2023年英语雅思范文

Nowadaysitismoreconvenientandeasierforpeopletotraveltoothercountries,isitdevelopmentapositiveornegativeeffect?

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Neverbeforewastravellingtoaliencountriessoconvenientandpopularasinthiscentury.Thisphenomenonispartiallyattributedtoimprovedtechnologyandcheapflighttickets.Facingthistravelfrenzy,someareconcernedthatitwillbringabouttoomanysideeffectswhilstothersinsistthatisshouldbesupportedandmaintained.

Admittedly,cross-bordertravelhasmoredownsidesthanone.Firstly,thecarbondioxideplanesemittedisreportedtobedisproportionatelymorethanthatemittedbyothertransportationmeans.Thecarbondioxidewillleadtoozonelayerthinningandtherebyincreasetheprobabilityofpeoplecontractingskincancer.Moreover,beingeasierandmoreconvenienttotravelamongcountriesmeansthatsomecriminalscouldfleetoothercountriesaftercommittinghideouscrime.Thiswillposeathreattolocalsecurityandcommunitystability.

However,thedownsidescannotovershadowitsupsides.Forstarters,travellingaroundtheworldwithmoreeasecouldexpandindividuals’horizonsandstimulatetheirloveoflifeandtheywillbemoreproductiveatworkinthefuture.Moreover,companiescouldvisitforeignmarketsmoreconvenientlythanbeforeandasaresult,theycouldlocatepotentialtargetmarketandsellgoodsthereorbuymaterialsfromthereifthepriceiscompetitivelyenough.Ifacompanycouldflourishthisway,employeeswillbenefitandthesocietyinwhichcompaniesareoperatingwillbemorestableandharmonies.Lastbutnotleast,ifmoreandmorepeopleareaffordedopportunitiestogotoothercountries,therewillbelessmisunderstandingandmorerespectamongcountries.Allthesewillcontributetoadiversebutharmoniousculture.

Tosumup,despitethenumerousdrawbacksmentionedabove,travellingtoothercountrieswithmoreconvenienceandeaseis,byandlarge,apositivedevelopment.Introduction

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