四级观点对比型作文

对比题型（）

1.定义：对比选择型文章，要求考生就题目中提到的某一事物或社会现象给出两个对立的观点，然后将两种观点进行对比，并表明自己的看法和立场，或做出选择。所提出的两种观点有时并没有对错之分，有时也可以根据常识判断出某一观点错误或者不成立。其常见形式是：一、目前存在某个问题，人们有不同的观点；二两种观点各自的理由；三、我的看法。大家看一下往年的一些考试题目，体会一下该题型的特点。结构公式陈列观点或选择Aeq\o\ac(○,1)主题句：提出要讨论的主题，引出两种不同的观点或选择。如：简述要讨论的主题，引出对其的不同观点或选择/Whenitcomesto谈论主题，thereisnocompleteagreementamongpeople。eq\o\ac(○,2)扩展句一：指出一种观点或选择如：Somepeoplethink/preferto/choose观点或选择A。eq\o\ac(○,3)扩展句二：阐述该种观点或选择的第一点理由。eq\o\ac(○,4)扩展句三：阐述该种观点或选择的第二点理由。观点或选择Beq\o\ac(○,5)主题句：转折引出另一个观点或选择。如：However,therearemanyotherswho观点或选择B。eq\o\ac(○,6)扩展句一：阐述该种观点或选择的第一点理由。如：Intheiropinions/Theymaintain/theypointout观点或选择B的第一点理由。eq\o\ac(○,7)扩展句二：阐述该种观点或选择的第二点理由。如：Besides,观点或选择B的第二点理由。第三段“我”的观点或选择eq\o\ac(○,8)主题句：综合两种观点或选择，说明“我”的观点或选择。如：Asforme,Iagree“我”的观点或选择。/Weighingupthesetwoarguments/choices,“我”的观点或选择。eq\o\ac(○,9)扩展句一：阐述“我”的第一点理由。eq\o\ac(○,10)扩展句二：阐述“我”的第二点理由。eq\o\ac(○,11)结尾句：经常是提出建议或作出展望。如：Therefore/Toconclude,作出总结。例：（2005年12月）Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:名校校园正成为旅游新热点。校园是否应对旅客开放，人们看法不同。我认为……参考范文ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?eq\o\ac(○,1)Whenitcomestowhethertheuniversitycampusshouldbeopentotourists,thereisnocompleteagreementamongpeople.eq\o\ac(○,2)Somepeoplethinkthatuniversitycampusshouldwelcomethevisitingoftourists.eq\o\ac(○,3)Theysaythatbeingclosedtotouristsmaymakestudentsisolatedfromtheoutsideworld.eq\o\ac(○,4)Also,theymaintainrefusingtouriststoviolatethespiritofopenness.eq\o\ac(○,5)However,therearemanyotherswhodonotfavortheuniversitycampusbeingopentotourists.eq\o\ac(○,6)Intheiropinion,touristswilldestroythequietenvironmentandinfluencestudents’normalstudy.eq\o\ac(○,7)Besides,theyarguethattoomanytouristswilladdaburdentothesecuritydepartmentoftheuniversity.eq\o\ac(○,8)Weighingupthesetwoarguments,Ithinkauniversityshouldbeanopenplace.eq\o\ac(○,9)Byvisitingtheuniversitycampus,touristscanfeeltherichculturalatmosphere.eq\o\ac(○,10)Inaddition,collegestudentscanhavemorechancetocontactthepeopleandtheworldoutsidethecampus.eq\o\ac(○,11)Therefore,theuniversitycampusshouldbereadytoembracethetouristsallovertheworld.实例1----1999年6月真题

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?Youshouldwriteatleast100words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline（giveninChinese）below:

有人认为读书要有选择

有人认为应当博览群书

我的看法

ModelComposition

ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?

Whenitcomestothechoicebetweenreadingselectivelyorextensively,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somearguethatweshouldbecarefulinchoosingreadingmaterials,whileothersmaintainthatwecanbenefitmorefromreadingasmanykindsofbooksaspossible.

Thefirstgrouphavetheirargumentsasfollows.Ontheonehand,ourtimeislimited,therefore,wehavetoputoureffortsinthemostimportantbooks.Ontheotherhand,weneedspecializedknowledgeinordertofindagoodjob.

However,otherpeoplebelieveweshouldreadextensively.Foronething,extensivereadingcanbroadenourhorizon.Foranother,weneedabroadeducationtobetterunderstandtheworldaroundus.

AsfarasIamconcerned,IprefertoreadextensivelybecauseIhaveawiderangeofinterests,suchasinliterature,incomputerscienceandsoon.Asaresult,extensivereadingmaysatisfymyneedandmakemehappy.（160words）

练习篇（第一次四级模拟考试）Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的2)阐述他们各自的考虑3)表明你的看法【行文思路】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。【背诵范文】HighSalariesorCareerDevelopment?Therearemoreandmorepeoplelookingforjobseveryyear,buttheyhavedifferentviewsaboutwhatkindofjobtheyshouldchoose.[1]Someofthemfocustheirattentiononthejobsthatpromisehighsalaries.[1]Othersshowapreferenceforthosejobsthatofferchancestolearnskillsandadvancementpossibilities.[2]Peopleholdingthefirstviewusuallythinkthatmoremoneywillresultinmorehappiness.[3]Withalotofmoneyinhand,theywillbeabletoenjoyarichlife.Otherwise,theywillsufferfromdepression[4]duetolackofenoughmoney.[2]However,theholdersofthesecondviewarguethatoneshoulddevelophisskillsasroundlyaspossible.[5]Itiscareerdevelopmentthatcountsmost.Withoutdevelopment,youwillbeoutrunbyothersandfallbehindthetimessoonerorlater.Inmyview,careerdevelopmentistherightchoicebecausecareermaygiveuslongtermsatisfaction[6]whilehighsalarywouldgiveusshorttermhappiness.Besides,[7]generallyspeaking,agoodcareerdevelopmentwillbringhighsalariessoonerorlater.SoIwill[8]givemyvotetothecareerdevelopmentfirstandthenhighsalaries.【点评】[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。[4]“因为缺钱”。[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。[7]“一般来说”。[8]“选择”。3.对比选择型作文模版模板一1)Whenaskedabout/Whenitcomesto_____,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.2)Somepeopletakeitforgrantedthat_____.3)Intheiropinion,_____.4)Besides,_____.5)Bycontrast,othersholdthat_____.6)Theymaintainthat_____.7)And_____.8)Weighingupthesetwoarguments,Iamforthefirstopinion/choice.9)Foronething/On