年8月顾家北小班0802笔记

1、Some people believe that teenagers shouldconcentrate on all school subjects, while otherthat studentsshouldfocusonthesubjectthattheyarebestat or that they find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.论述类确定了ACA题目事件1：concentrateonallschoolsubjects专注所有的课程事件 2：最感连接词：ontheotheroneobviousben

2、efitof./anotherbenefitisthatisalsoto Most of us are willing to focus our habits or something thing that we really are good at. The phenomenon also exists in teenagers education. While more people think science is a multifaceted,anized, dynamic interplay system, especiallyinteenagers education,learni

3、ngallschoolsubjectswillpreparea basis science system for further study or work in future.（F）Expectationsplacedonchildrenseemtoincreaseconstantlyespeciallyinterms of academic achievements.Some people are of the opinion of that compared with only one subject, enrolling for a wide range of courses enab

4、les students to possess more knowledge; I agree with this view.（F）66.5 分Teenagerstodayareunderincreasingpressuretoperformwellatschool, especially in terms of academic achievements. (T)Some people are of the opinion that compared with studying only one subject, enrollingforawiderangeofcoursesenabless

5、tudentstopossessmoreknowledge; I agree with this view.(c)注意作文开头的三大方法：1 替换2 改结构 3 说自己的看 B 学的知识全面（receivea rounded 中心句（A+B):Someeducationalistssupportthatmiddleschoolstudentscan register for different courses, so they can receive a rounded education.开拓视野:broadenones（拓展+C): They are able to broaden the

6、ir minds and acquire skills that are neededbyemployers,andbecauseofthisitiseasyforthese(代词）well-rounded individuals to find employment.Someeducationalistssupportthatmiddleschoolstudentscanregisterfordifferent courses, so they can receive a rounded education. They are able to broaden their minds anda

7、cquire skillsthat are needed by employers, and because of this, it is easy for these well-rounded individuals to find employment.logical mathsandphilosophyhaveabeneficialeffectonlogicalthinkingwhile art enables students to develop creative capacity.Someeducationalistssupportthatmiddleschoolstudentsc

8、anregisterfordifferent courses, so they can receive a rounded education. For example, maths and philosophy have abeneficialeffecton logicalthinking,while artenablesstudents to develop creative capacity.They are able to broaden their minds and acquire skills that are needed by employers, and because

9、of this, it is easy for thesewell-roundedindividualstofindAA 学个科目（FocusthemindB 更有效C 更有可能获得成就 （Educationa Allowingstudentstostudyonlyonesubjectthattheyaregoodatorloveisgood for their academic careers.(F)StudyingonesubjectisvaluabletostudentsacademicAlternativelyvaluable to students academic performa

10、nce. (c)thesestudentsdonotneedtodevoteenergiesandtimetolearningother subjects. (T)theycanfocustheirmindsonthesubjecttheyhavetheycanfocustheirmindsonthesubjecttheyhavechosenratherthandevote energies and time to learning other subjects. (c）This can improve their learningthis can contribute to their ed

11、ucational attainment（T)并列句：This method can improve their learningesandcontributetotheir educational attainment. (c)On the other hand/Alternatively, itis sometimesargued that studying one subject isvaluabletostudentsacademicperformance.Theycanfocustheirmindsonthe subject they have chosen rather than

12、devoteenergies andtimeto learningother subjects. This method can improve their learningesandcontributetotheir educational attainment. (c)特定化拓展：Thisisparticularlythecaseforthosesubjectsthatrequirestudentsto have an innate talent(与生俱来的天赋）(c)Alternatively, it is sometimes argued that studying one subje

13、ct is valuable to students academic performance.Theycan focustheirmindson the subjectthey havechosenratherthandevoteenergiesandtimetolearningothersubjects.This method can improve their learningesandcontributetotheireducational attainment. This is particularly the case for those subjects that require

14、 students to have an innate talent. (c)ACexploitanddeveloptalents,haveagoodgrounding Studentscanchoosesomecoursesthatcaterfortheirinterests.(C) they are able to exploit and develop talents (c)并列句：Studentscanchoosesomecoursesthatcaterfortheirinterests,andthey are thus able to exploit and develop tale

15、nts (c)Theyarelikelytohaveagoodgroundinginthesesubjects.对比拓展：Incontrast,thosewhostudyonesubjectonlymaynotbeablediscovertheirtalents.thosewhostudyonesubjectonlymaynotbeabletodiscovertheirtalents（定语从句）= If students study one subject, they may not be able to discover their talentssquanderIncontrast,tho

16、sewhostudyone subjectonlymay notbeable todiscovertheir talents; instead, they squander time on less important subjects. (c)中心句（C 的改写）：Fro m mythe younger generations development in future. (C)From my, studying different subjects holds the key to the younger generations development in future.Students

17、 can choose some courses that caterfortheinterests,andthey are thusabletoexploitanddeveloptalents.They are likely tohave agoodgrounding inthesesubjects.Incontrast,thosewhostudy onesubjectonlymaynotbeabletodiscovertheirtalents;instead,theysquander time on less important subjects.Nowadays sending chil

18、dren to boarding school isingincreasinglypopular. What is the reason? Do you think it is a positive development? 报告类Whatisthereason?问原因的时候是确定C,往前面想 A(动作Doyouthinkitisapositivedevelopment?问产生好处/坏处的时候是确定了A,往后面想 AabusyC所以寄宿学校变得流行(goMany parents have a busy lifestyle which leads to the children remain u

19、nsupervised. Thing schoolcan notonlytakecareof thechildrenbut also supervise the childrens studies. Therefore sending children to thhas gone mainstream.（F)中心句：Thetrendtowardsendingchildrentoboardingschoolsisparticularly evident among parents who have a busy lifestyle (T）Therearefearsthattheirchildre

20、nremainTherearefearsthat.(同位语从句并列句：Therearefearsthattheirchildrenremainunsupervisedandshow behavioural problems(行为问题).The trend toward sending children to boarding schools is particularly evident among parents who have a busy lifestyle. There are fears that their children remain unsupervised and sho

21、w behavioural problems. Thingschoolcan notonlytakecareofchildrenbutalsosupervisechildrensstudies.Thisexplains why these schools have gone mainstream in some communities. (c)逃课：playing举例拓展：The trend toward sending children to boarding schools is particularly evident among parents who have a busy life

22、style. There are fears that their childrenremainunsupervisedandshowbehaviouralproblems，suchasbullying and playing truant. Thing school can not only take care of children but also supervise childrens studies. This explains why these schools have gone mainstream in some communities. (c)Awellcaredforby

23、 ) CfamilytiesChildren self-studying at school, but can not be well cared for by their own parents. As time goes by, crating an emotional distance from their parents is inevitable. The family ties even go weaken, whiayhasanegativeeffecton the development of children in the future, like losing self-c

24、onfidence when entering into the society.(F)5-5.5分中心句没有出现和连接词。childrenliveawayfromTheyarenotwellcaredforbytheir中心句（A+BIfchildren liveawayfromhometheyarenotwellcaredforbytheir parents. (状语从句）Thiscreatesanemotionaldistance. The family tie weakens .Ifthisproblempersists,itcancreateanemotionaldistancean

25、dthefamilytiewill weaken. (状语从句）Thiscanbeproblematic（不好的）becauseitcancreateanemotionaldistance and the family tie will weaken. (c)If children live away from home, they are not well cared for by their parents. This canbeproblematicbecauseitcancreateanemotionaldistanceandthefamily tie will weaken.解释拓展

26、：They fail to receive parents support when they have tochallenges in daily lives. (c)Ifchildrenlive awayfromhome,theyarenotwellcaredforbytheirparents.They fail to receive parents support when they have toe challenges in daily lives.Thiscanbe problematic becauseitcancreateanemotionaldistance and the

27、family tie will weaken. (c)强调结果拓展：Thesenseofisolationcanbeharmfultochildrensmentalhealthand responsible for some problems or even juvenile delinquency. (c)Ifchildrenlive awayfromhome,theyarenotwellcaredforbytheirparents.They fail to receive parents support when they have toe challenges in daily live

28、s.Thiscanbe problematic becauseitcancreateanemotionaldistance and the family tie will weaken. The sense of isolation can be harmful to childrens mental health and responsible for some hostile behaviour or even juvenile delinquency. (C)A , In my opinion, it is a positive trend toward sending children to boarding school, because t