高考英语复习读后续写练习【知识精讲精研+能力培优提升】 课件(贫困男孩赚钱买圣诞树过圣诞节)

高考英语读后续写语篇练习贫困男孩赚钱买圣诞树过圣诞节1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Marcussatbyhiswindow,staringatthelightsonotherbuildings.HethoughtofhisPapawhowasvisitingMarcus'sickGrandpainthehospital."IwilltrytohelpMamawhileyouaregone,"Marcushadpromisedhisfather.Hislittlebrother,Peter,satbesidehim."WhenarewegettingourChristmastree,Marcus?"Peterasked."Ican'twaittodecorateitwithMama'sstrawbird.""We'renotgettingatreethisyear,Peter.""Whynot?""ToomanybillswithGrandpasick.Mamasaidwecan'taffordone."Someoneknockedontheirapartmentdoor,andtheyhurriedtoseewhoitwas.ItwasJackfromdownstairs.Theylethiminandhelookedaround."Notreeyet?Ihelpedputupourartificialtreeaweekago.It'suptotheceiling.JusttwomoredaystillChristmas!Iguessyou'renotgettingatree."Jack'swordsleftPeterquiteunconvinced."Ofcoursenot!WearegoingtobuyarealChristmastree,arealone!"Jackshruggedhisshouldersandwalkedaway.4续写原文Marcuswalkedslowlytohisroomandgatheredhispocketmoney.It'sonlysevendollars.Hethoughtthat,withschoolout,hecouldearnenoughmoneyintwodaystobuyatreeandsurpriseMama.Thenextday,hestayedbusycarryinggoodstohelpshoppers.Bythetimeheleft,sixmoredollarswereearnedintohispocket.Itwashisluckydayandheexpectedthatthirteendollarsshouldbuyasmalltree.Hewhistledallthewaytothetreelot（场地）.Buteventhesmallesttreeswerefifteendollarsormore.Tomorrowwouldbebusywithmoreshoppers.Marcushadtoearnthoseextradollars.Heaskedthesellerinthetreelot:"Canyousavethistreeforme,sir?""Ican't,"themansaid,"butcomebacktomorrow.Itmightstillbehere.""Iwillbeback."Marcuswavedanddashedoff.5段首句Para1：Thenextday,MarcusandPetercametothetreelot,onlytoseeanevensmallertree.Para2：Theywenttoanearbystoretobuydecorationswiththesparedollars.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了圣诞节要到了，Marcus家里因为支付爷爷生病账单而没钱买圣诞树，他存钱罐里的钱也不够。他只得赚钱买树，最终在他的努力下，买到了一颗小圣诞树，甚至还买了装饰品，过了一个快乐的圣诞节。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Thenextday,MarcusandPetercametothetreelot,onlytoseeanevensmallertree.由第一段首句内容“第二天，Marcus和Peter来到树场，只见到一棵更小的树。”可知，第一段可描写Marcus的钱足够买下这棵树做圣诞树，并用余下的钱给家人买了圣诞树装饰品。10续写思路分析Para2：Theywenttoanearbystoretobuydecorationswiththesparedollars.由第二段首句内容“他们去附近的一家商店用剩余的美元买装饰品。“可知，第二段可描他们一起装饰圣诞树，并一起度过了难忘的圣诞节。11续写思路分析续写线索因爷爷生病没钱买圣诞树——Marcus打工挣钱——询问售货员买下小树——买装饰物回家——装饰圣诞树——一起过圣诞节12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①购买：buy/purchase/shop②回家：gobackhome/returnhome③装饰：decoratesth.withsth./beadornedwith情绪类①惊喜：besurprised/amazed/astonished/toone'ssurprise②感动：bemoved/toucheddeeply13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Heaskedifitwasforsale.(运用了由连接词if引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]SowhenMamagothome,itwassuchagreatsurprisethatshewasmovedtotears.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句以及such…that句型)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Thenextday,MarcusandPetercametothetreelot,onlytoseeanevensmallertree.Heaskedifitwasforsale.Thesellerlookedattheboysandsaid"That'smylastgrowingtree.Itissmallnow,butitwillgrowtallasyoudo.ItisChristmasEve.Foryou,sixdollars."Theyboughtthetreeandhadalotofmoneyleft,whichmadethemveryhappy.16范文呈现Theywenttoanearbystoretobuydecorationswiththesparedollars.Thentheywentbackhome.TheybeganplacingMama'sstrawbirdsonthebranches.Theyalsodecoratedthetreewithavarietyoflampsandhungthegifts.SowhenMamagothome,itwassuchagreatsurprisethatshewasmovedtotears.Theysanganddancedaroundthetree,spendinganunforgettableChristmas.Marcusthought"WhenPapareturns,he'llseethatIkeepmypromisetohelpMamawhileheisaway."17范文译文第二天，马库斯和彼得来到停车场，却看到一棵更小的树。他问它是否出售。卖家看着男孩们说：“这是我最后一棵长出来的树。它现在很小，但会像你一样长得高。今天是平安夜。对你来说，六美元。”他们买了这棵树，还剩下很多钱，这让他们非常高兴。18范文译文他们用多余的钱去附近的一家商店买装饰品。然后他们回家了。他们开始把妈妈的草鸟放在树枝上。他们还用各种各样