Unit1 Writing学案-高中英语外研版必修第一册

1、新外研版B1U1 Writing主题写作高中生活1.写作任务假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信说，他因父亲工作变动刚转到一所新学校，很难融人新的集体，为此感到很苦恼。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封信:(1)表示理解;(2)给他提出建议(多与同学交流;参加社团;关心并帮助有困难的同.:.(3)表达祝愿。注意: (1)词数80左右;(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;(3 )开头与结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。Dear Tom,Im sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along with your new classmates._Yo

2、urs,Li Hua2.写作构思(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题体裁:应用文一信件主题:向笔友提供尽快融人新的学校生活的建议富出(2)二定:确定时态和人称时态:一般现在时态为主，也会用到将来时态人称:用第一人称和第二人称(3)三明确:明确写作要点内容要求:a.开门见山，开头点明主题(信的开头已给出) ;b.写出要点的三个内容:理解;好的建议;美好祝愿;c.信件结束语。词数要求: 80左右。(4)四分段结合要点分为四个段落。3.素材整理(1)关键词语in bad mood心情不好take sb. a period of time to do sth.做某事花费某人段时间adapt. to. .使.

3、适应.communicate with sb.与某人交流join in参加(活动)get to know逐渐了解whats more此外;再者if possible如果可能的话go on继续;继续下去make friends with sb.与某人做朋友(2)重要句型我认为你可能需要一段时间来 适应新的生活。(宾语从句) _只有这样做，你才能认识更多的人。(倒装句) _更重要的是，如果可能，帮助别人也可能是一个好 主意，可以显示你是热心而又友好的。(if possible, which引导非限制性定语从句) _随着时间的推移，我相信你的同学会更好地了解一 你，并喜欢和你交朋友。(with ti

4、me going on;宾语从句) _Keys:I think it may take you a period of time to adapt yourself to the new life.Only by doing these can you get to know more people.Whats more，it may also be a good idea to help others D possible, which can show them you are warm-hearted and friendly. With time going on, Im sure y

5、our classmates will know you better and like to make friends with you. 4.高分作文(连句成篇)请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。Dear Tom, I m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along with your new classmates. Dont be in bad mood. I think it may take you a period of time to adapt yourself to the new schoo

6、l life.However, you have to face it. It will be helpful to communicate with your classmates and join in some social activities. Only by doing join in these can you get to know more people. Whats more, it may also be a good idea to help others if possible, which can show them you are warm-hearted and friendly.With time going on, Im sure your classmates will know you better and like to make friends with you.Best regards!Yours, Li Hua综合点评(1)内容要点全面，结