示写一封100个词的英文信。信息提示：受信人的姓名Jim写信人的姓名Li Ping写信人的地址中国广东深圳市宝安北路180 号写信的内容简介深圳中学，学校生活，个人生活，个人爱好，家庭情况等。写信的日期6 月19日（2）下面是你的笔友给你的一封来信。 请你根据信的内容，给你的笔友写一封回信。要求：意思连贯，表达正确，语言流畅，必须充分表达书信中要求

12、所要表达的内容，格式正确。Dear Li Hua，I havent heard from you for a long time. How are you？I have just finished the exams. Now I am glad I have time to write to you. Our teacher tells us that China is a large country. It has the largest population in the world. It is very far from the USA. It is on the other sid

13、e of the world. Now the sun is shining brightly while I am writing to you. But perhaps you are sleeping in the dark night. How interesting it is！ Im becoming more interested in China. I wish to know more about your life. Could you tell me what kind of food you often have for meals？Please write me so

14、on！Best wishes to you！yours，Jim范文：North Baoan RoadShenzhen，Guangdong，ChinaJune 19Dear Jim，How are you? Im very glad to receive your letter again . Im also intrested in beautiful scene which you described .Now, Im introducing my life to you. I live in Shenzhen . Do you know Shenzhen？ Its a beautiful

15、modern city in Guang-dong. I study in Shenzhen Middle School. Our school is very large and beautiful. Im in Class One，Grade 3. There are 45 classes in our school. We study Chinese，maths，English and other subjects. I like English very much. I like playing computer games，football and watching TV. I ha

16、ve many friends. We help each other and learn from each other.There are three people in my family. They are my father，my mother and me . Our favorite food is dumpling, rice, vegetables, fish, and braise in soy sauce meat .Welcome to Shenzhen , Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes

17、.Yours sincerely，Li Ping口头通知 a. 呼语及开场白部分：Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. b. 正文部分：All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in groups.Pl

18、ease come on time and dont be late. c. 结束语部分：Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope youll have a nice time here. Thats all. Thank you. 范文根据下面的汉语提示写一个60字左右的口头通知：假如你是班长，你们要举办英语讲座（lecture）。1 时间：3月1日星期五下午3 点至五点2 地点：阶梯教室（lecture theatre）3 讲座人：北京大学李平教授4 报告的内容：怎样学英语5 要求大家准时出席

19、 （attend），并且可以向他咨询有关英语学习的问题 AnnouncementGirls and boys (Ladies and gentlemen),May I have your attention，please ？ （Attention，please.）Ive got announcement to make (Im very glad to tell you )that an English lecture will be held in the lecture hall （theater）from 3 p.m .to 5 p.m. on Friday，March 1st.It w

20、ill be given by Professor Li Ping from Beijing University. The topic is“ How to learn English well”.You may take notes if you like. And you may ask any question on English learning （study ）after the lecture. Please attend the lecture on time （Please dont be late. ）Thats all，thank you.(括号中的部分是可以替换划线部

21、分)寻物启事 假如你是王利，在十五中工作，今天（2004年6月8日）早晨在上班的路上丢了手提包。 提包里面装有一支钢笔，一把钥匙和许多钱。例文： LOST I lost my handbag on the way to work this morning. There is a pen，a key to the door and a lot of money in it. I wish the finder to return it to me very soon. Will the finder please come to the NO. 15 Middle School or call

22、me？My telephone number is 8675331. My name is Wang Li. Ill pay him or her for it. Thank you！招领启事根据下面的汉语提示写一篇招领启事。你于今天（11月8日）上午在学校花园拾到手提包一个，内有钱若干及一个笔记本，请失主前来301室领取。例文： FOUND A handbag with some money and a notebook was left in the school garden this morning （ Nov. 18th ） . Will the owner please come

23、to Room 301，Building 14 and get it ？便 条根据下面的提示内容写一篇80-120 词的短文。假定现在是5月7日下午四点，星期日。你的名字叫李华，是某中学的学生。你到一位加拿大同学Mike的住处邀请他和你一道去看电影。可是他不在家。你留意个便条说明情况。 1 今晚7：30人民电影院放映白求恩（Bethune），是关于一位来自于加拿大的医生的故事。六十多年前他来到中国，为中国人民的革命事业（revolution）做出了贡献。 电影票已经买好。 2 人民电影远离学校大约2 公里，两人最好骑自行车前往。 3 你让他吃晚饭就出发，7：00在学校门口等他。例文： Mess

24、age Left / Leaving a message （4：00 p.m.） May 7th （Sunday）Dear Mike， There will be a film called “ Bethune” at the Peoples Cinema at 7：30 p.m.It is a story about a Canadian doctor. He came to China and helped Chinese revolution sixty years ago. I have bought the tickets. It is two kilomtres away from

25、 our school to the cinema. Wed better go there by bike. As soon as you finish your supper，please go to the gate of our school. Ill wait for you there at 7：00 oclock in the evening.Yours，Li Hua请假条1假如你叫李明，因患重感冒，今、明两天不能上学。请你给你的外籍英语教师写一张请假条，说明你这两天不能上学的原因。60 字左右。例文：Written Request for Leave / Asking for

26、Leave Sick LeaveDear Mr. Green，Im very sorry to tell you that Im not feeling well today. This morning I went to see a/ the doctor and he told me that I had caught a bad cold. He also asked / told me to stay in bed for two days. So I cant go to school today and tomorrow. I hope to go back to school a

27、s soon as I get well. Please dont worry about me . Ill make up for the lessons that I have missed when I am back at school. Thank you.Yours，Li Ming请假条2根据提示内容写一张6080字的请假条。赵老师您好： 今天张芳患病不能前去上课，我要带她去医院。 向您请病假三天。学生家长：王丽6月10 日例文：Sick LeaveJuly 10Dear Miss Zhao，Zhang Fang is seriously / badly ill this morn

28、ing and I have to take her to see the doctor. So she cant go to school for class. I think she will stay in hospital for some days. I have to ask you for a sick leave of three days / a three-day leave. I hope she will be well soon and go back to school as soon as possible.3.日记一、日记的格式英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组

29、成。日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。中、英文的日记三格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Windy, Snowy, Cloudy等。1、日期表达有多种形式。年、月、日都写时，通常以月、日、年为顺序，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。例如： December 18, 2003 或者 Dec. 18, 2003 A) September 1, 2004或September 1st, 2004也可省略写成Sept. 1, 2004或Sept.

30、1st, 2004；B)the 1st of September in 2004(月份不可以缩写) B)只有月、日September 1或September 1st(月份可以缩写) C)只有年、月 September 2004或the September of 2004(月份不可以缩写) Saturday, October 22nd, 2004；October 22nd, 2004 Saturday 2.星期也可以省略不写，可将其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之间不用标点，但要空一格，星期也可缩写。Saturday, October 22nd, 2004；October 22nd, 2004 Sa

31、turday 3.日记3.天气情况必不可少。天气一般用一个形容词如 :Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Snowy 等表示。写在日期之后，用逗号隔开，位于日记的右上角。如：Saturday, March 4, 2004, Windy；1st January, 2004, Fine 二、日记的要求 日记的正文是日记的主要部分，写在星期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。由于记载的内容通常已经发生，谓语动词多用一般过去时。但也可根据具体情况，用其它时态。如：记叙天气、描写景色，为了描写生动，可以使用现在时，以表现当时的情景。再如文后发表感想或评论可用现在时态或将来时态。

32、记日记力求简单明了，有连贯性。若有文字提示，则应重视提示，把握要点。在句式上尽量使用简单句，以防繁杂，造成语法、句型错误。三、日记的类型和训练日记分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。建议大家在学习写日记的过程中，可按以下步骤进行：将一天所经历的主要事情和过程依次简要地记下来，不附加任何感情色彩，这是最简单的记日记的方法；阅读别人的日记，并利用所学过的句型来表达个人在一天中观察到的或感受到的事情。范文：March 12th, 2003 Tuesday Sunny (Fine)Today is Tree Planting Day. At 7:30 in the morning, all the s

33、tudents in our class met at the school gate. We walked to the park. Miss Gao and other teachers went and worked with us. All the students worked very hard, and we planted about 200 trees. Though we were dirty and tired, we still felt very happy.这是一篇记叙型的日记。结构严谨，中心突出，有选择地记录当天的见闻(人或事)，并加以分析和评论。日记2Septe

34、mber 11th ,2014 Saturday Fine Today is my birthday. My mother bought me seven small candles and they are colorful and beautiful. In the evening， I set them in my birthday cake one by one. Many friends came to celebrate my birthday. I was very happy. When I blew out the small candles， all my friends

35、said， Wang Bo， happy birthday to you! In the end， all of us got dancing happily. I enjoyed a happy birthday!4.介绍人 以My Chinese Teacher为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。 My Chinese TeacherOf all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese

36、 teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively

37、 and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And were getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular tea

38、chers in our school.5. 介绍地点景点（旅游）首先要介绍景点的名字和方位：句型：xx is a very beautiful scenery spot and it is located. 某地+is / lies + 地点状语。某地位于.， 某地+be located/situated地点状语。某地坐落于.然后介绍景点的最最吸引人眼球的地方：句型：xx is famous for .,most people come to visit because.某地 + is famous / well-known for.。某地.而闻名。某地 + is famous /well-

39、known as .。某地作为.而闻名。接着给出旅游景点注意事项和建议：句型：When you come to visit xx,please remember that.,please be careful with.,you mustnt.最后祝福旅途愉快或者欢迎来玩：I wish everyone have a time here and welcome to xx again.thank you. 介绍风景名胜介绍风景名胜我们的家乡有着悠久的历史和秀丽的风光。假设你是一名导游，你正在接待一个来自英国的旅游团，请写一篇短文简要介绍我市的风景名胜，不少于60词。参考词汇：long hist

40、ory, beautiful views, tour guide, relaxing , educational, friendly中考英语作文范文欣赏Good morning, everyone! Nice to meet you ! Im your tour guide today, Welcome to my hometown -Huanggang.Huanggang lies in the middle of Hubei Province, It has a very long history and many beautiful views.For example, Chibi Pa

41、rk and Ehuang Bridge are the most beautiful and relaxing among them. And the air is very clean and fresh. Hongan is very historical and educational. Huangmei is famous for the Huangmei Opera -one of the greatest local operas in China.Huanggang is also a good place for shopping and having delicious f

42、ood . So far, a lot of new shopping malls and plazas have been built. You can buy what you like there ,If you want to try traditional Huanggang fodd,you can go to Night Snack Street, The food there is both dilicious and cheap.There are still many other interesting and exciting things waiting for you

43、 to enjoy yourselves! Lets go for them范文： 北京将迎来2008年的奥运会，请以主人的身份向外国朋友介绍一下北京和北京几个著名的景点。根据以下提示写一篇短文。 1.北京是一个历史悠久的城市； 2.北京有许多名胜古迹； 3.紫禁城是最受来宾欢迎的景点之一； 4.故宫非常漂亮和著名； 5.长城也是非常美丽可去一看的地方 6.天安门广场是一个好去处，可去漫步。 注： 字数80左右。 请不要逐字翻译，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯、意思完整、符合逻辑。 参考词汇：紫禁城 The Forbidden City 故宫 The Summer Palace 天安门广场 Tia

44、nan men Square Beijing is a city with a long history. There are many places of interest in it. Now let me tell you some of them. The Forbidden City is one of the most popular ones for visitors. It is very big and you can learn much about the history of China from it. The Summer Palace is beautiful a

45、nd famous, too. The Great Wall is also a wonderful place to go. And Tian anmen Square is a good place for people to take a walk. I hope you will enjoy your staying in Beijing. 6.校园生活My English Learning（浙江丽水中考满分作文）Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请 根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以My Eng

46、lish Learning为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示：When did you start learning English? (in /years ago)How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day)What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar)What other helpful ways do you know to learn E

47、nglish well? (watch English movies, sing English songs)范文：English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, w

48、atching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if y

49、ou put your heart into it. 7.课外生活 My Free Time课余时光是我们忙碌学习生活的调节剂。你是如何支配自己的闲暇时间的呢？看电视、做运动、听音乐、阅读书报、郊游、帮父母做家务，还是请你以My Free Time为题，描述一下自己的课余生活。要求:1.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数80词左右。2.不得写出自己和学校的真实名称。 My Free TimeI have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school.I like basketball and vol

50、leyball very much.Sports help me to keep healthy and study better.I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening.Sometimes I listen to music for a while.I find it a good way to relax myself.Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn

51、 cooking.Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends.We always have a good time! 8.假期安排 描述你的假期生活紧张忙碌的初中生活即将结束，你一定想好好放松一下。你将怎样度过一个既充实又有意义的假期呢？请用英语写下来。 要求：语言规范，字迹工整，意思完整。80个词左右。 After three years study, I feel very tired. This is a good chance to plan my summer holiday. First I want to travel to Be

52、ijing to relax myself. Beijing is the capital of our country. And there are many place of interest there. For example, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. I have never been to the great wall before, so Ill visit it first. Then Id like to visit Tsinghua University because I want to study

53、there some day .After that, I want to go over my lessons in order to make great progress. I believe my dream will come true9.环境健康卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。保持健康的重要性保持健康的方法保持健康的结论(你的看法?)1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯(你的看法?)范文：How to stay our health

54、/fit?1: Dear boys and grils : Im talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle shool studentfirst youd better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子). Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Dont eat too much meat an

55、d suger but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest . Nextkeep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustnt drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank youbye!2:Dear boys and g

56、irls:Im talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit?Today many teenagers are unhealthybecause they do less exercise eat more junk foodisnt enough time to sleep. If we keep fitwe must keep taking exercises every day .Eat lots of fruit and vegetables .Sleep for about 8 hours a night

57、.Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品 .Early to bed early to rise/get up .Breathe (呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day. That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.10.个人观点和看法初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼请根据下面所提供的信息,用英语总结出讨论情况。提示:70%的学生30%的学生应该每天进行体育锻炼,但不要时间过长锻炼浪费时间、使人疲劳锻炼能增强体

58、质,保持健康锻炼以后很兴奋,较长时间不能投入学习锻炼能使大脑休息,使学习效果更好锻炼中可能会受伤要求:语句通顺,句意连贯;词数为80词左右;发言稿的开头已写好,但不计入总词数。范文：Dear classmates:Im Li Hua After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time. They think exercise builds body and can keep

59、 them healthy. Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and its a waste of time. They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons. And its possible

60、 to be hurt while doing sports.范文： My view on television Television has come into our life for many years. We cant live happily without television. Jt can give us the latest information and news. It can open up our eyes and enlarge our knowledge. We can get happiness from the plays on television. We