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2014年管理类联考系统班英语写作编讲:第一部分：应用文IamwritingtoinformyouaboutmydecisiontoresignfrommycurrentIamwritingtoinformyouthatIhavedecidedtoresignfrommycurrentIhopeyouwillconsidermyrequest,andIapologizeforanyinconveniencesImighthaveIwishallofyouaprosperous范TwomonthsagoyougotajobasaneditorforthemagazineDesigns&Fashions.Butnowyoufindthattheworkisnotwhatyouexpected.Youdecidetoquit.Writealettertoyourboss,Mr.Wang,linghimyourdecision,statingyourreason(s),andmakinganapology.DearMr.IamwritingtoinformyouaboutmydecisiontoresignfrommycurrentThankyouverymuchforhavinggivenmethisopportunitytotakesuchapromisingpositioninsuchabest-sellingmagazine.However,afterthetwomonths’work,Ihavefoundthatmycharacterdoesn’tmeettherequirementofthisposition.What’smore,theshortageofprofessionalknowledge,bothindesigningandediting,hasbadlyinfluencedmyperformanceindailyworkandmy aldevelopmentinthefuture.Therefore,IdecidedtoquitthispositionaftercarefulIhopeyouwillconsidermyrequest,andIapologizeforanyinconvenienceImighthavecaused.Iwishallofyouaprosperousfuture.LiMingIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoprepareforasuccessfulYouhaveaskedmeforsomeadviceonhowtoprepareforasuccessfulinterviewandIwilltrytooffersomeusefulsuggestions.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals Goodluck!Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals Yourpromptattentiontomysuggestionswouldbehighlyappreciated.范文一DearYouaskedmeforsomeadviceonhowtoprepareforasuccessfulinterviewandIwilltrytooffersomeusefulsuggestions.Firstofall,findoutalltheinformationyoucanaboutthe beforeyougototheinterview.Secondly,practiceyouranswerstocommonquestionsandmakealistofquestionstoask,too.Itwillmakeyoufeelmoreconfidentandrelaxed.Thirdly,trytomakethebestimpression:dressappropriay,sellyourstrengths,arriveearly,beenthusiastic,shakehandsfirmly,beanactivelistener,situpstraightandmaintaineyecontact.Finally,donotforgettosay“thankyou”aftertheinterview.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.GoodSincerelyLi范文二 Writealettertoyouruniversitylibrary,makingsuggestionsforimprovingitsDearSirorIamafrequentuserofthelibrary,andwouldliketoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforthehelpyouofferme.IamwritingtheletterinpurposeofofferingsomehelpfulmendationstoupgradethequalityofyourFirstly,agreatmanystudentsexpresstheirfrustrationwithourlibraryinthatthereareusuallylonglineswaitingforassistance.Secondly,sincecomputersareusedbyallmajorlibrariestostreamlinecataloguing,weshouldhaveaccesstotheInternetviacomputers.Lastly,Ishallbemuchobligedtoyouifyoucouldkindlyrecealltheoutdatedfacilitiesandprovidemoreconveniencetoreaders.Ihopeyouwillfindtheproposalspractical.Yourpromptattentiontomysuggestionswouldbehighlyappreciated.LiMing道歉IamwritingthislettertoapologizefortherecentproblemsthatIhaveIamwritingtosaysorryfortherecentproblemsthatIhaveOnceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.HopeyoucanacceptmyIsincerelyhopethatyouwillkindlyacceptmy范文Directions:YoujustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggagethatyouforgettoreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writehimaletterto1)makeanapology,and2)suggestasolution.DearI'mwritingtoapologizeforhavingforgottentoreturnamusicCDtoyouwhenIleftCanada.IwasinsuchahurrythatIpackedeverythinginmyluggagewithoutcheckingcarefully.HadIpaidmoreattentionthen,Iwouldn'thavemadesuchastupidmistake.NowsomethingmustbedonetosolvetheproblembecauseIunderstandyoucherishtheCDenormously.Icaneithersendittoyoubyexpressmailoralternativelycompensateyouatareasonableprice.Ifyoudonotmind,ImaybringitbacktoyounexttimeIgotoCanada.Pleaseletmeknowwhichsolutionyoupreferatyourearliestconvenience.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologies.Yourssincerely,LiMing询问IwouldbegratefulifyoucouldsendmesomeinformationIamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithsomeinformationIamwritingthislettertoinquireaboutsomeinformationconcerningthefollowingYourpromptattentiontothisletterwouldbehighlyIamlookingforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestThankyouforyourconsiderationandIamlookingforwardtoyour范文Directions:Youaregoingtostudyataforeignuniversity.Writealetterinquiringaboutthespecificinformationasregards modation,feesandqualificationsthere.DearSirorIama studentwhowishestopursuefurtherstudyatyouruniversity.Intostartmycoursenextsemester,soIamwritingthislettertoinquiresomeinformationconcerningthefollowingaspects.First,howmucharethetuitionfees?ThoughIintendtobeself-supporting,Iwouldbeinterestedtoknowifthereareanyscholarshipsavailableforinternationalstudents.Second,IwonderwhatqualificationsIneedtofollowacourseatyouruniversity,nowIhavegotamasterdegreeina university,isitenough?Third,asregardsto modations,ifpossible,Iwouldliketohaveasingleroom,butifsingleroomsareexpensive,IwouldbewillingtoIamlookingforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestYourssincerely,LiMing请求IamwritingthisletterinthehopethatyouIamwritingthislettertoaskwhetheryoucanhelpmewithmyYourpromptattentiontothisletterwouldbehighlyIamlookingforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestThankyouforyourconsiderationandIamlookingforwardtoyour范文Directions:YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshouldspecifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourn.DearSir,I’mateacherofRenminuniversityofandI’dliketocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotepartofyourprovince.So,Iwouldbemostgratefulifyoucouldsendmeinformationregardingsuchachildwhohasmetthefollowingstandards:First,hemustbeverypoorandtrulyinneedofhelp.Second,hemusthavethestrongdesiretoimprovethingsaroundhim.Third,hemustbehealthy,happyandoptimistic.Lastbutnottheleast,hemustbewillingtoreturntohishometowntodosomethingforitaftergraduationfromIwouldsendhimmoneyeveryyearfromthisyearonuntilhefinisheshishighereducation.Yourpromptattentiontothisletterwouldbehighlyappreciated.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.LiMing信IamwritingtoyoutocominIamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionToimprovethesituation/solvetheaboveproblem,itisadvisableforyoutotakethefollowingmeasures:…IhopethattheabovesituationwillbeimprovedassoonasIrequestyoutobekindenoughtosolvetheproblemassoonas范文Directions:Youfoundsomethingwrongwiththeephonebillyouhavereceivedfromthelocalpostoffice.Youmadeacalltoinquireaboutthis;however,the whoansweredthecallwasveryrude.Writealetterofcominttothemanagerofthepostoffice,exiningthesituationandgivingyoursuggestionsforimprovement.DearSirorIamwritingtocominaboutthebadattitudeofoneofyourstaffIreceivedmyephonebillforthepreviousmonthfromyouandthoughtthereweresomeerrorsincalculation:Ihadbeenoverchargedfortwooverseascalls.However,whenIcalledyourComintsDepartment,thegirlwhoansweredmyphonewasveryrude.Foronethingsheinterruptedmecontinually;foranother,sheevensaidthatthefaultwasmyown.Needlesstosay,suchawayofdealingwithcustomersisunacceptable.Iwouldliketosuggestthatthegirlinquestionshouldbedisciplined,andinstructedontheproperwaytodealwiths.ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIamlookingforwardtoyourreply.LiMingIamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeIwouldliketoexpressinthislettermyheartfeltthankstoyouIamgratefultoyouImustthankyouagainforyourgenerousAgain,IwouldliketoexpressoursincerethankstoThankyouagainforyour范文Directions:YouhavejustcomebackfromtheU.S.asamemberofaSino-Americanculturalexchangeprogram.WritealettertoyourAmericancolleagueto1)expressyourthanksforhis/herwarmreception;2) ehim/hertovisit induecourse.DearIamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltappreciationtoyouforyourwarmreceptionduringmyparticipationintheculturalexchangeprograminyourcountry.YourgeneroushelpmadeitpossiblethatIhadaverypleasantstayandachancetoknowAmericanculturesbetter.Besides,IthinkitisanhonorformetomakefriendswithyouandIwillcherishthegoodwillyoushowedtomewhereverIgo.IdohopethatyouwillvisitonedaysothatIcouldhaveanopportunitytorepayyourkindnessandrefreshourfriendship.Again,IwouldliketoexpressoursincerethankstoZhangWeiIamwritingtoinviteyouIamwritingtoaskwhetheryouwouldbewillingtoIwouldfeelhonoredifyoucouldcomeIamlookingforwardtoyourparticipationWewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewith范文DearMr.WeknowthatyouareanexpertonAmericanli ture.AsEnglishmajors,ourstudentswouldliketoknowsomethingonAmericanli ture.Wewouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldgiveatalkon“ContemporaryAmericanLi ture”tostudentsoftheEnglishDepartmentonSaturday,June4.Ifthissubjectdoesn’tsuityou,anyothersimilartopicwouldbe 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Dailyforanassistanttothesalesmanager.Iam26yearsold,marriedwithason.IamnowworkingasasecretaryintheJohnson.Havingbeeninthispositionforthreeyears,Iamgoodatpublicrelations.ButIamnowlookingforapostwhereIcanusemyknowledgeofbusinessandmarketing.MyEnglishisgood:IhavepassedtheCollegeEnglishTestBand6.ThankyouforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardtohearingfromYoursLi范文二DearSirorIamwritingthislettertoinquireaboutthepossibilityofbeingacceptedasagraduatestudentmajoringinenvironmentalscienceinyouruniversity.IamastudentinBeijingUniversity,expectingtograduatewithaBachelor’sdegreethissummer,andmymajorisenvironmentalengineering.Ihavecompletedalltherequiredundergraduatecourseswithsatisfactoryscores.OfficialcopiesofmyTOEFLandGREscoresarebeingsentfromtheofficesconcerned.Three mendationlettersarealsobeingsentbymyprofessors.Idonothavefundstofinancemyeducation;therefore,Iwanttoapplyforfullfinancialsupportfromtheuniversitytocovermytuitionandlivingexpenses.Ilookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Pleasedonothesitatetocontactmeifmysupportingsarenotenoughforconsiderationofmyapplication.Youcancontactmebye-mail.ThankyouforyourkindassistanceinthisLiMing通Directions:Youaresupposedtowriteforthepostgraduateassociationanoticetorecruitvolunteersforaninternationalconferenceonglobalization.Thenoticeshouldincludethebasicqualificationforapplicantsandtheotherinformationwhichyouthinkisrelevant.Donotsignyourownnameattheendofthenotice.Use“postgraduateassociation”instead.范文Toimprovestudents’abilityandenrichextracurricularactivities,thepostgraduateassociationisrecruitingvolunteersforaninternationalconferenceonglobalizationtobeheldinBeijingonApril7,2010.Tobeginwith,applicantsshouldhave nationality,astrongprofessionalspirit,cheerful alityandbeagedunder35.Inaddition,candidatesmusthaveoutstandingskillsatEnglishlisteningcomprehensionandtheabilitytospeakandEnglishfluently.Finally,studentswithrelevantprofessionalexperiencesarepreferred.ThepostgraduateswhoareinterestedintakingpartinitmaysignupwiththemonitorsoftheirclassesbeforeFebruary1,2010.Everybodyis etojoininit.January9,2010课堂练Directions:Youareaskedtowritealettertoturndownanofferwhenyougettwosuchoffersforyourapplication.Youneedtoincludespecificreasonstosupportyourrefusal.Directions:ZhangWeiisorganizingabusinessmeetingwithanother 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eandprovidesomesuggestionsfortheircampuslifehere.（一）写作必备经典句It--ItisobviousItisobvioustomostofus,inparticulartheyoungerones,thatSVOItiscommonly/generallybelieved/recognizedthatSVOnoItgoeswithoutanyslightestquestion(doubt)thatItcanbesaidwithmuchcertaintyandconfidencethatIthasbeenrepeatedlypointedoutbysomeauthoritativesourcesthatSVOItgoeswithoutsayingthatSVOTolthetruth/Tobehonest/Tobemoreexact/Toputitinamoreaccurateway,As--AsfarasIamaware,Asiswell-knowntothegeneralpublic,Asisoftenmentionedbysomeexperts,Therebe--Thereisnodenying(thefact)thatThereisnodoubtthatwhich--SVO,whichisofgreatimportance(benefit)toourlife(society)SVO,whichisofgreatharmtoourlife(society)Itisthat强调结构7．Only状语放句首,句子采用部分Itistimethat主语+did该做…的时候了What--WhatmattersisthatWhatneedstobeemphasizedratherthanoverlookedhereisthatWhatIhavetopointedouthereisthat（二）现象观点Thesedays/Nowadays,thereisanincreasinglyhottopicamongthegeneralpublicconcerningthephenomenonthat .Whenitcomestothisissue,people’sviewsvaryfrom .Somepeopleareinfavorof ,whilestillsomeothersholdanegativeattitudetoit.Frommypointofview,itismorereasonabletosupportthefirstopinionratherthantheItisnotdifficultformetoputforwardsomeargumentstoillustratemystandpoint.Tobeginwith,.(BaseduponarecentInternetsurvey,about%of)What’smore, Baseduponwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Idoholdthat ratherthanencouraged.TherelevantshouldtakeimmediatemeasurestoputanendtoWheneveritcomestothisissue,therewillspringupawidevarietyofWheneveritcomestothisissue,differentpeopleholddifferentopinionsduetotheirdistinctbackgroundsandvalues.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminclinedtosupporttheformer/latterAsfarasIamconcerned,thelatterviewpointseemsmoreconvincingandmoreappealingMyargumentscanbesummarizedasfollows.Thesedays,oneofthehottesttopicsarousinggeneralconcernisdriveafterThesedays,thereisanincreasinglyhottopicamongthegeneralpublicconcerningdriveafterNowadays，thereisawidespreadconcerninoursocietyaboutthe eBaseduponwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Idoholdthat ratherthandiscouraged.Therelevantshouldyapositiveroleinguidingthistrend.Thereisnodoubtthatpeoplewillhavediverseviewsonthesameissuebutmystandpointisclearandwellfoundedintheprecedingdiscussions.Therefore,Ibelievethatbeencouragedmadebetter.（支持）Thereisnodoubtthatpeoplewillhavediverseviewsonthesameissue,butmystandpointisclearandwellfoundedintheprecedingdiscussions.Therefore,Ibelievethatbediscouragedor范文Thesedays,thereisanincreasinglyhottopicamongthegeneralpublicconcerningthephenomenonthatprivatecarsare ingmoreandmoreprevalentin.Whenitcomestothisissue,people’sviewsvaryfrom .Somepeopleareinfavoroftherapiddevelopmentofprivatecars,whilestillsomeothersholdanegativeattitudetoit.Frommypointofview,itismorereasonabletosupportthefirstopinionratherthanthesecond.Itisnotdifficultformetoputforwardsomeargumentstoillustratemystandpoint.Tobeginwith,itgoeswithoutsayingthatdeveloprivatecarscanboostandpromptthelocaleconomytodevelopmorerapidly.What’smore,ifconditionspermit,owningacarcanmakeusworkmoreefficiently.Onemorepointthatcan’tbeignoredisthatprivatecarswillmakeourlifeemoreconvenient.WithacarwecangotoceswheretheregularbusesandtrainscannotBaseduponwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Idoholdthattherapiddevelopmentofprivatecarsshouldbeencouragedratherthandiscouraged.Therelevantshouldyapositive提高Thesedays,oneofthehottesttopicsarousinggeneralconcernisdriveafterdinking.Accordingtothedatagivenbytherelevanternment,about89%ofthedrivershavesuchexperiences.Somereallykeenenthusiastsgosofarastomakeahabitofit.Needlesstosay,thisphenomenonwillcontinueforawhileinthefuture.Whenitcomestothisissue,people’sviewsvaryfrom .Somearguethatit’snormalandacceptabletodriveafterdrinking.Theybelievethattheyareabletodrinkmuchwineandalittlecannotmakethemstoned.Inaddition,theyholdthattheyownexcellentdrivingskillsandwinewillnotinfluencetheirperformanceintheslightest.However,thereareotherpeoplewholookatthisphenomenoninquiteanotherway.Forthem,itisofutmostdangertodrinkbeforengsuchathingasdriving.Besides,drunkendriverscanbringaboutmuchharmtothemselvesorsomeothersocialproblems.Therefore,immediatemeasuresshouldbetakentoputanendtothecurrentsituation.Justasacoinhastwosides,soit’snaturalforpeopletohavediverseideasasregardsthesameissue.SofarasI’mconcerned,thelatterviewpointseemsmoreconvincingandmoreappealingtome.Inotherwords,drinkbeforedrivingshouldbediscouragedorevenbannedinoursociety.Theconcernedshouldyanactiveroleineliminatingthis附加版（适合两个事物之间选择Thesedays,oneofthemostcontroversialtopicsarousinggeneralconcernisthechoice .Whenitcomestothisissue,people’sviewsvaryfrom Somepeopleprefer ,andregarditasthemostimportantpartoflife.Butotherpeopledeemtheirfirstchoicetobemade.SofarasI’mconcerned,thefirst/secondviewpointseemsmoreconvincingandappealingtoItisnotdifficultformetoputforwardsomeargumentstoillustratemystandpoint.Tobeginwith,.(BaseduponarecentInternetsurvey,about%of)What’smore, Though,aseverycoinhastwosides,it’shardtodenytheotherchoice,mychoiceisstillclearandchoice,andthusourlifeandsocietywillbemadebetter.课堂练不同的人持有不同的看法，请你的观点。原因/利弊/措施分Thesedays,thereisahottopicamongthegeneralpublicconcerning.Accordingtothedatagivenbytherelevanternment,about_percentof(havesuchexperiences).Thisphenomenon,withoutquestion,hasarousedwideconcern.Amongthemedia,wecanfindalotofrelevantdiscussions.Somedrivingfactorsthatcontributetotheabove-mentionedphenomenonmaybesummarizedasfallows.Firstandforemostofall,.(BaseduponarecentInternetsurvey,

% )What’s .Onemorepointthatcan’tbeignoredis.Baseduponwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Idoholdthatthisphenomenonshouldbediscouragedratherthanencouraged.Therelevantshouldtakeimmediatemeasurestoputanendtothistrend.Onlyinthisway,Ifirmlybelieve,willourlifeandsocietybemadebetter.Baseduponwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Idoholdthatthisphenomenonshouldbeencouragedratherthandiscouraged.TherelevantshouldyapositiveroleinguidingthistrendOnlyinthiswayIfirmlybelievewillourlifeandsocietybemadebetter.（支持）Nowadays，thereisawidespreadconcerninoursocietyaboutthe eAswecanseefromthesituation,job-hophas eacommonphenomenonamongthegeneralpublic.Accordingtoanewspapersurvey,about55%percentofthegraduateshavechangedtheirjobinthefirstyearsoftheiremployment.Somereallykeenenthusiastsgosofarastomakemorethanonechanges.Needlesstosay,thistrendwillcontinueforawhileinthefuture.Thesedays,oneofthehottesttopicsarousinggeneralconcernisdriveafterdinking.Accordingtothedatagivenbytherelevanternment,about89%ofthedrivershavesuchexperiences.Somereallykeenenthusiastsgosofarastomakeahabitofit.Needlesstosay,thisphenomenonwillcontinueforawhileinthefuture.Thesedays,thereisahottopicamongthegeneralpublicconcerning.Whenitcomestothisissue,people’sviewsvaryfrom .Somepeopleareinfavorof,whilestillsomeothersholdanegativeattitudetoit.Frommypointofview,thisphenomenonisquitenormal(abnormal).maycomedowntothreemajorones.Thereisnodoubtthatthistrend/phenomenonmayhavesomenegativeeffectsonourItgoeswithoutsayingthatthenegativeeffects canbeseenclearlyinfollowingSofarasI’mconcerned,IbelievethatthistrendwillresultinsomenegativeThereisnodoubtthatthistrend/phenomenonmayhavesomepositiveeffectsonourItgoeswithoutsayingthatthepositiveeffectsofcanbeseenclearlyinthefollowingConsideringthepossiblenegativeaspectsofthisphenomenon/trend,weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasuresasfollows.,Itisobviousthathasadvantagesaswellasdisadvantages.Generallyspeaking,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.Firstofall, makespeople’severydaylifemoreconvenient.Inaddition, connectsitsuserswiththeoutsideworld.Witha people’slifewillbegreatlyenriched.Nevertheless,itisapitythateverycoinhastwosidesandthedisadvantagesof can’tbeignored.Tobeginwith,.Tomakematterworse,ismostlikelytoaddtoyourdailyConsideringthepossiblenegativeaspectsofthistrendwemaycomeupwithsometentativesuggestionsasfollows.Ontheonehand,theconcernedshouldmakerelevantrulesandregulationstoguidethistrend.Ontheotherhand,thepublicshouldbeeducatedtobemoreself-consciousOnlyinthesewaysIfirmlybelieve,willourlifeandsocietybemadebetter.(适范文Thesedays,thereisahottopicamongthegeneralpublicconcerningthephenomenonthatmoreandmorepeopleprefertoraisedogsinthecities.Accordingtothedatagivenbytherelevanternment,about70percentofthefamilieshavedogs.Thisphenomenon,withoutquestion,hasarousedwideconcern.Amongthemedia,wecanfindalotofrelevantdiscussions.Thereisnodoubtthatthistrendmayhavesomenegativeeffectsonoursociety.Firstandforemostofall,raisingdogsmaypollutetheenvironment.Wecanoftenseedogsdroptheirwasteinpublicceswhentheyarewalkedoutdoors.What’smore,withtoomanydogsinpublicces,casesofdogsattackingpeoplearenotrarenow.Onemorepointthatcannotbeignoredisthatthebarkingofdogsmaydisturbthequietneighborhood.（第二段危害）Baseduponwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Idoholdthatthisphenomenonshouldputanendtothistrend.Onlyinthiswaywillourlifeandsocietybemadebetter.图表Asisshowninthediagram/graph/chart/table,somedramaticchangeshavetakencewithregardtothenumber(percentage)ofinthepastseveralyears.Accordingtothedatagiveninthediagram,wecanseethatthenumber(percentage)ofwasonasteadyrise/declineallthetime.Intheyearof,itwasonlyabout,whilewithinnomorethanyears,itwentup/downtonearly in.Somedrivingfactorsthatcontributetotheabove-mentionedchangesmaybesummarizedasfollows.Firstandforemostofall,.(BaseduponarecentInternetsurvey,about%of)What’smore,.Onemorepointthatcan’tbeignoredis Baseduponwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayreasonablypredictthatwiththerapidandfurtherdevelopmentofoursociety,thenumber(percentage)of willkeepincreasinginthe ingyears.(中立的结尾)Whatisshowninthediagram/graph/chart/tableaboveshowsusclearlythatdramaticchangeshavetakencewithregardtointhepastseveralyears.Asisdepictedinthediagram/graph/chart/tableabove,somedramaticchangeshavetakencewithregardto inthepastseveralyears.Asisshownclearlyinthetable,somedramaticchangeshavetakencewithregardtothewaypeoplespenttheirholidaysinthepastseveralyears.In2000,63%ofpeoplespenttheirholidaysathome,whilethefiguredecreasedconsiderablyto24%in2009.Atthesametime,thenumberofpeoplechoosingtravelingrosesharplyfrom37%in2000to76%in2009.Asisclearlyshowninthediagram(chart)/table,collegestudents’consumptionmannersvaryfrom .Accordingtothedatagiveninthediagram(chart)/table,wecanseethat50%ofthecollegestudentsareusedtosavingasmuchastheycan,thosewhooftenspendtheirmoneywithoutanynaccountforabout12%,andtherestoftenmakeanbefore最后一段可以替换的段落Baseduponwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Ibelievethesechangesareabnormalandwillexertnegativeeffectsonthesociety,sotherelevantshouldtakeimmediatemeasurestopreventthecurrentsituationfromgettingworseOnlyinthisway,Ifirmlybelieve,willourlifeandsocietybemadebetter.（的结尾段）Baseduponwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Ibelievethesechangesarequitenormalandwillexertpositiveeffectsonthesociety.TherelevantshouldyapositiveroleinTakingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemayreasonablypredictthatthesituationwillcontinueforquiteawhileinthe ingyears.Andifthischangecanbekeptandguidedproperly,ourlifeaswellasoursocietywillbemadebetter.（中立的结尾段）范文:Asisshowninthediagram,somedramaticchangeshavetakencewithregardtothenumberofrecruitmentofMasterofEngineeringinthepastseveralyears.Accordingtothedatagiveninthediagram,wecanseethatthenumberofrecruitmentofMEwasonasteadyriseallthetimeIntheyearof_1998_,itwasonlyabout2500,whilewithinnomorethan7years,ituptonearly35,000inSomedrivingfactorsthatcontributetotheabove-mentionedchangesmaybesummarizedasfollows.Firstandforemostofall,withtherapiddevelopmentof economyandsociety,theswithspecificabilitiesarebadlyneeded,especiallyinhigh-techindustries.What'smore,MEcanenablepeopletofindahigh-payingjobeasily.Itissaidthatnearly100%jobhunterswithMEcangetanidealpostinnowadays.Onemorepointthatcan’tbeignoredisthattheconceptionoflife-studyhasbeencommonlyacceptedbysomany youngpeoplethatmostofthemchoosetostudyfurtherafterafewyearsofgraduation.Baseduponwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayreasonablypredictthatwiththerapidandfurtherdevelopmentofoursociety,thenumberofrecruitmentofMEwillkeepincreasingin ingyears.课堂练分析可能原因（事业、不喜欢小孩、养育孩子的费用等2008 2009国产品 日系品 美系品 Directions:Writeanessaybasedonthefollowingchartaboutpeople’sperceptionofshopwebsites.Inyourwriting,youshouldinterpretthechart,giveyourYoushouldwriteabout150wordsontheANSWERSHEET.(15对购物的认知分（四）一、英语写作常用therapiddevelopmentofourtheremarkableimprovement/steadygrowthofpeople’slivingadvancedscienceandbefacedwithnewopportunitiesandItiscommonlybelieved/recognizedtheinevitableresultofsocialarousewidepublicconcern/drawwidepublicThereisnodenying(thefact)就……达到一reachanabsoluteconsensusadaptoneselftothedevelopmentofoursociety/beadaptedtothedevelopmentofourrealizeone’sdream/makeone’sdreamcomeya