高考英语写作专项复习【备课精讲精研+能力拓展提升】求助信亮点句锤炼课件

高中英语写作系列之求助信亮点句锤炼情景导入Whatarethe

problemswemayencounterinourlife?情景导入Whatarethe

problemswemayencounterinourlife?toomuchhomeworklackofrelaxationdifficultyinmakingfriendshighexpectationsfromparentspropertyloss“Socialphobia”lowlearningefficiency头脑风暴Ifyouwanttoaskforhelp,whatwillyousaytoothers?Let’smakeasummary.Ihopetogetyourhelp.Iwanttofindmywallet.Ican’tconcentrateonstudy.Myparentsexpecttoomuchfromme.Idon’thavetimetorelaxmyself.Ifeelshytotalkwithpeople,andIwanttochange.MywalletwasgonewhenIarrivedatHeathrowAirportyesterday.Couldyouhelpme?Thankyousomuchforyourhelp.亮点句1Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelp.Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelp.I’mwritingtoaskafavourfromyou.assistance.askafavourfromyou.Ihopetogetyourhelp.亮点句1求助原因？BecauseIhavemetsomeproblemswith…

,I’mwritingtoaskafavourfromyou.Havingmetsomeproblemswith….,I’mwritingtoaskafavourfromyou.metencounteredwithconcerningIhopetogetyourhelp.亮点句1Havingencounteredsomeproblemsconcerning…,I’mwritingtoaskafavourfromyou.Inthefaceof亮点句2Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet,andhopetogetyourhelp.getyourhelp.obtainkindassistancefromyou.hopingto/inthehopeofIwanttofindmywallet亮点句2I’mwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet,hopingtoobtainkindassistancefromyou.亮点句3如何表达「有困难」？Iamencounteringgreatdifficultyin…Ifinditextremelychallengingto…Ican’tconcentrateonstudy.亮点句3如何表达「专注学习」？concentrateonstudydedicatemyselftostudystudyattentivelywithoutbeingdistractedIcan’tconcentrateonstudy.亮点句3Iamencounteringgreatdifficultyindedicatingmyselftostudy.Ifinditextremelychallengingtostudyattentivelywithoutbeingdistracted.Ican’tconcentrateonstudy.亮点句3有何后果？Ittroublesmealot.Itreducesmylearningefficiency.reducesimpairsIcan’tconcentrateonstudy.亮点句3Iamencounteringgreatdifficultyindedicatingmyselftostudy,

whichtroublesmealot.Ifinditextremelychallengingtostudyattentivelywithoutbeingdistracted,whichimpairsmylearningefficiency.亮点句4Meetingmyparents’expectationsisdifficult.Livinguptomyparents’expectationsisanexactingtask.MeetingSatisfyingLivinguptodifficult.tough.anexactingtask.Myparentsexpecttoomuchfromme.亮点句4有何后果？Itgivesmelotsofmentalpressure.Ittroublesmealot.putsb.underpressureMyparentsexpecttoomuchfromme.亮点句4Livinguptomyparents’expectationsisanexactingtask,puttingmeundergreatmentalpressure.Whattroublesmealotistoliveuptomyparents’highexpectations.亮点句5如何表达「没有」？Ihardlyhavetimetorelaxmyself.HardlydoIhavetimetorelaxmyself.HardlyScarcelytorelaxmyself.forentertainment.Idon’thavetimetorelaxmyself.亮点句5为何没时间？BecauseIhavetoomanyassignments,scarcelydoIhavetimeforentertainment.Withtoomanyassignmentstodo,…Withmylifefullyoccupiedwithvariousassignments,…Idon’thavetimetorelaxmyself.亮点句5Withmylifefullyoccupiedwithvariousassignments,scarcelydoIhavetimeforentertainment.亮点句6如何表达「迫切」？Iameagertochange…Iamanxioustoovercomemyfearof…Iamanxioustoovercomemyfearoftalkingwithpeople.Ifeelshytotalkwithpeople,andIwanttochange.亮点句6如何表达「内向」？toointroverttocommunicatewithotherstoointroverttoinitiateconversationswithothersIamanxioustoovercomemyfearofinitiatingconversationswithothers.Ifeelshytotalkwithpeople,andIwanttochange.亮点句6Iameagertoovercomemyfearofinitiatingconversationswithothers.亮点句7MywalletwasgonewhenIarrivedatHeathrowAirportyesterday.IfoundmywalletlostuponmyarrivalatHeathrowAirportyesterday.whenIarrivedatuponmyarrivalatMywalletwasgonewhenIarrivedatHeathrowAirportyesterday.亮点句7一到希思罗机场我就发现我的钱包不见了，肯定是我在飞机上从口袋里拿纸巾的时候，不小心掉出来了。IfoundmywalletlostuponmyarrivalatHeathrowAirportyesterday,whichIguessmayresultfrommycarelessnesswhentakingtissuesoutofmypocketduringtheflight.中英丢失原因？MywalletwasgonewhenIarrivedatHeathrowAirportyesterday.亮点句7IfoundmywalletlostuponmyarrivalatHeathrowAirportyesterday,whichIguessmayresultfrommycarelessnesswhentakingtissuesoutofmypocketduringtheflight.亮点句8如何使语气委婉？Iwonderifyoucouldhelpme.需要何种帮助？Iwonderifyoucouldoffermesomeadviceon…constructiveCouldyouhelpme?亮点句8面临以上问题，我希望您能给我提供一些关于提升专注力的建议。Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iwonderifyoucouldoffermesomeconstructiveadviceonimprovingconcentration.Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iwonderifyoucouldkindlyoffermesomeconstructiveadviceconcerningboostingconcentration.中英英InthefaceofCouldyouhelpme?亮点句8Inthefaceoftheaboveproblems,Iwonderifyoucouldkindlyoffermesomeconstructiveadviceconcerningboostingconcentration.亮点句9如何表达「感谢」？Iwouldappreciateitif

youcouldgivemesomesuggestions.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmeoutbyofferingmesomecorrespondingsuggestions.Thankyousomuchforyourhelp.Iwouldbeobligedif…亮点句9Iwouldbeobligedifyoucouldhelpmeoutbyofferingmesomecorrespondingsuggestions.物品丢失Ifoundmy…lostuponmyarrivalat…生活问题Iamanxioustoovercomemyfearof…be

toointroverttoinitiateconversationswithothers学习问题Iamencounteringgreatdifficultyin…Ifinditextremelychallengingto…Whatdoyoufind?Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Ihopetogetyourhelp.Iwanttofindmywallet.Havingencounteredsomeproblemsconcerning…,I’mwritingtoaskafavourfromyou.I’mwritingtoreportthelossof…,hopingtoobtainkindassistancefromyou.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Ican’tconcentrateonstudy.Iamencounteringgreatdifficultyindedicatingmyselftostudy,whichtroublesmealot.Ifinditextremelychallengingtostudyattentivelywithoutbeingdistracted,whichimpairsmylearningefficiency.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Myparentsexpecttoomuchfromme.Livinguptomyparents’expectationsisanexactingtask,puttingmeundergreatmentalpressure.Whattroublesmealotistoliveuptomyparents’highexpectations.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Idon’thavetimetorelaxmyself.Ifeelshytotalkwithpeople,andIwanttochange.Withmylifefullyoccupiedwithvariousassignments,scarcelydoIhavetimeforentertainment.Iameagertoovercomemyfearofinitiatingconversationswithothers.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2MywalletwasgonewhenIarrivedatHeathrowAirportyesterday.Ifound….lostuponmyarrivalat....,whichIguessmayresultfrommycarelessnesswhentakingtissuesoutofmypocketduringtheflight.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Couldyouhelpme?Inthefaceoftheaboveproblems,Iwonderifyoucouldkindlyoffermesomeconstructiveadviceconcerningboostingconcentration.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Thankyousomuchforyourhelp.Iwouldbeobligedifyoucouldhelpmeoutbyofferingmesomecorrespondingsuggestions.锤炼词汇askforyourhelpaskforyourassistanceaskafavourfromyoumeetproblemswithencounterproblemsconcerninggetyourhelpobtainkindassistancefromyou010203锤炼词汇concentrateondedicateoneselftodoingmeetone’sexpectationsliveuptoone’sexpectationsbedifficult

beanexactingtask040506dosth.attentivelywithoutbeingdistracted锤炼词汇givesb.pressureputsb.underpressurebeshytotalktosb.betoointroverttoinitiateconversationswithsb.improveconcentrationboostconcentration070809锤炼句式Ihavemetsomeproblemswithadaptingaplayfromtextbook.Ihopeyoucouldhelpmewithit._________________somedifficultyinadaptingaplayfromtextbook,Iamwriting______________________.01Havingencounteredsomedifficultyinadaptingaplayfromtextbook,Iamwritingtoaskafavourfromyou.锤炼句式Theadaptionfromtextbookisquiteachallengebecauseweareuncertainabouttheplot.Uncertainabouttheplot,________________________toadaptfromtextbook.02Uncertainabouttheplot,wefinditextremelychallengingtoadaptfromtextbook.锤炼句式IhavetospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakesports.With___________________________________________,hardly______________________.03Withtoomuchtimespentontheassignments,hardlydoIhavetimetotakesports.锤炼句式Thehighexpectationsfromtheteachersandmyparentsmakemeextremelystressful.Ittroublesmealot._________troublesmealotis_____________thehighexpectationsfromtheteachersandtheparents,______makesmeextremelystressful.04Whattroublesmealotistoliveuptothehighexpectationsfromtheteachersandtheparents,whichmakesmeextremelystressful.锤炼句式MycamerawasgonewhenIarrivedathome.Imusthaveleftitinthestadium.______________________,Ifoundmycameragone,________Ibelievemusthavebeenleftinthestadiumbecauseof_______________.05Uponmyarrivalathome,Ifoundmycameragone,whichIbelievemusthavebeenleftinthestadiumbecauseofmycarelessness.满分句型1.

遇到了一些学习上的问题，我诚挚地向您求助。Havingencounteredsomeproblemsconcerningstudy,I’mwritingtoaskafavourfromyou.2.

我的笔记本昨天丢在商店了，希望可以得到您的帮助。I’mwritingtoreportthelossofmynotebookinthestoreyesterday,hopingto