2023学年完整版Unit5Thepowerofnature备课资料(2)4

Unit5Thepowerofnature备课资料描写文是一种常用文体，它用准确、生动、形象的语言刻画描述对象的特点，使读者对所描写的事物能获得如见其形、如闻其声、如尝其味、如临其境的真实感。在进行这种文体的写作时要注意下面几点：1．准确选择描写角度根据实际需要选用合适的人称进行描写。因为不同的人称会影响写作内容的选择和写作目的的定位。2．灵活安排描写次序灵活地安排好描写的顺序，例如按照时间顺序、空间顺序或逻辑顺序等。3．恰当运用描写手法描写时应恰当地运用多样的表现手法，不要只是平铺直叙。具体、准确、生动、形象是描写文的语言特点，应根据需要恰当地运用比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法来进行描写。4．抓取典型特征在描写中应注意抓住有代表性的细节精心选材，要抓住特征，使重点突出、详略得当，一定要避免面面俱到的错误做法，尽可能在较小的篇幅中给读者留下深刻的印象。5．适当渗透情感在描述的时候恰当融入对所描写对象的主观感受可以引起读者的共鸣，从而起到画龙点睛、升华主题的作用。【常用句式】①...liein/on/totheeast/west/north/southof...②Locatedin...，...coversanareaof...③Situatedin...，...isparadisefor...④...islocated/situatedin/to/on...，coveringanareaof...⑤...hasbecomethemostpopulartouristattr－actionfor...⑥...beknown/famousfor/as...⑦Ithasapopulationof...，withahistoryof...⑧Theweatherheregetsneithertoocoldnortoohotalltheyeararound.⑨Ifyoucometo...foravisit，youwillhaveachancetoenjoy...⑩Atripto...willgiveyouaglimpseofthehappylifestyleof...eq\o(○,\s\up1(11))...，knownas...，attractsvisitorsfromallovertheworld.eq\o(○,\s\up1(12))Awalkaround...isafeastforyoureyes.习文练笔Usethenotesbelowtowriteaparagraphaboutthehotpoolsatlikethis：“WhenyouhavefinishedyourvisittoTianchi，don'trushareplentyofotherthingstoseeanddoinexample，youcanrelaxinthenearbyhotsprings...”Hotsprings.1)poolsheatedbyhotwateroutoftheground2)waterheatedbyboilingrocksintheground3)agroupofspringsinanareaof1000squaremetres4)somepoolsveryhot(over60℃)butothersverypleasantforbathing5)bathingsupposedtobegoodforhealth[思路点拨]本篇作文可以从以下三个方面入手。一、先概述长白山的位置和特色；二、详细介绍温泉的特点；三、归纳全文，点出天池温泉的魅力。[词汇热身]1．位于________________2．珍贵的____________3．占地……__________4．蜿蜒前进________________5．在……洗澡________6．吸引________7．变化________【答案】in/belocatedinone'swayin[句式温习]1．位于吉林省南部，长白山是中国最大的自然保护区之一。____________________Jilinprovince，Changbaishanisoneofchina'snaturepreservationzones.2．白头山的天池位于火山口处，里边碧水盈盈。Tianchionthewhite－headmountainisthecraterofvolcano，______________________．3．在白头山的北侧，有一组占地1000多平米的温泉。AtthenorthsideoftheWhite－headmountain，thereisagroupofhotsprings__________________________．4．在温泉里洗澡应该对身体有好处。____________thehotsprings____________begoodforhealth.【答案】inthesouthernwithbluewatersanareaofover1000squaremetresin；issupposedto[连句成篇]______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LocatedinsouthernJilinProvince，ChangbaishanisoneofChina'snaturepreservationzoneswithawholesomenaturalenvironmentandecosystemwithworldfamouspreciousanimals.TianchiontheWhite－headMountainisthecraterofavolcano，filledwithbluethenorthsideoftheWhiteheadMountain，thereisagroupofhotspringscoveringanareaofover1000squarespringshavewaterheatedbyhotwateroutofthegroundorboilingrocksinthewhiteriverswindtheirwayamongthehotrightbankswherethemouthsofspringsconcentrateareshroudedinhotmistyairalltheyearspringsvaryintemperature，withthehighestreaching82degreeC