专题5 过强化-短文改错

1、PAGE10专题5短文改错过强化Proofreading1预测新题Iusuallygotoschoolbybike.AndthismorningIwentonfoot.Onthewaytoschool,Ihappentowitnessanaccident.Amiddle-agedwomanwasknockeddownbyacarwhilecrossesthestreet.Seeingthatwashappeningonthescene,Imaderushforthewomantohelp.Onepasser-bygotoutofhiscellphoneandcalledthepolice.Ih

2、elpedtocarrythewomantosafeanddressherwound.Aroundtenminuteslate,anambulancearrivedandtookhimtohospital.Icontinuedmywaytoschool,feelinghappilythatIcouldoffersomehelpintime.Proofreading22022陕西卷MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.As

3、soonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.Finally,therewereasuddenpullatthepoleandfishwascaught.Withinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralsocaughtafish.Felthungry,webuiltafirebyt

4、helakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.Proofreading3名师原创Itisclearshownthatmanymiddleschoolstudentshavephysicalandmentalproblems.68%ofthestudentssurveyinghavestudyinganxietyaswellaspooreyesighttoo.Andalargerpercentagelackssleep.52%areshortofphysicalexercise.42%ofthestudentswontobeyourparentsorteach

5、ers.Personally,Ithinkwestudentshouldbalanceourphysicalexerciseandstudies.Withoutsoundbody,onecantachieveanything.However,toomuchattentionhasbeenpaidonlyonstudies.Asaresult,Isuggestwearegivenlesshomeworkormoretimeforout-of-classroomactivities.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveahappyandhealthylife.参考答案Proofreadin

6、g1Iusuallygotoschoolbybike.AndthismorningIwentonfoot.OnthewaytoButschool,Ihappentowitnessanaccident.Amiddle-agedwomanwasknockeddownbyhappenedacarwhilecrossesthestreet.Seeingthatwashappeningonthescene,Imaderushcrossingwhataforthewomantohelp.Onepasser-bygotoutofhiscellphoneandcalledthepolice.I去掉ofhelp

7、edtocarrythewomantosafeanddressherwound.Aroundtenminuteslate,ansafetylaterambulancearrivedandtookhimtohospital.Icontinuedmywaytoschool,feelingherhappilythatIcouldoffersomehelpintime.happyAndBut。【解析】根据bybike与onfoot可知，前后句之间是转折关系,故用But。happenhappened。【解析】根据上文中的Iwentonfoot可知,此处描述的是发生在过去的事情,应该用一般过去时。cros

8、sescrossing。【解析】分析句子结构可知,此处为while引导的时间状语从句的省略,完整形式为whileshewascrossingthestreet。故将crosses改为crossing。thatwhat。【解析】这里指看到现场发生的事情。此处在句中引导宾语从句,且在从句中作主语,表示的事情,故用what。rush前加a。【解析】此处指作者冲向那位女士以提供帮助。makearushfor冲向,奔向是固定搭配。删除out后的of。【解析】句意：一位路人拿出他的手机并给轡察打了电话。get取来,去拿来,是及物动词,其后可直接接宾语；out在此为副词。而getoutofsth.意为离开（

9、某地）,摆脱,放弃,显然不符合此处的语境。故of多余。safesafety。【解析】此处充当介词的宾语,应该用名词形式。safety安全的地方。latelater。【解析】虽然late和later都可用作副词,但前者表示迟,晚,后者表示后来,随后根据句意可知,应将late改为later。himher。【解析】此处指的是用救护车将那位受伤的女士送往医院,故应用her。happilyhappy。【解析】feel是系动词,其后应用形容词作表语。Proofreading2MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.W

10、etookoursfishingpolesandwentourheadedforthelake.Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.去掉soBeforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.IwantedtoAfterimpatientgiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.Finally,therewereabutwassuddenpullatthepoleandfishwascaught.With

11、inthenextfewminute,myaminutesgrandfatheralsocaughtafish.Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.Feelinggowent。【解析】考查时态。句中出现了OneSundaymorning,同时整篇文章说明的是过去的情况,故要用一般过去时。oursour。【解析】考查形容词性物主代词。修饰名词短语fishingpoles要用形容词性物主代词。删除so。【解析】考查连词。根据句子结构可知,句中含有一个assoonas引导的时间状语从句,所以主句中就不能

12、再使用连词so。BeforeAfter。【解析】考查介词。根据语境可知,此处指的是在我们等了大约半个小时之后。impatientlyimpatient。【解析】考查形容词。get作变得,变成时是系动词,后面要用形容词作表语。andbut。【解析】考查连词。根据wantedtogiveup和waitalittlelonger可知,此处表示转折。werewas。【解析】考查主谓一致。在therebe句型中,be的单复数形式要和后面的名词保持一致。根据后面的asuddenpull可知,谓语动词要用单数形式。fish前加a。【解析】考查冠词。作为鱼讲时为可数名词,其前无限定词,且其发音以辅音音素开头，

13、故此处用不定冠词a,表示泛指。minuteminutes。【解析】考查名词复数。由于前面有few修饰,所以后面的名词要用复数形式。FeltFeeling。【解析】考查非谓语动词。根据句子的结构可知,feel与其逻辑主语we之间为主谓关系,故应用现在分词作状语,表示原因。Proofreading3Itisclearshownthatmanymiddleschoolstudentshavephysicalandmentalclearlyproblems.68%ofthestudentssurveyinghavestudyinganxietyaswellaspoorsurveyedeyesightt

14、oo.Andalargerpercentagelackssleep.52%areshortofphysicalexercise.去掉toolack42%ofthestudentswontobeyourparentsorteachers.theirPersonally,Ithinkwestudentshouldbalanceourphysicalexerciseandstudies.studentsWithoutsoundbody,onecantachieveanything.However,toomuchattentionhasabeenpaidonlyonstudies.Asaresult,

15、Isuggestwearegivenlesshomeworkormoretobeandtimeforout-of-classroomactivities.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveahappyandhealthylife.clearclearly。【解析】考查副词3此处修饰过去分词shown,要用副词clearly清晰地。surveyingsurveyed。【解析】考查非谓语动词。本句中的谓语动词是have,故students后应是分词作后置定语,survey与所修饰的students为逻辑上的动宾关系,所以用过去分词。删除too。【解析】考查副词。句中已经有aswellas

16、表示也了,故句尾的too是多余的。lackslack。【解析】考查主谓一致。根据上下文可知,此处alargerpercentage是alargerpercentageofthestudents的省略,而apercentage作主语时,谓语要与of后的名词保持一致。此处指学生，为复数,所以谓语动词用复数。ourtheir。【解析】考查代词。句意的学生不听他们父母或老师的话。主语是42%ofthestudents,是第三人称,故此处形容词性物主代词用their。studentstudents。【解析】考查名词单复数。分析句子结构可知we后面的名词是其同位语,所以用student的复数形式以与we一致。Without后加