高中英语12年级空中课堂 2020朝阳一模应用文课件

高三年级英语学科2020朝阳一模应用文讲评高三年级英语学科2020朝阳一模应用文讲1CONTENTS目录1评标解读2审题构思3写作对策4语言支撑（补充）CONTENTS目录1评标解读2审题构思3写作对策4语言支2评标解读01评标解读013应用文：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确第一档13分-15分完全完成了试题规定的任务。内容完整，条理清楚；交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求；体现出较强的语言运用能力。完全达到了预期的写作目的。北京高考应用文评分标准情景作文：内容完整、上下文连贯、词汇句式多样、语言准确共四档，先定档后微调，词数不少于50应用文：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确第一档完全writer写信人addressee收信人message如何做到交际得体？简洁concise精准to

the

point总分topic

Sentence

+

supporting

details接收了多少信息？接收信息时的感受？文字单线条传输线团缠绕说话逻辑简洁精准先总后分先主后次writeraddresseemessage如何做到交际得体writer写信人addressee收信人message如何做到交际得体？语用学Pragmatics

DPR亲疏远近、权利大小、不便程度DPR（Distance,Power,RankingofImposition）换位思考put

yourself

into

his

shoes弱化不便lower

the

ranking

of

imposition接收了多少信息？接收信息时的感受？writeraddresseemessage如何做到交际得体目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确基调：清爽、舒服精准简洁、先总后分、弱化不便

目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确基调：清爽、舒服审题构思02审题构思022020朝阳一模应用文

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Jim对中国文化十分感兴趣,你在英文报纸ChinaDaily上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛(TheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：介绍稿件要求；告知投稿时间和方式；询问对方意向。2020朝阳一模应用文假设你是红星中学高三学生李华2020朝阳一模应用文：审题

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Jim①对中国文化十分感兴趣,②你在英文报纸ChinaDaily上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛(TheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：介绍稿件要求；告知投稿时间和方式；询问对方意向。写作背景写作对象写作目的详略略应用文：3-5段为宜寒暄+要点段+尾段，要点3常和尾段结合可一点一段，但不建议行数差过大(3)可合为一段，但标志词需简洁抓人2020朝阳一模应用文：审题假设你是红星中学高三学2020朝阳一模应用文：构思我笔友Jim邀请invite中华文化表情包设计大赛内容：含有中国文化元素功能：模拟表情、表达心情格式：线上使用jpg/png/gif/jpge兴趣特长收获有意愿能做好有好处锁定对象、建立勾连、拆解关键词内涵：设计理念外形：吸引人、可爱投其所好、赞美对方、描述益处2020朝阳一模应用文：构思我笔友Jim邀请invite中写作对策03写作对策03目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确内容完整翻译二字是精髓

应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；你是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。条理清晰先总后分顺序写事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。交际得体换位思考若不便

首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连。目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确内容完整翻译二应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。

I

have

some

good

news

for

you.

An

emoji

design

contest

of

Chinese

cultural

symbols

held

by

the

China

Daily

is

now

calling

for

entries

worldwide.

Given

your

keen

interest

in

Chinese

culture,

I’m

writing

to

invite

you

to

participate

in

it/have

a

try.【2020朝阳一模应用文】

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Jim①对中国文化十分感兴趣,②你在英文报纸ChinaDaily上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛(TheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：1.介绍稿件要求；2.告知投稿时间和方式；3.询问对方意向。BackgroundGreetings

Purpose内容完整应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。9类信件对应目的动词推荐/建议信：recommendsth.tosb.=makearecommendationofsth.

suggest/recommendsb.(should)dosth./suggestdoingsth.

provide

you

with

some

suggestions/

a

piece

of

advice

[U]邀请信：invitesb.todosth.咨询信：inquiresth.=askforinformationabout申请信：applyforsth.=makeanapplicationforsth.介绍信：introducesth.tosb.=makeanintroductiontosth.祝贺信：congratulate

sb.onsth.感谢信：thanksb.forsth./doingsth.

expressmygratitude

[U](toyou)forsth.道歉信：apologize(tosb.)forsth.=makeanapologyforsth.投诉信：complainaboutsth.=makeacomplaintaboutsth.9类信件对应目的动词推荐/建议信：recommendsth难词的翻译泛化、回归本质

I

have

some

good

news

for

you.

An

emoji

design

contest

of

Chinese

cultural

symbols

held

by

the

China

Daily

is

now

calling

for

entries

worldwide.

Given

your

keen

interest

in

Chinese

culture,

I’m

writing

to

invite

you

to

participate

in

it/have

a

try.【2020朝阳一模应用文】

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Jim①对中国文化十分感兴趣,②你在英文报纸ChinaDaily上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛(TheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：1.介绍稿件要求；2.告知投稿时间和方式；3.询问对方意向。BackgroundGreetings

Purpose难词的翻译泛化、回归本质Ihave征集/招募look

for/search

for/call

for/seekWearesearchingforvolunteers,whoarewillingtohelpusonthe

7thGermanChamberSoccerCup2019

inTianjin.We

are

seeking

entries

worldwide/from

all

over

the

world.recruit

v./n.We

are

recruiting

new

members

to

our

club.We

are

seeking

new

recruits.New

recruits

are

wanted/needed.征集/招募lookfor/searchfor/callThe

requirements

for

the

works/entries/submissions

are

as

follows.As

for/Regarding/Concerning/When

it

comes

to

the

requirements,

Chinese

cultural

symbols

should

be

included

in

your

submitted

works.You

are

required/expected/supposed

to

giveyourworkanameandexplaindesigningideasanditsculturemeanings.Aiming

to

spread

Chinese

culture

in

a(n)

vivid/innovative

way,

the

competition

requires

participants

to

perfectly

blend/incorporate

Chinese

cultural

elements

into

charming

emojis

that

can

express

people’s

feelings

in

online

communication.Theemojisshould

becenteredaroundthesubjectofChineseculture,

presentingclassicorpopularculturalimagesintheformofemojis.要点一：介绍稿件要求Topic

Sentence目的内容功能外形词性转换应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。内容完整TherequirementsfortheworksThe

requirements

foryour

works

are

threefold.The

requirements

for

your

works

are

as

follows.For

one

thing,

… First,

…For

another,

… Second,

…Still

another,

… Third,

…Besides/Apart

from

that/On

top

of

that,

…First

and

foremost,

…

Apart

from

that,

…

Last

but

not

least,

…In

addition,

…

(常放最后一条，表补充添加)Link事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。条理清晰Therequirementsforyourwork事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。条理清晰【2020朝阳标范】

IamwritingtotellyouaboutTheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbolsorganizedbyChinaDaily.Iknowyou’rekeenontraditionalChineseculture,sowhynothaveatry?①YoumaychooseanysymbolthatbestrepresentsChinesecultureinyoureyes,suchasthepanda,kungfu,theGreatWallandsoon.Thereisnolimitonthestyle,butbesuretogiveyourworkanameandexplaindesigningideasanditsculturemeanings.②YourworkshouldbesubmittedonlinewithrequiredpersonalinformationbytheendofSeptember.AllwinningdesignswillbesharedandpromotedontheChinaDailyapp,andwinningdesignerswillreceiveprizes!③Areyouinterested?Ifyouneedanyhelp,Iwouldbeverygladtohelp.Letyourcreativejuicesflow!事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入抽象具象事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。条理清晰时空延展形式内涵详写的要点横向展开2-3条【2020朝阳标范】

IamwritingtotellyouaboutTheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbolsorganizedbyChinaDaily.Iknowyou’rekeenontraditionalChineseculture,sowhynothaveatry?①YoumaychooseanysymbolthatbestrepresentsChinesecultureinyoureyes,suchasthepanda,kungfu,theGreatWallandsoon.

Thereisnolimitonthestyle,butbesuretogiveyourworkanameandexplaindesigningideasanditsculturemeanings.②YourworkshouldbesubmittedonlinewithrequiredpersonalinformationbytheendofSeptember.AllwinningdesignswillbesharedandpromotedontheChinaDailyapp,andwinningdesignerswillreceiveprizes!③Areyouinterested?Ifyouneedanyhelp,Iwouldbeverygladtohelp.Letyourcreativejuicesflow!抽象具象事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连。交际得体【2020朝阳标范】

IamwritingtotellyouaboutTheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbolsorganizedbyChinaDaily.Iknowyou’rekeenontraditionalChineseculture,sowhynothaveatry?①YoumaychooseanysymbolthatbestrepresentsChinesecultureinyoureyes,suchasthepanda,kungfu,theGreatWallandsoon.Thereisnolimitonthestyle,butbesuretogiveyourworkanameandexplaindesigningideasanditsculturemeanings.②YourworkshouldbesubmittedonlinewithrequiredpersonalinformationbytheendofSeptember.AllwinningdesignswillbesharedandpromotedontheChinaDailyapp,andwinningdesignerswillreceiveprizes!③Areyouinterested?Ifyouneedanyhelp,Iwouldbeverygladtohelp.Letyourcreativejuicesflow!基调：清爽、舒服精准简洁、先总后分、弱化不便

首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连。目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连。Pragmatics:

DPR（Distance亲疏远近,Power权利大小,RankingofImposition不便程度）清爽、舒服目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确应用文重审题，翻感谢聆听！本视频课程中的部分图片、视频引自有关图书、网络，特向这些图片、视频的制作者和有关图书的出版者和相关网络表示感谢；因多种原因，事先未与作者和出版社取得联系，特向他们表示歉意。感谢聆听！本视频课程中的部分图片、视频引自有关图书语言支撑（补充）04语言支撑（补充）04Worksshouldbesubmittedonline.A

maximumofthreeworkscanbesubmittedbyeachapplicant.Onlyoneprizewillbeawardedtoparticipantevenifmorethanoneworkbythesamedesignerisselected.Submittedworksmustbeagroup,with8to16emojisineachgroup.Formats:jpg/png/gif/jpge.Size:240x240px.Eachpictureshouldnotexceed100k,andthesizeofeachgroupshouldnotexceed1.6M.Worktitle,designingideasandculturalmeanings/connotationsshouldbesubmittedasrequired.要点1.介绍稿件要求细节补充中华文化表情包设计大赛内容：含有中国文化元素功能：模拟表情、表达心情格式：线上使用jpg/png/gif/jpge内涵：设计理念外形：吸引人、可爱Worksshouldbesubmittedonli补充：活动宗旨This

design

contest

aims

to

spread

Chinese

culture

in

a(n)

vivid/innovative

way.This

competition

is

aimed

at

putting

Chinese

cultural

symbols

into

everyday

use.With

the

aim/purpose/objective

of

igniting

people’s

passion

for

Chinese

culture,

this

contest

is

tailor-made

for

design

enthusiasts

like

you.This

contest

serves

the

purpose

of

bridging

the

gap

between

traditional

Chinese

culture

and

advanced

technology.Aiming

to

spread

Chinese

culture

in

a(n)

vivid/innovative

way,

the

competition

requires

participants

to

perfectly

blend/incorporate

Chinese

cultural

elements

into

charming

emojis

that

can

express

people’s

feelings

in

online

communication.补充：活动宗旨ThisdesigncontestaimYourworkshouldbesubmittedonlinewithrequiredpersonalinformationbytheendofSeptember.AllwinningdesignswillbesharedandpromotedontheChinaDailyapp,andwinningdesignerswillreceiveprizes!The

deadline

for

submission

is

1st

July.Don’t

forget

to

upload

your

entries

onto

the

homepage

of

China

Daily

before

1st

July.The

submission

of

your

works

will

end/will

be

due

on

1sth.

July.You

are

expected

to

submit

your

works

before

1st

July.You

can

send

your

designs

to

123@.Worksshouldbesubmittedonline.Visit

and

you

will

findtheentryfor“SubmissionofWork”touploadyourdesigns.要点2.说明截止时间和提交方式Yourworkshouldbesubmitted赏析要点1：介绍活动要求As

for

the

requirements,

you

are

expected

to

choose

a

particular

feature

that

could

unveil

the

beauty

of

Chinese

culture,

ranging

from

traditional

architecture

like

Suzhou

gardens

to

intangible

cultural

heritage

like

martial

arts,

behind

which

lie

Chinese

spirits.

Besides,

you

are

supposed

to

enclose

a

piece

of

note

explaining

your

design

ideas

and

the

works’

cultural

meanings/connotations.

(Class

3周文心)Here

are

some

requirements

for

the

design.

Firstly,

as

the

title

of

the

competition

suggests,

the

emojis

submitted

must

contain

elements

in

Chinese

culture,

whether

it

is

a

historic

figure

you

like,

traditional

components

such

as

Chinese

knots,

or

magnificent

architecture

like

the

Great

Wall.

Furthermore,

it

will

be

highly

expected

if

your

design

carries

rich

meanings

in

an

eye-catching

and

up-to-trend

manner.

With

your

creativity

and

enthusiasm

about

Chinese

culture,

I’m

sure

you

can

come

up

with

the

most

innovative

and

elaborate

design!

(Class

1吴依涵)赏析要点1：介绍活动要求Asfortherequire

高三年级英语学科2020朝阳一模应用文讲评高三年级英语学科2020朝阳一模应用文讲30CONTENTS目录1评标解读2审题构思3写作对策4语言支撑（补充）CONTENTS目录1评标解读2审题构思3写作对策4语言支31评标解读01评标解读0132应用文：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确第一档13分-15分完全完成了试题规定的任务。内容完整，条理清楚；交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求；体现出较强的语言运用能力。完全达到了预期的写作目的。北京高考应用文评分标准情景作文：内容完整、上下文连贯、词汇句式多样、语言准确共四档，先定档后微调，词数不少于50应用文：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确第一档完全writer写信人addressee收信人message如何做到交际得体？简洁concise精准to

the

point总分topic

Sentence

+

supporting

details接收了多少信息？接收信息时的感受？文字单线条传输线团缠绕说话逻辑简洁精准先总后分先主后次writeraddresseemessage如何做到交际得体writer写信人addressee收信人message如何做到交际得体？语用学Pragmatics

DPR亲疏远近、权利大小、不便程度DPR（Distance,Power,RankingofImposition）换位思考put

yourself

into

his

shoes弱化不便lower

the

ranking

of

imposition接收了多少信息？接收信息时的感受？writeraddresseemessage如何做到交际得体目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确基调：清爽、舒服精准简洁、先总后分、弱化不便

目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确基调：清爽、舒服审题构思02审题构思022020朝阳一模应用文

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Jim对中国文化十分感兴趣,你在英文报纸ChinaDaily上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛(TheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：介绍稿件要求；告知投稿时间和方式；询问对方意向。2020朝阳一模应用文假设你是红星中学高三学生李华2020朝阳一模应用文：审题

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Jim①对中国文化十分感兴趣,②你在英文报纸ChinaDaily上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛(TheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：介绍稿件要求；告知投稿时间和方式；询问对方意向。写作背景写作对象写作目的详略略应用文：3-5段为宜寒暄+要点段+尾段，要点3常和尾段结合可一点一段，但不建议行数差过大(3)可合为一段，但标志词需简洁抓人2020朝阳一模应用文：审题假设你是红星中学高三学2020朝阳一模应用文：构思我笔友Jim邀请invite中华文化表情包设计大赛内容：含有中国文化元素功能：模拟表情、表达心情格式：线上使用jpg/png/gif/jpge兴趣特长收获有意愿能做好有好处锁定对象、建立勾连、拆解关键词内涵：设计理念外形：吸引人、可爱投其所好、赞美对方、描述益处2020朝阳一模应用文：构思我笔友Jim邀请invite中写作对策03写作对策03目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确内容完整翻译二字是精髓

应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；你是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。条理清晰先总后分顺序写事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。交际得体换位思考若不便

首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连。目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确内容完整翻译二应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。

I

have

some

good

news

for

you.

An

emoji

design

contest

of

Chinese

cultural

symbols

held

by

the

China

Daily

is

now

calling

for

entries

worldwide.

Given

your

keen

interest

in

Chinese

culture,

I’m

writing

to

invite

you

to

participate

in

it/have

a

try.【2020朝阳一模应用文】

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Jim①对中国文化十分感兴趣,②你在英文报纸ChinaDaily上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛(TheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：1.介绍稿件要求；2.告知投稿时间和方式；3.询问对方意向。BackgroundGreetings

Purpose内容完整应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。9类信件对应目的动词推荐/建议信：recommendsth.tosb.=makearecommendationofsth.

suggest/recommendsb.(should)dosth./suggestdoingsth.

provide

you

with

some

suggestions/

a

piece

of

advice

[U]邀请信：invitesb.todosth.咨询信：inquiresth.=askforinformationabout申请信：applyforsth.=makeanapplicationforsth.介绍信：introducesth.tosb.=makeanintroductiontosth.祝贺信：congratulate

sb.onsth.感谢信：thanksb.forsth./doingsth.

expressmygratitude

[U](toyou)forsth.道歉信：apologize(tosb.)forsth.=makeanapologyforsth.投诉信：complainaboutsth.=makeacomplaintaboutsth.9类信件对应目的动词推荐/建议信：recommendsth难词的翻译泛化、回归本质

I

have

some

good

news

for

you.

An

emoji

design

contest

of

Chinese

cultural

symbols

held

by

the

China

Daily

is

now

calling

for

entries

worldwide.

Given

your

keen

interest

in

Chinese

culture,

I’m

writing

to

invite

you

to

participate

in

it/have

a

try.【2020朝阳一模应用文】

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Jim①对中国文化十分感兴趣,②你在英文报纸ChinaDaily上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛(TheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：1.介绍稿件要求；2.告知投稿时间和方式；3.询问对方意向。BackgroundGreetings

Purpose难词的翻译泛化、回归本质Ihave征集/招募look

for/search

for/call

for/seekWearesearchingforvolunteers,whoarewillingtohelpusonthe

7thGermanChamberSoccerCup2019

inTianjin.We

are

seeking

entries

worldwide/from

all

over

the

world.recruit

v./n.We

are

recruiting

new

members

to

our

club.We

are

seeking

new

recruits.New

recruits

are

wanted/needed.征集/招募lookfor/searchfor/callThe

requirements

for

the

works/entries/submissions

are

as

follows.As

for/Regarding/Concerning/When

it

comes

to

the

requirements,

Chinese

cultural

symbols

should

be

included

in

your

submitted

works.You

are

required/expected/supposed

to

giveyourworkanameandexplaindesigningideasanditsculturemeanings.Aiming

to

spread

Chinese

culture

in

a(n)

vivid/innovative

way,

the

competition

requires

participants

to

perfectly

blend/incorporate

Chinese

cultural

elements

into

charming

emojis

that

can

express

people’s

feelings

in

online

communication.Theemojisshould

becenteredaroundthesubjectofChineseculture,

presentingclassicorpopularculturalimagesintheformofemojis.要点一：介绍稿件要求Topic

Sentence目的内容功能外形词性转换应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。内容完整TherequirementsfortheworksThe

requirements

foryour

works

are

threefold.The

requirements

for

your

works

are

as

follows.For

one

thing,

… First,

…For

another,

… Second,

…Still

another,

… Third,

…Besides/Apart

from

that/On

top

of

that,

…First

and

foremost,

…

Apart

from

that,

…

Last

but

not

least,

…In

addition,

…

(常放最后一条，表补充添加)Link事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。条理清晰Therequirementsforyourwork事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。条理清晰【2020朝阳标范】

IamwritingtotellyouaboutTheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbolsorganizedbyChinaDaily.Iknowyou’rekeenontraditionalChineseculture,sowhynothaveatry?①YoumaychooseanysymbolthatbestrepresentsChinesecultureinyoureyes,suchasthepanda,kungfu,theGreatWallandsoon.Thereisnolimitonthestyle,butbesuretogiveyourworkanameandexplaindesigningideasanditsculturemeanings.②YourworkshouldbesubmittedonlinewithrequiredpersonalinformationbytheendofSeptember.AllwinningdesignswillbesharedandpromotedontheChinaDailyapp,andwinningdesignerswillreceiveprizes!③Areyouinterested?Ifyouneedanyhelp,Iwouldbeverygladtohelp.Letyourcreativejuicesflow!事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入抽象具象事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。条理清晰时空延展形式内涵详写的要点横向展开2-3条【2020朝阳标范】

IamwritingtotellyouaboutTheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbolsorganizedbyChinaDaily.Iknowyou’rekeenontraditionalChineseculture,sowhynothaveatry?①YoumaychooseanysymbolthatbestrepresentsChinesecultureinyoureyes,suchasthepanda,kungfu,theGreatWallandsoon.

Thereisnolimitonthestyle,butbesuretogiveyourworkanameandexplaindesigningideasanditsculturemeanings.②YourworkshouldbesubmittedonlinewithrequiredpersonalinformationbytheendofSeptember.AllwinningdesignswillbesharedandpromotedontheChinaDailyapp,andwinningdesignerswillreceiveprizes!③Areyouinterested?Ifyouneedanyhelp,Iwouldbeverygladtohelp.Letyourcreativejuicesflow!抽象具象事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连。交际得体【2020朝阳标范】

IamwritingtotellyouaboutTheChinaDailyEmojiDesignContestofChineseCulturalSymbolsorganizedbyChinaDaily.Iknowyou’rekeenontraditionalChineseculture,sowhynothaveatry?①YoumaychooseanysymbolthatbestrepresentsChinesecultureinyoureyes,suchasthepanda,kungfu,theGreatWallandsoon.Thereisnolimitonthestyle,butbesuretogiveyourworkanameandexplaindesigningideasanditsculturemeanings.②YourworkshouldbesubmittedonlinewithrequiredpersonalinformationbytheendofSeptember.AllwinningdesignswillbesharedandpromotedontheChinaDailyapp,andwinningdesignerswillreceiveprizes!③Areyouinterested?Ifyouneedanyhelp,Iwouldbeverygladtohelp.Letyourcreativejuicesflow!基调：清爽、舒服精准简洁、先总后分、弱化不便

首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连。目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连。Pragmatics:

DPR（Distance亲疏远近,Power权利大小,RankingofImposition不便程度）清爽、舒服目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确应用文重审题，翻感谢聆听！本视频课程中的部分图片、视频引自有关图书、网络，特向这些图片、视频的制作者和有关图书的出版者和相关网络表示感谢；因多种原因，事先未与作者和出版社取得联系，特向他们表示歉意。感谢聆听！本视频课程中的部分图片、视频引自有关图书语言支撑（补充）04语言支撑（补充）04Worksshouldbesubmittedonline.A

maximumofthreeworkscanbesubmittedbyeachapplicant.Onlyoneprizewillbeawardedtoparticipantevenifmorethanoneworkbythesamedesignerisselected.Submittedworksmustbeagroup,with8to16emojisineachgroup.Formats:jpg/png/gif/jpge.Size:240x240px.Eachpictureshouldnotexceed100k,andthesizeofeachgroupshouldnotexceed1.6M.Worktitle,designingideasandculturalmeanings/connotationsshouldbesubmittedasrequired.要点1.介绍稿件要求细节补充中华文化表情包设计大赛内容：含有中国文化元素功能：模拟表情、表达心情格式：线上使用jpg/png/gif/jpge内涵：设计理念外形：吸引人、可爱Worksshouldbesubmittedonli补充：活动宗旨This

design

contest

aims

to

spread

Chinese

culture

in

a(n)

vivid/innovative

way.This

competition

is

aimed

at

putting

Chinese

cultural

symbols

into

everyday

use.With

the

aim/purpose/objective

of

igniting

people’s

passion

for

Chinese

culture,

this

contest

is

tailor-made

for

design

enthusiasts