初三作文复习课书面表达-完整版PPT

1、Cooperative study in English writing 英语书面表达中的合作学习 英语书面表达目的在于考查学生 1.应用各项语法知识的能力 2.正确进行书面表达的能力 3.善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住 要点和中心思想的能力 假如你叫乐乐，你看到学校学生会有招聘学生会主席的海报。请写一封简短的应聘信，介绍自己的情况（见下表）。字数60-80左右，信的开头和结尾已经给出。姓名 乐乐 年龄 16岁身体健康 爱好打篮球 特长英语口语，弹钢琴获奖情况2009学校绘画比赛一等奖 Dear Miss Li, I read the poster at school yesterday. My

2、 name is Le Le and I am 16-year-old now. I like playing basketball and I have a healthy body. I am good in spoken English and playing the piano .I won the first place in our school drawing competition in 2009. I hope to do something with school. And I hope to be a chairman of the student union. Trul

3、y yours, Le Le16 years oldI am healthy.atfor语法错误习惯表达错误Read and correct:(阅读并修改) My name is Le Le and I am 16 years old now. I am a healthy girl and I like playing basketball .My favorite player is Yao Ming. I like English and I am good at spoken English. I also do well in playing the piano. I won the

4、 first prize in our school drawing competition in 2009. I hope that I can be a chairman of school union. Please give me this chance, I will try my best. 思路清晰 语言正确 文字简洁,流畅 结构严谨One possible version: To write a good composition is just like building a good house! First, we need a good blueprint and the

5、 materials, or we can also call it design. 设计Design1. 确定文体 书信、日记、便条、通知 2. 确定时态基调 一般现在时、一般过去时 3. 分析“破”题 理解提示语、提炼内容要点、明确要点之间的关系、切忌遗漏要点4. 罗列词组，避重就轻 条条大道通罗马，遇到阻力请绕行 Cooperation is important!合作是重要的Practice writing:姓名:姚明 国籍: 中国 生日:1980年9月12日 身高:2米29 职业:篮球运动员 1997年加入国家队(national team) 2002年进入NBA 现效力于火箭队(ro

6、ckets)(60-80字)1.Design 设计1. 确定文体 文字信息的人物介绍2. 确定时态基调 一般现在时3. 分析“破”题 内容要点介绍姚明的基本情况要点之间的关系 两件关键性的事情 2.Management成文1. 连词成句、覆盖要点 用自己最有把握的表达方式把确定的要点写成句子，不打无把握之战2. 巧妙组合、顺畅过度、上下连贯、语意畅达 注意搭配、运用恰当的关联词3.Decorating 修饰1. 推敲检查、查漏补缺 是否有错别字、是否要点不全、是否主谓一致、是否表达得体、是否句型正确、是否有中文式英语表达2. 运用高级表达、提升文章档次 高级表达法、西方惯用表达等方法修改润色

7、To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.4.Residing-in誊写1.注意书写美观、重视细节标点 书写是否美观、标点是否正确、全篇是否对齐 a-u c-e-l f-t h-k-n 2. 边誊写边检查，注意是否词数合格 留心拼写、注意词性是否正确；是否词数不够1.Find the key points:Yao Ming Chinese September12th,1980Basketball pl

8、ayer In 1997 joined the national basketball teamIn 2002 began to play in NBA 2. Make sentences with the key words:Yao Ming is a Chinese basketball player.He was born on September12th,1980.He is very tall and plays basketball very well. In 1997 he joined the national basketball team.In 2002 he began

9、to play in NBA and joined the Houston 3. Make a passage with the sentencesConjunctions and link words连接词Show Time!Show Time!英语书面表达如何写？(How to Write Well)四个步骤1、审题(Design)文字信息图画信息题材、人称、时态、要点以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。 2. 联句成文：(Management)3.修饰 (Decorating)主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）4、改错校对，规范抄写 (Residing in)开头与结尾语篇衔接姓名：Bill Smith性别：男年龄：45国籍：澳大利亚