攻略03 句式选择优秀

2021年高考英语提分策略之写作满分攻略03句式选择优秀满分攻略攻略一特殊句式彰显水平强调句突出重点强调句型的灵活运用不仅有助于增强表达效果，突出要强调的重点，更能彰显考生对英语表达的把握能力。其基本结构为：Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分。•（2019•天津高考）Itisyourdetailedexplanationonthetopicthatwillappealtomemost.就是你对这个话题详细的解释最吸引我。倒装句平衡句子在写作中，倒装句型应用比较广泛，涉及的句型主要包括部分倒装和全部倒装。•OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasbygettinginvolvedinthecompetitionthatIgainedmoreselfConfidenceandenjoyedthepleasureofteamwork.只有在那时我才意识到通过参与比赛，我更加自信，享受到了合作的乐趣。•（2019・全国卷口满分作文）FollowingthespeechisaonehourlectureonthehistoryofChinesemusic.演讲之后是一小时的中国音乐历史讲座。省略句简约不简单状语从句的省略形式是写作中最为常用的高级句式，结构为when、while、once/if、unless/though、although等+doing/done/todo。•（2018・浙江高考满分作文）Ifgiventhejob,I'llbesuretobeaqualifiedvolunteer.如果能得到这份工作，我一定会成为一名合格的志愿者。攻略二委婉地道突出风格虚拟语气和被动句式可以使语气委婉，表达地道，在写作中要善于利用。•（2019•北京高考）Theimportanceofworkingwithourownhandswasstressedbyourteacher.我们的老师强调了用我们的双手劳动的重要性。•（2019・浙江高考）Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistance,Iwouldnothavemadesuchrapidprogress.要不是你的帮助，我就不会取得如此快的进步。•（2018・全国卷口满分作文）Anysuggestionsarehighlyappreciatedandwewillmakeproperadjustmentsaccordingly.非常感谢任何建议，我们会据此做出适当的调整。攻略三三大从句丰富句式实用“定”语，先声夺人定语从句关系代词who、whom、whose、that、which、as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。关系副词when、where、why引导的定语从句和“介词+which/whom”引导的定语从句更能让阅卷老师眼前一亮。•（2018・天津高考满分作文）Itisknowntousthatyouareanintelligentboywho/thathasgreatfancyforroboticstechnology.我们知道你是个聪慧的喜爱机器人技术的男孩。•（2017・天津高考满分作文）Asyouknow,thefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecorner,forwhichIamburiedinpreparing.如你所知，期末考试即将来临，为此我一直埋头备考。四大“名”句，内涵丰富——名词性从句名词性从句是写作中常用的高级表达，包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句。•（2018・浙江高考满分作文）OnarrivingattheLondonAirport,whatmademeworriedwasthatIfoundmywalletlost.到达伦敦机场，我就发现我的钱包丢了，这使我倍感焦虑。•Wordcamethatyouarecomingtoourschoolasateacherandwearelookingforwardtoyourcoming.消息传来说您要来我校当老师，我们都盼望着您的到来。巧用“状”从，文采斐■——状语从句状语从句主要包括时间、地点、条件、原因、让步、比较、方式、目的和结果等九类从句。•（2019・北京高考满分作文）It'ssuchamustseeplacethatyouwon'tgetdisappointedwhenyougothere.这个地方最值得一看，你去了绝不会失望。•（2017・全国卷口满分作文）Furthermore,wheneveryoumeetwithsomepuzzlingquestions,don'thesitatetoturntome.此外，每当你遇到一些令人困惑的问题时，请不要犹豫向我寻求帮助。攻略四非谓语整合句子写作时，可以利用非谓语动词对简单句进行整合，使其成为高级表达，其中with结构，分词或不定式做状语是利用频率较高的高级句式。•（2018・全国卷口）Enjoyingeverydishmeansyoureallyappreciatewhatyourfriendhasdoneanddon'tforgettopraiseyourfriendforthedeliciousfoodofferedbyhim.享用你的朋友做的每一道菜，并不要忘记赞扬你的朋友提供的美味佳肴。•（2018・全国卷口满分作文）Withalargestadiumsetupinourschool,westudentscantakepartinvariousphysicalactivities.随着我校一个大型体育馆的建成，我们学生们可以参加多种体育活动。攻略五适时感叹增添色彩在文章结尾处恰当利用感叹句，可以起到画龙点睛的作用，韵味无穷。•HowhappyIwastobeoneofthemembersinthiswarmfamily!Thisisoneofthemosttreasuredmomentsinmymemory.成为这个温暖大家庭的一员，我是多么高兴啊！这是我记忆中最珍贵的时刻之一。•Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandrelieveusoftheheavyschoolwork,butitalsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!这不仅让我们靠近大自然，使我们从繁重的作业中放松一下，也促进了我们之间的友谊。多么美好的时光啊！攻略六高级表达提分增效利用高级句式并利用asisknown、asthesayingputsit/asthesayinggoes引出名言、谚语，往往会让阅卷老师拍案叫绝。仅举3例。Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...毋庸置疑•Itgoeswithoutsayingthattimeispreciousforus.毋庸置疑，时间对我们来说是很宝贵的。□Asanoldsayinggoes..,俗话说•Asanoldsayinggoes,“Honestyisthebestpolicy.”俗话说：“诚实才是上策”。There'snodoubtthat...毫无疑问•There'snodoubtthatattentionshouldbepaidtotheproblemofoverusingthemobilephones.毫无疑问，（我们）应关注过度使用手机的问题。佳句展示按要求升级以下各句HispoemsnotonlyhaveastronginfluenceontheChineseliterature,butalsotheyhavebeentranslatedintomanyforeignlanguages.（利用倒装句式升级）一NotonlydohispoemshaveastronginfluenceontheChineseliterature,butalsotheyhavebeentranslatedintomany_foreignlanguages.Wespendthetimeandenergyonthepresentwhichmakesitvaluableratherthanthemoneywepay.(利用强调句强调宾语)一Itisthetimeandenergywespendonthepresentthatmakeitvaluableratherthan_the_money_we_pay.WhilehewaswritingjtheJbook,LiShizhensufferedalotfromtastingsomeunknownplantsonhisown.（利用省略句简化画线部分）一While_writing_the_bookAs_the_Earth_Day_was_approaching,_alotofposterswereputuparoundourschooltocallonustojoinintheactionsforagreenerearth.（利用with结构升级画线部分）一With_the_Earth_Day_approachingFinallyIwanttoexpressmyhope.Alltheyoungerfellowscanmakefulluseoftime.（利用名词性从句合并句式）^Finally_I_want_tQ_express_my_hope_that_all_the_younger_fellows_can_make_full_use_oftime.佳作示例按要求升级下面的考场作文，并背诵成文假定你是李明，了解到你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣，想邀请他一起参观中国书法展(ChineseCalligraphyExhibition)。请你写封邮件，内容包括：展览时间、地点；展览内容。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。考场作文DearTom,Howisitgoing?I'dliketoinviteyoutotheChineseCalligraphyExhibitiontobeheldnextSaturdaymorninginthemuseumofourcity.Ontheexhibition,therewillnotonlybemanyexcellentworksofvariousstyles,butyoucancommunicatewithsomefamousartists.Theywillgivealiveperformanceoftheirwritingskills.Furthermore,therewillbealecture,whereyoucanlearnthebeginning,developmentandachievementsofChineseCalligraphy.IknowyouhaveadeepaffectionforChinesetraditionalculture,andIbelieveitswellworthavisit.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiMing我来提升档次利用非限制性定语从句合并加黑体句子，并按要求升级合并加黑体句子Ontheexhibition,therewill_not_only_be_many_excellentworksofvariousstyles,一but_you_cancommunicate_with_some_famous_artists,_who_will_give_a_livejDerformance_of_their_writing_skills.利用倒装句式升级合并后的句子Ontheexhibition,notonlywill_there_be_many_excellentworksofvariousstyles,but_you_cancommunicate_with_some_famous_artists,_who_will_give_a_liveperformance_of_their_writing_skills.利用分词做状语升级加斜体句子Knowingyou_have_a_deep_affection_for_Chinese_traditional_culture,_Ibelieve_it's_wellwortha_visit.真题演练（2020年，全国卷II）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：农场情况;米摘过程；个人感受汪意.词数100左右；题目已为你写好。题目:MyWeekend【参考范文】MyWeekendOrganizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.Thefarmissituatedatthefootofamountain,theskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Wewereattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Therearedifferentkindsoffruittreesaswellasavarietyofanimals.Onarriving,wesawredripepeacheshangingonthetree.Usingbasketsandladders,Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.Icouldn’twaittotakeabite,andthesweetjuicewentdownmythroat.Iwasgratefulforthisopportunitytogetclosetonature.NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!【写作解析】第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括：1.农场情况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pickpeaches,iss