专题5 过突破-短文改错

1、PAGE23专题5短文改错过突破Proofreading12022广东省广州市五校高三年级联考DearDavid,IhavebeenexpectedtotraveltotheUK.However,IcanexperiencetheEnglishculturepersonal.Imwritingtoaskforsomeadvices.Myfamilyplantotravelthereduringacomingwintervacation.WearetospendaweekinLondon,whereisalargecity,andthisisthefirsttimeforustotravelab

2、road.Iwanttoknowwhatplacesofinterestthereisworthseeing.Canyouoffertomesomesuggestionsandrecommendsomeattractions?Iwouldappreciateifyoucouldreplytomesoon.ImalsolookingforwardtoseeyouinLondon.Yours,LiHuaProofreading22022湖北省重点高中联考协作体高三年级期中考试Onealwaysfeelsithardtoignoresomeoneorsomethingamazingindailyli

3、fe.Lastweek,wehavetomoveawayallthebooksandstationeryfromtheclassroomforthefirstmonthlyexamination.BecauseofIheldtoomanybooksinmyarms,Ihaddifficultygodownstairs.WhileIwasfeelingterriblehopeless,Iheardalowandclearvoicebehindme,sayingMayIhelpyou?BeforeIcouldreply,atalleroftwoboystudents,DaiTao,offeredt

4、osharemostofmyload,whosenameIgottoknowlater.Sorryformyrudeness.Ishouldnthavedonethisafteryourpermission.ButIthoughtitalittlecomfortableforyoutoanswermewithoutsomanybooksinyourarms.Whatconsiderateheis!Icouldsaynothingbuttothankhimagainandagain.Iseemedtohavelearnedsomethinginstructiveabouthowtobegrate

5、ful.Proofreading32022山西省太原市四校联合模拟考试（二）Hereisafunnystory.Onedaythreemousessaidproudlytoeachotherthattheyeachcoulddrinkmorewine,sotheydecidedtohaveadrinkingcontest.Atlasttheybothfeltdizzy.Onesuggested,Willanybodygotothewinecellartofetchanotherbottleofwine?Thefirststoodupanddownthenfelltotheground.Theo

6、thertwolaughedandsaid,Hewasdrinkingandcouldntwalk.Thesecondstoodup.Hejustmadeseveralstepsandcouldnthelpthrownup.Thethirdlaughedhardlyandthenitwastheirturn.Hestoodupandmadeonestep,twosteps.Nothingiswrong.Hewentstraighttothewinecellarbuttookabottleofwine.Hestoodthereforwhile,turnedbackandsaidexcitedly

7、,Haha,whereisthecatnow?Proofreading42022四川省绵阳市高三第一次诊断考试Wearerequiredtocollectoursmartphonesandkeepitintheteachersduringtheweekdays.Infactthemostofusobeythisregulation,butsomestillplayvarioustrickagainstit.Imamongthose.Once,Ihandinawastephone.Mr.Li,ourheadteacher,seemedignoreallthat.SoIfeltveryluckil

8、ytohaveanextraphonewithme.Meanwhile,goodtimesdontlastlong.CanIuseyourphoneasawhile?Iforgottotakeminebychance,Mr.Lisaid,pickoutmywastephoneanddialing.YoucanseehowembarrassingIwasatthescene!Proofreading52022河南省郑州市重点高中毕业班第三次质量预测YesterdaymyfriendDavidcameroundwithanewgameandaskedtoplayitbymydadscomputer

9、.Iwasalittleworried,becausemydaduseditmainlyforhiswork,andImonlyallowedtouseitformyhomework.Ithappenedwhenmydadwasout,sowetriedoutthegame.Afterplaying,Itookitoffthecomputer.However,whenIrestartedcomputer,Ifoundsomeofmydadsfilesmiss.Laterintheafternoon,mydadusedthecomputer,butcouldntfindthedocumentin

10、it.Hebecameveryangry,butIdarednottotellhimaboutthegame.NowTmfeelingregretfulanddisturbing,rmnotsurewhetheracomputersrepairshopcangetthefilesback.ShouldItellhimthetruth,andshouldIpaytorepairit?Proofreading62022云雨省玉溪市重点中学第一次联考IwaswalkinghomelateatnightsinceIheardsomeonewalkingbehindme.Ilookedback,buti

11、twastoodarkentoseeclearly.AssoonasIheardthefootsteps,soIstartedtofeelnervous.Justthen,Icouldhearapersonbehindmewalkingfaster.Ibegantorunandnoticedawomancarriedabagwaswalkingslowlyinfrontofme.ThemomentIbegantorun,shedidnothingbutthrewherbag,screaming.Thensheturnedtofacemealookofterroronherface.WhenIs

12、awhis,Istoppedrunningandtriedtosmileatthem.Atthatmoment,thepersonthatfootstepshadfrightenedmewalkedby,lookingcuriouslyatallofus.参考答案Proofreading1DearDavid,IhavebeenexpectedtotraveltotheUK.However,IcanexperiencetheEnglishexpectingThus/Thereforeculturepersonal.Imwritingtoaskforsomeadvices.Myfamilyplan

13、totraveltherepersonallyadviceduringacomingwintervacation.WearetospendaweekinLondon,whereisalargethewhichcity,andthisisthefirsttimeforustotravelabroad.Iwanttoknowwhatplacesofinterestthereisworthseeing.Canyouoffertomesomesuggestionsandrecommendare去掉tosomeattractions?Iwouldappreciateifyoucouldreplytome

14、soon.ImalsoitlookingforwardtoseeyouinLondon.seeingYours,LiHuaexpectedexpecting【解析】考查动词的时态。句意：我一直期望着去英国旅游。havebeenexpecting,是现在完成进行时,表示动作从过去某一时间开始一直持续到现在,还有可能继续持续下去。HoweverThus/Therefore【解析】考查副词。句意：因此我就能亲自体验英国文化了。根据语境可知,上下文之间有因果关系,且是前因后果,故用Thus/Therefore。personalpersonally【解析】考查副词。参见上题解析。此处应用副词修饰动词,p

15、ersonally”亲自地,亲身地。advicesadvie【解析】考查名词。句意：我写信是为了寻求一些建议。advice为不可数名词,故将advices改为advice。athe【解析】考查冠词。句意：我们家计划在即将到来的寒假去那儿旅游。wintervacation前有定语修饰,表示特指,故此处应用定冠词the。wherewhich【解析】考查定语从句的关系词。句意：我们打算在伦敦待一周,它是一座很大的城市,这是我们第一次出国旅行。这是一个非限制性定语从句,并且从句缺主语,指物,所以用which引导。isare【解析】考查主谓一致。句意：我想知道那儿的什么名胜是值得观光的。宾语从句的主语为

16、whatplacesofinterestthere,其中places为核心词,为名词复数,故谓语动词用are。删除to【解析】考查固定用法。句意：你能给我提供一些建议并推荐一些旅游景点吗？offersb.sth.为某人提供某物,属于固定用法。appreciate后加it【解析】考查代词。句意：如果你能尽快给我答复,我将不胜感激。appreciate在此为及物动词感激,其后应加it作形式宾语,if引导的条件状语从句是其真正的宾语。seeseeing【解析】考查非谓语动词。句意：我也盼望在伦敦见到你。lookforwardtc盼望,to为介词,后接动词-ing。Proofreading2Oneal

17、waysfeelsithardtoignoresomeoneorsomethingamazingindailylife.Lastweek,wehavetomoveawayallthebooksandstationeryfromtheclassroomforhadthefirstmonthlyexamination.BecauseofIheldtoomanybooksinmyarms,Ihad去掉ofdifficultygodownstairs.WhileIwasfeelingterriblehopeless,Iheardalowandcleargoingterriblybutvoicebehi

18、ndme,sayingMayIhelpyou?BeforeIcouldreply,atalleroftwoboythestudents,DaiTao,offeredtosharemostofmyload,whosenameIgottoknowlater.loadsSorryformyrudeness.Ishouldnthavedonethisafteryourpermission.ButIbeforethoughtitalittlecomfortableforyoutoanswermewithoutsomanybooksinyourmorearms.Whatconsiderateheis!Ic

19、ouldsaynothingbuttothankhimagainandagain.HowIseemedtohavelearnedsomethinginstructiveabouthowtobegrateful.havehad【解析】考查动词的时态。句意：上一周因为要第一次月考,我们不得不把所有的书和文具搬离教室。Lastweek是表示过去的时间状语,所以谓语动词用一般过去时。删除of【解析】考查介词。句意：因为我抱了太多的书,所以我下楼有困难。because为连词,后面接句子,becauseof后常接名词或名词短语。gogoing【解析】考查非谓语动词。havedifficulty(in)do

20、ingsth.做某事有困难属于固定用法。terribleterribly【解析】考查副词。句意：当我感到非常无助时,我听到我身后传来了一个低沉但是很清晰的声音,说我可以帮助你吗？terribly在此为副词修饰形容词hopeless。andbut【解析】考查连词。参见上题解析。根据句意可知,此处表转折。故将and改为but。athe【解析】考查冠词。我没来得及回答,两个男生当中较高的那个,戴涛,就主动分担我的大多数书,我后来知道了他的名字。根据句意可知,这里表示两者中较的那个,表特指,故应用定冠词the。loadloads【解析】考查名词。参见上题解析。load负载物是可数名词。且此处表示我的大

21、多数书,故应用其复数形式。afterbefore【解析】考查介词。我不应该在你允许以前就做这件事情。根据语境可知,此处应用better在以前。little后加more【解析】考查比较级。句意：但是我以为,你没有拿如此多的书回答我会更舒服一些。根据句意可知,此处应用comfortable的比较级,即在其前加more。WhatHow【解析】考查感叹句。句意：他是多么体贴呀！How+形容词/副词+主语+谓语！是感叹句的其中一种句型。Proofreading3Hereisafunnystory.Onedaythreemousessaidproudlytoeachotherthattheymiceeac

22、hcoulddrinkmorewine,sotheydecidedtohaveadrinkingcontest.Atlasttheybothfeltdizzy.Onesuggested,Willanybodygotothewinecellartofetchanotherallbottleofwine?Thefirststoodupanddownthenfelltotheground.Theothertwo去掉downlaughedandsaid,Hewasdrinkingandcouldntwalk.Thesecondstoodup.Hejustdrunkmadeseveralstepsand

23、couldnthelpthrownup.Thethirdlaughedhardlyandthenitthrowinghardwastheirturn.Hestoodupandmadeonestep,twosteps.Nothingiswrong.Hewenthiswasstraighttothewinecellarbuttookabottleofwine.Hestoodthereforwhile,andaturnedbackandsaidexcitedly,Haha,whereisthecatnow?mousesmice【解析】考查名词复数。句意：一天,三只老鼠骄傲地对彼此说,他们每个人都能（

24、比其他两者）喝更多的酒,因此他们决定进行一场喝酒比赛。mouse的复数为mice。bothall【解析】考查代词。句意：最后他们都感到眩晕。both表示两者都,all表示”（三者或三者以上）全部,根据上文的three可知,此处应用all。both表示两者都,否定用neither;all表示（三者或三者以上）全部否定用none。例如：Bothofuslikesports.Neitherofanswersisright.Noneofushasseenher.删除down【解析】考查固定短语。句意：第一只老鼠站起来,然后倒在了地上。standup站起,起立,upanddown上下波动,根据句意可知,

25、down在此多余,故应删除。drinkingdrunk【解析】考查形容词。他喝醉了,不能走路。drunk在此为形容词,表示喝醉的。thrownthrowing【解析】考查非谓语动词。句意：他仅仅走了几步,忍不住呕吐。canthelpdoingsth.表示忍不住做某事,为固定搭配。hardlyhard【解析】考查副词。句意：第三只笑得很厉害,然后就轮到他了。hard可作副词,表示猛烈地,hardly为副词,表示几乎不。故将hardly改为hard。theirhis【解析】考查代词。参见上题解析。根据语境可知,此处指第三只老鼠的,结合下文的He可知应用his。iswas【解析】考查动词的时态。此处

26、描述过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时,所以将is改为was。butand【解析】考查连词。句意：他径直走向酒窖,拿走了一瓶酒。根据语境可知,前后为顺承关系,故将but改为and。for后加a【解析】考查冠词。forawhile表示会儿,属于固定搭配。Proofreading4Wearerequiredtocollectoursmartphonesandkeepitintheteachersduringthemtheweekdays.Infactthemostofusobeythisregulation,butsomestillplayvarious去掉thetrickagainstit.Imam

27、ongthose.Once,Ihandinawastephone.Mr.Li,ourheadtrickshandedteacher,seemedignoreallthat.SoIfeltveryluckilytohaveanextraphonewithtoluckyme.Meanwhile,goodtimesdontlastlong.CanIuseyourphoneasawhile?IforgotHoweverfortotakeminebychance,Mr.Lisaid,pickoutmywastephoneanddialing.Youcanpickingseehowembarrassing

28、Iwasatthescene!embarrasseditthem【解析】考査代词。句意：我们被要求在工作日要把手机收起来,把它们存放在老师那儿。在此应用them指代smartphones0删除the【解析】考查冠词。句意：事实上,我们中的大多数都遵守这个规则,但是仍旧有一些人耍各种小聪明违反它。mostof意为中的大多数,the多余。tricktricks【解析】考查名词。trick是可数名词,并且其前有various修饰,所以用复数形式。handhanded【解析】考查动词的时态。句意：一次我上交了一部废旧手机。叙述过去的经历,应用一般过去时。seemed后加to【解析】考査非谓语动词。se

29、emtodosth.好像要做某事,属于固定用法。luckilylucky【解析】考查形容词。句意：因此我感到非常幸运。我有了一部额外的手机。本句为主系表结构,feel为系动词,所以后接形容词作表语。MeanwhileHowever【解析】考查副词。句意：然而好景不长。根据语境可知,上下文为转折关系,故应用However表示转折意义。asfor【解析】考查介词。李老师说：我能用一会儿你的手机吗？我碰巧忘了带我的手机了。forawhile会儿,是固定短语。pickpicking【解析】考查非谓语动词。Mr.Li与pick是逻辑上的主谓关系,所以用现在分词poking。embarrassingemb

30、arrassed【解析】考查形容词。句意：你能明白我在现场是多么尴尬呀！embarrassing令人尴尬的,常修饰物。embarrassed尬尬的,常修饰人。动词-ing形式的形容词和动词-ed形式的形容词的用法比较一类是动词-ing形式的形容词,含义为令人的,着重点是物性,即一般情况下主语为物。常见的有surprising,amazing,relaxing,exciting等。另一类是动词-ed形式的形容词,含义为感到.的,着重点是人性,即一般情况下主语为人,常见的有surprised,amazed,relaxed,excited等。例如：(1)Thestoryisexciting.(2)S

31、hewasexcitedtoseesuchagoodmovie.Proofreading5YesterdaymyfriendDavidcameroundwithanewgameandaskedtoplayitbyonmydadscomputer.Iwasalittleworried,becausemydaduseditmainlyforhiswork,usesandImonlyallowedtouseitformyhomework.Ithappenedwhenmydadwasout,thatsowetriedoutthegame.Afterplaying,Itookitoffthecomput

32、er.However,whenIrestartedcomputer,Ifoundsomeofmydadsfilesmiss.Laterintheafternoon,themissingmydadusedthecomputer,butcouldntfindthedocumentinit.Hebecameverydocumentsangry,butIdarednottotellhimaboutthegame.NowTmfeelingregretfuland去掉todisturbing,rmnotsurewhetheracomputersrepairshopcangetthefilesback.di

33、sturbedcomputerShouldItellhimthetruth,andshouldIpaytorepairit?orbyon【解析】考查介词。句意：昨天我的朋友大卫带着一款新游戏来访了,他请求在我爸爸的电脑上玩这款游戏。根据句意可知,此处表示在电脑上玩,所以用on。useduses【解析】考查动词的时态和主谓一致。句意：我有一点担心,因为我爸爸主要用它来工作.我仅仅被允许用它来做我的庭作业。此处描述经常性的、习惯性的动作,应用一般现在时,且主语是mydad,所以应用第三人称单数形式,故将used改为uses。whenthat【解析】考查连词。句意：碰巧我爸爸不在家,因此我们就试了这

34、款游戏。分析句子结构可知,It是形式主语,此处引导主语从句,因为从句中不缺成分,故用that引导。restarted后加the【解析】考查冠词。句意：然而当我再次启动爸爸的电脑时,我发现爸爸的一些文件丢失了。此处应用定冠词the特指爸爸的电脑。missmissing【解析】考查形容词。分析句子结构可知,此处应用missing找不到的,丢失的作宾语补足语。documentdocuments【解析】考查名词。句意：下午晚些时候爸爸用了电脑,但是找不到电脑里边的那些文件了。根据句意可知,此处指上文的files,所以用复数形式documents。删除to【解析】查情态动词。句意：他变得很生气,但是我不

35、敢告诉他游戏的事。dared是情态动词dare的过去式,后面接动词原形,所以删除to。disturbingdisturbed【解析】考查形容词。句意：我现在感到很后悔和不安。disturbing”令人不安的常修饰物。disturbed不安的,常修饰人。computerscomputer【解析】查名词。句意：我不确信电修理店能否把文件找回。此处应用名词computer作定语修饰repairshop,computerrepairshop意为电脑修理店。andor【解析】查连词。句意：我应该告诉他真相,还是我应该花钱去修它？根据语境可知,此处表选择关系,所以用or。Proofreading6IwaswalkinghomelateatnightsinceIheardsomeonewalkingbehindme.Iwhenlookedback,butitwastoodarkentoseeclearly.AssoonasIheardthefootsteps,soIdark去掉sostartedtofeelnervous.Justthen,Icouldhearapersonbehindmewalkingfaster