高考英语基础写作太空是否值得探索课件

基础写作的评分标准

内容5分语言7分连贯性2分书写1分句子内容的完整性(Completeness)句子结构的正确性(correctness)句子结构的复杂性(Variety)句子内容的连贯性(Coherence)基础写作的评分标准句子内容的完整性(Comp1处理词语写出句子连接句子，变身复句。1.某事值得做sthisworthdoing值得(花费金钱，时间)worthwhile2.日常生活dailylife3.饥饿starvation4.卫星satellite通讯传播communication5.天气预报weatherforecast6.能源短缺energyshortages处理词语写出句子连接句子，变身复句。2写作内容：最近，你班同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论.请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况。30%的同学反对：1.离我们及我们的日常生活太远2.浪费金钱，这些金钱本可以用来解决饥饿，污染等问题。70%的同学赞成：1.已使用卫星进行通讯传播，天气预报等；2.有望解决地球能源短缺问题.写作内容：31.Thereare30%ofthestudentsthinkthatspaceisworthexploring.

30%ofthestudentsthinkthatspaceisworthexploring.错误诊断：therebe句型使用错误.中国式英语高考英语基础写作-太空是否值得探索[课件]4

2.70%studentsthinkthatisworthwhiletoexplorespace.

70%ofthestudentsthinkitisworthwhiletoexplorespace.

错误诊断：百分比和名词之间要用of,of之后的名词要有thethat是从句标记，要有主语

2.70%studentsthinkthatis53.Andhad

30%thestudentsareagreetheideaofexplorespace.30%ofthestudentsagreewiththeideaofexploring

space.错误诊断：have的用法错误

百分数后用of连接名词

sbagreewithsb/sb’sideaof是介词，后用名词或者动名词3.Andhad30%thestudents6Summary写说明文或介绍性的文章时,时态要用现在时,注意句子结构,尤其是主句,从句结构要清晰,复杂,主句,状语部分要用恰当,不要逐句翻译.找出错误，修改标注出你认为他/她写得好的句子Summary写说明文或介绍性的文章时,时态要用现在时,注意7ThediscussionofseekingthespaceToday,ourclasshadadiscussion,whichtalkaboutiftheseekingofthespacehaveaworthwhile.Thosewhoareinfavorofseekingthespaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.Forexample,thesatellitewasusedtocommunicationandthewhetherforecast,alsotheseekingcouldmaketheearthfullofenergy.Thediscussionofseekingthe8Butsomestudentswhodisagreedwithitsaid:“Maybetheseekingisright,butit’stoofartoknowitinourdailylife,themoneyusedtoseekingthespaceshouldbeusedsthedealwiththestarvationandthepollutions.onmyviews,Ithinktheseekingofthespaceisworthwhiletodoit.Butsomestudentswhodisagree9Thediscussionofseekingthespace

Isspaceexplorationworthwhile?Isspaceworthexploring?Today,ourclasshadadiscussion,whichtalkaboutiftheseekingofthespacehaveaworthwhile.discusssthdiscussionon/aboutsth

itisworthwhiletodosthRecently,wehavehadadiscussiononwhetheritisworthwhiletoexplorespace.WhetherthespaceexplorationworthwhileThediscussionofseekingthe10Thosewhoareinfavorofseekingthespaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.beinfavorof赞成claim声称，宣称Thosewhoareinfavorof(赞成)exploringspaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.70%ofthestudentswhoareinfavorofexploringspaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.Thosewhoareinfavorofseek11Forexample,thesatellitewasusedtocommunicationandthewhetherforecast,alsotheseekingcouldmaketheearthfullofenergy.1.拼写错误whether2.时态错误Forexample,satellites

havebeenusedforcommunicationandweatherforecast,andtheexplorationcanenableustosolvetheproblemofenergyshortagesontheearthifwefindnewresourcesonotherplanets.Forexample,thesatellitewas12Butsomestudentswhodisagreedwithitsaid:“Maybetheseekingisright,butit’stoofartoknowitinourdailylife,themoneyusedtoseekingthespaceshouldbeusedsthedealwiththestarvationandthepollutions.But30%ofthestudentswhodisagreewithitfeelthatspaceistoofarfromourdailylifeandthemoneyspentonspaceexplorationcanhavebeenusedtodealwithproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.Butsomestudentswhodisagree13Onmyviews,Ithinktheseekingofthespaceisworthwhiletodoit.Inmyview,spaceisworthexploring.Inmyopinion,spaceisworthexploring.AsfarasIamconcerned,space…Personallyspeaking,Ithink…Onmyviews,Ithinktheseeki141.Recently,ourclassmateshaveheldadiscussionwhosetopicofthatwaswhetherworthexplodinginspace.

Recently,ourclassmateshaveheldadiscussionwhosetopiciswhetherspaceisworthexploring.Recently,ourclassmateshaveheldadiscussiononwhetherspaceisworthexploring.1.Recently,ourclassmateshav152.30%studentsdisagreebecausetheyconsideredthatitwasfarawayfromusandourdailylife.

30%ofthestudentsdisagreebecausetheyconsiderthatspaceisfarawayfromourdailylife.2.30%studentsdisagreebecau163.Besides,itwastedmoneywhichshouldhavesolvedsomeproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.Besides,itwastes

alotofmoney,whichcouldhavebeenusedtosolveproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.3.Besides,itwastedmoneywh174.Buttheothersagreedwiththeopinionthatwasworthdoingthatandgavesomereasonaboutthatitbenefitedsolvingearth’senergyshortagesproblem.结构混乱Buttheotherswhoagreewiththisideathatspaceexplorationisworthwhileclaimthatwehavebenefitedalotfromspaceresearch

anditmayhelpustosolvetheearth’senergyshortageproblem.4.Buttheothersagreedwith185.Anditisknowntoallthesatelliteisusedtomakecommunicationorforecast.Itisknowntoallthat

satellites

havebeenusedforcommunicationandweatherforecast.被用来做某事1.beusedtodosth2.beusedforsth5.Anditisknowntoallthe19Sample1Recently,ourclasshasheldadiscussionaboutwhetherspaceisworthexploring.30%ofthestudentsobjecttheideaofexploringspace.Theyfeelthatit’sawasteoftimeandresourcestodosoandthelargesumofmoneyspentontheexplorationcouldhavebeenusedtodealwithproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.However,70%ofthestudentsconsideritworthwhiletoexplorespace.Asweallknow,satelliteshavebeenusedforcommunicationaswellasweatherforecast,whichmakeourlivesmoreconvenient.Besides,ifresourcesarefoundonotherplanets,energyshortagesonourearthcanbesolved.Sample120Sample2Recently,studentsinourclasshavehadadiscussiononwhetherspaceisworthexploring.30%ofthestudentsthinkspaceexplorationisnotworthwhile.Theythinkspaceistoofarawayfromusandourdailylife,andthemoneyspentonspaceexplorationcanhavebeenusedtosolveproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.70%ofthestudentsthinkspaceisworthexploringbecausewehavebenefitedalotfromit,suchasusingsatellitesforcommunicationandweatherforecast.Also,spaceresearchwillenableustofindnewresourcestosolvetheproblemofenergyshortagesontheearth.Sample221基础写作的评分标准

内容5分语言7分连贯性2分书写1分句子内容的完整性(Completeness)句子结构的正确性(correctness)句子结构的复杂性(Variety)句子内容的连贯性(Coherence)基础写作的评分标准句子内容的完整性(Comp22处理词语写出句子连接句子，变身复句。1.某事值得做sthisworthdoing值得(花费金钱，时间)worthwhile2.日常生活dailylife3.饥饿starvation4.卫星satellite通讯传播communication5.天气预报weatherforecast6.能源短缺energyshortages处理词语写出句子连接句子，变身复句。23写作内容：最近，你班同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论.请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况。30%的同学反对：1.离我们及我们的日常生活太远2.浪费金钱，这些金钱本可以用来解决饥饿，污染等问题。70%的同学赞成：1.已使用卫星进行通讯传播，天气预报等；2.有望解决地球能源短缺问题.写作内容：241.Thereare30%ofthestudentsthinkthatspaceisworthexploring.

30%ofthestudentsthinkthatspaceisworthexploring.错误诊断：therebe句型使用错误.中国式英语高考英语基础写作-太空是否值得探索[课件]25

2.70%studentsthinkthatisworthwhiletoexplorespace.

70%ofthestudentsthinkitisworthwhiletoexplorespace.

错误诊断：百分比和名词之间要用of,of之后的名词要有thethat是从句标记，要有主语

2.70%studentsthinkthatis263.Andhad

30%thestudentsareagreetheideaofexplorespace.30%ofthestudentsagreewiththeideaofexploring

space.错误诊断：have的用法错误

百分数后用of连接名词

sbagreewithsb/sb’sideaof是介词，后用名词或者动名词3.Andhad30%thestudents27Summary写说明文或介绍性的文章时,时态要用现在时,注意句子结构,尤其是主句,从句结构要清晰,复杂,主句,状语部分要用恰当,不要逐句翻译.找出错误，修改标注出你认为他/她写得好的句子Summary写说明文或介绍性的文章时,时态要用现在时,注意28ThediscussionofseekingthespaceToday,ourclasshadadiscussion,whichtalkaboutiftheseekingofthespacehaveaworthwhile.Thosewhoareinfavorofseekingthespaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.Forexample,thesatellitewasusedtocommunicationandthewhetherforecast,alsotheseekingcouldmaketheearthfullofenergy.Thediscussionofseekingthe29Butsomestudentswhodisagreedwithitsaid:“Maybetheseekingisright,butit’stoofartoknowitinourdailylife,themoneyusedtoseekingthespaceshouldbeusedsthedealwiththestarvationandthepollutions.onmyviews,Ithinktheseekingofthespaceisworthwhiletodoit.Butsomestudentswhodisagree30Thediscussionofseekingthespace

Isspaceexplorationworthwhile?Isspaceworthexploring?Today,ourclasshadadiscussion,whichtalkaboutiftheseekingofthespacehaveaworthwhile.discusssthdiscussionon/aboutsth

itisworthwhiletodosthRecently,wehavehadadiscussiononwhetheritisworthwhiletoexplorespace.WhetherthespaceexplorationworthwhileThediscussionofseekingthe31Thosewhoareinfavorofseekingthespaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.beinfavorof赞成claim声称，宣称Thosewhoareinfavorof(赞成)exploringspaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.70%ofthestudentswhoareinfavorofexploringspaceclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.Thosewhoareinfavorofseek32Forexample,thesatellitewasusedtocommunicationandthewhetherforecast,alsotheseekingcouldmaketheearthfullofenergy.1.拼写错误whether2.时态错误Forexample,satellites

havebeenusedforcommunicationandweatherforecast,andtheexplorationcanenableustosolvetheproblemofenergyshortagesontheearthifwefindnewresourcesonotherplanets.Forexample,thesatellitewas33Butsomestudentswhodisagreedwithitsaid:“Maybetheseekingisright,butit’stoofartoknowitinourdailylife,themoneyusedtoseekingthespaceshouldbeusedsthedealwiththestarvationandthepollutions.But30%ofthestudentswhodisagreewithitfeelthatspaceistoofarfromourdailylifeandthemoneyspentonspaceexplorationcanhavebeenusedtodealwithproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.Butsomestudentswhodisagree34Onmyviews,Ithinktheseekingofthespaceisworthwhiletodoit.Inmyview,spaceisworthexploring.Inmyopinion,spaceisworthexploring.AsfarasIamconcerned,space…Personallyspeaking,Ithink…Onmyviews,Ithinktheseeki351.Recently,ourclassmateshaveheldadiscussionwhosetopicofthatwaswhetherworthexplodinginspace.

Recently,ourclassmateshaveheldadiscussionwhosetopiciswhetherspaceisworthexploring.Recently,ourclassmateshaveheldadiscussiononwhetherspaceisworthexploring.1.Recently,ourclassmateshav362.30%studentsdisagreebecausetheyconsideredthatitwasfarawayfromusandourdailylife.

30%ofthestudentsdisagreebecausetheyconsiderthatspaceisfarawayfromourdailylife.2.30%studentsdisagreebecau373.Besides,itwastedmoneywhichshouldhavesolvedsomeproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.Besides,itwastes

alotofmoney,whichcouldhavebeenusedtosolveproblemssuchasstarvationandpollution.3.Besides,itwastedmoneywh384.Buttheothersagreedwiththeopinionthatwasworthdoingthatandgavesomereasonaboutthatitbenefitedsolvingearth’senergyshortagesproblem.结构混乱Buttheotherswhoagreewiththisideathatspaceexplorationisworthwhileclaimthatwehavebenefitedalotfromspaceresearch

anditmayhelpustosolvetheearth’senergyshortageproblem.4.Buttheothersagreedwith395.Anditisknowntoallthesatelliteisusedtomakecommunicationorforecast.Itisknowntoallthat

satellites

havebeenusedfor