2003年考研真题作文

1、2003 年考研真题作文Directions:Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay inwhich you should:1. describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and2. point out its implications in our life.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWERSHEET 2. (20 points)The above two pictures

2、have shaped sharp contrast to eachother. In one picture, a flower grows in a greenhouse and is in fullbloom in spite of the outside rain. But in the other, the flower,moved outside and without the protection of the greenhouse, iswithering in the rain. The two pictures show us that the flower,which i

3、s raised in a greenhouse and carefully protected, cannotstand natural wind and rain, and therefore is withering.It is most likely that the drawer means to compare children inour country to the flower in his drawings and reflect a problem inthe present education of our children. For one thing, nowada

4、ys,most children are brought up by their parents with the best of care.Parents always try their best to meet the childrens demands, toprovide them with the best environment of growing and studyingand to protect them from any possible harms, setbacks andsufferings. For another, owing to the present e

5、xamination-orientededucation system, most children are too heavily burdened withstudies to have time to take part in social activities so that theylearn little about the society, the real world outside their familyand school. Growing up in such a way and environment, it will beinevitable and natural

6、 for our children to lack the ability to standsetbacks and sufferings and to overcome obstacles when theyleave their parents and step into the society.To sum up, the problem of childrens education must be sotimely and effectively because it is they that constitute the futureof our country.审题解题2003 画

7、，阐述其含义；第二点是指出在我们生活中的含意，即暗含的意思。注意这里meaning和 implication是不同的，前者指图通过类比（analogy）所揭示的道理。题目给出了两幅相对的图画：上面一幅图中，尽管外面正在下雨，温室中的花朵却在怒放。可是下面的一幅图中，这花朵一旦搬到了外界，在雷雨中立即就凋谢了，由此我们得出了“温室中的花朵经不起风雨”的推论，这就是两幅图画的含义。其暗含的意思可以想见，指的就是当前社会孩子的教育问题。许多父母对孩子呵护有加，百般溺爱，不让孩子吃一点苦，受一点委屈，这样对孩子就好吗？此外在当前的教育制度下，孩子学习负担过重，绝大部分时间都在学校和家庭度过，没有多少接

8、触社会的机会，又怎能茁壮成长呢？经过分析文章最后定为三段。第一段是描述图画。第二段是类的原因。而后在段内得出结论，这样的孩子就象温室里的花朵一样，是经不起人生的磨难的。最后一段是做结，由于提纲中没有单独列举这一点，所以此段可以非常简洁。核心词汇shape sharp contrastin full bloomwithercannot stand natural wind and raincompare tobring up children with tender careowing tothe examination-oriented education systembe heavily b

9、urdened with studiestake part in social activitiesstand sufferings and overcome obstacles组词成句首段首句是个模板句，说两幅画构成了强烈的对比。The above two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to each other. it ismost likely that，以 it开头做形式主语，显得客观，most表compareto，表示“把 Shall I compare thee toa summers day?莎士比亚十四行诗中著名句子，thee即是现在的

10、 you。这首十四行诗很可能是莎翁最著名的一首。)Robert Burns compared his lover to a red, red rose. 将他的爱人比做红红的玫瑰花。)严格说来，comparewith与但现在混用的情形越来越多了。此句后面的 reflect 比较好，一来是将图画与现实生活中的问题连接了起来，且接续紧密；二来引起了下文，显得很工整。在考研写作中应多注意句型的变换使用，但注意短句、散句千万不要太多。The above two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to eachother. In one picture,a flow

11、er grows in a greenhouse and is in fullbloom in spite of the outside rain. But in the other, the flower,moved outside and without the protection of the greenhouse, iswithering in the thunderstorm. The two pictures show us that theflower, which is raised in a greenhouse and carefully protected,cannot

12、 stand natural wind and rain at all.It is most likely that the drawer means to compare children inour country to the flower in his drawings and reflect a problem inthe present education of our children. For one thing, nowadays,most children are brought up by their parents with tender care.Parents al

13、ways try their best to meet the childrens demands, toprovide them with the best environment of growth and study andto protect them from any possible harms, setbacks and sufferings.For another,owing to the present examination-oriented educationsystem, most children are too heavily burdened with studi

14、es tohave time to take part in social activities, so they learn little aboutthe society, the real world outside their family and school.Growing up in such a manner and such an environment, thechildren will inevitably and naturally lack the ability to standsufferings and overcome obstacles when they

15、leave their parentsand step into the society.To sum up, the problem of childrens education must be sotimely and effectively because it is they that constitute the futureof our country.结构点评谋篇布局时我们一定要扣紧所给的指令，特别是提纲。本文共第二、三句分述两幅图，第四句是本段重点，在对比过程中，得出图画的含义。第二段首句推测绘画者的意图，引出了孩子教育这一重要问题。而后分两个方面来描述其原因。此段的末句非常精

16、彩，是根据上述两个原因所作的推论，说明在此种情形下，孩子们离开父母、独自生活时又怎能经得起人生的风雨呢？最后一段下结论，非常简洁，但却相当于原因办法类混合模板中的办法模块，说这一问题必须尽管有效地解决，因为孩子是我们国家的未来。妙笔生花第一段第二句的in full bloom去分词短语作后置定语，相当于一个定语从句。句中wither表thunderstorm第四句巧妙利用raise这一词既可以描写人、又可以描写植物、动物的特性，与下文的bring up遥相呼应，非常精妙。句中的stand 第二段首句中的 mean 第三句是第二句的自然接续，句中使用了三个平行的不定式，其中meet demand

17、s harms, setbacks andsufferings 句中 owing to the examination-oriented educationsystem tooto结构，在这里非常恰当；be heavily burdened with studiestake part in social activitiesthe real worldoutside their family and school 是 the society 的同位语这里使用了同位语之后，句中就显得丰富地多了。同位语与插入语一样，是看似平淡却极显功力的技巧，请大家细细琢磨，这一类的技巧还有标点符号的使用。最后一

18、句有多处平行，第一处是在现在分词短语中的 in such a manner and such anenvironment such关键；之后有副词inevitably and naturally的平行，而后是动宾词组 stand sufferings和 overcome ，分别表示“经受磨 leave their parents和 stepinto the and还表示了时间上的前后接续关系，这里也可以使用leave their parents and live on their own。最后一段只有一句话，使用了平行的副词 timely 和调句，效果强烈。句中constitute the f

19、uture of our country 表示文后之思从 2000 年起，考研写作全部考察了图画题，也就是越来越注重考察大家对于主题的把握这也就是与命题作文最大的区别。在把握了图画所包含的深刻寓意之后，就应该紧扣提纲展开文章。在谋篇布局完成之后，在具体写作的过程中，遣词同学毕竟是少数，最大的竞争还在语言本身。就枯萎了。江南、江北画一个插在地上的小牌子，上面标出字即可The above two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to eachother. In one picture, a tree south of river grows abundant

20、ly. Butin the other, the tree, transplanted to the north of the river, iswithering after some time. The two pictures show us that the tree,which is planted in a certain environment, may not grow well oreven die in another environment.It is most likely that the drawer means to compare employeesof our

21、 times to the tree in his drawings and reflect a problem intodays job market. For one thing, nowadays, many employeesdream of finding jobs with ideal pay. Some people hop from onejob to another to find such positions even if they do not like them,or they have never thought about the problem. For another,otherpeople keep thinking of working in big companies, which theybelieve means more chances of pay r