读后续写+The+lost+gold+piece+课件【高效课堂精讲精研】 高三英语二轮复习

ReadingandwritingThekeyelements(要素)ofastoryAstoryalwaysinvolvescharacters’ongoingactionsandfeelingsindifferentsettings.Astorycharacters（who）1.Actions(what)2.Feelings(how+why)3.Settings(When+Where)AftertheFirstWorldWar,asmallgroupofveterans(老兵)returnedtotheirvillageinFrance.Mostofthemmanagedtogetalongquitewell,butone—Barton,whohadbeenwoundedandneverrecoveredhisstrength—wasunabletoworkregularly.Intimehebecamepenniless.Yethewastooproudtoacceptcharityfromthepeopleinthevillage.Onceeachyeartheveteransheldareuniondinner.OnoneoftheseoccasionstheymetinthehomeofClinton,whohadmadeagooddealofmoneyandhadgrownself-important.Clintonproducedacuriositybyshowingthemalargecoin,aboutwhoseageandvaluehekepttalkingforlong.Eachmanexamineditwithinterestasitpassedaroundthelongtable.Allhaddrunkwinefreelyandtheroomwasresoundedwithnoisytalk,sothatthegoldpiecewassoonforgotten.Later,whenClintonwantedtogetitback,however,thecoinwasmissing.Instantlytherearosequestionsanddenials.Finallythevillagelawyersuggestedeveryonebesearched,towhichallagreed—exceptBarton.Hiscompanionslookedathimwithsurprise.“Yourefuse,then?”askedClinton.Bartonturnedred.“Yes,”hesaid.“Icantallowit.”“Doyourealize,”askedtheownerofthegoldpiece,“Whatyourefusalimplies?”“Ididnotstealthegoldpiece,andIwillnotsubmittosuchasearch.”Bartonansweredfirmly.Onebyone,therestofthegroupturnedouttheirpockets.Whenthecoinfailedtoappear,attentionwasfocusedoncemoreonpoorBartonagain.“Surelyyouwillnotpersistinyourrefusal?”thelawyerdemanded.Bartonmadenoreply.Clintonwalkedoutoftheroominanger.NooneaddressedanotherwordtoBartonandhereturnedtohishome.Fromthatdayon,Bartonwasadisgracedman.Peopleturnedtheireyesawaywhentheymethim.Hegrewpoorer,andwhenhiswifediednotlongafterward,nooneknewwhetheritwasfromwantorshame.Afewyearslater,Clintonmadesomechangesinhishouse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________BartonlookedatClintonblankly(茫然地).________________________________________________________________________________________________________ElementsofastoryMainideawhowhathowwhywhenwhereClinton,Barton,otherveteransClintonshowedagoldcoin,butitwasmissing.EveryoneagreedtobesearchedexceptBarton.toopround,self-important,disgraced,angryafterthe1stWorldWaratareunionpartyMainideaAfterthe1stWorldWar,Bartonwaswoundedandpenniless,buthewastooproudtoaccepthelp.Atareunionparty,Clinton,aself-importantman,showedagoldcoinandthegoldcoinwassoonmissing.EveryoneagreedtobesearrchedexecptBarton.ClintonwasangryandBartonbecameadisgracedman.Astorymountainopeningbuildupproblemsolutionendingproblem?solution?asearchWasBartonthethief?Afewyearslater,Clintonmadesomechangesinhishouse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________BartonlookedatClintonblankly(茫然地).________________________________________________________________________________________________________Q1:Whatdidhefind?Wheredidhefindit?(Actions)Q2:Whatwouldhedonext?(Actions)Q3:Howdidhefeel?(Feelings)Q1:Whyblankly?(Feelings)Q2:WhydidBartonrefusetobesearched?(Actions&Feelings)Q3:Whatwasending?(Actions)Actions:found/disvovered,hurriedto/rushedto,apologizedtoFeelings:guilty/regretful/confusedSettings:ahumblehouseActions:explained/hugged/heldone’shandFeelings:forgiving/relievedSettings:thetoughtimepleasecompletethestory优秀句子赏析描写发现金币Suddenly，asmallshiningthingcaughthiseyes.(霍)Whenhewasabouttochangethefloor,somethingshiningbrightlyappearedtohiseyes.(赵)Whatthrilledhimwasthatthegoldpiece,whichhaddisappearedforyears,wasfoundcoveredunderthecarpet.Seeingthecoinlyingonthefloor,Clintonwassoshockedthat

hefeltlikehisfacewasburning.

Afteratoughstruggle,hefinallymadeadecisiontovisitBarton.(杨)Hestruggledupandlookedatit,speechlessinshock.(张)描写内心懊悔Hewasshockedbeyondwords.(邓)HeregrettedhavingblamedBartonunjustly.(秦)Clintonfeltashamedandthebloodrushedtohisface.Heranoutofhishousetheinstanthetookoverthemissingcoin(张)HewassurprisedbutashamedbecauseheknewthathemisunderstoodthatBartonforstealinghiscoin.(罗)描写Clinton敲门Clintonknockedatthedoornervously,andthenhesawanoldmanopenthedoorslowly.(陆)Afterawhile,thedooropened.Apalefaceappearedintohiseyes.(彭)Clintontookadeepbreathandknockedatthedoornervously.Withthesoundofthedoor,itopenedslowly.(叶)WhenhearrivedatBarton’shome,hesawthatitwasveryshabbyandovergrownwithgrass.Clintonrangthedoorbellandpacedupanddownnervously.(陈)描写Clinton敲门About10minuteslater,hearrivedatBarton’shomewhichwasveryshabbyandovergrownwithgrass.Clintonrangthedoorbellandpacedupanddownnervously.(姚)Heknockedatthedoorofahumblehouseandamaninashabbyshirtcameout.(钟)Withthequestionsinhismind,heknockedatthedoorandapoormanopenedit.(??)描写Barton开门后的心理和对话Hedidn’tknowwhyClintonstoodinfrontofhishouse.Becausesincethatday,noonetalkedwithhimorvisitedhim.Tohissurprise...(钟)Thenhefrownedinpuzzle,“Whydoyoucomehereandwhatdoyouwant?”(霍)描写Clinton道歉Clintonexplainedit,showingthecoin.(李)Clintonshowedthecointohimandexpressedhissincereapologytohim.(赵)ClintonwipedthesweatfromhisfaceandapologizedtoBarton.(罗)描写Barton不愿搜身的理由Bartonsaidthatpeoplecanlosemoneybutnotpride.(石)Ihavemyrighttorefusetheillegalsearch.(邓)BartonwalkedtowardClintonweaklyandputhishandonhisarm,saidslowly,...结尾的升华Thetruthmaybelate,butitwillcome.(邓)Friendsshouldbelieveeachotherintoughtimes.Mutualtrustcancarrypeoplethroughdifficulties.(刘)Paragraph1Afewyearslater,Clintonmadesomechangesinhishouse.He

spottedthegoldcoin,buriedindirtunderthewoodfloorinthediningroom.ClintonimmediatelyrealizedthatBartonwasinnocent.HurryingtoBarton'shumblehome,hetoldhimoftheamazingdiscoveryofthecoinandapologizedtohimsincerelyforhavingsuspectedhim.“But,”heaskedwithconfusion“youknewthatthegoldpiecewasnotonyourperson-whydidyourefusetobesearchedthen?”Paragraph2BartonlookedatClintonblankly(茫然地).Themanwhowasshabby,oldbeforehistime,saidbrokenly“Becausemypocketswerefilledwithsomethingdisgraceful”.Embarrassed,hecontinued,“ForweeksmyfamilyandIhadn'thadenoughtoeat-mypocketswerefulloffoodthatlhadtakenfromthetabletocarryhometomywifeandhungrychildren.Words

failedClinton,holdinghisfriend’shandsfirmly.Inthetoughestanddarkesttime,dignityandhonestymightbetheonlypossessionforthoselittlepeople.Paragraph1:

AfewyearslaterClintonmadesomechangesinhishouse.Whenhewasshiftingtheoldsofanearbytothelongtable.hiseyescaughtsomething

glisteninginthesunshine.Coulditbe,indeeditwas,hispreciousgoldcointhoughttobelostandgoneforever.Hismemorycastbacktothereunionnightandtothememoryofhisoldex-friendBarton...Hehadn'ttakenit,ithadsimplybeenmisplaced.ClintongatheredupthecoinandwentintothevillagetolookforBartontoapologize.WhenhearrivedatBarton’ssmallshabbyhouse,"Barton"criedoutClinton.Sample2Sample2Paragraph2:BartonlookedatClintonblankly.(茫然地)“Whyareyouhere?Ihavenotdoneanythingwrong-Idonothaveyourcoin.”saidBarton.Clintonexplainedthathefoundthecoinandcametoapologize.“Bu