正反对比观点写作

Writingpractice城镇职高：MrWangLead-in怎样写正反观点对比类的文章Everycoinhastwosides!Everythinghastwosides!Canyoutranslate?1.15%的人们认为不应该在公众场合禁烟。2.抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。Translate禁烟不应该禁烟15%认为我们不应该禁烟15%认为我们不应该在公共场所禁烟stopsmokingshouldn’t我们不应该禁烟we15percentofusthinkinpublicplaces.1.2.一种习惯抽烟是一种习惯抽烟是一种长期的习惯抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。ahabitSmokingislong-timethatcannotchangeimmediately.英语写作翻译时要注意抓住关键词，然后抓主干句子，再进行添枝加叶，表达完整的句子。英语句子的翻译步骤——Step1:找出主干(who-do-what)Step2:添枝加叶(how-where-when-why)BasicwritingskillsTrytotranslatethesentencesintoEnglishinyourtestpaper!Translate禁烟不应该禁烟15%认为我们不应该禁烟15%认为我们不应该在公共场所禁烟stopsmokingshouldn’t我们不应该禁烟we15percentofusthinkinpublicplaces.1.2.一种习惯抽烟是一种习惯抽烟是一种长期的习惯抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。ahabitSmokingislong-timethatcannotchangeimmediately.英语写作翻译时要注意抓住关键词，然后抓主干句子，再进行添枝加叶，表达完整的句子。英语写作基本步骤——Step1:关键词（keywords）Step2:基本句子(sentence)Step3:段落(passage)Thinking假如昨天你们班级以Nosmokinginpublicplaces?为题开了一次讨论会。请根据以下情况写一篇60字左右的报道，介绍讨论会的情况。结果15%认为不应该在公共场合禁烟85%认为应该在公共场合禁烟理由1、吸烟是个人自由。2、吸烟能提高工作效率。3、长期的习惯无法立刻改变。1、吸烟有害健康。2、吸烟浪费金钱。3、吸烟对环境和他人也造成了伤害。Step1：想出关键词1.15%的人们认为不应该在公众场合禁烟。

percentthinkstopsmokinginpublicplaces2.抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。

it’shardtochange3.吸烟对环境和他人也造成了伤害。

doharmtopeopleenvironmentStep2：写出基本句子1.15%认为不应该在公众场合禁烟。

15percentofusthinkweshouldnotstopsmokinginpublic.2.抽烟是长期的习惯无法立刻改变。

Peoplehavesmokedforsomanyyears,soit’shardforthemtogiveupsmoking3.吸烟对环境和他人也造成了伤害。

Smokingdoesharmtothehealthandenvironment.Step3：把句子连成段落15%认为不应该在公共场合禁烟1、吸烟是个人自由。2、吸烟能提高工作效率。3、长期的习惯无法改变。15percentofusthinkweshouldnotstopsmokinginpublicplace.Becausetheythinkthatpeoplehavetheirownfreedom/righttosmoke.Smokingcanimprovetheirwork.It’shardtogiveupsmokingforthosepeoplehavesmokedformanyyears.85%认为应该在公共场合禁烟1、吸烟有害健康。2、吸烟浪费金钱。3、吸烟对环境和他人也造成了伤害。85percentofusthinkweshouldstopsmoking.Because:Smokingdoesharmtopeople’shealthandtheenvironment.Smokingwillcostussomuchmoney.

15percentofusthinkweshouldnot____________________________(在公共场所禁止抽烟).Becausetheythinkthatpeople_________________________(有权利做…)smoke.Smokingcanim_____theirwork.Theyhavesmokedformanyyears,Soit’shardto____________(放弃抽烟)85percentofusthinkweshouldstopsmokinginpublicplaces.Because:Smoking_____________(对…有害)people’shealthandtheenvironment.Smokingwillcostus_____________(如此多钱).初步成文stopsmokinginpublicplaceshavetheirownfreedom/righttoprovegiveupsmokingdoesharmtosomuchmoney文章结构正反观点对比类的文章提出问题不同观点对比说明自己观点(根据要求，要求写才写)观点一：观点二：15percentofusthinkweshouldnotstopsmokinginpublicplace.85percentofusthinkweshouldstopsmokinginpublicplaces.基本结构理由：Becausetheythinkthatpeoplehavetheirownfreedom/righttosmoke.Smokingcanimprovetheirwork.It’shardtogiveupsmokingforthosepeoplehavesmokedformanyyears.理由：Because:Smokingdoesharmtopeople’shealthandtheenvironment.Smokingwillcostussomuchmoney.自己的观点（要求写就写不要求就不写）Inmyopinion…I(don’t)think…Iagree/disagreewith…提出问题Yesterdaywehadadiscussionaboutwhetherornotweshouldstopsmokinginpublicplaces.范文：

Yesterdaywehadadiscussionaboutwhetherornotweshouldstopsmokinginpublicplaces.

Eighty-fivepercentofusthinkitisnecessarytostopsmokinginpublicplaces.

Mostofusthinksmokingdoesharmtopeople’shealthandtheenvironment.Besides,peopleshouldnotspendsomuchmoneyonthecigarettes.

Meanwhile,aboutfifteenpercentofusdidn’tagree.

Intheiropinion,peopleshouldhavetheirownrighttodothethingstheylike,suchassmoking.Itisveryhardtogiveupsmokingforthosepeoplewhohavesmokedformanyyears.Andtheythinksmokingisusefulforpeopletoimprovetheirwork.Summery英语写作基本步骤——Step1:找出关键词（keywords）Step2:句子(sentence)Step3:段落(passage)正反观点对比类的文章提出问题不同观点对比说明自己观点(根据要求，要求写才写)Homework根据提