U3 WRITING WORKSHOP 【知识建构+精讲精练】高一英语上学期 （北师大版2019必修第一册）

WRITINGWORKSHOPANEVENTDESCRIPTION

Unit3Celebrations北师大新版（2019）GetReadyforWritingI1．_____________n.事件；活动2．_____________n.描述，描写3．_____________adv.往楼下，在楼下4．_____________adv.哪儿也见不到5．_____________vt.挑选，选拔6．_____________vi.&vt.(使)平静，(使)镇定7．_____________n.制服8．_____________n.眼泪，泪水9．_____________adv.完全地10．____________n.信封11．awesomeadj.________12．albumn.________13．cuisinen.________14．humblyadv.________15．stockingn.________16．polen.________envelopeGetreadyforwritingPairWorkYouaregoingtowriteaboutacelebrationeventthatyouhavehadbefore.Discusswithyourpartner.1.Whatcelebrationdoyouwanttowriteaboutandwhy?2.Whatdetailsdoyouwanttoinclude?CelebrationeventsTimePeopleReasonsPreparationsFeelings…ⅡReadforWritingReadthedescription.Answerthequestions.1

Whosebirthdaywasit?2

Whatdidthefamilydotoprepareforit?3

Whatgiftdidthewritermake?4

HowdidGrandpafeelandwhatdidhesay?ItwasGrandpa’sbirthday.TheeventmadeGrandpaveryexcited.Hesaiditwas“awonderfulbirthdaycelebration”andthathewas“lookingforwardtomyeightieth,ninetiethandevenonehundredthbirthdaysalready!”Mumcookedspecialfood.TheyinvitedGrandpa’sfriends.ThewritermadeavideoofGrandpa’slifestoryforhim.\\为……做准备穿衣服收集照片令人惊喜地是一……就……充满……庆祝期待prepareforgetdressedcollectphotossurprisinglyassoonasfillwithcelebrate/celebrationlookforwardtoFindoutsomeusefulwordsandphrases.Placethephrasesinthecorrectorder.Thenadddetails.

Preparationsbeforetheevent Feelingsabouttheevent

Thebestpartoftheevent IntroductiontotheeventIntroductiontotheeventPreparationsbeforethe

eventThebestpartoftheeventFeelingsabouttheeventGrandpa’s70thbirthdaybirthdaylunch;gift(video)invitationtoGrandpa’soldfriends;whenGrandpaandhisfriendsappearedinanoldphotointheirschooluniformsexcited\AdverbsofTimeandMannerfirst/then/afterthat/finallyFirstIgotdressed.ThenIheadeddownstairs.luckily/amazingly/surprisingly/excitedlySurprisingly,theywereGrandpa’sbestfriendsfromsecondaryschool.Readthetextagain.Underlinethewordsusedtolinksentencesandparagraphs.Thenwrite2-3similarsentencesforyourwriting.UsetheSentenceBuildertohelpyou.SentenceBuilder\Structureandlanguage:Otherusefulwordsenthusiastic,thrilled,excited,interested,joyful,content/satisfied,disappointed,frustratedwonderful,awesome,fantastic,amazing,excellent,great,splendid,brilliant,marvelous,remarkable,striking,astonishing,incredible,extraordinary

Somewordsthatcanexpressfeelings:Somewordsthatcandescribeaparty:now,atpresent,recently,after,inthebeginning,tobeginwith,later,next,finally,immediately,suddenly,atthatmoment,assoonas,before,afterSomelinking/sequencewords:ⅢWritingComposeyourwriting:OutliningCompletetheoutlineofyoureventdescriptionbasedonthestructure.

why:abirthdayparty...where:house...when:August,lastyear...who:familymembersandfriendsfood,activities,gifts...Whathappenedduringtheparty?Wasitgood?excited,thrilled,happy,satisfied...ThebestpartoftheeventFeelingsabouttheeventPreparationsbeforetheeventIntroductiontotheeventComposeyourwriting:DraftingWritingHelpDescribinganEventItisimportantto:mentionthereasonwhyyouwanttodescribetheevent;writetheplace,time,occasionandpeopleoftheevent;useactionverbsandlinkingwordstoputthemintherightorder;describeyourfeelingsattheendoftheevent.Composeyourwriting:EditingEdityourdescriptioninpairs.AnEventDescriptionDoesthewritershowthemainideaofthepassage?Doesthewriterincludethetime,placeoftheevent?Doesthewriterdescribedetailsoftheevent?Doesthewriterdescribehis/herfeeling(s)?Doesthewriteruselinkerstoconnecttheseriesofactivities?HOMEWORK

假如你是李华，上周一你校举办了建校50周年纪念晚会。请你给你在美国的朋友Tom写一封电子邮件，向他介绍本次晚会的情况。要点包括：

时间：上周一

地点：会议厅

人物：所有的教师和学生以及部分毕业生

活动内容：校长做演讲(makeaspeech)；欣赏表演(performances)；唱校歌(AlmaMater)等。

Step1定结构Para1：介绍举办周年纪念日活动的情况(时间、地点、人物、起因)；Para2：详细叙述活动的过程；Para3：举办周年纪念日活动的感受。Step2用语言1．上周一，我校在会议厅举办了建校二十周年纪念晚会。

2．校长做了重要演讲，这使得我们为学校感到骄傲。

Ourheadmasterdeliveredanimportantspeechwhichmadeusfeelproudofourschool.LastMonday,ourschoolheldabigpartyinthemeetinghalltocelebratethefiftiethanniversaryofourschool'sfounding.3．老师和同学们表演了有趣而精彩的节目。

4．我和我的同学一起表演相声。

5．一些往届毕业生代表们演唱了一首歌曲来表达他们对母校的爱。

6．所有的人一起演唱校歌，将晚会推上了高潮。

Theteachersandstudentsgaveinterestingandwonderfulperformances.MyclassmatesandIperformedthecrosstalk.Somerepresentativesoftheformergraduatessangasongtoexpresstheirloveoftheiroldschool.AlltheperformerssangourAlmaMater,whichbroughtthepartytoaclimax.Step3形成文LastMonday,ourschoolheldabigpartyinthemeetinghalltocelebratethefiftiethanniversaryofourschool'sfounding.Alltheteachersandstudentsaswellassomeformergraduatestookpartintheparty.Thepartystartedat9amandlastedtill12am.Atthebeginningoftheparty,ourheadmasterdeliveredanimportantspeech,whichmadeusfeelproudofourschool.Thentheteachersandstudentsgaveinterestingandwonderfulperformances.MyclassmatesandIperformedthecrosstalk.Afterthat,somerepresentativesoftheformergraduatessangasongtoexpresstheirloveoftheiroldschool.Attheendoftheparty,alltheperformerssangourAlmaMater,whichbroughtthepartytoaclimax.Weallenjoyedthepartyverymuchandhadagoodtime.

Language

pointsⅤ

Adaughter’smarriageisquiteaneventforparents.女儿的婚姻对父母来说是一件大事。Accordingtothetimetable，thetrackandfieldeventswilltakeplacethisafternoon.根据时间表，田径比赛将在今天下午举行。［词汇复现］1eventn.

事件；活动；比赛项目【词语辨析】event，incident与accidentevent尤指重大事件或比赛项目。oneofthemajorsportingeventsoftheyear年度重大体育赛事之一incident既可指小事件，又可指政治上具有影响的事件或事变。ashootingincident

枪击事件accident强调偶然或意外发生的不幸的事故。

acar/plane/trainaccident汽车/飞机/火车事故选词填空（event/incident/accident）（1）Iwaswalkingalongthestreetlookingforaplacetoparkwhenthe_________happened.（2）Thisisoneofthemostimportant

inthehistoryofmankind.（3）Theserious

alongtheborderincreasedourfearsofthewar.（4）Althoughbadlyhurtinthe

，thedriverwasstillabletomakeaphonecall.（5）［词汇复现］Iwanttoknowthesporting

thatcatchthepeople’seyeinChina.（6）ThediscoveryofX-rayswasabig

inthehistoryofphysics.完成句子（7）Theteachertoldustolist

（最重要的事件）oftheyear.accidenteventsincidentaccidenteventsevent

themostimportantevents writeadescriptionof描写…… giveadetailed/general/briefdescriptionof

对……作详尽的/概括性的/简短的描述 beyonddescription无法形容，难以描述2descriptionn.

描述，描写，叙述，形容Herdescriptionsofthenaturalworldareverygood.

她对自然界的描写非常出色。Shegaveabriefdescriptionoftheamazingclassroom.她对这个很棒的教室作了简短的描述。

Ifoundtheplayboringbeyonddescription.我觉得这部戏乏味到无法形容。【词语积累】describevt.

描写，描述，叙述，形容单句语法填空（1）ThebeautyoftheWestLakeis

description.（2）Hegavemeadetailed

（describe）ofhisvisittoLondonintheemail.完成句子（3）Tom

（对……作了概括性的描述）hismonthsoftravellingaroundCanada.（4）Thebeautyofthesunsetonthetopofthetemplewas____________________（难以描述）.beyonddescription

gaveageneraldescriptionofbeyonddescriptionHewasselectedtodesignaposterfortheexhibition.他被选出来为这个展览设计一张海报。Hehadhopesofbeingselectedforthenationalteam.他有望入选国家队。Hewasselectedastheleaderofthefootballteam.他被选为足球队的队长。Theyselectedthewinnerfromsixfinalists.他们从六名决赛选手中选出了获胜者。3selectvt.挑选，选拔；选择selectsbtodosth挑选某人做某事

select...for...为……选择……select...as...挑选……作为……

select...from...从……中选出……【词语积累】【词语辨析】select，choose，elect与pickselect指“精心挑选”。choose指一般意义的“选择”。elect指“投票选择”。pick指随意或慎重地“选择”。单句语法填空（1）

（select）amobilephoneforpersonaluseisnoeasytaskbecausetechnologyischangingsorapidly.（2）Theplayers

（select）fromthewholecountryareexpectedtobringushonorinthissummergame.（3）WeranoutofwoodandIwasselected

（go）andfindmore.（4）Yorkwasselected

thesitefortheresearchcentre.（5）Sheselectedherfavouritebook

hercollectionsandreadittoherchildren.（6）Theamberwhich

（select）hadabeautifulyellow-browncolourlikehoney.选词填空（select/choose/elect/pick）（7）Thereisnodoubtthatwewill

thebestplayerstotakepartinthecomingOlympicGames.（8）Thereareseveralbooksforyouto

from.（9）Allthepeopleagreedto

himchairmanofthemeeting.（10）Heishelpinghismotherto

strawberries.Selectingselectedtogoasfromwasselectedselectchooseelectpick（1）vi.&vt.（使）平静，（使）镇定搭配：calm（...）down（使）平静下来，（使）镇定下来Theexcitedfootballfanscalmeddownatlast.激动的足球迷们最终平静了下来。Calmyourselfdown；thereisnoneedtofeelupsetaboutit.让你自己平静下来，没有必要为此事心烦。（2）adj.冷静的，沉着的；平静的，无风的；安静的搭配：keep/stay/remaincalm保持镇静Itriedtokeepcalmandjustignorehim.我尽力保持镇静，不去理睬他。Afterawholenight’sstorm，theseabecamecalmagain.一整晚的暴风雨过后，大海重归平静。4

calmv.&adj.【词语辨析】calm，quiet，still与silentcalm指风平浪静或人镇静。quiet安静，指没有噪音、吵闹声或心里不烦躁。still静止不动，指没有声音或动作。silent沉默，指没有声音或不讲话。选词填空（calm/quiet/still/silent）（1）Couldyoukeepthekids

whileI’monthephone?（2）Hewas

foramoment，andthenbeganhisanswer.（3）Keep

.Thephotographerisready.（4）［词汇复现］Emergencylineoperatorsmustalwaysstay________andmakesurethattheygetalltheinformationtheyneedtosendhelp.（5）Whenfacingdanger，oneshouldkeep

；whentakenphotosof，oneshouldstay

；whensomeoneelseisasleep，oneshouldkeep

；wheninclass，oneshouldn’tkeep

abouttheteacher’squestions.完成句子（6）Movedbywhatshesaid，hecouldhardly

（平静下来）.（7）Hetookafewdeepbreathsto

（使自己平静下来）.quie