高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件

Howtoimprovealetter?Howtoimprovealetter?全国卷高考英语作文基本评分标准1.篇幅：词数80

≦120,否则减去2分。

2.内容：

内容要点齐全注意词汇的数量

语法结构准确性

上下文的连贯性。

3.拼写与标点符号准确，不影响交际。

4.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。全国卷高考英语作文基本评分标准1.篇幅：词数80≦12书写有较大进步，总体来说书写认真，字迹较工整审题较认真，写作内容基本覆盖文章信息点Shortcomings:Goodpoints语言需要加强，基本表达错误较多。书写有较大进步，总体来说书写认真，字迹较工整Shortcom第二节：书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华，你为你校校报英文栏目主编外籍教师Mr.Smith担任了半年的助理编辑，你现在决定辞去这个职位。请你根据以下内容给他发一封邮件。

1）告诉他你的决定；2）陈述你的理由；3）表达你的谢意和歉意。注意：词数不少于100。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

第二节：书面表达（满分25分）AgoodletterContentMoodFormHandwritingLanguageAgoodContentMoodFormHandwrit书写有较大进步，总体来说书写认真，字迹较工整Goodpoints书写有较大进步，Goodpoints高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件DearMr.Smith，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，

LiHua●称呼（Salutation）文章一般会给出●正文(BodyofLetter）①起首语

亮明身份，开门见山说意图(注意：英文书信不要写一些hello,hi之类的问候语)②正文部分，严格按照文章的提纲写(注意：如果内容较多，可以考虑分段)●结尾礼词（ComplimentaryClose）感谢客气不可少，期待回信成老套●签名（Signature）(文章一般都会给出）书信写作的格式及其要求：DearMr.Smith，●称呼（Salutation）OrganizationOrganization

MoodInamoderatemood!!

Content:CoveralltheinformationBettertoarrangethepassageaccordingtothegivenorderofthecontent.1）告诉他你的决定；2）陈述你的理由；3）表达你的谢意和歉意。Content:Coveralltheinformat开篇要直入主题开篇要直入主题高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件Content内容要完整注意内容的适当性Content内容要完整Focuson“your”feeling,whenyouwanttoresign.Content

内容要适当It'sachanceforyoutochooseafreshman内容要适当It'sachanceforyoutoLanguage:NochinglishorgrammaticalorspellingmistakesInaccordancewiththerequirementsofthecompositionWithexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatternsLanguage:NochinglishorgrammLanguage单词拼写需要加强：teach__________(p.t)limit__________(p.t)write__________(-ing)study__________(n.)taughtlimitedwritingstudyLanguage单词拼写需要加强：taughtlimitedIhavetoquitthisjobbeforeitandsomereasonsasfollows.I’dliketotrymybestinthisyearandgainasatisfiedresult.3.SoI’mafraidthatIhaven’tenoughtimetobeyourassistanteditor.4....butIhavetoquitthepositionforthosereasons.Firstly...5.Iwanttolearnavariousofknowledge.6.Andit’sobviouslythatIcanstilllearnmoreifIcontinuetowork.Correctthepossiblemistakesinthefollowingsentences.aresatisfyingdon’thavethefollowingvarietyobviousIhavetoquitthisjobbeforeIwillneverforgetthewonderfulmomentswehaveworkedtogether.I’llappreciateitifyoucouldagreemyrequest.ButIsupposedtoconcentrateonmystudynow.Correctthepossiblemistakesinthefollowingsentences.whenonamIwillneverforgetthewonder好的信件：

Comfortable读起来舒服

Persuasive有说服力好的信件：Polishthefollowingsentences.Idon’tthinkIcansucceedinthisjobanymore.IamwritingtotellyouadecisionthatIhavebeenstrugglingtomake.Ihavemadeupmymindtoquitmyjobasyourassistant.SinceIamasenior3studentnow,IhaveonlyoneyearleftbeforeIgraduateandentertheuniversity.Idon’tthinkIcanbequalifiedasyourassistantanymore.——AsgraduatingandenteringPolishthefollowingsentencesA.第五档(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。高考作文评分标准A.第五档(很好)：(21-25分)高考作文评分标准B.第四档(好)：(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。B.第四档(好)：(16-20分)Commentonthegivencompositionaccordingtowhatyouhavelearnedintheclass.Peerassessment:CommentonthegivencompositiSampleDearMrSmith,I'mwritingtotellyoumydecisiontoquitmyjobastheassistanteditoroftheschoolnewspaper.Asyouknow,IhopetopassthecollegeentranceexaminationtobeheldnextJune,soIwillhavetospendmoretimestudying.I'mafraidIcannotconcentrateontheworkanymore.SampleDearMrSmith,SampleHavingworkedastheassistanteditorforhalfayear,I'velearnedalotfromyou--notonlyEnglishbutalsotheattitudetowardswork.Ifindithardtoconveymygratitudeinwords.Thankyouverymuch.

IamverysorryformakingthedecisionandapologizetoyoufortheinconvenienceImightcausetoyourwork.Yours.LiHuaSampleHavingworkedastheOutstandingworks:OutstandingOutstandingworks:OutstandingAssignment小黄皮Page24书面表达。Assignment小黄皮Page24书面表达。Thankyou!Thankyou!Howtoimprovealetter?Howtoimprovealetter?全国卷高考英语作文基本评分标准1.篇幅：词数80

≦120,否则减去2分。

2.内容：

内容要点齐全注意词汇的数量

语法结构准确性

上下文的连贯性。

3.拼写与标点符号准确，不影响交际。

4.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。全国卷高考英语作文基本评分标准1.篇幅：词数80≦12书写有较大进步，总体来说书写认真，字迹较工整审题较认真，写作内容基本覆盖文章信息点Shortcomings:Goodpoints语言需要加强，基本表达错误较多。书写有较大进步，总体来说书写认真，字迹较工整Shortcom第二节：书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华，你为你校校报英文栏目主编外籍教师Mr.Smith担任了半年的助理编辑，你现在决定辞去这个职位。请你根据以下内容给他发一封邮件。

1）告诉他你的决定；2）陈述你的理由；3）表达你的谢意和歉意。注意：词数不少于100。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

第二节：书面表达（满分25分）AgoodletterContentMoodFormHandwritingLanguageAgoodContentMoodFormHandwrit书写有较大进步，总体来说书写认真，字迹较工整Goodpoints书写有较大进步，Goodpoints高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件DearMr.Smith，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，

LiHua●称呼（Salutation）文章一般会给出●正文(BodyofLetter）①起首语

亮明身份，开门见山说意图(注意：英文书信不要写一些hello,hi之类的问候语)②正文部分，严格按照文章的提纲写(注意：如果内容较多，可以考虑分段)●结尾礼词（ComplimentaryClose）感谢客气不可少，期待回信成老套●签名（Signature）(文章一般都会给出）书信写作的格式及其要求：DearMr.Smith，●称呼（Salutation）OrganizationOrganization

MoodInamoderatemood!!

Content:CoveralltheinformationBettertoarrangethepassageaccordingtothegivenorderofthecontent.1）告诉他你的决定；2）陈述你的理由；3）表达你的谢意和歉意。Content:Coveralltheinformat开篇要直入主题开篇要直入主题高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件Content内容要完整注意内容的适当性Content内容要完整Focuson“your”feeling,whenyouwanttoresign.Content

内容要适当It'sachanceforyoutochooseafreshman内容要适当It'sachanceforyoutoLanguage:NochinglishorgrammaticalorspellingmistakesInaccordancewiththerequirementsofthecompositionWithexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatternsLanguage:NochinglishorgrammLanguage单词拼写需要加强：teach__________(p.t)limit__________(p.t)write__________(-ing)study__________(n.)taughtlimitedwritingstudyLanguage单词拼写需要加强：taughtlimitedIhavetoquitthisjobbeforeitandsomereasonsasfollows.I’dliketotrymybestinthisyearandgainasatisfiedresult.3.SoI’mafraidthatIhaven’tenoughtimetobeyourassistanteditor.4....butIhavetoquitthepositionforthosereasons.Firstly...5.Iwanttolearnavariousofknowledge.6.Andit’sobviouslythatIcanstilllearnmoreifIcontinuetowork.Correctthepossiblemistakesinthefollowingsentences.aresatisfyingdon’thavethefollowingvarietyobviousIhavetoquitthisjobbeforeIwillneverforgetthewonderfulmomentswehaveworkedtogether.I’llappreciateitifyoucouldagreemyrequest.ButIsupposedtoconcentrateonmystudynow.Correctthepossiblemistakesinthefollowingsentences.whenonamIwillneverforgetthewonder好的信件：

Comfortable读起来舒服

Persuasive有说服力好的信件：Polishthefollowingsentences.Idon’tthinkIcansucceedinthisjobanymore.IamwritingtotellyouadecisionthatIhavebeenstrugglingtomake.Ihavemadeupmymindtoquitmyjobasyourassistant.SinceIamasenior3studentnow,IhaveonlyoneyearleftbeforeIgraduateandentertheuniversity.Idon’tthinkIcanbequalifiedasyourassistantanymore.——AsgraduatingandenteringPolishthefollowingsentencesA.第五档(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。高考作文评分标准A.第五档(很好)：(21-25分)高考作文评分标准B.第四档(好)：(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基