读后续写助人类-圣诞节的玉米罐头讲义 高考英语作文备考

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。Havingworkedatasmallfoodstorefortwoyears,IthoughtIhadbecomesuccessfulatwhatourmanagercalled“customerrelations”.Ifirmlybelievedthatafriendlysmileandanautomatic“sir”,“madam”,“thankyou”and“sorry”wouldseemethroughanysituation.ButonaChristmasnightanoldwomanshookmybeliefthatsuchaglibresponse(巧言应对)couldsmoothoveranydifficultywhiledealingwithotherhumanbeings.Themomentsheenteredthestore,thewomanpresentedasharpcontrasttoourshinystorewithitsbrightlightingandneatlyarrangedshelves.Walkingasifeachstepwerepainful,sheslowlypushedopentheglassdoor.Onsuchazero-degreenight,shewaswearingonlyafadedprintdress,athinsweatertoosmalltobutton,andblackslipperswiththebackscutouttoexposeheels.Therewerenostockingsorsocksonherblue-veinedlegs.Afterwalkingaroundthestoreforseveralminutes,theoldwomanstoppedinfrontoftherowsofcannedvegetables.Shelookedattherowofcans,finallypickedupacanofcornandstaredatthelabel.Atthatpoint,Idecidedtobeagoodandpoliteemployeeandaskedherifsheneededhelp.AsIstoodclosetoher,mysmilebecamehardertomaintain.Anunpleasantsmellofsweatrosefromhertornclothing.“Ineedsomefood,”shemutteredinreplytomybright“Madam,canIhelpyou?”“Areyoulookingforcorn,madam?”“Ineedsomefood,”sherepeated,lookingdownatthecaninherhand,“Anykind.”“Well,thecanofcornisninety-fivecents,madam.”Isaidinmymosthelpfulvoice.“Orifyoulike,wehaveaspecialonbreadtoday.”Afterashortpause,sheliftedherheadandsaid,“ButIcan’tpay.”Forasecond,itwasonthetipofmytonguetotellherthatshecouldtakethecorn.注意：1.

所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好Paragraph1：Thentheemployeerulesfloodedintomymind:remainpolitebutdonotletthecustomersgetthebestofyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Momentsaftersheleft,Irushedoutofthedoorwiththecanofcorn.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Possibleversion1:Thentheemployeerulesfloodedintomymind:remainpolitebutdonotletthecustomers

getthebestofyou.Atthethoughtofthat,Imanagedafriendlysmileandautomaticallyblurtedout,“I’msorry,madam,butIcan’tgiveawayanythingforfree.”Hearingthis,theoldwomannoddedherhead,herfacedarkenedandeyelidsdropped.Unwillingly,sheputthecanbackontheshelf,shuffledpastmetowardthedoorandvanishedintothedistance.Itwasatthatmomentthatarippleofregretwelledupinsideme.HowIwishedIhadn’tsaidthosewords!(81words)Momentsaftersheleft,Irushedoutofthedoorwiththecanofcorn.Fortunately,thegauntfigureoftheoldwomanwasstillinsight,soIwentrunninguptoher.“Madam,MerryChristmas!”saidI,thrustingthecanofcornintoherhand.Forasecond,Icouldfeelthatherhandquivered.Withoutwaitingforherreply,Ijustwavedhergoodbyebeforetrottingstraightaway.Fortherestofmyshift,theimageofthewomanconstantlyremindedmethatwhiledealingwithotherhumanbeings,itwassincereconcernratherthanaglibresponsethatcouldsmoothoveranydifficulty.(92words)Possibleversion2:Thentheemployeerulesfloodedintomymind:remainpolite,butdonotletcustomersgetthebestofyou.Foramoment,Ievenentertainedtheideathatthiswassomesortoftest,andthatthiswomanwassomeonefromtheheadoffice,testingmyloyalty.Irespondeddutifully,“I’msorry,madam,butIcan’tgiveawayanythingforfree.”Theoldwoman’sfacecollapsedabitmoreandherhandstrembledassheputthecanbackontheshelf.Sheshuffledpastmetowardthedoor,hertornanddirtyclothingbarelycoveringherbentback.(80words)Momentsaftersheleft,Irushedoutthedoorwiththecanofcorn.

Butshewasnowhereinsight.WhileIwasdraggingmyselfback,whatkeptmecompanywasmerelybitingwind.Fortherestofmyshift,theimageofthewomanhauntedme.Iwassoyoung,healthyandsmugwhileshewassoold,sickanddesperate.WishingwithallmyheartthatIhadactedlikeahumanbeingratherthansomercilessanemployee,Iwassaddenedtorealizewhenfacingdilemmashowdifficultitwasforahearttostaygold.(85words)【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家小食品店工作了两年之后，在一个圣诞夜，一位老妇人动摇了作者的信念，让作者不相信这种油嘴滑舌的回应可以解决与他人打交道时的任何困难。段落续写①由第一段首句内容“然后，我的脑海中浮现出了员工守则：保持礼貌，但不要让顾客占你的便宜。”可知，第一段描写作者按照员工守则，拒绝提供免费的食物，老妇人失望地离开了，而作者感到了后悔。②由第二段首句内容“她走后不久，我拿着玉米罐冲出了门。”可知，第二段可描写作者给老妇人送去玉米罐头，她很感激，而作者也感悟了在与他人打交道时，应是真诚的关心，而不是能化解任何困难的油嘴滑舌的回应。续写线索：拒绝老妇人—后悔—追上老妇人—老妇人感激—获得感悟词汇激活行为类变黑：darken/blacken/dim消失：vanish/disappear追上：runupto/catchupwith猛塞：thrust/plug情绪类不情愿地：unwillingly/reluctantly/grudgingly后悔：regret/repentance【典型句式】[高分句型1]Itwasatthatmomentthatarippleofregretwelledupinsideme.(强调句型)[高分句型2]Fortherestofmyshift,theimageofthewomanconstantlyremindedmethatwhiledealingwithotherhumanbeings,itwassincereconcernratherthanaglibresponsethatcouldsmoothoveranydifficulty.(that引导的宾语从句和强调句型)同源话题完型填空高考链接：完形填空：(2021浙江卷)阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该项涂黑。Mymotheris92.UnlessIhavetobeoutoftown,eachweekItakemymothertodeher

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andvisitthedoctor,providing

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andtransportation.Duringtheweek,however,shelikestogotoanearbystoreto

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somesmallthingssheneeds.

Lastweekshewalkeduptothestore,butwhenshewenttopayforhergroceries,shewas

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aboutthreedollars.Theonly

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topayforthegrocerieswastotakeoffthe

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shecoulddowithout:abottleofrubbingalcohol（医用酒精）andabarofsoup.Bytakingofthese,shewasableto

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thenewtotaltotheamountofcashshehadwithher.

Atthisstore,people

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andthengoofftothesideto

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theirowngroceries.Mymotherwasputtinghergroceriesintoshoppingbagswhena

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cameuptoherandsaid,"Herearethethingsthatyou

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.Mymother,whoisneverspeechless,wasspeechless.She

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forthewoman'snameandaddresssothatshecould

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her.Thewomantoldheritwasher

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byhergesturethatshedecidedtogobacktothestoreandgivethecashier（收银员）afive-dollarbilltokeeponhand

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thesamehappenedtosomeoneelseiftheydidn'thaveenough

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36.A.exercise

B.housework

C.cooking

D.shopping37.A.reward

B.medicine

C.company

D.shelter38.A.return

B.collet

C.order

D.buy39.A.shot

B.cautious

C.wrong

D.concerned40.A.aim

B.way

C.advice

D.reason41.A.weight

B.things

C.mask

D.glasses42.A.raise

B.add

C.bring

D.switch43.A.showup

B.callin

C.checkout

D.sitdown44.A.store

B.select

C.deliver

D.bag45.A.stranger

B.cashier

C.friend

D.doctor46.A.lookedfor

B.talkedabout

C.threwaway

D.putback47.A.receipt

B.soap

C.cash

D.bottle48.A.asked

B.waited

C.cared

D.searched49.A.Repay

B.trust

C.recognize

D.help50.A.luck

B.chance

C.gift

D.turn51.A.surprised

B.amused

C.touched

D.convinced52.A.incase

B.evenif

C.asthough

D.sothat53.A.energy

B.money

C.space

D.time54.A.faith

B.courage

C.kindness

D.honor55.A.madeherday

B.changedhermind

C.caughthereyeD.metherdemand参考答案：【文章大意】本文是一篇记叙文。

36.D考查名词辨析。【解题思路】根据本句中的“visitthedoctor”可推断，我带妈妈购物看病。D项意为“购物”，符合语境。A项意为“运动，练习”；B项意为“家务”；C项意为“烹饪”，均与语境不符。故选D。37.C考查名词辨析。【解题思路】根据本句中的“UnlessIwasoutoftown”可推断，此处指给妈妈提供陪伴。C项意为“陪伴”，符合语境。A项意为“奖励”；B项意为“药”；D项意为“庇护”，均与语境不符。故选C。38.D考查动词辨析。【解题思路】根据常识可知，她去附近的商店购买她需要的一些小东西。D项意为“买”，符合语境。A项意为“归还”；B项意为“收集”；C项意为“命令，订购”，均与语境不符。故选D。39.A考查形容词辨析。【解题思路】根据下文有人为她付钱可知，上星期她到商店为购买的东西付款时，少了大约三美元。A项意为“短的，不足的”，符合语境。B项意为“谨慎的”；C项意为“错的”；D项意为“关心的”，均与语境不符。故选A。40.B考查名词辨析。【解题思路】根据上文可知，因为钱不够，因此唯一的方法是去掉她买的一些东西。B项意为“方法”，符合语境。A项意为“目的”；C项意为“建议”；D项意为“原因”，均与语境不符。故选B。41.B考查名词辨析。【解题思路】根据第一段最后一句可知，她喜欢去附近的商店购买她需要的东西，因此，因为钱不够，因此唯一的方法是去掉她买的一些东西。B项意为“东西”，符合语境。A项意为“重量”；C项意为“口罩”；D项意为“杯子”，均与语境不符。故选B。42.C考查动词辨析。【解题思路】根据语境可知，通过去掉这些，她能够她将新的购物总数跟她所拥有的现金持平。C项意为“带来，提供”，符合语境。A项意为“提出”；B项意为“增加”；D项意为“转变”，均与语境不符。故选C。43.C考查动词短语辨析。【解题思路】根据本句中的“goofftotheside”可推断，在这家商店，人们结账后到旁边去自己装食品杂货。C项意为“结账”，符合语境。A项意为“出现”；B项意为“召集”；D项意为“坐下”，均与语境不符。故选C。44.D考查动词辨析。【解题思路】根据常识可知，在这家商店，人们结账后到旁边去自己把杂货装入袋中。D项意为“把……装入袋中”，符合语境。A项意为“储藏”；B项意为“挑选”；C项意为“递送”，均与语境不符。故选D。45.A考查名词辨析。【解题思路】根据下文中的“forthewoman’snameandaddress”可知，是陌生人走过来。A项意为“陌生人”，符合语境。B项意为“收银员”；C项意为“朋友”；C项意为“医生”，均与语境不符。故选A。46.D考查动词短语辨析。【解题思路】根据上文可知，妈妈带的钱不够，所以就把已经拿好的东西去掉一些，因此此处指她放回原处的东西。D项意为“放回原处”，符合语境。A项意为“寻找”；B项意为“谈论”；C项意为“扔掉”，均与语境不符。故选D。47.B考查名词辨析。【解题思路】根据第二段可知，她放回原处的东西有一瓶医用酒精和一块肥皂。所以此处指肥皂。B项意为“肥皂”，符合语境。A项意为“收到，收据”；C项意为“现金”；D项意为“瓶子”，均与语境不符。故选B。48.A考查动词辨析。【解题思路】根据上文可知，陌生人替她付了她放回原处的东西，因此妈妈要她的姓名和地址以便她能偿还。A项意为“要求”，符合语境。B项意为“等待”；C项意为“关心”；D项意为“搜索”，均与语境不符。故选A。49.A考查动词辨析。【解题思路】根据上文可知，陌生人替她付了她放回原处的东西，因此妈妈要她的姓名和地址以便她能归还。A项意为“偿还，报答”，符合语境。B项意为“信任”；C项意为“认出”；D项意为“帮助”，均与语境不符。故选A。50.C考查名词辨析。【解题思路】根据上下文可知，这位陌生人不用她归还，说明她说的这是给妈妈的礼物。C项意为“礼物”，符合语境。A项意为“运气”；B项意为“机会”；D项意为“转弯，变化”，均与语境不符。