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高考写作讲座-议论文写作第1页范例引路：MODELWRITING第2页某学校附近准备兴建一座化工厂，现征求师生意见，师生赞成、反对百分比如图。请你以该校学生名义，以“Thereareotherthingstoconsiderbesidesmoney”为题，写一篇120词左右短文，陈述反对在此建厂理由。反对理由：1、严重污染饮用水，防范措施不充分。2、造成严重空气污染。3、侵占学生游戏玩乐场所。同意理由：1、可认为本市盈利。2、提供就业机会第3页

Itisreportedthatanewchemicalworkswillbebuilthere.Certainly,itisagoodideafordevelopingeconomy.Butontheotherhand,italsocausesabigproblem.Firstly,manypeopledon’tagreetobuildthisworks.Itwillpollutethedrinkingwaterthoughtheyhavepromisedtodosomethingtopreventpollution.Secondly,thesmokeandthesootwillbringlotsofillness,whichisdangerousforeveryone.Thirdly,thechemicalworkswillbebuiltwherewestudentsplaygamesandhavesportsafterschool.Ifbuilt,wewillhavenoplaceforfun.Becauseoftheabovereasons,wehopethatthechemicalworkswon’tbebuiltnearourschool.

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Itisreportedthatanewchemicalworkswillbebuilthere.Certainly,itisagoodideafordevelopingeconomy.Butontheotherhand,italsocausesabigproblem.

Firstly,manypeopledon’tagreetobuildthisworks.Itwillpollutethedrinkingwaterthoughtheyhavepromisedtodosomethingtopreventpollution.

Secondly,thesmokeandthesootwillbringlotsofillness,whichisdangerousforeveryone.

Thirdly,thechemicalworkswillbebuiltwherewestudentsplaygamesandhavesportsafterschool.Ifbuilt,wewillhavenoplaceforfun.

Becauseoftheabovereasons,wehopethatthechemicalworkswon’tbebuiltnearourschool.

第5页五个基本步骤Fivebasicstepstodiscusssomethingserious

一、开头Starting

二、提出观点Givingideas

三、强化论点Developing

四、提出反驳Arguing

五、得出结论Comingtoaconclusion第6页Starting

thepassage1、stateafact

Onceagainuniversitygraduatesstartanewroundofjobhunting.

Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.

2、askaquestion

Rightisright.Right?Butisleftwrong?(IsLeftWrong?)第7页Bodyofthepassage(1)Givingideas1、commonknowledge：

Itisknowntoallthatsmokingisharmfultoourhealth.

2、directopinion：

Ithinkitisusefultobuildanewdamacrosstheriver.Webelievethatdoingexerciseseverydaywilldousalotofgood.3、idioms：“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”ItisthesameinlearningEnglish.第8页Bodyofthepassage(2).Developingyourviewpointlogically1、First…,Second…,Third…Finally…2、Firstly…,Secondly…,Thirdly…Finally…3、Firstofall…,Then…,Next…,Atlast…4、Furthermore…;Besides…;Moreover…5、What’smore,…;Atthesametime,…;Whatisworse,…第9页3).Disprovaloftheviewpoint（Arguing）

1、but,yet,still;however;although…2、ontheotherhand…;onthecontrary…;inspiteof…;eventhough…;Atthesametime…3、60percentofthestudentsthink…andabout10percentgivenoidea,whiletherestofthestudentsarestronglyagainstthesuggestion.Bodyofthepassage第10页Comingtoaconclusion

1.Finally…;Therefore…2.Inaword…;Inshort…;Intheend…;

Inotherwords…;Asaresult…;Inall…3.Generallyspeaking…4.AsIhaveshown…;Ashasbeenstated…;

Aswe(you)allknow…第11页习作评析第12页某学校附近准备兴建一座化工厂，现征求师生意见，师生赞成、反对百分比如图。请你以该校学生名义，以“Thereareotherthingstoconsiderbesidesmoney”为题，写一篇100词左右短文，陈述反对在此建厂理由。反对理由：1、严重污染饮用水，防范措施不充分。2、造成严重空气污染。3、侵占学生游戏玩乐场所。同意理由：1、可认为本市盈利。2、提供就业机会第13页Themajorityofthestudentsandteachersinourschool,includingme,areagainsttheconstructionofachemicalworksnearourschoolthoughtherest10%doagreetotheplan.Theyholdtheviewthattheworkswillmakelotsofmoneyforourcityandprovidenewjobsforthelocalpeople,butwethinkitwilldousmoreharmthangood.First,thedrinkingwaterwillbebadlypollutedevenifsomemeasureswillbetaken.Ontheotherhand,theairoverthecitywillbepollutedtoo.Worsestill,thesiteofthechemicalworkshasbeentheonlyplacewherewestudentsplaygamesandhavesportsafterschool.Wherewouldwegoifitwereoccupied?Inaword,wehopethefactorywon’tbebuilthere.第14页 Themajorityofthestudentsandteachersinourschool,includingme,areagainsttheconstructionofachemicalworksnearourschoolthough

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rest10%doagreetotheplan. Theyholdtheviewthattheworkswillmakelotsofmoneyforourcityandprovidenewjobsforthelocalpeople,butwethinkitwilldousmoreharmthangood.First,thedrinkingwaterwillbebadlypollutedevenifsomemeasureswillbetaken.Ontheotherhand,theairoverthecityw