卷珠帘 翻译赏析

RollingtheBeadCurtainforMissingLoverGroup1AshortplayTranslation&AnalysisAdaptationAshortplay镌刻好每道眉间心上

Everypaintingengravedintheheart画间透过思量

Portrayingtheyearningalot沾染了墨色淌

Tearsdripping,inkshading千家文都泛黄

Thousandsofbooksyellowing夜静谧窗纱微微亮

Onlycandlelightflickersinsilentnight拂袖起舞于梦中徘徊Dancingindreamjustlikeyesterday相思蔓上心扉

Lovesicknessgrowsdaybyday她眷恋梨花泪

Pearblossomtearswheretostay静画红妆等谁归

Forwhomsheattireandawait?空留伊人徐徐憔悴

Leavethefairladywitheraway啊胭脂香味Ahthescentofherrouge卷珠帘是为谁Rollingthecurtainforwhosedelay啊不见高轩Ahnosignofthecarriage夜月明此时难为情Brightmoonnightwithnolovetoday细雨落入初春的清晨Drizzleinanearlyspringmorning悄悄唤醒枝芽

Awakingquietlythebuds听微风耳畔响

Listening,thebreezeechoing叹流水兮落花伤

Signingforthefallingflowersandstream谁在烟云处情深长ForwhomthemelodyisfloatingawayCriteriaAimPoemTranslation&AnalysisCriteria“从心所欲，不逾矩”——朱光潜在《诗论》中谈艺术，许渊冲借鉴来谈文学翻译“意美，音美，形美”（Atranslatedverseshouldbeasbeautifulastheoriginalinsense,insoundandinform.）——许渊冲X.Y.Z《汉英对照唐诗三百首》使读者“知之，乐知，好之”

(makethereaderunderstandandenjoytheversionanddelightinit)——许渊冲X.Y.Z《汉英对照唐诗三百首》AimRollingtheBeadCurtainforMissingLoverRollingtheBeadCurtainforMissingYouPortraytheLover(tothetuneofJuanzhulian)Title镌刻好每道(眉间)心上画间透过思量沾染了墨色淌千家文都泛黄夜静谧窗纱微微亮

EverypaintingengravedintheheartPortrayingtheyearningalotTearsdripping,inkshadingThousandsofbooksyellowingOnlycandlelightflickersinsilentnight(拂袖)起舞于梦中徘徊相思蔓上心扉(她眷恋)梨花泪静画红妆等谁归空留伊人徐徐憔悴

DancingindreamjustlikeyesterdayLovesicknessgrowsdaybydayPearblossomtearswheretostay

Forwhomsheattireandawait?Leavethefairladywitheraway啊胭脂香味卷珠帘是为谁啊不见高轩夜月明此时难为情

AhthescentofherrougeRollingthecurtainforwhosedelayAhnosignofthecarriageBrightmoonnightwithnolovetoday细雨落入初春的清晨悄悄唤醒枝芽听微风耳畔响叹流水兮落花伤谁在烟云处琴声长

DrizzleinanearlyspringmorningAwakingquietlythebudsListening,thebreezeechoing

SigningforthefallingflowersandstreamForwhomthemelodyisfloatingawayAdaptation珠帘卷起为谁深情，执笔描绘，怎琢君之眉宇相思汇。寄红豆，难无处，恋字何如一见故。无声夜，何暮光，穿纱潜入闺房却。