2023届高考英语二轮复习：书面表达训练（建议信）（25张PPT）

书面表达训练

（建议信）建议信建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。建议信的常用结构如下：1．首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。2．中段：围绕问题，婉转地提出有针对性的建议。注意充分考虑对方的实际情况。3．尾段：简单予以希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。建议信开头常用句式：1.Thankyoufortrustingme.It'smypleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/advice/tips.2.I’msorrytohear/learnthat......3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon……andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.表达建议常用句式：1.IfIwereyou,Iwould……2.AsfarasIamconcerned,……/Inmyopinion……3.Whynot……?4.Itwouldbeagoodideaif……5.Inthefirstplace/Firstly/First……Secondly/Second……Lastbutnotleast(最后)……CompositionsfromStudentTimes假如你是李华，你的笔友黎明来信说他的父母工作变动刚转入一所学校，由于性格内向，生活经历与同学差异很大等原因，在新学校没有知心朋友，很苦恼。请根据以上提示，给他写封回信，谈谈你对如何交友的看法。注意：词数100左右翻译下列句子：我很高兴了解到你现在一所新学校就读(learn)

Iamgladtolearnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool.如果你现在没有知心朋友，不用着急(if)Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.虽然你是一个性格内向的男孩，而且生活经历与你目前同学差异很大，只要你遵循下列提示不是没有可能交上好朋友的。(although，aslongas)Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.首先，如果你能与同学同甘共苦，就会交上朋友。(firstofall)Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyousharetheirjoysandsorrows.第二，你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.最后，一旦有了朋友，你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。(once)Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhaveafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshipwithactsofkindness.希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.连句成篇DearLiMing,Iamgladtolearnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool,whichisagoodchanceforyoutoturnoveranewleaf.（适当增加的细节，高级表达）Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyoucansharetheirjoysandsorrows.Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.(增加细节，闪光句子)最后，一旦有了朋友，你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。(Lastbutnotleast;once)Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhaveafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshipwithactsofkindness.希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.=Hopefully,youwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.=Itishopedthatyouwillfindtruefriendship.(变换多种句式，增加闪光点)DearLiMing,Iamgladtolearnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool,whichisagoodchanceforyoutoturnoveranewleaf.Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyousharetheirjoysandsorrows.Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhaveafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshipwithactsofkindness.Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.仿写下面是一个中学生给某报编辑部写的一封信仔细阅读并就信的内容以编辑的名义给此中学生回一封信。DearEditor，Iamanactivegirl，andIspeakandlaughloudlyintheclassroomlikeaboy.Idon'tcareaboutsmallmatters.Onthecontrary，myneighbor，thegirlwhositsnexttome，speaksquietlyanddarenotdothethingsIoftendo.Icanunderstandthis.WhatIcan'tstandisthatsheoftengetsangrywithmeaboutsmallthings.HowcanIgetalongwithher?Yours，Sunny.[注意]1.书信格式要规范；2.给出至少三条建议(如谈心，相互理解，谈论共同话题，分享快乐等等)[思路分析]

写作时应注意下面几点：1．确定文体：这是一篇应用文，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3．主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。[词汇热身]

1．与某人交朋友________________2．依我看________________3．与某人谈心________________4．参加某人...活动____________makefriendswithsbasfarasIamconcernedhaveatalkwithsbjoinsbin...

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1．相互理解对你们两人都很重要。____________________________________foryoutwo.2．我认为邀请她参加你和你的同学们的各种活动也很好。Ithinkit'sbetterforyoutoaskher________________________________________________________________________3．与她分享你的喜怒哀乐。________________________________________________________________________.4．真心希望这些建议能对你有帮助。________________________________________________________________________toyou.1.Understandingeachotherisveryimportant

2.tojoinyouandyourclassmatesinallkindsofactivities3.Shareyourhappinessandsadnesswithher

4.Itrulyhopetheadvicecanbeofgreathelp连句成篇

DearSunny，It'sverygoodthatyouwanttomakefriendswiththisgirl.Inmyopinion，you'dbetterfirsthaveaheart­to­hearttalkwithher，becauseunderstandingeachotherisveryimportantforyoutwo.Furthermore,Ithinkit'sbetterforyoutoaskhertojoinyouandyourclassmatesinallkindsofactivities，suchasbirthdayparties，goingoutforawalk，discussingsomefashionabletopics，andsoon.Besides，helpingeachotherisalsoveryimportantforbothofyou.Justsharehappinessandsadnesswithher.AndIbelieveshewillunderstandyouintimeanditiscert