写作微技能：如何增加有说服力的细节课件

1、写作专题：如何在请求信中增加有说服力的细节Review: structure of letters of request Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to talk about some environmental problems in my area. The first problem is _. It occurs _. It is caused by _. It pollutes the area and makeseverything smell unpleasant. The second problem is _. It occurs

2、 _. It makes it difficult for us to _.The third problem is _. It occurs _. It is caused by _. They make the area untidy. I would be grateful if you would let me know what you can do about these problems. I hope that you will takeAction quickly before the environment is too badly damaged. Thank you.

3、Yours faithfullyxxxReview: purpose of letters of request Who is the reader of this letter?What is the purpose of this letter?The trouble is that our atmosphere is changing because we are polluting it with chemicals in the form of gases and it is keeping in too much heat!Many of out habits cause poll

4、ution, especially our habit of using things once and then throwing them away. This creates massive mountains of rubbishFor example, people throw away as many as seven billion drink cans in Britain each year. 9BU1 The green consumerRead model sentences. Underline convincing（有说服力的） details. The troubl

5、e is that our atmosphere is changing because we are polluting it with chemicals in the form of gases and it is keeping in too much heat!Many of out habits cause pollution, especially our habit of using things once and then throwing them away. This creates massive mountains of rubbishFor example, peo

6、ple throw away as many as seven billion drink cans in Britain each year. 9BU1 The green consumerRead model sentences. Underline convincing details. Convincing detailstoo much heat 太多热量massive mountains of rubbish 堆积如山的垃圾The smog from the fire has already caused hundreds of deaths and illnesses. A th

7、ick smog is covering most of the countries in South-east AsiaOne doctor told me that living in this smog is like smoking 600 cigarettes a day. 9BU1 More practice Millions of trees on fireRead model sentences. Underline convincing details. The smog from the fire has already caused hundreds of deaths

8、and illnesses. A thick smog is covering most of the countries in South-east AsiaOne doctor told me that living in this smog is like smoking 600 cigarettes a day. 9BU1 More practice Millions of trees on fireRead model sentences. Underline convincing details. Convincing detailshundreds of deaths and i

9、llnesses 数以百计的死伤most of the countries 大部分国家Tip 1: Use quantifiers（量词）Convincing detailstoo much heat 太多热量massive mountains of rubbish 堆积如山的垃圾hundreds of deaths and illnesses 数以百计的死伤most of the countries 大部分国家Tip 1: Use quantifiers（量词）Write down the grammatical rules for these quantifiers. too much h

10、eatmassive mountains of rubbishhundreds of deaths and illnessesmost of the countriestoo much + U; 太多的(massive) mountains of + U/C; 成堆的hundreds of + U/C; 数以百计的most of + U/C; 大部分的Practice 1: translate sentences在我家边上的公园里，有着堆积如山的垃圾。数以百计的生物死亡。空气中有太多的有害气体。这里大部分的人都需要戴口罩生活。Practice 1: translate sentences河流旁

11、的垃圾堆积如山。There are mountains of rubbish in the park near my home. 数以百计的生物死亡。Hundreds of living creatures die. 空气中有太多的有害气体。There are too many harmful gases in the air.这里大部分的人都需要戴口罩生活。Most of people here need to wear masks. Many of the passengers did not want the leaflets, so they threw them on the gro

12、und. As a result, the road was very messy, with lots of litter.He kept us awake every night with his terrible music! We were glad when he moved to another city. Another problem with noise is from a building site. That goes on from early morning to late at night. And next year, there is going to be a

13、 big, new road near our block. The noise from that will be awful.9BU1 Listening scriptRead model sentences. Underline convincing（有说服力的） details. Many of the passengers did not want the leaflets, so they threw them on the ground. As a result, the road was very messy, with lots of litter.He kept us aw

14、ake every night with his terrible music! We were glad when he moved to another city. Another problem with noise is from a building site. That goes on from early morning to late at night. And next year, there is going to be a big, new road near our block. The noise from that will be awful.9BU1 Listen

15、ing scriptRead model sentences. Underline convincing adjectives. The first problem is air pollution. A lot of unpleasant smoke comes out of its chimney. It pollutes the area and makes everything smell unpleasant. The third problem is rubbish. It occurs near my home on Sandfield Road. It is caused by

16、 people who give out leaflets. Most of the leaflets are thrown on the road. They make the area untidy. 9BU1 Teachers book Writing possible answerRead model sentences. Underline convincing adjectives. The first problem is air pollution. A lot of unpleasant smoke comes out of its chimney. It pollutes

17、the area and makes everything smell unpleasant. The third problem is rubbish. It occurs near my home on Sandfield Road. It is caused by people who give out leaflets. Most of the leaflets are thrown on the road. They make the area untidy. 9BU1 Teachers book Writing possible answerRead model sentences

18、. Underline convincing adjectives. Tip 2: Use adjectivesmessy adj. 肮脏的；凌乱的；不整洁的terrible adj. 可怕的；令人不快的unpleasant adj. 令人不快的；不舒服的untidy adj. 不整洁的；不整齐的；凌乱的awful adj. 及其讨厌的；糟糕的Practice 2: fill in the blanksmessy adj. 肮脏的；凌乱的；不整洁的terrible adj. 可怕的；令人不快的unpleasant adj. 令人不快的；不舒服的untidy adj. 不整洁的；不整齐的；凌乱的awful adj. 及其讨厌的；糟糕的Theres an _ smell in here. Due to the massive mountain of rubbish, our school is in a _ mess. The house was always _. The harmful gases in the air make it _ to breathe. terrible/awful/unpleasantterrible/awfulmessy/