课件人物外貌描写写作升格 课件 2023届高考英语写作复习

Unit1英语写作升格之人物外貌特征ThefirstdayImetBryceLoski,Iflipped(怦然心动的).Honestly,onelookathimandIbecamealunatic(疯狂的人).It‘shiseyes.Somethinginhiseyes.They’reblue,andframedin(框进)theblacknessofhislashes(睫毛),they’redazzling(耀眼的).Absolutelybreathtaking.IalsorememberthatBrycewaswearingpoloshirt,whichIthoughtwasreallycute.Reallynice.-----fromFlipped《怦然心动》Toshow,nottotelleyeswearingdetailsHowtopolishthedetails？advancedvocabularyadvancedsentencepatternsHarryisasmart

boywithapairofroundglasses.Mulanisabeautifulandfamous

womaninthehistory.Comparedwithotherbasketballplayers,Jordanisspecialinhislooks.AdvancedvocabularyTip1:Usenewwordslearntinseniorhighschoolintelligenthisappearancecharming/attractiveteenager/adolescentcelebratedfigure

Jordanhasblackskinandabaldhead(光头).复合形容词：形容词—

身体部位+edMulanisabeautywithlonghair.Mulanhasapairofdeterminedeyes.Harryisacuteboywitharoundface.AdvancedvocabularyTip2:UseWord-building(构词法)

Jordanisblack-skinnedandbald-headed.Mulanisalong-hairedbeauty.Mulanisdetermined-eyed.Harryisacuteandround-facedboy.clothesTip3:Use

specific（具体的)wordsAdvancedvocabularyMulaniswearingapieceofredclothinginabattle.JordanwearsBullclotheswhichhavethenumber23onthem.Harryisdressedinbigblackclothes.apieceofred___________;close-fitting(紧身的)_____________;tailored(定制的)

basketball_______（背心）/shirtlongandlooserobe(长袍);blackcloak(披风)/coat;grey________;a__________garmentarmyuniformvestsweatertieTip4:Use

phrasesAdvancedvocabularyJordanisatallandstrongbasketballplayer.Mulan

wasover20whenshejoinedthearmy.istallin________(高度)isofstrong________(体格)was_____________(在某人二十几岁时)heightbuildinhertwenties以下为小说片段描写，一位年轻的妻子等待海员丈夫的归来，请你利用合理想象补充文章内容。

Mary,____________________(三十几岁的家庭主妇),waslookingforwardtoherhusband.Shewas____________(圆脸)andhasa__________（苗条身材).Shewasinher____________(磨损的灰色大衣)andworea________(围巾).Sherushedoutofthedoorandherfacelitupwitha___________(灿烂笑容).Theshipwasapproaching.Shewaspleasedbeyonddescriptionandhertears___________(滚下)herface.Exercise1ahousewifeinherthirtiesround-facedslimfigurewornbrowncoatscarfbroadsmilerolleddownAdvancedsentencepatterns①Harryhadathinface,knobblyknees(膝盖瘦得凸起),blackhair,andbrightgreeneyes.②HeworeroundglassesheldtogetherwithalotofScotchtape(透明胶带)becauseallthetimesDudleyhadpunched(用拳头打)himonthenose.③TheonlythingHarrylikedabouthisownappearancewasaverythinscaronhisforeheadwhichwasshapedlikeaboltoflightning(闪电状的).--------fromHarryPotterandthePhilosopher’sStone

《哈利波特与魔法石》交替使用长短句，调节叙事节奏①短-②长-③长学生习作：①Harry

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little

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hair.②Ascaronhisforeheadishiddenbyhisshorthair.③Hewearsapairofglasses,agreysweaterandablackcoat.④Aredtiemakeshimmorehandsome.①短-②短-③短-④短AdvancedsentencepatternsHeworeroundglassesheldtogetherwithalotofScotchtapebecauseallthetimesDudleyhadpunchedhimonthenose.Tip1:Addbackgroundinformation原因状语从句TheonlythingHarrylikedabouthisownappearancewasaverythinscaronhisforeheadthatwasshapedlikeaboltoflightning.Tip2:Userhetoricaldevices(修辞手法)比喻HeworeroundglassesheldtogetherwithalotofScotchtape…TheonlythingHarryliked…wasaverythinscar…thatwasshapedlikeaboltoflightning.非谓语动词作定语定语从句Tip3:Usegrammartechniques

Exercise2请采用适当的方式，将下面句子改成长句。ThegracefuldancerrecreatedtheeleganceofthegoddessofLuoRiver.其形也，翩若惊鸿，婉若游龙。——曹植《洛神赋》ThegracefuldancerwhoseappealingperformanceamazedmostyoungnetizensrecreatedtheeleganceofthegoddessofLuoRiverwithherbodysoaringlightlylikeaswanandflyingelegantlylikeadragon.advancedvocabularynewwords

word-buildingspecificwordsphrasesadvancedsentencepatternsbackgroundinformationrhetoricaldevicesgrammartechniques

FurtherthinkingThemore,thebetter?FurtherthinkingHarryhadathinface,knobblyknees(膝盖瘦得凸起),blackhair,andbrightgreeneyes.

HeworeroundglassesheldtogetherwithalotofScotchtape(透明胶带)becauseallthetimesDudleyhadpunched(用拳头打)himonthenose.

TheonlythingHarrylikedabouthisownappearancewasaverythinscaronhisforeheadthatwasshapedlikeaboltoflightning(闪电状的).--------byJ.K.RowlingShowing

OnecharacteristicisenoughWhenMichaelJordan’sfeetlefttheground,timeseemedtostandstill.Theplayerwhobecameknownas“AirJordan”changedbasketballwithhisgracefulmovesandjumps.Jordan’sskillswereimpressive,butthementalstrengththatheshowedmadehimunique.--------B1U3LivingLegendAboywhoselifeismiserableAbasketballplayerwhoisskillful组内合作，完成“人物外貌描写---