Unit4-Reading for writing 高中英语人教版2019必修第三册

Unit4

SpaceExploration

ReadingforWritingChina’sfirstastronaut:YangLiweiThefirstChinesewomantoreachspace:LiuYangHowmuchmoneyhasChinaspentonitsspaceprogram?However......Theearthisstillfacing

poverty,pollution,disease,

hunger......povertyhungerpollutiondiseaseIsexploringspaceawasteoftimeandmoney?Why?1.Whatgenreisthisarticle?（题材）2.Whatistheissue(议题)?It’sanargumentativeessay.Isexploringspaceawasteornot?Tip1:Topicsentenceisusuallythefirstorthelastsentence.Pickoutthetopicsentenceofeachparagraph.Para1Para2Para3Para4

Para5Firstly,exploringspacehasalreadymadeadifferenceinthefightagainstworldhunger.Secondly,spaceexplorationhasalreadypromotedtechnologicalimprovementsthatbenefitusall.Finally,sendingastronautsintospacehashelpedpeopletothinkabouttheworld'sproblemsandeventofindwaystosolvethem.Somepeoplearguethatweshouldstop....However,othersfeelthisisashallowview...Inclosing,exploringspaceprovidestheworldwithmanydifferentbenefits.IntroductionBodyConclusionDifferentpointsReadforstructure

Evidence1Evidence2Evidence3TosummarizetheargumentTorepeatthepointCountriesaroundtheglobearespendingbillionsofdollarsandlotsoftimeonvariousspacemissions,whethertoMarsorotherplanetsmuchfurtheraway.Somepeoplearguethatweshouldstopwastingtimeandmoneyexploringspace.Instead,weshouldfeedtheworld’spoorandfindimmediatesolutionstootherproblems,suchaspollutionandfataldiseases.However,othersfeelthisisashallowviewwhichfailstorealizehowexploringspacehelpsus.PointIntroducethetopicDifferentpoints在…花费金钱或时间无论更远的…的解决办法

Firstly,exploringspacehasalreadymadeadifferenceinthefightagainstworldhunger.IthasdirectlyresultedinthemanysatellitesthatnoworbitEarth.Anumberofthesatellitesrecorddataonlandandweatherpatterns.ThenthedataistransmittedtoscientistsonEarth.Aftercarefulanalysis,thescientistscanprovideusefulrecommendationsandadviceforfarmers.Asaresult,Space-basedsciencehashelpedfarminginitseffortstogrowenoughfoodtofeedEarth’sincreasingpopulation.Evidence1Howdoesithelptofightagainstworldhunger?Supportingdetails导致传输到结果持续增长的人口Evidence2

Secondly,spaceexplorationhasalreadypromotedtechnologicalimprovementsthatbenefitusall.High-endproductsaroundtheworldaremadetoahigherstandardnowbecauseofadvancedtechnologywhichwasfirstcreatedtomeettherequirementsforspaceexploration.Forexample,spacetechnologieshavehelpedtheresearchanddevelopmentofdifferenttypesofnewmaterial.Theyhavealsohelpedcompaniesmakebetterheartmonitorsandothermachinesthatdoctorsregularlyuse.Today,spacetechnologiesarewidelyusedinallkindsofindustries,andeverydayproductssuchasmemoryfoampillows,andsmartphonecamerasarechangingourlives.

Whatkindoftechnologicalimprovementsdowehavenow?Supportingdetails推动科技进步满足…的要求广泛使用Evidence3

Finally,sendingastronautsintospacehashelpedpeopletothinkabouttheworld’sproblemsandeventofindwaystosolvethem.Seeingpicturesofourplanetasanislandinablackseamadepeoplerealisethatoutplanet’sresourcesarelimited.Inordertoprovideforsucharapidlyincreasingpopulation,scientistsaretryingtofindotherplanetsthatcouldonedaybeournewhome.ThegreatestattentionatpresentisonMarsbecauseitisclosertoEarth.Inthefuture,humansmayliveonbothplanets.1.Whataretheproblemsofourplanet?2.Whatarethewaystosolvethem?Supportingdetails

findingotherplanettoliveon

Inclosing,exploringspaceprovidestheworldwithmanydifferentbenefits.Therefore,itshouldcontinuesoastoprovidenewandbettersolutionstopeople’sshort-termandlong-termproblems.PointTosummarizetheargumentTorepeatthepoint最后为了Introduction

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ConclusionThe

structureofthepassageisgeneral-particular-general(总-分-总）However

Firstly

Secondly

FinallyInclosingTheauthorusedmanytransitionalwordstodevelopineveryparagraphs.Whatarethey?Tip2:Tomakeourarticlemorelogical,weshouldusesomelinkingwords.（连词）Languagefeaturesofanargument体裁：议论文人称：第三人称、第一人称时态：一般现在时为主要点：

分论点1+细节分论点2+细节分论点3+细节……结论：引出话题简洁、清晰、明确1.Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat+主题

人们普遍担忧关于……的问题2.Nowadays,主题isbecomingincreasinglypopular/serious.现在，……变得越来越流行/严重3.With

thedevelopmentof……,moreandmorepeoplechoosetodo+主题随着……的发展，越来越多的人选择做……阐明观点人们对此有不同看法。Theopinions

concerningthishottopicvaryfrompersontoperson.

People

takedifferentattitudestowards/holddifferentopinionsonthisproblem/thisissue.人们认为……Some/Mostholdtheopinionthat...

一些/大多数认为……Some/Mostareinfavoroftheideathat...一些/大多数赞成……的观点Peoplewhoarefor/againsttheidea

thinkthat...支持/反对这个想法的人认为……Somepeopleholdtheviewthat...while

othersarguethat...有些人认为……而另一些人认为……引出话题如何过渡Fromtheir/mypointofview,therearethreefactorscontributingto

thisattitude/problem,which

areasfollows.

在我看来，导致这种态度/这个问题的原因有三个，具体如下。Itcanbeillustrated

fromthefollowing

points.可以从以下几点解释。Itturnsoutbeneficial/harmful

fromthefollowingaspects.从以下几方面来说，它是有益的/有害的。

如何衔接论据？表示递进关系：Inthefirstplace;firstofall;

tobeginwith;firstlywhat’smore;furthermore;moreover;besides;what'sworse;tomakemattersworse;

worsestill表示列举事实：suchas;

forexample/instance;

take...forexample;

表示解释：thatistosay;inotherwords表示观点：inone’sopinion,

inone’sview,

fromone’spointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,asforsb,

personally

如何增加支撑性细节①事实细节——列举具体的实例；补充相关信息Ilikereadingbooks.Ilikereadingbooks,suchasnovels,shortstories,magazinesandnewspapers.I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible,wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.

如何增加支撑性细节②逻辑细节——补充条件、原因、结果、目的等逻辑性内容First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.

如何增加支撑性细节③数据细节——罗列相关数据Studentstookanactivepartinthewritingcompetition.Studentstookanactivepartinthewritingcompetition.Totally758studentssubmittedtheirworksand100ofthemwonaprizebecauseoftheircreativemindsandexpressivewords.④引用——引用谚语或名人名言，增加说服力和可读性Ifirmlybelievethatyouwillsucceed.Chancefavorsthepreparedmind.Ifirmlybelievethatyouwillsucceedaslongasyousparenoeffortforit.重申观点表示总结：inshort;inbrief;inconclusion;ina/oneword;tosumup;allinall;onthewhole;ingeneral增强语气：There’snodoubtthat…There’snodenyingthat…双重否定

Never/Bynomeanscan/shouldwedo…假定你是李华，最近你班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：太空探索的意义。请结合下表内容，用英语给校报写一篇短文，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。赞同者反对者1．获得新的知识；2．从太空取得新资源；3．扩大人类的生存空间。1．耗资巨大；2．宇航员的安全问题。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。导入主题在前几天的班会上，我们对是否有必要进行外太空的探索进行了讨论。阐述正方观点1.获得新知识；2.从太空取得新资源；3.扩大人类未来的生存空间。你的观点agreeordisagree?Reason?Structure阐述反方观点1.耗资巨大；2.宇航员的安全问题。导入主题在前几天的班会上，我们进行了讨论，认为进行太空探索是必要的。Structure在前几天的班会上，我们对是否有必要进行外太空的探索进行了讨论。Wehadanargumentoverwhetherit'snecessarytocarryouttheouterspaceexplorationsataclassmeetingtheotherday．Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardsit.阐述正方观点1.获得新知识；2.从太空取得新资源；3.扩大人类未来的生存空间。Structure我们中的一些人认为研究外太空很重要。首先，人们可以通过探索更好地了解外层空间。

Someofusthinkit’simportanttoresearchtheouterspace.Firstofall，peoplecangetabetterunderstandingoftheouterspacethroughtheirexploration.其次，在那里可以为人类找到新的资源。Secondly，newresourcescanbefoundthereforhumanbeing.第三，这种探索可能在不久的将来为人类生活带来新的生存空间。Thirdly，thisexplorationcanpossiblybringaboutnewlivingspaceforhumanlifeinthenearfuture.Structure阐述反方观点1.耗资巨大；2.宇航员的安全问题。

他们认为这种探索需要花很多钱，这是不值得的。此外，宇航员在外太空做这样的工作是非常危险的。Theybelievethatittakessomuchmoneytodothiskindofexploration，whichisnotworththevalue.

Besides，itisverydangerousforastronautstodosuchworkintheouterspace.然而，其他人则对此强烈反对。However，othersarestronglyagainstit.你的观点agreeordisagree?Reason?Structure在我看来，人们应该具有开拓性（pioneering），因此，这种对外层空间的探索是值得尝试的