应用文写作：phubbing(低头族)课件-高三英语写作专项

Writing

Teachingaim:Practicewritingaphenomenon.Teachingfocuses:1Listkeypoints.2ImprovesentencesbyemployingsomeEnglishstructuresandconnectivewordsandphrases.InsubwayIncampusOntheroadInretiringroomEvenatthediningtimePhubbingNoun

Thefactofholdingamobilephoneinasocialsettingoftwoormorepeople,andtheninteractingwiththatmobilephoneandnotthepeopleinthatsetting.phubbingPhoneSnubSnub(冷落)Areyouaphubber?世界上最遥远的距离莫过于我们坐在一起，你却在“刷屏”。书面表达智能通讯的沉迷(phubbing)已经成为不能被忽视的普遍问题。假定你是李华，请就这一现象发表你的观点，要点包括：1.危害2.建议注意：1.字数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审：体裁，人称，时态

列：列要点(中英文词、句均可)

写：连点成句

润：换结构,加连接词

查：从头到尾读一遍，从语感、语法、行文逻辑、习惯表达和书写等方面检查。

抄：干净,整洁,清楚Review:Stepsinwritingacomposition书面表达智能通讯的沉迷(phubbing)已经成为不能被忽视的普遍问题。假定你是李华，请就这一现象发表你的观点，要点包括：1.危害2.建议注意：1.字数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Para1:IntroductionPara2:

HarmsA.physicaldamages

1).eyes:tired,dry;eyesight:drop2).neck:twister/outofshape,3).fingers:hurt,benumb4).wrist:5).uglyfigure6).wrinkles…列：列要点(中英文词、句均可)智能通讯的沉迷(phubbing)已经成为不能被忽视的普遍问题。要点包括：1.危害2.建议

B.mental/psychologicalproblems

1).easilyanxious/depressed2).losetheabilitytocommunicatefacetoface3).bedistractedfromthework,study4).Rude,beindifferentto5).potentialdanger…Para3:Suggestions1)controlthetime;2)Relax10minuteseveryhalf-hour;

3)controlbehavior,learntounderstandandrespectthefeelingofthepeopleinfront.4)developinterestsofout-dooractivities…Para4:Conclusion1递进关系first,what’smore,besides,furthermore,what’sworse,inaddition,moreimportantly,lastnotleast…2对比关系

onthecontrary…

3举例解释forinstance…4因果关系asaresult,consequently…

Dousethemproperlyandnaturally.润：加连接词润：换结构

UsefulEnglishstructures(一)

1Itisadj.+that-clause2非限制性定从

…,which….3动名词作主语4分词作定语或状语5Notuntil…+助动词+S+V6Only…助动词+S+VPractice:润：换结构

1.长时间盯着手机往往会让脊椎(spine)变形，最终导致别的身体疾病。（动名词作主语）

Staringataphoneforalongtimetendstomakeourspineoutofshape,whicheventuallyleadstootherdiseases.2.手机的沉迷，会冷落身边的家人朋友，这无疑是极不礼貌的。(It’sadj.todo)Whenaddictedtothecellphone,undoubtedly,it’sextremelyimpolitetosnubourfamilyandfriends.3直到我们放下手机时，我们才能真正享受到人与人交往的温暖。（Notuntil的倒装句）Notuntilweputdownthecellphonecanwereallyenjoythewarmthofinterpersonalcommunication.

Phubbingisauniversalproblemthatcannolongerbeignored.Fromfamilyreuniontodatewithafriend,peoplecouldn’tstopstaringattheirphones,andsnubbingthepersonsinfrontcompletely,whichhasgreatlyinfluencedusinseveralaspects.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Notuntilweputdownthecellphonecanwereallyenjoythetasteoffoodandthewarmthofinte