Unit1Readingforwriting建议信 高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

WritealetterofadviceLilyYinshengHighSchoolCyberAddictionBullyingSmokingLackofsupportfromfamilyDepressionPeer-PressureTeenagersmaymeetamountsofproplemsinsideandoutsideschool.Haveyoueverhadsuchproplems?Whatdidorwillyoudo?self-segregateturntoparentsaskforteaherswritetoAgonyAuntself-regulatetalktofriendsGreetingCloseSignatureBodySusanLuo,anadviserforteenagers,hasreceivedaletteraskingforsomeadvice.1.Readherreplyandgetthestructureoftheletter.DateGreeting

Whodidthewriterreplyto?Aworriedfriend.ReadingforstructureBodyWhydidMsLuowritethisletter?Toofferheradvice.ReadingforstructureWhatisWorriedFriend'sproblem?WhatareSusanLuo'sadvice?WorriedFriendthinksthathisfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.12WorriedFriendcantalktohisfriendabouthisbehaviourandencouragehisfriendtotrynewhobbies.2.Questions:1DoyouthinkMsLuo'sadviceisuseful?Whyorwhynot?

Perhapstheadviceis(not)useful,becauseitis....2Whatotherkindsofadvicewouldyougive?

IwouldtellChenLeithatheshouldspendhistimemoreproductivelywithaneyeonhisfuture.Hecouldlearncomputerprogramminginsteadofplayingcomputergames....Discussion3.Studytheorganisation:Findandmarkthepartsoftheletterthatmatchthefollowingpoints.AIknowwhattheproblemis.BIunderstandhowyoufeel.CThisismyadviceandreason(s).DIthinkmyadvicewillhelp.4.Studythelanguagefeatures:WhatexpressionsdoesMsLuousetomakesuggestions?Circlethem.Irecommendedthat....Ithinkyoushould....Whynot....Whydon'tyou....SomeusefulexpressionsforwritingIrecommendthatyou(should)dosth.Ithinkyou(should)dosth.Usefulexpressions1.I'msorry(that)youarehavingtrouble/difficulty/problemsin...2.It'smygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/adviceon...3.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...BeginningUsefulexpressions1.Herearemytips.First,...Second,...(Last,...)2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthatyoushould...3.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.4.Whenitcomestosuchasituation(说到种情况),Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushould...5.Whynot…?6.Itwouldbebetter/agoodideaif...BodyUsefulexpressions1.(Intheend,)Idohopeyouwillfindtheadvice/suggestions

practical(实用的)/useful/helpful.2.Ihopemysuggestionswillworkforyou.我希望我的建议会对你有用。CloseBeginning(开头):1.I'msorrythatyouarehavingtrouble/difficulty/problemsin...2.It'smygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/adviceon...3.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson...Body（正文）:1.Herearemytips.First,...Second,...(Last,...)2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthatyoushould...3.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Whynot(后接动词原形)…?6.Itwouldbebetter/agoodideaifyou...Close（结尾）:1.Intheend,Idohopeyouwillfindtheadvice/suggestionspractical(实用的)/useful/helpful.2.Ihopemysuggestionswillworkforyou.我希望我的建议会对你有用。Samplewriting10September2018DearXuTing,Youwrotethatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.

Itiscommonforteenagerstofeellonelywhentheyliveawayfromtheirparents.Tosolvetheproblem,

Ithink,firstofall,youcantryjoiningavolunteergroupthathelpspeopleinneed.Thiswillgiveyouachancetomeetandbearoundothers.Itwillalsohelpyourealisethatyouarenotaloneinhavingproblemsandthatmanyotherpeoplehaveproblems,too.Helpingotherpeoplealsomakesusfeelbetter.Besides,youcanalsoconnectwithyourparentsonline.Justbecauseyourparentsarefaraway,itdoesn'tmeanyoucan'ttalktothem.I'msurethatyou'llmakenewfriendsandgetachancetospeaktoyourparentsmoreoften.Thiswillhelpdriveaway(驱赶，赶走)yourloneliness.Bestwishes,Yours,SusanLuoDearTony，

I’msorrytohearthatyoufeelitdifficulttoaccustom/adaptyourselftonewschoollifeinAmerica.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.

Tobeginwith,learningEnglishwellisamust.OnlywhenyouspeakfluentEnglishcanyoufindmoreopportunitiestocommunicatewithothers.Secondly，you’dbetterlearntostudyindependently.

Meanwhile,neverhesitatetoturntoyourteachersforhelpwhenyouareintrouble.What’smore,

trytomakemorefriendsandtakeanactivepartinvariousactivities

organizedbyyourschool,whichwillnotonlyhelpyouremoveyourlonelinessbutalsomakeyourlifemoreinteresting.Ofcourse,

sometimesreadinginterestingbookscanalsogiveyougreatfun.Thiswillhelpdriveaway(驱赶，赶走)yourloneliness.

Idohopeyouwillfindtheadvice/suggestions

practical.Believeinyourselfa