新高考英语作文训练17 学案

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Willyougivemykitealift?”saidJohn,mylittlenephewtohissister,aftertryinginvainbyhimself.Lucyverykindlytookitupandthrewitintotheair,butherbrotherdidn'trunoffatthesamemoment.Thekitefelldownagain.“Howclumsyyouare!”Johncomplained.“Itwasyourfaultentirely.”answeredhissister.“Tryagain,children.”saidI.Lucyoncemoretookupthekite.ButnowJohnwasintoogreatahurry;heranoffsosuddenlythathetwitchedthekiteoutofherhand,anditfellflatasbefore.“Tryagain,mydears.”saidI.Theydid,andwithmorecare;butasidewindcomingsuddenly,asLucyletgoofthekite,itwasblownagainstsometreesandthetailbecameentangledinamoment,leavingthepoorkitehangingwithitsheaddownward.Thetwolittleguysbothfeltalittledisappointed.Iwenttothekite'sassistanceandpickeditup,saying,“Come,children,therearetoomanytreeshere;letusfindamoreopenspace,andthentryagain.”Wepresentlyfoundanicegrassplot.Thistime,withmyhelp,thekiterosewithallthedignityofaballoon.ButJohn,delightedtofinditpullingsohardatthestring,stoppedshorttolookupwardandadmire.Thestringgettingloose,thekitewavered,andthewindnotbeingveryfavorable,downcamethekitetothegrass.“Iwon'ttryanymore.Itisofnouse.Thekitewon'tfly.”“Oh,mylittleman!Wouldyougiveupthesportafterallthepainswehavetakenbothtomakeandtoflythekite?Afewdisappointmentsoughtnottodiscourageus.Come,Ihavewoundupyourstringandnowtryagain.”注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在以下位置作答。Andtheydidtry.Onthewayhome,Johnsaidtome,“Thankyou,aunt.”续写思路原文大意John和妹妹Lucy去放风筝，但是由于各种原因，屡次失败，但在阿姨的鼓励下，一次一次尝试。叙事意图叙述John和妹妹Lucy去放风筝，虽然屡次失败，但是却不放弃，风筝最终飞上天空。续写部分续写部分第一段根据首句可猜测第一段应叙述兄妹俩再次尝试将风筝放上天空。根据第二段首句及上文可以推测该部分应叙述约翰就本次放风筝经历对阿姨诉说感受，最后阿姨的回复应点明主旨，做任何事情都不应轻易放弃，坚持才能成功。续写线索放风筝→收风筝回家→讲述经历→感受范文Andtheydidtry.JohnaskedLucytohelponcemore.ThenLucytookupthekiteandjustletgoasherbrotherbegantorunoff.Again,thekitebegantorise.AsJohnpulledthestring,Lucyadmiredtheflyingkiteandshouted:“Don'tstop!Run!Run!”Finally,thekitewashighinthesky.Thetwokidswerewildlydelighted,laughingandscreaming.Abouthalfanhourlater,theywoundupthestringandwerereadyforhome.Onthewayhome,Johnsaidtome,“Thankyou,aunt.”Hecontinued,“Withoutyourencouragement,Icouldn'thaveflownthekitesohigh.Ireallyhadawonderfultimetoday.”Meanwhile,Lucyadded,“Wehavealsolearnedagoodlesson.Ifwehadgivenup,wewouldnothaveenjoyedtheflying.”Hearingthese,Ismiledandsaidtothem,“Keepinmindthatafewdisappointmentsshouldnotdiscourageus.Aslongaswetry,wemaysucceed.”［满分借鉴点］满分靓词①keepinmind记住②aslongas只要满分句式Ifwehadgivenup,wewouldnothaveenjoyedtheflying.虚拟语气原文词汇积累①withcare小心地②runoff跑开祝贺信祝贺朋友书法比赛获奖假如你是李华，得知你的英国朋友Eric在汉语书法比赛中获得一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．表示祝贺；2．赠送名家字帖。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在以下位置作答。DearEric,CongratulationsonyourwinningfirstplaceintheChinesecalligraphycontest!Asisknowntoall,calligraphyisanimportantpartoftraditionalChineseculture.ItisreallyamazingforaforeignertowriteChinesecharacterssowell.I'vealreadyhadacopybookofWangXizhi’sworksdeliveredtoyou.Ihopeitcanbeofsomehelp.I’mlookingforwardtoyourgreaterprogressinthefuture.Yours,LiHua审题谋篇审题①体裁：祝贺信②人称：第一人称、第三人称③时态：一般现在时谋篇三段式结构：①首段：表示祝贺②主体段落：介绍书法并赠送名家字帖③尾段：表示期待［满分借鉴点］满分靓词beofhelp有帮助满分句式 Asisknowntoall,calligraphyisanimportantpartoftraditionalChineseculture.非限制性定语从句［满分技巧］题型解读祝贺信是由于某种原因向收信人道贺的信件，除向对方道贺外，还可表达祝福、期望等，语言应热情洋溢，满怀喜悦。写作步骤第一步：点明祝贺的事情，并向对方道贺；第二步：详述对方为取得成功所付出的努力；第三步：再次祝贺。［满分佳句］①Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyouhavewonfirstplaceinthecompetition.得知你在比赛中获得一等奖，我很高兴。②I’mwritingtoofferyoumywarmestcongratulationsonyourvictoryinthecompetition.我写信是想对你在比赛中获胜表示最热烈的祝贺。③YoumusthaveworkedreallyhardtoachievesuchahighlevelofChineseproficiency.你肯定非常努力才能达到如此高的中文水平。④Inthepasttwoyears,youhavekeptonpracticingerhueveryday,whichhelpsyoustandoutinthetalentshow.在过去的两年里，你每天都坚持练习二胡，这让你在才艺表演中脱颖而出。⑤Wearejustasproudaswecanbeofyouandsendourcongratulations.我们为你感到无比的骄傲，祝贺你。⑥Pleaseacceptmymostsincerecongratulationsandbestwishesforallthegoodfutureintheworld.请接受我诚挚的祝贺和最美好的祝福。［满分模板］DearPeter,（说明要祝贺的事情，表祝贺）IamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationstoyouonyourwinningfirstplaceintheChineseChessNetworkChallenge.（详述对方为此所做的努力）“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits.”Fortheseyears,you'veshowngreatinterestinChinesechessandkeptonpracticingiteveryday.（付出的努力之一）NotonlyhaveyoureadmanybooksaboutChinesechessstrategy,butyouhavealsocompetedinvariousChinesechesscontests.（被祝贺人的努力之二）SoI'msohappythatyoubecomechampionofthisnetworkchallenge.Atlast,IhopetoplayChinesechesswithyousothatwecanmakeprogresstogether.Pleasetellmewhenyouhavetime.（再次表示祝贺）Congratulationsagain.Yours,LiHua约稿信邀请同学提供作品假设你是李华，你所在的城市成都为了提升国际形象，下个月将举行国际中文写作比赛。请你根据以下要点给曾在你班学习两年的美国同学Tom写封信，邀请他提供作品。1．主题：我眼中的成都；2．截稿时间：12月20日；3．投稿邮箱chengdu123@126.com。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在以下位置作答。DearTom,Howiseverythinggoing?Youmustbehappybackwithyourfamily._____________________Yours,LiHuaDearTom,Howiseverythinggoing?Youmustbehappybackwithyourfamily.I'mwritingtotellyouourcityisgoingtoholdaninternationalChineselanguagecompositioncontestnextmonthtopromoteourcity'simageintheworld.Thethemeofthecontestis“ChengduinMyEyes”.Havingstudiedinmyschoolfortwoyears,youcertainlyknowwhatthiscityhastooffertotheworld.Soyourparticipationwillbemostappreciated!Thereisnolimittothenumberofthewordsandpleasesendyourcompositiontochengdu123@126.com.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeDecember20th?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua审题谋篇审题①体裁：约稿信②人称：第二人称、第三人称③时态：一般现在时、一般将来时谋篇三段式结构：①首段：表示问候，说明写信目的②主体段落：陈述稿件主题、要求及收稿邮箱③尾段：说明截稿时间，希望对方早日回复［满分借鉴点］满分靓词①promote／praməut／vt.宣传②participation／pa：tisipeifn／n.参与满分句式Havingstudiedinmyschoolfortwoyears,youcertainlyknowwhatthiscityhastooffertotheworld.现在分词的完成式作状语，表达高级［满分技巧］题型解读约稿信在近几年高考卷14套卷中考查了2次，通常用第二、三人称，时态以一般现在时为主，可穿插使用一般将来时，语言表达应地道，行文要流畅。写作步骤第一步：点明约稿意图；第二步：主题、时间等约稿的具体要求；第三步：期待对方的稿件并期待及时回复。［满分佳句］①I'dliketoinviteyoutowriteanarticlefortheEnglishnewspaper.我想请你为英文报写一篇文章。②IwonderifyoucouldwritesomethingaboutChinesepoems.我想知道你是否可以写一些关于中国诗歌的文章。③Yourarticleissupposedtobewrittenwithin300words/300wordswouldbefine.你的文章的字数应控制在300字以内／300字就够了。④ItwouldbebetterifwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune1.我们在6月1日之前能收到你的文章会更好。⑤Wewillextendthedeadlineifyouconsiderthetimeisnotenough.如果你认为时间不够，我们将延长最后期限。［满分模板］DearPeter,（写信目的）I’dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticlefor某媒体.（介绍栏目）The“某栏目＂sectionprovidesaniceplatformfor某些媒体受众to做某事．Inthissectionthereareawidevarietyofmaterialsavailableto这些媒体受众.Andherearesomerelevantdetailsaboutthearticlesweareeagerfor.（稿件要求）Tobeginwith,notonlycanyouwritesomethingaboutA方面,butyoucanalsofocusonB方面.What’smore,yourarticlecanhaveatitlemadeupbyyourselfwithavocabularyof某数量orso.Lastbutnotleast,youaresupposedtosubscribe/submit/sendyourarticleby某日期.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.婉拒信谢绝朋友去公园游玩的邀请假定你是李华，你的好友，来自美国的交换生Bob邀请你本周末去公园游玩。但是由于期末考试马上来临，你想在家复习功课。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1．谢绝邀请；2．说明原因；3．祝他玩得开心。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在以下位置作答。DearBob,Thankyouverymuchforinvitingmetogototheparkthisweekend.ButI'mverysorryIcan'tgowithyou.Withmyfinalexaminationjustaroundthecorner,Ihaveplannedtoreviewmylessonsathomethisweekend.ItisreallyapitythatIcan'tgowithyou.Ihopeyoucanunderstand.Ihaveheardtherearemanyimpressiveshowsandexcitingentertainmentsinthepark.SoIwishyouagoodtime.Sorryagainformynotjoiningyouthistime.Yours,LiHua审题谋篇审题①体裁：婉拒信②人称：第一人称③时态：一般现在时、现在完成时谋篇三段式结构：①首段：表示道歉②主体段落：说明谢绝邀请的原因③尾段：再次致歉［满分借鉴点］满分靓词①aroundthecorner即将到来 ②wishsb.agoodtime祝某人愉快满分句式Withmyfinalexaminationjustaroundthecorner,Ihaveplannedtoreviewmylessonsathomethisweekend.（with宾补结构作状语）［满分技巧］题型解读婉拒信是在收到对方的邀请信后给予对方的回复，礼貌地拒绝并解释谢绝原因，解释的理由一定要合理，语言一定要诚恳。写作步骤第一步：感谢对方的邀请，接着婉拒；第二步；说明拒绝邀请的理由；第三步：再次致款，表达祝福（或提出补救措施，如推荐他人）。［满分佳句］①ManythanksforyourinvitingmetoattendtheFashionShowCompetition.However,muchtomyregret,Ihavetodeclineyourinvitation.非常感谢你邀请我参加时装表演比赛。然而，很遗憾，我不得不谢绝你的邀请。②Ireallywanttoacceptyourinvitationtotheculturalexchangeprogrambutit'sagreatpitythatIcan'tmakeit.我真的很想接受你的邀请去参加文化交流项目，但是很遗憾我不能去了。③I'mterriblysorrytotellyouthatIcan'tgoforthereasonthatIhavetotakepartintheChinesePoetryCompetitiontobeheld.我非常抱歉地告诉你，我不能去的原因，我必须参加即将举行的中国诗歌比赛。④IshallnotbeabletoaccepttheinvitationbecauseI'moccupiedinpreparingaperformance.因为我正忙着准备演出，我不能接受邀请。⑤Ifeelterriblysorrytomisstheopportunitytomeetyouandmanyotherfellowsaswellasimprovingmyself.我很遗憾错过了认识您和其他许多人以及提高自己的机会。⑥ThereasonwhyIcan'tmakeittoyourpartyisthatIhavejusthadabadcoldandI'mfirmlyadvisedtostayathomeforarest.我不能参加你的聚会是因为我刚刚得了重感冒，医生建议我在家休息。⑦Sorryagainforanyinconveniencecausedbymyabsenceandwishyourcompetitionagreatsuccess.再次为我的缺席给您带来的不便表示歉意，并祝您的比赛圆满成功。［满分模板］DearElla,（感谢邀请并婉拒）Ifeelgratefulandhonoredtobeinvitedtoyourparty.（被邀请去的活动、聚会、地方等）However,muchtomyregret,Ihavetodeclineyourinvitation.（说明谢绝邀请的原因）Accordingtotheschoolschedule，IhavetoattendanEnglishwritingcontesttobeheldintheschoolhallthen.That’swhyIshallnotbeabletomakeit.（解释拒绝的原因）Idovalueyourinvitationbuttimedoesn'tpermit.IwillsendyouaCDofyourfavoritesingerasapresent.（提出补救措施）（再次致歉）Sorryagainforanyinconveniencecausedbymyabsenceandwishyourcompetitionagreatsuccess.Yours,LiHua30个高级提分词汇要想写作得高分就需要做到用新颖的词汇传达最通俗的信息。考生在平时的训练和考试中，要有意识地强化“复杂”“高级”这两个概念，使自己的作文能区别于一般考生的作文，充分显示自己的实力。以下是常用高级表达：1．表“对··有好处＂→用beofbenefit／bebeneficial／berewarding代替begood／behelpful·Takingregularexercisecanbeofgreatbenefit.2．表“相信”→用befully／firmlyconvinced／holdthebeliefthat代替believethat·Wearefirmlyconvincedthatwe'llliveuptoyourexpectations.3．表“应该”→用besupposedto代替should·Ashighschoolstudents,wearesupposedtobeneatlydressedwhenatschool.4．表“感谢”--用appreciate代替thank．．．for·Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.5．表“因为”→用dueto／owingto代替becauseof·Duetopoormanagement,thefactoryisdeeplyindebt.表“成功”→用makeit代替succeed·Sheshoutedatthetopofhervoice,“I'vemadeit!”7．表“重要”→用matter／count代替beimportant·WhatmattersmostinlearningEnglishisenoughpractice.8．表“即将来临”→用aroundthecorner／athand／approaching代替comingsoon·Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,wegetexcited.表“擅长；精通”→用haveagoodcommandof代替begoodat·Allthestudentsareexpectedtohaveagoodcommandofaforeignlanguage.10．表“不得不”→用cannothelpbutdo／havenoalternativebuttodo代替havetodo·Shecouldn'thelpbutwonderhowshecouldhandlethesituation.表“全神贯注于”→用beabsorbed／buriedin代替belostin·Shewastotallyabsorbedinherbook.12．表“非常”→用morethan代替very·IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,Iwouldbemorethanpleasedtogiveyouahand.13．表“帮助”→用dosb．afavour／lendahelpinghand代替help·Wouldyoupleasedomeafavourtoturndowntheradio?表“大多数”→用themajorityof代替most·ThemajorityoftheintervieweespreferwatchingTVathometogoingtothecinema.表“对·····“感兴趣”→用appealto代替beinterestedin·Ifanything,swimmingwillappealtomemoststrongly.16．表“疲惫”→用bewornout／feelexhausted代替betired·We'vebeenhavingsomanyvisitorstodaythatwefeelexhausted.17．表“照顾”→用attendto代替lookafter·Shehunguphurriedlyandattendedtothebaby.Meanwhile,themealgotburnt.18．表“只要”→用onconditionthat代替aslongas·Youcangooutoncondit