高考英语总复习-建议信的写作指导课件

高考英语总复习---------建议信的写作指导高考英语总复习---------【学习目标】

学习建议信的写法，掌握建议信的常用短语和句型，正确撰写建议信。【学习重点】

掌握建议信的常用短语和句型。【学习难点】

组织恰当的语言，正确撰写建议信。

【学习目标】

建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：1.说明写信目的。2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。3.表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。文体概述【学习内容】建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法

假如你收到一封叫Flower的网友写来的一封信，她向你询问如何交友，请给她回一封信，并提出建议。

提示：1.交朋友首先要对别人友善；

2.要使陌生人感到亲切，不管他在何处，关心别人胜过自己；

3.与别人有分歧时不吵架，要商量；

4.不要相信危急时刻背弃朋友的人，因为“患难见真情”。要求：1.词数：100左右；

2.表达要清楚，语言简洁、流畅；

3.针对问题给出建议，层次清晰。一、美文欣赏假如你收到一封叫Flower的网友写来的一封

I'mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Youaskmesomethingabouthowtomakefriends.Everyoneneedsfriends,sohowtomakefriendsisveryimportant.Iwouldliketoputforwardthefollowingsuggestions.

Firstofall,youmustbefriendlytoothersifyouwanttomakefriendswithothers.Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwouldlookafterothersmorethanmyself.Inmyopinion,itwillbebettertomakethestrangerfeeleasy.Ifyouhavedifferentopinions,youcandiscusswithothers.Idon'tthinkitnecessarytoquarrelwiththem.Finally,don'ttrustthosepeoplewholeaveyouwhenyouareintrouble,becauseafriendinneedisafriendindeed.

Itrustyouwilltakegoodconsiderationofmysuggestion.Ihopeeverythinggoesonwellwithyou,andyou'llmakealotofgoodfriends.

Yourstruly,

SimonDearFlower,

I'mgladtoreceiveyou1.给某人提建议________________________2.如下________________________3.在做某事时遇到困难

__________________________4.利用________________________5.向某人征求意见________________________asksb.foradvicegivesb.someadvice(on)asfollowshavedifficulty/troubleindoingsth.makeuseof二、常用语块1.给某人提建议_________________6.制订计划_______________________7.认为……有用

_______________________8.参加_______________________9.听从某人的建议_______________________10.把……考虑在内

_______________________oaccount/considerationmakeaplanfind…helpful/useful/beneficialtakepartin/participateinfollowone’sadvice6.制订计划__________11.得到改善________________________12.有所好转________________________13.依我看来________________________14.我已收到你的来信，得知你……________________________15.我建议……________________________Iwouldliketosuggestthat…/Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…/Iamwritingtoadviseyouof…/IfIwereyou,Iwould…/MayIsuggestthat…/Iwouldliketoputforwardthesuggestionthat…getimprovedchangeforthebetterinmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofviewIhavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyou…11.得到改善_____________________1.你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。

2.我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助的。1.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.2.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif…三、常用句式1.你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。1.3.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。4.我相信你会考虑我的建议的。5.如能看到……我会非常开心的。3.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.5.Iwouldbemorethanhappytosee…4.Itrustyou‘lltakemysuggestionintoaccount./Itrustyou’lltakegoodconsiderationofmysuggestion.3.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。3.Ihopeyo

Dear______,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto___________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.Tobeginwith,you’dbetter________Besides,IfIwereyou,Iwould________Moreover,Iwouldliketosuggestthat________Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyandwishyouagoodwork.Yourssincerely,LiHua

四、写作模板Dear______,四、写作模板DearRoy,IamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskformyadvicetohowtolearnChinesewell.Herearefewsuggestions.First,thisisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspaperandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.askingon∧aitnewspapers五、习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)DearRoy,askingon∧aitnewspBeside,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasier.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.HewilltellyoualotaboutChinaorhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritetomeinChinesethenexttime.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHuaBesideseasilyTheyandBeside,itshouldbeago1.ask→asking现在分词作伴随状语，表示主动关系。2.to→onadvice后常搭配介词on。3.在few前加a根据句意，此处为提一些建议，表示肯定意义，用afew。4.this→it考查句型itis+adj.+todosth.意为“做……是……的”。5.newspaper→newspapers因为newspaper为可数名词，而且与前后的books,magazines属于并列关系，故用复数形式。1.ask→asking现在分词作伴随状语，表示主动关系6.Beside→Besides此处表示补充说明关系“此外/而且”，beside意为“在……旁边”。7.easier→easily修饰谓语动词用副词形式。8.He→They根据前一句话中的moreChinesefriends可知用They。9.or→and此处两个动作为“顺承”关系，而非“选择”关系。10.去掉nexttime前的the相对于现在的“下一……”，next前不用the。6.Beside→Besides此处表示补充说明关系“此假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生Jenny。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父母及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深夜哭泣。对此，请你给Jenny写一封建议信，要点如下：1.鼓励Jenny坚定求学信念，志存高远。2.就Jenny的目前状况，提两到三个建议。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。六、实战演练假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生JennDearJenny,Iamsogladtohaveatalkwithyou.IunderstandyourpresentsituationforIhavehadasimilarexperiencebefore.Peopleoftenmisstheirparentsthefirsttimetheyleavehome.Mostpeopledohavetoleavehomeforhighereducationoremployment.Ithinkyoushouldrealizethatpresentseparationwillhelpwithyouracademicdevelopmentandyourimprovementofpersonalability.DearJenny,Trytomakefriendsonyourschoolcampus,andshareideaswithyourclassmateswhoarephysicallyclosesttoyounow.Maybeyouwillstillmissyourparents,butyournewfriendswillbringhappinessandjoytoyournewlife.AlsoIsuggestyoutakeanactivepartindifferentkindsofactivitiesinschool.Youwillgetmuchpleasurefromit.

Wishyouhappyeveryday.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaTrytomakefriendsonyoursc高考英语总复习---------建议信的写作指导高考英语总复习---------【学习目标】

学习建议信的写法，掌握建议信的常用短语和句型，正确撰写建议信。【学习重点】

掌握建议信的常用短语和句型。【学习难点】

组织恰当的语言，正确撰写建议信。

【学习目标】

建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：1.说明写信目的。2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。3.表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。文体概述【学习内容】建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法

假如你收到一封叫Flower的网友写来的一封信，她向你询问如何交友，请给她回一封信，并提出建议。

提示：1.交朋友首先要对别人友善；

2.要使陌生人感到亲切，不管他在何处，关心别人胜过自己；

3.与别人有分歧时不吵架，要商量；

4.不要相信危急时刻背弃朋友的人，因为“患难见真情”。要求：1.词数：100左右；

2.表达要清楚，语言简洁、流畅；

3.针对问题给出建议，层次清晰。一、美文欣赏假如你收到一封叫Flower的网友写来的一封

I'mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Youaskmesomethingabouthowtomakefriends.Everyoneneedsfriends,sohowtomakefriendsisveryimportant.Iwouldliketoputforwardthefollowingsuggestions.

Firstofall,youmustbefriendlytoothersifyouwanttomakefriendswithothers.Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwouldlookafterothersmorethanmyself.Inmyopinion,itwillbebettertomakethestrangerfeeleasy.Ifyouhavedifferentopinions,youcandiscusswithothers.Idon'tthinkitnecessarytoquarrelwiththem.Finally,don'ttrustthosepeoplewholeaveyouwhenyouareintrouble,becauseafriendinneedisafriendindeed.

Itrustyouwilltakegoodconsiderationofmysuggestion.Ihopeeverythinggoesonwellwithyou,andyou'llmakealotofgoodfriends.

Yourstruly,

SimonDearFlower,

I'mgladtoreceiveyou1.给某人提建议________________________2.如下________________________3.在做某事时遇到困难

__________________________4.利用________________________5.向某人征求意见________________________asksb.foradvicegivesb.someadvice(on)asfollowshavedifficulty/troubleindoingsth.makeuseof二、常用语块1.给某人提建议_________________6.制订计划_______________________7.认为……有用

_______________________8.参加_______________________9.听从某人的建议_______________________10.把……考虑在内

_______________________oaccount/considerationmakeaplanfind…helpful/useful/beneficialtakepartin/participateinfollowone’sadvice6.制订计划__________11.得到改善________________________12.有所好转________________________13.依我看来________________________14.我已收到你的来信，得知你……________________________15.我建议……________________________Iwouldliketosuggestthat…/Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…/Iamwritingtoadviseyouof…/IfIwereyou,Iwould…/MayIsuggestthat…/Iwouldliketoputforwardthesuggestionthat…getimprovedchangeforthebetterinmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofviewIhavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyou…11.得到改善_____________________1.你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。

2.我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助的。1.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.2.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif…三、常用句式1.你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。1.3.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。4.我相信你会考虑我的建议的。5.如能看到……我会非常开心的。3.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.5.Iwouldbemorethanhappytosee…4.Itrustyou‘lltakemysuggestionintoaccount./Itrustyou’lltakegoodconsiderationofmysuggestion.3.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。3.Ihopeyo

Dear______,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto___________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.Tobeginwith,you’dbetter________Besides,IfIwereyou,Iwould________Moreover,Iwouldliketosuggestthat________Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyandwishyouagoodwork.Yourssincerely,LiHua

四、写作模板Dear______,四、写作模板DearRoy,IamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskformyadvicetohowtolearnChinesewell.Herearefewsuggestions.First,thisisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspaperandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.askingon∧aitnewspapers五、习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)DearRoy,askingon∧aitnewspBeside,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasier.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.HewilltellyoualotaboutChinaorhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritetomeinChinesethenexttime.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHuaBesideseasilyTheyandBeside,itshouldbeago1.ask→asking现在分词作伴随状语，表示主动关系。2.to→onadvice后常搭配介词on。3.在few前加a根据句意，此处为提一些建议，表示肯定意义，用afew。4.this→it考查句型itis+adj.+todosth.意为“做……是……的”。5.newspaper→newspapers因为newspaper为可数名词，而且与前后的books,magazines属于并列关系，故用复数形式。1.ask→asking现在分词作伴随状语，表示主动关系6.B