2020年江苏中考英语写作指导-话题8-人物介绍

1、2020年江苏中考英语写作指导话题8-人物介绍2020年江苏中考英语写作指导话题8-人物介绍 分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近6年中考真题的书面表达可知，与“人物介绍”这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角度：介绍自己周围人的优秀品质，如2015宿迁；介绍自己。结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：介绍名人(一般会介绍人物的外貌、性格、爱好、优势、特殊之处或者不足之处；若是名人介绍，多会介绍其事迹对自己的影响)。命题探索 分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近6年中考教材链接教材链接 (2019南通改编)本学期就要结束了，假如你是李明，请你对自己本学期的表现进行总结，并针对自己做得不足的

2、地方提出改进措施，写一份英文的自评小结。 典例剖析一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句审主题：自我总结审文体：记叙文审时态：一般过去时审时态：一般现在时 (2019南通改编)本学期就要结束了，假如你是李明，要点：1. 努力学习，在学习上取得了进步；2. 重视保持健康，每天跑步半个小时；3. 积极参加学校活动，得到了很多机会和同学交流； 4. 自己仍然有做得不好的地方需要提升(自主发挥，至少两点)。审要点：短文包含两个方面，一方面是本学期表现好的地方，另一方面是自己的不足之处及改进计划，且不足之处及改进计划需要至少自由发挥2点，如：习惯于追随别人，自己缺乏创造力。为了提升自己，将会读更多的书

3、一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句要点：1. 努力学习，在学习上取得了进步；审要点：短文包含两参考词汇：weakness弱势注意事项：1. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Im Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think its necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term._一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句参考词汇：weakness弱势一二1. Im go

4、od at English, so itll be an advantage for me to teach children English.2. He has the ability to organize the company, and everything is in great order.3. I took an active part in school activities, so I got more chances to communicate with others.4. My sister has more experience on how to play the

5、piano well.介绍个人优势一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句角度1好句范例1. Im good at English, so it1. 我擅长唱歌和跳舞，并且经常在比赛中获奖。 _ _2. 她有能力照顾好自己，不让父母担心。 _I am good at singing and dancing and I often win prizes in the competition.She has the ability to take good care of herself and let her parents not worry about her.句 子 仿 写一阶 审好题三阶

6、练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1. 我擅长唱歌和跳舞，并且经常在比赛中获奖。I am go3. 我积极地参加小组活动，所以我有很多机会分享想法。 _ _4. 她在如何与他人相处方面有更多的经验。 _I took an active part in group activities, so I got more chances to share ideas.She has more experience on how to get on well with others.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3. 我积极地参加小组活动，所以我有很多机会分享想法。I t5. I am used to

7、following others, so I should think more by myself and have my own opinions.6. He seldom communicates with others in the class. As a result, he hardly has friends.7. You spend too much time on your study but pay little attention to physical exercise.介绍不足之处及改进措施角度2好句范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句5. I am used

8、 to following othe5. 我习惯依靠他人，所以我应该开始自己做自己的事情。 _ _6. 我妹妹很少参加社会活动，所以她缺乏社交经验。 _ _7. 我每天花太多时间在电脑游戏上，却忽略了我的学习。 _ _I am used to depending on others, so I should start to do things by myself.My sister seldom takes part in social activities. As a result, she is short of social experience.句 子 仿 写I spend too

9、much time on computer games but pay little attention to my study.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句5. 我习惯依靠他人，所以我应该开始自己做自己的事情。I a8. Im shy. Its not easy for me to make friends.Its not easy for me to make friends because Im shy.9. He is kind and always helps others.He is so kind that he always helps others.10. My

10、teacher is very strict with us. She cares about every student.My teacher who cares about every student is very strict with us.介绍性格角度3升格范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句8. Im shy. Its not easy for 8. David is very confident. He is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people. (用原因状语从句升格) _ _9. Helen is

11、 nice and friendly. All the teachers and classmates like her very much.(用so.that升格) _ _David is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people because he is very confident.Helen is so nice and friendly that all the teachers and classmates like her very much.句 子 升 格一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句8. David

12、 is very confident. He10. Our English teacher is very patient. She always explains the text to us carefully. (用定语从句升格) _ _ Our English teacher who always explains the text to us carefully is very patient.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句10. Our English teacher is ver11. I love fruit.(扩写看法)I love fruit. I think i

13、ts healthy.12. My favorite subject is science.(扩写原因)My favorite subject is science because its interesting.13. Im serious about running.(扩写好处)Im serious about running. Its a way to make us keep fit.介绍爱好角度4扩写范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句11. I love fruit.(扩写看法)I love11. Id like to join the Music Club.(扩写看法)

14、_12. I like collecting stamps.(扩写原因) _ _13. I am interested in drawing pictures.(扩写好处) _ _ Id like to join the Music Club. I think it makes me more active.I like collecting stamps because I can learn something from them.句 子 扩 写I am interested in drawing pictures. Its a way to calm myself down.一阶 审好题

15、三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句11. Id like to join the Music速记14. Friends are like booksyou dont need a lot of them as long as theyre good.朋友就像书，你不需要太多，只要他们是好的。15. A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.真正 的朋友可以向你伸出援手并触动你的心灵。16. A good friend is like a mirror. 好朋友就像一面镜子。17. A friend in need is a

16、friend indeed. 患难见真情。18. Friendship is love with understanding. 友谊是爱与理解。19. A friend is a second self. 朋友就是另一个自己。20. Everyone has his price. 天生我材必有用。俗语谚语一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句速记14. Friends are like booksy练语段个人优势study well/do well in my schoolwork/. 语段练习1 not only _(个人优势1)but also _(个人优势2). Besides, I

17、_ _(个人优势3)speak English very well/have a good voice, so I ever got the first prize in the competition/.am good at playing musical instruments/communicating with others/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段个人优势study well/do well in mHowever, he/she also has some weaknesses. He/She _(不足之处1). So I hope _(改进措施1). He

18、/She also _(不足之处2), so he/she needs 不足之处及改进措施is careless sometimes, so he/she may leave his/her homework at home/is easy to get angry with others, so he/she has few friends/. he/she can be careful in the daily life/patient enough to talk with others and make more friends/. does badly in math/English

19、/seldom takes part in school activities/. 语段练习2一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句However, he/she also has some_(改进措施2). I really hope he/she can have a change and become more perfect.to study math/English hard/to take an active part in school activities/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句_My _(人物关系)is _(外貌1). He/She has _(外貌2)

20、. Generally speaking, he/she is _(性格1)and _(性格2). He/She _(性格的具体表现).介绍外貌、性格、爱好、优秀品质等best friend/English teacher/.tall/short/thin/fat/.a round face/big eyes/.warmhearted/kind/.outgoing/helpful/. often helps others without asking for anything in return/can get on well with teachers and classmates/. 语段

21、练习3一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句My _In his/her spare time, he/she likes _(爱好1)and _(爱好2)He/She is _(优秀品质), so we all like him/her. reading books/watching movies/.listening to music/taking exercise/. always ready to help others/honest and never tells lies/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句In his/her spare time, he/she 成篇章

22、 Im Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think its necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term. This term, besides studying hard and making progress in my study, I also paid more attention to keeping healthy and I always ran for half an hour in the morning.

23、Whats more, I took an active part in different activities at school. It helps me learn the spirit of team work and I have got more chances to communicate with my classmates. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章 Im Li Ming, a studeDeveloping a good relationship with them certainly makes my school life more enjoya

24、ble. I also find some weaknesses that need to be improved. I am used to following others and I am not creative enough. So，being creative is the ability I should develop. So I will read more books to improve it. I hope I can become more and more excellent. I believe as long as I know my strengths and

25、 weaknesses clearly and try to improve my weaknesses, I can find a better me in the future.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Developing a good relationship(2019吉林改编)假如你是李华，想参加China Daily举办的以“梦想职业体验”为主题的2020年夏令营活动，请你根据以下要点，给主办人Mr Smith写一封介绍个人情况的英文邮件。要点：1. 性格：外向，乐于助人； 2. 爱好：读书；3. 梦想职业：成为医生；4. 个人计划(自主发挥)。注意事项：1. 词数9

26、0左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。写作练兵写作练兵(2019吉林改编)假如你是李华，想参加China DaiDear Mr Smith，Its my pleasure to introduce myself to you._写作练兵写作练兵 My friends say Im an outgoing and helpful girl, and its easy for me to get on well with others. As for my hobby, reading is what I like best. In my spar

27、e time, I spend much time reading books especially on medicine. Actually my parents are both doctors. They influence me a lot, so to be a Dear Mr Smith，写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵_I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours sincerely，Li Huagood doctor is my dream. I have

28、been studying hard to enter a good medical university. Besides, Im going to take more volunteer work to help sick people. Those experiences may help me become an excellent doctor. 写作练兵写作练兵_写作练兵巧变句首句式写作技巧 8巧变句首句式 变化句首句式，如以一个介词短语、形容词短语、不定式短语或副词作为句子的开头，而不一定要采用固定的主谓结构作为开头，以避免造成读者的阅读疲劳。写作练兵巧变句首句式写作技巧 8巧变

29、句首句式 变化句句 式 连 接 范 例 1. 介词短语开头：A village lies at the foot of the mountain.At the foot of the mountain lies a village.2. 不定式短语开头：The students worked hard to pass the exam.To pass the exam, the students worked hard.3. 形容词短语开头：He was confused about the problem, so he went to ask his teacher for help.Con

30、fused about the problem, he went to ask his teacher for help.写作练兵巧变句首句式句 式 连 接 范 例 1. 介词短语开头：A4. 副词开头：This dream came true again like the dreams before.Again, like the dreams before, this dream came true.5. 用分词、分词短语开头： We climbed to the top of the tower and we saw a beautiful view.Climbing to the top of the tower, we saw a beauti