2023学年完整版SentenceImprovement设计

SentenceImprovement教学设计I：教案一、【教学目标】Bytheendofthelesson,thestudentswill1.learntheskillsofsentenceimprovementandconsolidatethelearnedvocabularyandsentencepatterns.2.practisetheintegratedskillsofwriting.3.arousetheinterestinEnglishwriting,andhopefullyfeelmotivated.【教学重点与难点】【教学重点】灵活运用所学高级句型改进英语写作中常见的简单句型和低级句型。【教学难点】能把句型改进的技巧运用到平时写作练习中，学以致用。【教学准备】worksheetsPPT【教学过程】1.Warm-upPleasereadthethreecompositionsTask1.Recommendsomeimpressivewordsorsentencepatternsandcorrectsomemistakesifthereareany.Task2.Supposeyouaretheteacher,givethemamarkandtelluswhy.Task3.Findoutsomecharacteristicsofoutstandingwriting.Fivecharacteristicsofoutstandingwriting:(高分作文的五大特性)1.senseoforder(条理性:段落完整，层次分明）2.accuracy(准确性:语法准确，用词精当）3.fluency(流畅性:层次清晰，行文连贯）4.conciseness&variety(简洁、多样性:语言简洁，不重复）5.ideologicalcontent(思想性:文章立意高，表达个人观点内容积极向上）2.Sentenceimprovementlistsomesuggestionsaboutmakingourwritingoutstandinganddosomepractice.Suggestionsformakingourwritingoutstanding:advancedwordsandphrases;（高级词汇）differentabundantsentencepatterns;（丰富的句式变化）correctconjunctions.（正确的连词选择）1.sentenceimprovementpracticePractice倒装倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。1.Timeissopreciousthatwecan’taffordtowasteit.Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.2.Wecanmaintainastableandharmonioussocietyonlywhentheoldageproblemiswellhandled.Onlywhentheoldageproblemiswellhandledcanwemaintainastableandharmonioussociety.3.Onecanfindsuchenthusiasmforapplyingforhostingthe2010WorldExpoinnootherplaceintheworld.Innootherplaceintheworldcanonefindsuchenthusiasmforapplyingforhostingthe2010WorldExpo.Practice强调句强调句：可以轻松地将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。1.Theproblemwasnotsolveduntilayearlater.Itwasnotuntilayearlaterthattheproblemwassolved.2.Theshortageofwatercanbesolvedonlywhenthesemeasuresareputintopractice.Itisonlywhenthesemeasuresareputintopracticethattheproblemwassolved.Practice介词结构with引导的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with结构。1.Thenationaleconomyisgrowingrapidly.ThelivingstandardsoftheChinesepeoplehavegreatlyimproved.Withthenationaleconomygrowingrapidly,thelivingstandardsoftheChinesepeoplehavegreatlyimproved.2.Myoldgrandfatherfellasleepinthesofa.Hehadabookonhisknees.Myoldgrandfatherfellasleepinthesofawithabookonhisknees.Practice分词巧妙地使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。1.Hewassatisfiedwiththeresultanddecidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.Satisfiedwiththeresult,hedecidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.2. Peopledonotrealizethatwaterresourcesontheeartharelimited,sotheywastemuchwatereveryday.Notrealizingthatwaterresourcesontheeartharelimited,peoplewastemuchwatereveryday.Practice定语从句使用定语从句，可使得句子更为紧凑。1.Somepeoplemaybeaddictedtonetsurfing.Thisdoesharmtothembothphysicallyandmentally.Somepeoplemaybeaddictedtonetsurfing，whichdoesharmtothembothphysicallyandmentally.2.Somepeopleenjoycompetitivesportsandtheymaytakeupballgames.Thosewhoenjoycompetitivesportsmaytakeupballgames.Practice名词性从句what引导的名词性从句：将动宾结构转化为此结构。1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.2.HegavemeaChristmaspresentandaheartfullofloveandamindofmyexistenceinit.WhathegavemewerenotonlyaChristmaspresentbutalsoaheartfullofloveandamindofmyexistenceinit.Practice一句多译法想一想，Ithink还有什么表达法？Theyhaveverydifferentopinionsabout…Inmyopinion,…I’veneverknownhimtoexpressanopinionaboutanythingPeople’sopinionsabout…varyfrompersontoperson.Itaketheattitudethat…Thechairmanexpressedtheviewthat………Conclusion:提高句子档次的小窍门：使用强调句，倒装句使用定语从句、名词性从句使用用分词短语合并句子使用介词短语合并句子使用用连接词连接句子使用不同结构和词汇…2.Paragraphimprovementpractice1.Naturalresourcesareverylimited.Theywillbeexhaustedinthenearfuture.Itisnottrue.Butitbecomesamajorconcernaroundtheworld.Thisisawidelyacceptedfact. Itisawidelyacceptedfactthatthereisamajorconcernaroundtheworldfortheexhaustionoflimitednaturalresourcesinthenearfuture,thoughitisunlikelytobetrue.2.Thelivingstandardsareimproving.Moreandmorepeoplebegintobuycarstomaketheirworkandlifebetter.Sotherearemoretrafficproblems.Withtheimprovementoflivingstandards,moreandmorepeoplebegintobuycarstomeettheneedsofworkandlife,therebyworseningthetrafficproblems.3.Thegovernmentshouldarousepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Itisthedutyofthegovernmenttoarousepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.It’sbetterforthegovernmenttoarousepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Whatthegovernmentshoulddoistoarousepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.3.CompositionimprovementpracticeNowstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinmanyways. Usually,apartyisheld.Bestfriendsandrelativeswillcometotheparty.Theyusuallybuyagift.Theyshowtheirbestwishes.Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestooanditisbecomingverypopular. ButIthinkthatit’sbettertohelpotherpeople.Weknowthatit’simportanttolearntohelpotherpeople.Helpingotherpeoplecandousalotofgood.Peoplewillhelpyoubecauseyou’vehelpedthemandyou’llbehappy…4.Extensionexerciseashomework. 请找一篇或数篇自己的作文，利用今天所学的方法，进行润色。II：教案设计说明 英语写作是综合运用英语能力的表现，要写好写作，不仅要掌握写作技巧，更要有牢固坚实的语言基础知识，然而由于各种原因，高三学生经