高考英语三轮冲刺：读后续写之最后叮嘱 讲义

1、高考英语读后续写三轮冲刺：读后续写之最后叮嘱打分标准书写、情节符合正常逻辑、所给两段首句与你的续写的衔接、语言（没有简单或重大 语法错误；有好的表达和句型）字和字数就两段，不能再分段，两段字数要平衡75词左右（第二段也要推动情节）续写的步骤.分析人物关系、性格+情节（clues,伏笔和铺垫）+议论的话（表达人的品质、人和 人之间的感情等）【别想太多】.你自己准备拟定的主旨（第二段结尾可以考虑,两句话左右很加分“真善美”的主 题）要自然：比方“.,”said Tom in the interview/report.妙用、慎用“引用，比方Love is what binds us,through

2、fair or stormy weather.Where there is love,there is hope-lf practice doesnt make perfect,at least it can make better/.故事大致方向（一定要确定第一段末尾要把故事写到哪里为止；）不要随意再加 conflicts,着重解决现有的问题.具体细节情节补充（汉语列W提纲：大概哪几句？有意识地思考一下语言和句型） 动作？心情？说两句话？心理活动？ even外貌和环境？不能跳情节逻辑故事写什么具体内容所写的情节和细节都是为了凸显主题;【全文和主旨意识】所写内容一定要推动故事开展！ ！语言A.

3、以写正确语法和词汇为准。不能乱用难词、大词、不认识的词、各种叠加不确定的表达和句型。如果不确定，就利用汉语换二种自己会的表达。.适当活用原文的表达词汇复现C. 在此基础上，考虑积累一些文学性表达&idiomatic expressions看范文D.考虑少量简单短句、独立主格结构、非谓语动词作状语（包括形容词）、强调句、 倒装句、插入语、宾补结构、定语从句（尤其非限制性定语从句很容易出现）、名词性从句、 with复合结构等E.有意识地使用adj&adv,二连形或二连副单个举例：/ 插入语 Tom,nevertheless,would like to give up.Tom,though extr

4、emely hungry and tired,took a deep breath and persisted./ 更高端的一些修辞:比方3句排比方It isthat三遍；比喻（用见过的）；alliteration 押头韵如A is part and parcel of B.A是B重要、不可或缺的局部。/ adj 或 adj 短语作状语Oh,said Mom,disappointed.Safe and sound,! got home/l dont wanna try anymore/he said,helpless&hopeless.Somewhat content/satisfied wi

5、th what she said just now,the stranger./ 二连 adj/advRealizing the truth,he became embarrassed and guilty,and apologized sincerely to the beggar.Very quietly but determinedly she waved goodbye to him and went alone./ 倒装句：Only when.will you.Never/Under no circumstances w川 I give up,见得略多And all of a sud

6、den in walked two boys and a girl.In front of the TV sat/stood/lay a boy.Sitting inside the car was a man with/who（主语力口点定语，防止头重脚轻）Child/Young as/though he is,（尽管）Hardly had Tom laid eyes on the scene when the expression on his face changed from delight to shock.即tSo loudly did he scream that everyon

7、e present turned around to see what had happened,虚拟语气的倒装句Had we done sth,we would./In addition to倒装、定从状从等混合,可考虑形成自己的固定高分复合结构.说话内容+说话动作&副词等状语+非谓语动词“You dont have to/answered Dad in his soft voice,coming over and lifting me out of Momslap.三连动My dog,Daisy,followed me into the room,jumped on the bed,and

8、 started licking me all over my face.独立主格结构+动作+非谓语动词Fear sending his pulse racing,he tried to calm down but in vain,panting heavily and covered in sweat.Tired and hungry,he threw himself into the bed,his head buried in the pillow.对话标点AAAAAAA,said Tom excitedly/BBBBBBB.，根据需要可换成?或！. said 可 换 成 added/c

9、ontinued/repeated/answered/replied/said in my ear/whispered/sighed（叹 着气说）/mumbled（含 糊着说）/agreed/explained/yelled（大 叫）/shouted/insisted（坚持说offered（主动提出）/whimper（啜泣着说）等范文：As time went by,they could see more and more seagulls. And also more and more seaweed floated around their lifeboat.What?s more.the

10、 seaweed was green instead of brown.Seeing that,the four men felt more excited because they were really approaching land.Then,as the boat was carried to the top of a great wave,the captain looked across the water and saw a lighthouse.The cook also said he saw it.After searching the sky for a long ti

11、meStephen Crane finally found the lighthouseit was very far,at least there was hope for them.After a while,the captain shouted suddenly/Took again.Ifs exactly in the direction.Hearing that,they all forgot their pain and hunger and worked harder toward land.Unluckily,as they were getting close to the

12、 shore,the wave became larger and larger,and their boat was likely to be turned over at any time.Howeverjhey controlled the boat with all their strength.And finally they saw some people on the shore waving at them and they knew they could be saved.一些好的表达：升华主旨要自然（出彩最好）“When looking back on this narro

13、w escape from death,l found that it was the belief in hope that brought us the light and drove away the darkness/he wrote in the newspaper article.“A man can be destroyed but not defeated/he said with a broad smile on his face.You know,that is my motto and I am theold man.心情情感类：let out a cry of exci

14、tement be in high spiritsAn atmosphere of sadness blanketing the whole world（独立主格结构）,His heart swelling with pride/joy/anger（独立主格结构），His dark eyes glittering with delight/greed/anger（独立主格结构），His eyes flashing angrily/with anger,A look of terror flashing across his face（独立主格结构）,Her eyes/face lighting

15、 up with joy/pleasure（独立主格结构）,Her eyes lit up when he walked into the room.&Suddenly a smile lit up his face.（happy/excitement）His smile broadening from ear to ear,（独立主格结构）A feeling of tiredness/isolation sweeping over me,（独立主格结构）突然袭来哭 burst into laughter/tears=burst out laughing/cryinga tear-staine

16、d face带着泪痕的脸shed bitter tearsshed-shed-shedshed tears of happiness 流出痛苦/幸福的泪水be on the verge of tears 要哭 了Tears streaming/rolling down his cheek,或 Happy tears welling up in his eyes,或 Tears blurring his eyes（独立主格结构）,Feeling a sudden surge of anger/excitement/panic/relief/he.With a surge of relief/an

17、xiety/despair washing over/through him,the boy.sth offered a ray of hope for them.给了彳也们一线希望。“A ray of hope flickered in the sky?be sunk in despair/depressionWith a touch of sadness in his voice,声音中带着点伤感be overwhelmed with grief/sorrow/despair/gratitude 陷入悲伤、悲哀、绝望；感激万分； Overwhelmed by a feeling of gu

18、ilt(非谓语动词),he.He could no longer hold back his anger/tears.She could hardly contain her excitement/curiosity.possess:被动更多She was possessed by jealousy.她妒火中烧A terrible fear/mad rage possessed her.细节外貌等描写侧面表达心情,比方angry(his voice rising,his face flushing)gloomy ： a gloomy room/lt was a wet and gloomy d

19、ay.We sat in gloomy silence.(sad&hopeless)Night/Darkness/Dusk fell.夜幕、黄昏降临 Are wn doomed to die/failure?注定死亡、失败 I believe we can make it!lf fortune could smile on us,after what seemed to be ages/a century,He finally broke the long silence between them.The lighthouse was flashing in the distance.lt was the last thing he would like to do.They gathered all their strength to pull the oars.=pulled with all their strength/mig