大学英语CET62周一写作

四六级攻略--写作

DavidLiuBACKTOTHEPASTCHANGETHEFUTURE参与多，通过少1报名积极，准备不足2能力？准备？

策略？3写作满分为15分，分5个等级：2分、5分、8分、11分、14分。2分-----条里不清，思路混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错，且多数为严重错误。5分----基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重的语言错误。8分---基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯。语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。11分---切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分---切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好基本上无语言错误。3.1

写作评分标准评分标准漂漂亮亮（14分）、清清爽爽（11分）、马马虎虎（8分）、糊里糊涂（5分）、一塌糊涂（2分）。直观标准我们目标是……清爽

（11分）structurecontentlanguage清晰地文章脉络

充实切题的文章内容

丰富精确的语言Essaywriting高分要求OnlineShopping1．现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2．网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3．我的建议12011.6

首段：3句话=背景+事实描述+举例说明

ThepastdecadehaswitnessedthehugeadvancementofInformationTechnology(背景描述).AndshoppingthroughtheInternethasgainedgreatpopularityamongwebsurfers（主题事实描述）.Forinstance,itcanbenoticedthatanincreasingnumberofyoungsterspurchaseclothes,books,electricalequipmentandthelikeonTaobao,EBayandAlibaba.（举例法扩展段落）(或：AcaseinpointistheGroupPurchasing,whichattractsthousandsofcustomers.举例+定语从句）2段：问题分析4句话=

主题句+危害1+危害2+危害总结Inspiteoftheconvenienceandlowpriceofthisshopping,othersarguethatwecannotturnablindeyetoitsnegativeaspects.Firstly,theypointoutthatthequalitymaynotbeassuperiorasitisdescribedandsometimes,itispossibleforcustomerstobuyfakecommodities.Inaddition,manycustomersfindittroublesometomakeachangewhentheyarenotsatisfied.Ashasbeennoted,thesedoexertbadimpacts.尾段：解决措施（即我的看法）3句话=

总说+建议+展望未来Asacustomer,Iamconvincedthateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoenhanceit.(总说看法)Tobespecific,itissuggestedthatregulationsandrulesshouldbeworkedouttoscrutinizeonlineshopowners.(或者：Specifically,shoppersarewell-advisedtobealertwhenpurchasingonline.)Apromisingonlineshoppingisjustawaitingusifwesparenoefforttodoso.possibleBelikelyto;beaptto;chancesarethatBECAUSEThanksto;Owingto,inthat;BeattributedtoveryExtremely;Highly;dramaticallyenormouslyIMPORTANTcritical;essential;imperative;crucial…词汇积累与替换More…think

----believe,argue,claim,insist,maintain,assert,beconvinced,contendharbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,Frommyownperspective,Embracethestereotypethat…disagree----frownon,disapproveof,objecttosolve----tackle,address,resolve,copewithdevelop----foster,cultivate,nurtureadvantage----merit,privilege,blessingdisadvantage----demerit,defectreason----contributeto,resultin,ascribe…to..,attribute…to…,derivefrom..,

so----thus,therefore,asaresult,asaconsequence,consequently,notsurprisinglyshow----depict,describe,reveal,demonstrateGood----fantastic,adorable,amazing,incredible,magnificent,fascinatingspectacular,although----inspiteof,regardlessof,Like---beinterestedin,sthappealstosb.,sthexertanfascinationonsb.Payattentionto---captureone’sattentionRemember---bearinmindRich---financiallywell-offEveryoneknows/asweallknow,----It’satruthuniversallyacknowledgedthat,…

Itcanneverbedenied,…

itisundeniablethat…

Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…

例如，Forexample,Forinstance,Agoodcaseinpointisthat…Icanthinkofnobetterexampleofthepointthantothefactthat…开拓视野tobroadenthehorizon扩大知识面

toexpandone’sscopeofknowledge

启迪心灵enlightenthemind培养了强烈的责任感

cultivateastrongsenseofresponsibility提高了社会能力和竞争力promotesocialskillsandcompetence增加生活的情趣

increasethepleasuresoflife

解除紧张和焦虑relievethetensionandanxiety（bothfromthesocietyandtheschoolwork）面临困难beconfrontedwiththedifficulty重视attachmuchimportance/significanceto经不起推敲

can’tholdwater提高大众的环保意识arousepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection日益激烈的社会竞争theincreasinglyfiercesocialcompetition

DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写，2.出现这种现象的原因是…3.为了改变这种状况，我认为…。12010.6 Nowadaysalotofstudentsdon’tpaydueattentiontospellinginEnglishStudy. Therearemanyreasonsfor…First,…Second,…Third,… Inmyopinion,inordertochangethissituation,Ithink,…

Thepastdecadehaswitnessedtheacceleratedadvancementofeducation,particularlyEnglishteachingandlearning.Recently,however,ithasbeennoticedthatalargenumberofstudentsfailtopaydueattentiontospellinginEnglishlearning,

whichhasarousedapublicconcern,especiallyforthosewhohavebeenconfrontedwiththisproblem.(53words)引出话题Thepastdecadehaswitnessedtheacceleratedadvancementof________.And________hasgainedgreatpopularityamong_______,especially….Recently,___________hasbecomeapublicconcern,especiallyforthosewhohavebeenconfrontedwiththisproblem.（问题解决型）3.Itisnoexaggerationthat______hasbecomeagraveproblemthathascapturedwidespreadattentionfromallwalksoflife,especiallyamong….主题段落reason…Therearemanyfactorsthatmayaccountforthephenomenonof_____，but,frommyperspective,threeofthemdeserveourconcern.Tostartwith,_________(缘由1).Furthermore,___________(缘由2).Eventually,___________(缘由3).Admittedly,theymightbenefitusinashortterm.Inthelongrun,unfortunately,theyarelikelytodousharminmorethanoneway（社会问题）.2.Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthisphenomenon,but,frommyperspective,thefollowingarethemostcriticalones.3.Buteverythingcanbedividedintotwo.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat_________(主题的缺陷1).Tomakemattersworse,_________(主题的缺陷2)趋势段1.Werethesituationtocontinue,_______wouldbeboundtosufferahugelossinallaspects/benefitalotinallaspects.2.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,Itwouldcertainlyexertanegative/positiveeffecton______.解决段

Consideringthesituation,itisimperativeforustotakeeffectivemeasuretotacklethisproblem.Foronething,strictlawsshouldbemadetopunishthosewho(dosth)____.Foranother,thepublicshouldbeeducated(not)to___.Onlyinthiswaycanwewitnesstheidealsceneinwhichallthepeoplecan(enjoytheirlife)totheutmost/Chinesedream,tobuildamoderatelyprosperoussocietyandrealizenationalrejuvenation,willcometrueinthenearfuture.(81words)Insummary,regardingtheissueinquestion,itisamusttotakeavarietyofeffectiveandpracticalmeasurestoreversethetrend.Tobeginwith,lawsandregulationsshouldbesetuptoprotecttheenvironmentoftourists’attractions.Moreover,touristsmustfostertheawarenessofprotectingtouristattractionsandbehavethemselvesproperly.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeourenvironmentcleanerandmorebeautifulinthelongrun.Judgingfromtheampleevidencepresented,wecansafelydrawaconclusionthattoppriorityshouldbeattachedtoreversingthetrend.Tobeginwith,lawsandregulationsshouldbesetuptoprotecttheenvironmentoftourists’attractions.Moreover,touristsmustfosteralertnesstoprotecttouristattractionsandbehavethemselvesproperly.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeourenvironmentcleanerandmorebeautifulinthelongrun. Undoubtedly,awarenessofanissuecannotbeidentifiedwithactions.Wearesupposedtoappealtoauthoritiesconcernedtoundertakevariouspublicitycampaignssuchasbenefitcommercials,handoutsandseminarstoputanendtostaradmiration.Inaddition,itisamustforindividualstocultivateanddeveloprightconsciousnessandpracticeandavoidtheadverseimpactofidolworship.Onlybyenforcingthesemeasures,canweeffectively,efficiently,andeventuallyfurtherimprovethecurrentsituationandhaveabrightandbrilliantfuture.

1ThepastdecadehaswitnessedtheacceleratedadvancementofInformationTechnologyandbloghasgainedincreasingpopularityamongpeoplealmostfromallwalksoflife,especiallytheyoungsters,evenlittlekids.2Asisvividlyrevealedinthedrawing,onthesofasitsthefather,whoisaskinghisdaughteraboutherschool,whilethelittlegirl,tohissurprise,tellshimtoreadallaboutitonherblog.3Simpleasthedrawingis,itsintendedmeaningisnothingbutsignificantandenlightening.(83words) ….2Recently,aninterestingpicturehasbeenarousingtheattentionofpeoplefromallwalksoflife.3Asisvividlyandadequatelyrevealedinthedrawing,onthesofasitsthefather,whoisaskinghisdaughteraboutherschool,whilethelittlegirl,tohissurprise,tellshimtoreadherblog.4Simpleasthedrawingis,itsintendedmeaningisnothingbutsignificantandenlightening.旅游之余

Thepastdecadehaswitnessedtheacceleratedadvancementofindustryoftourism.Andtravellinghasgainedgreatpopularityamongpeoplefromallwalkoflife,especiallyyoungsters.2Recently,aninterestingpicturehasbeenarousingtheattentionofpeoplefromallwalksoflife.3Asisvividlyandadequatelyrevealedinthedrawing,onasmallboatsittwopersons,whoarethrowingleftoversintothewatercarelesslywhiletheyareenjoyingtheirholiday.4Simpleasthedrawingis,itsintendedmeaningisnothingbutsignificantandenlightening.(87words)

Itisabundantlyevidentthatthepictureaimsatdrawingourattentiontothisundesirablephenomenoninoursociety:litteringanddestructiontothetouristattractions.Therearemanyfactorsthatmayaccountforthisphenomenon，but,frommyperspective,twoofthemdeserveourconcern.First