初中英语九年级主题作文【知识框架+佳作赏析+能力提升】介绍人物

主题：介绍人物导读本综合训练的主题是介绍人物.这是同学们所熟悉的日常话题,常有以下英语写作命题形式：介绍自己,可以用于演讲等场合；介绍他人,如家庭成员、老师、朋友、同学或心目中的英雄等,并表达感恩、喜爱或敬佩之情等.题目回放一同学们都知道,老师在我们的学习生涯中扮演着不可或缺的角色.请以Myfavoriteteacher为题,用英语写一篇短文,根据要点进行描述.写作要点：1.Whatdoeshe/shelooklike?2.Whydoyoulikehim/her?3.词数90左右；4.可适当增加细节及要点以外的内容,使行文连贯；5.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名.审题指引1审体裁：写人的作文,属于记叙文.2审内容：介绍自己最喜爱的一位老师,表达对老师的喜爱及感激之情.3审时态：以一般现在时为主.4审人称：以第三人称为主.框架设计开头：介绍自己最喜爱的老师,引出主题.中间：着重说明为什么最喜欢这位老师.结尾：表达感激和难忘之情.段落素描1.Firstparagraph:Thereareanumberofteachersinmylife,butwhatimpressesmemostis...(...)2.Thebody:Iusedto...MyEnglishteacher...Thankstoherhelp,I...(...)3.Lastparagraph:Iamluckytohavesuchaniceteacher,andIwillloveherforever.(IoftenthinkaboutmyEnglishteacher,whoencouragedmeandhelpedmealotinmystudies.)(...)范本淬炼MyfavoriteteacherThereareanumberofteachers①whohaveleftmedeepimpressions.However,myEnglishteacherismyfavorite.Iusedtoshownoconfidence,and②neverdaredtoraisemyhandtoanswerquestionsinclass.MyEnglishteacherwaskindtoand③patientwithme.Sheoftenencouragedme,especiallywhenIwasintrouble.Thankstoherhelpandencouragement,Ihavebecomemoreconfidentand④amwillingtoexpressmyideasinclass.Iamveryluckytohavesuchaniceteacher.Iwillrememberher⑤forever.①who引导定语从句.②neverdaretodosth.,从来不敢做某事.③(be)patientwithsb.,对某人有耐心.④bewillingtodosth.,愿意做某事⑤forever,永远.亮点点评1.文章段落设计合理,层次分明.开篇点题介绍作者最喜爱的老师,中间主体段落集中说明喜爱老师的原因,结尾再次扣题并表达自己的情感.2.文章长短句错落有致,尤其是采用定语从句和状语从句等句式,体现了作者的语言驾驭能力.3.词汇、短语丰富,如使用usedto,shownoconfidence,daretodosth.,bepatientwith,beintrouble,thanksto,bewillingtodosth.,express等,为文章增色.题目回放二你校的校刊向全校学生征集英语稿件.请以“感恩”为主题,用Thankyou,my...作为题目,写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍一下你最感恩的人,并说明原因.审题指引1审体裁：本文是一篇写人的作文,属于记叙文.2审内容：描述自己要感恩的人,比如自己的妈妈,说明为何感恩.3审时态：以一般现在时为主.4审人称：以第一人称为主.框架设计开头：点题,说明“我”对妈妈的感恩之情.中间：主体段落记述妈妈为“我”做的令“我”感激的事情.结尾：再次表达“我”的感激之情.段落素描1.Firstparagraph:Nomatterwhereweare,wewillbearinmindthosewhohelpedus,and...Inmymind,mymotheris...(...)2.Thebody:Mymothertakesgoodcareofmeeveryday.WheneverIamintrouble,she...(...)3.Lastparagraph:Imustthankmymotherforhercareofme.Iwill(...)范本淬炼Thankyou,mymother①Nomatterwhereweare,wewillbearinmindthosewhohelpedus,andneverforgettheirkindness.Inmymind,mymotherisoneofthosetowhomImust②expressmyheartfeltgratitude.Mymothertakesgoodcareofmeeveryday.③WheneverIamintrouble,sheisalwaysthefirsttocomfort,encourageandhelpme.Thisgivesmemuch④confidence,andhelpsmegetoutoftrouble.Imustthankmymotherforhercareofme.Iwill⑤sparemytimetohelpherwiththehouseworksothatshecanhavearest.Besides,Iwillworkharderatschoolandtryto⑥makegreaterprogressinmystudies.①nomatterwhereweare,无论我们在哪里.②expressmyheartfeltgratitude,表达我衷心的感谢.③whenever,每当.④confidence,信心.⑤sparesb.'stimetodosth.,腾出某人的时间做某事.⑥makegreaterprogressinsth.,在某方面取得更大进步.亮点点评1.文章紧扣主题,首段点题说明感恩母亲,第二段叙述母亲对作者的关爱,尾段总结并表达感恩和回馈.文章布局合理,层次分明.2.灵活运用状语从句、定语从句等句式,避免句式单一.3.文章衔接自然,使用nomatter...,inmymind,besides等衔接语,有效连接段落和句子.4.文中运用了丰富、精准的短语,如nomatterwhere,bear...inmind,heartfeltgratitude,comfort,helpsb.getoutoftrouble,sparesb.'stimetodosth.等,增强了文章的可读性.素材宝库1.好词妙语tothebestofmyknowledge据我所知playavitalrolein...在······中扮演重要角色touchsb.'sheart触动某人的心扉aslongas只要sharejoysandsorrows同甘共苦atthebeginningof...在······之初developagoodrelationshipwith...与·····建立良好关系bearinmindthosewhohelpedus记住那些帮助我们的人expressmyheartfeltgratitude表达我衷心的感谢2.提分佳句Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情.AsfarasIamconcerned,anexamplemeanspoweranddirections.就我而言,榜样意味着力量和方向.Sheplayedanimportantroleinmygrowthandlitupmywaytosuccess.她在我的成长中扮演着重要的角色,照亮了我的成功之路.Atruefriendgivesyouahandandtouchesyourheart.真正的朋友对你施以援手并触动你的心扉.Friendsarelikebooks-Youdonotneedmanyofthemaslongastheyaregood.朋友如书,贵在好而不在多.Atruefriendnotonlysharesyourjoyandhappiness,butalsosharesyourdifficultiesandworries.真正的朋友不仅分享你的欢乐与幸福,而且分担你的困难与忧愁.Honestyisthemostbeautifulgiftthatapersoncangivetoanotheratthebeginningoffriendship.诚实是一个人在友谊之初能给对方的一个最漂亮的礼物.Oneofthesecretsofbeinghappyistotrytodevelopagoodrelationshipwiththosearoundyou.快乐的秘诀之一是努力与你周围的人建立良好的关系.写作预热句式变换1)Ihaveafriend.HisnameisAndy.(合并成一个含定语短语或定语从句的句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________2)Ihavetofacechallenges.Myfriendwillsupportme.(改写成一个含whenever引导的从句的复合句)____________________________________________________________________________________________3)Iamthankfultothosewhohelpedmeinmylife.Iamespeciallythankfultomymother.(用especially合并句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________4)Ihaveevermetmanyunforgettableteachers.ThemostunforgettableoneismymiddleschoolEnglishteacher.(合并成一个含定语从句的复合句)____________________________________________________________________________________________5)Tomisverybravetofaceallthechallenges.(①用enoughtodo转换句子；②用so...that...转换句子)①__________________________________________________________________________________________②__________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1)IhaveafriendwhosenameisAndy./IhaveafriendwiththenameofAndy.2)WheneverIhavetofacechallenges,myfriendswillsupportme.3)Iamthankfultothosewhohelpedmeinmylife,especiallymymother.4)ThemostunforgettableteacherIhaveevermetismymiddleschoolEnglishteacher.5)①Tomisbraveenoughtofaceallthechallenges.②Tomissobravethathecanfaceallthechallenges.实战练笔I.每个人的生活都离不开家庭.请以Myfamily为题,写一篇英语作文介绍自己的家庭.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文：MyfamilyMynameisDaMing.IamfromaChinesefamilywithsixpeople.Everymemberofmyfamilyisbusyworkinghardeveryday.Mygrandparentsworkonafarminmyhometown.Myfather,anengineerinNorthwestChina,ishelpingtobuildapowerstation.MymotherworksasanEnglishteacher.Mybrother,whoisfiveyearsolderthanme,studiesinoneofthetopuniversitiesinChina.Iamajuniorhighschoolstudent,andIamtryingmybesttoachievemydreamofstudyinginatopuniversity.Thisismyfamily.Welivehappilyandloveeachother.II.我们心目中的英雄,可能是人人敬佩的名人,也可能是我们身边的亲人或朋友.请以Aheroinmyheart为题,写一篇90词左右的英语短文.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________