中考英语作文公开课课件

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分。书面表达:2文章的形成过程：单词短语，结构+符号

句子段落文章如何把这些组织一篇文章？分析文章的形成过程首先，我们必须在头脑中构成一幅mindmap.在map的帮助下，我们就能有效的到达我们的目的地。文章的形成过程：单词短语，结构+3分析结构

Mikeiscrazyaboutfootball!Heloveswatchingfootballmatches.Ofcourse,helovesplayingfootballtoo.Heoftenspendsaboutonehourplayingfootballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Hisparentsdon’tlikethisandhaveaskedhimtogohomebefore5.30.Hethinksitisimportantforhimtospendsometimeonhishobbies.

Hewisheshisparentscouldgivehimtheirsupportforhishobbies.

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Writingskills—sixsteps中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】抄组集连抓审作文集句成段组段成篇审清题意连词成句抓住要点抄写6自从实施教育新政策，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇:makegooduseof,interestgroupssocialactivities,dosports,netbar不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游3.……看法我认为……建议（至少3条）合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

……中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】自从实施教育新政策，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学7Hello,everybody!It’stimeagainforourEnglishBroadcastingProgram.Today’stopicis“HowtoMakeBetterUseofOurSpareTime”._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】Hello,everybody!It’stimeag8第一步:审清题意认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息具体做法：用笔勾画中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】第一步:审清题意认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结9自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏3.……看法我认为……建议（至少3条）合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

……注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数主题体裁人称结构时态字数已知信息未知信息以一般现在时为主中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不10第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】第二步：具体做法：不要遗漏要点！中考英语作文教学PPT-(311Introduction

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ConclusionproblemsopinionssuggestionsWriteanoutline花太多时间在兴趣爱好上迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏

------------合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

------中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】Introductionproblemsopinionss12Listsomekeywordsaboutproblems.

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第三步：抓住要点，列关键词中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】Listsomekeywordsaboutprobl131.Listsomekeywordsaboutproblems.

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中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】3.Listsomekeywordsaboutsu15spendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesrefusetodohomeworkwatchtoomuchTV

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第四步：连词成句第五步：集句成段，组段成篇中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】spendtoomuchtimeontheirh16第五步：集句成段，组段成篇wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.cansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,andtakepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?ForexampleBesidesthese,AndalsoweWe注意添加主题句，连接词！plantimecarefullyachieveabalancebetweenstudyandbobbiestakepartindifferentafter-schoolactivitiesjoininterestgroupsdosomesports

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Therearemanythingswecando.中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】第五步：集句成段，组段成篇17Howtogivethiswritinganend?

Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourliferichandcolorful!Whynotputourfreetimetobetteruse?Itisagoodwaytohaveamorecolorfulfuture.Howtogivethiswritinganen18范文展示Hello,everybody!It’stimeagainforourEnglishBroadcastingProgram.Today’stopicis“HowtoMakeBetterUseofOurSpareTime”.Nowadays,

westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethanbefore.Butquiteanumberofstudentsdon’tknowhowtousethetimeproperly.Theyspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.AlsosomeofthemwatchtoomuchTV,What’sworse,somestudentsoftengotothenetbarandarecrazyaboutplayingcomputergames.Wedon’tthinkit’sgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.However,

howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?Therearemanythingswecando.Forexample,wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.Andalsowecansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.Besidesthese,wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourliferichandcolorful!范文展示Hello,everybody!It’stim19howtowriteagoodcomposition开头:开门见山中间结尾:书面表达六步法（审-抓-连-集-组-抄）抓要点,列短语短语扩句找连接词连句成段与主题相呼应，紧扣主题howto开头:开门见山书面表达六步201.压线2.斜度一致3.扁4.饱满5.间隔1.压线2.斜度一致3.扁4.饱满21常见错误时态是否正确主谓是否一致要点是否全面人称是否正确语序是否有问题语言是否符合习惯固定短语是否恰当常见错误时态是否正确22如今，中国掀起了广场舞(publicsquaredancing)热潮。对于这种现象，人们褒贬不一。请你根据下列提示写一篇短文，谈谈广场舞的利与弊，并提出解决措施。要求：1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；尽量运用本讲的重点句子。2．词数：80－100词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：遭受sufferfrom；音量volume如今，中国掀起了广场舞(publicsquaredanc23Nowadays，public

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popular.Mostofthepublicsquaresarecrowdedwithdancers，especiallyinthemorningandevening.Weallagreethatpublicsquaredancingisagoodwaytokeephealthy，especiallyfortheold.Besides，itismoneysaving.Butitalsocausesnoisepollution.Manypeoplesufferfromthenoisecausedbytheloudmusic.Theycan'twork，studyorsleepwell.Theyfeelveryangryandsomeevenarguewiththedancers.Inmyopinion，thedancersshouldturndownthevolumewhiledancing.Inaddition，ourgovernmentshouldbuildmorepublicplacesforthem，suchassquaresandparks.Wehopethatpeoplecanhavefundancingwithoutdisturbingotherpeople.Nowadays，publicsquaredancing24范文展示Hello,everybody!It’stimeagainforourEnglishBroadcastingProgram.Today’stopicis“HowtoMakeBetterUseofOurSpareTime”.Nowadays,

westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethanbefore.Butquiteanumberofstudentsdon’tknowhowtousethetimeproperly.Theyspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.AlsosomeofthemwatchtoomuchTV,What’sworse,somestudentsoftengotothenetbarandarecrazyaboutplayingcomputergames.Wedon’tthinkit’sgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.范文展示Hello,everybody!It’stim25However,

howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?Therearemanythingswecando.Forexample,wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.Andalsowecansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.Besidesthese,wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourliferichandcolorful!However,howcanwemakebette26ThestructureofthearticleIntroductionMainbody

ConclusionSummary

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ThestructureofthearticleS27写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息第二步就是要列出写作提纲（列关键词、连词成句、集句成段、组段成篇）写作前：确定人称、时态写作后：查错改错写作：写作前：确定人称、时态写作后：查错改错28中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。写作实践你的烦恼你的做法个头不高，相貌平常不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少学会沟通，友善待人学习压力大，课外活动少…（自主发挥，至少两点）中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据提29变换句式并列句复合句结果状语从句Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies.Theycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesandtheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontimeSomestudentsspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime变换句式并列句复合句Somestudentsspend30思路构建构思列纲提出问题①I'mnottallandI'mnotgood­-looking.②Myparentscan'tunderstandwhatIdoandsay.Ihavefewfriendsatschool.③Ihavetoomuchpressureinstudy.Ihavefewafter­schoolactivities.提出建议①Idon'tcareaboutthese,andIbelieveinmyself.②IcommunicatewiththemandI'mfriendlytomyclassmatesatschool.③Irelaxmyself:Idosportsorlistentomusic.Igoshoppingwithmyparentsorfriends.思路构建构思列纲提出问题①I'mnottalland31自我展示Helloeveryone,I’mLiHua.I’dliketotalkaboutmyproblemsandhowIdealwiththem.

I'mnottallandI'mnotgood­looking.ButIdon'tcareaboutthese.Ialwaysbelieveinmyself.Myparentssometimescan'tunderstandwhatIdoandsay.Ihavefewfriendsatschool.SoIoftencommunicatewiththemandI'malwaysfriendlytomyclassmatesatschool.Ihavetoomuchpressureinstudytooandoftenhavefewafter­schoolactivities.SoIoftenrelaxmyself.WhenIhavefreetime,Ioftendosportsorlistentomusic.SometimesIgoshoppingwithmy自我展示Helloeveryone,I'm32__________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!parentsorfriends.Inthisway,wecangetbettergradesandenjoythecolorfullife.高分点评：本文采用“总—分—总”的写作结构。首先提出了分享问题与解决方法的意愿，然后谈论每个问题及解决的方法，最后用礼貌性的语言作出总结。本文作者能够较好地处理表格中所提供的写作信息，并能发挥自主性，提出自己的合理建议。______________________________33①短语：careabout,believein,communicatewith,befriendlyto;relaxoneself;goshopping②句型：WhenIhavefreetime,Ioftendosportsorlistentomusic.时间状语从句的运用，使文章中的句子显得不那么单调。Inthisway,wecangetbettergradesandenjoythecolorfullife.这句是给出高分的精彩句子。①短语：careabout,believein,co34抓住要点，列关键词Problemsbecrazyaboutbeinterestedinplaycomputergames

watchtoomuchTV

spendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesrefusetodohomework

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Suggestionsplantimecarefullyachieveabalancebetweenstudyandbobbiestakepartindifferentafter-schoolactivitiesjoininterestgroupsdosomesports

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Sentences:__________________________________________________________________第四步：连词成句Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesandcan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.Idon’tthinkit’sgoodforourstudyandhealth.Makesentenceswiththekeywor36Stepbystep1.审2.构3.列4.连5.美文体_____时态_____人称_____连字成句，连句成段在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，使文增色把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加细节列出要点Stepbystep1.审文体_____时态____37中考专题复习课Writing中考专题复习课Writing38书面表达:

是中考英语中的必考题，占卷面总分的12.5%，分值为15

分。书面表达:39文章的形成过程：单词短语，结构+符号

句子段落文章如何把这些组织一篇文章？分析文章的形成过程首先，我们必须在头脑中构成一幅mindmap.在map的帮助下，我们就能有效的到达我们的目的地。文章的形成过程：单词短语，结构+40分析结构

Mikeiscrazyaboutfootball!Heloveswatchingfootballmatches.Ofcourse,helovesplayingfootballtoo.Heoftenspendsaboutonehourplayingfootballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Hisparentsdon’tlikethisandhaveaskedhimtogohomebefore5.30.Hethinksitisimportantforhimtospendsometimeonhishobbies.

Hewisheshisparentscouldgivehimtheirsupportforhishobbies.

IntroductionMainbodyConclusion分析结构Mikeiscrazyaboutf41DiscussionHowtoWriteEnglishCompositions中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】DiscussionHowtoWriteEnglish42抄组集连抓审作文集句成段组段成篇审清题意连词成句抓住要点抄写规范

Writingskills—sixsteps中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】抄组集连抓审作文集句成段组段成篇审清题意连词成句抓住要点抄写43自从实施教育新政策，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇:makegooduseof,interestgroupssocialactivities,dosports,netbar不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游3.……看法我认为……建议（至少3条）合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

……中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】自从实施教育新政策，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学44Hello,everybody!It’stimeagainforourEnglishBroadcastingProgram.Today’stopicis“HowtoMakeBetterUseofOurSpareTime”._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】Hello,everybody!It’stimeag45第一步:审清题意认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息具体做法：用笔勾画中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】第一步:审清题意认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结46自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏3.……看法我认为……建议（至少3条）合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

……注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数主题体裁人称结构时态字数已知信息未知信息以一般现在时为主中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不47第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】第二步：具体做法：不要遗漏要点！中考英语作文教学PPT-(348Introduction

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ConclusionproblemsopinionssuggestionsWriteanoutline花太多时间在兴趣爱好上迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏

------------合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

------中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】Introductionproblemsopinionss49Listsomekeywordsaboutproblems.

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