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1、张腾VS腾哥VS都敏腾Xi原新东方 环球雅思离职不坑爹 教学总监 原环球北美考试院不脑残院长 现腾飞国际教育创始人 腾飞国际教育拥有腾飞英语培训学校 华师大新起点培训中心 两大品牌学习有障碍，拖延症，大脑偶尔出现幻觉赶紧来加入腾哥治疗团 新浪微博名 教主张腾 腾哥托福雅思预测公共微信号：tenggeyuce 腾哥托福预测 腾哥托福写作团 那些年你走过的写作弯路1 考前一篇没写 或者写了 重在参与2 机经没中 重在参与3 机经中了 重在参与背范文4 分数很稳定 12-18 21-24 fair Good 重在参与5 打基础 写和托福无关的句子 重在参与一会背机经 一会弄别的什么是完美的备考体系1

2、 基础入门 （语法 句子 词汇）2 基础强化 开头 结尾 段落 理由 例证 逻辑3 预测 素材 +高大上框架腾哥素材才是王道8.238.309.149.21朋友类题目1 a friend who is intelligent is much better than a friend with a good sense of humour.2 letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy the friendship.3 getting advice from o

3、lder friends is more valuable than from the friends of the same age as yours.4People who have interest in different things cannot be friends.5Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends. a. joining a sports team,b. participate in community activities, c. traveling6 Some peop

4、le prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer. 7Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large

5、 number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer. 8It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. 9The ability of maintaining the relationship wit

6、h old friends is more important for happiness that the ability to make new friends. 腾哥素材高分句那些可以和你风雨同舟的人 富贵易交友，患难见真情 拥有亲密无间的和志同道合的朋友是人人都渴望的 患难见真情 Those who can go through thick and thin together with you 。Prosperity helps us make friends， however，adversity helps us try them. A close and congenial fri

7、end is what every individual aspires after. A friend in need is a friend in deed 百变腾哥万能理由幽默的朋友（老朋友）可以帮助我们看到积极的一面，尤其是当我们感到沮丧和挫败的时候。富有幽默感的朋友（老朋友），可以在很大程度上帮助我们在逆境中保持乐观情绪。 选择愿意慷慨相助的朋友胜过了选择可以给让我们带来幽默的朋友.幽默的朋友（老朋友）可以帮助我们看到积极的一面，尤其是当我们感到沮丧和挫败的时候。A humorous friend can never fail to help us to see the sunny

8、side, especially when we feel frustrated and depressed. 富有幽默感的朋友（老朋友），可以在很大程度上帮助我们在逆境中保持乐观情绪A humorous friend can, to large extent, help us remain cheerful in time of adversity 选择愿意慷慨相助的朋友胜过了选择可以给让我们带来幽默的朋友. Opting for friends who are willing to give unselfish help outshines choosing friends with wh

9、om we can feel the sense of humor. 腾哥百变例证无论何时我遇到意想不到的困境， 鑫姐总是可以给我提供情感支持和精神身体安慰。 我相信好友是超越年龄的限制，我一直认为鑫哥是值得信赖的朋友，从他身上我获益良多 无论何时我遇到意想不到的困境， 鑫姐总是可以给我提供情感支持和精神身体安慰。Whenever I run into unexpected adverse circumstances， it is 鑫姐 that provides me with emotional support and spiritual /bodyconsolation. 我相信好友是超

10、越年龄的限制，我一直认为鑫姐是值得信赖的朋友，从她身上我获益良多 I believe true friend can surpass the age limitation. I always take 鑫哥 as my trustworthy friend from whom I really benefit a great deal.来源于腾哥写作预测素材2 朋友的定义以及好朋友的特征 A friend by definition is someone you know well and regard with affection and trust. He is not selfish a

11、nd very forgiving. He knows the hearts, seeing you for you; the imperfections, the motives, the joys and virtues. I could say what qualities a friend should have. A friend is loyal, reliable, trustworthy, and loving. 来源于腾哥写作预测素材2、友谊（Friendship） Friendship is important to us, Everyone needs friendshi

12、p. In our lives, we cannot live without friendship, just as we cannot survive without air and water. Friendship gives us a feeling of security and warmth; friendship encourages us to go ahead. But real friendship is not easy to come by. True friendship must be sincere and unconditional. It is based

13、on mutual understanding, not on mutual benefit. Some people try to get something from their friends, and their friends also try to make use of them. If such a relationship can be called friendship, we need no friends at all. 例如：问你经济发展更重要，还是环境保护更重要。科学家对人类的贡献大，还是艺术家的贡献大。问题三，请问让你回家干一件事情你干什么，怎么写。问题四；请问让

14、你发明一件东西，你会发明什么 Modern agriculture methods damage the environment, but providing food for the growing population around the world is more important than protecting the environment.腾哥写作预测素材1、酸雨对于森林的危害 When industrialization began, little thought was given to its ecological effects. Raw, untreated sewa

15、ge was allowed to pollute our seas and rivers. Animals were killed for profit to the point of extinction. The loss of trees through uncontrolled deforestation caused erosion and unstable climate. Acid rain was caused by the poisonous gases set into the atmosphere. Chemicals in pesticides killed anim

16、al life. Herbicides destroyed plants. The balance of nature was disturbed. 环境的破坏 Industrial development without careful consideration regarding land preservation, has caused problems more serious than people can ever imagine. Take the great Sanxia dam for example, which will be put into operation next year. While the country benefits from the gargantuan potential of electric generation, we have to face up to various environmental conservation issues concerning the geological and ecological environment along both the riversides and whole upper reaches. The professional de