2023学年完整公开课版读后续写Afunnystory

Continuationwriting

A

funnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.Ashewalkedalong

ParkAvenue

neartheFirstNationalBank,heheardthesoundofsomeonetryingtostartacar.Hetriedagainandagainbut

couldn’tgetthecarmoving.Arthurturnedandlookedinsideatthefaceofayoungmanwholookedworried.Arthurstoppedandasked,“Itlookslike

you’vegotaproblem,”Arthursaid.“I’mafraidso.I’minabighurryandIcan’tstartmycar.”“IstheresomethingIcandotohelp?”Arthurasked.

Theyoungman

lookedatthetwo

suitcases（手提箱）

intheback

seat

andthensaid,”Thanks.Ifyou’resureitwouldn’tbetoomuchtrouble,youcouldhelpmegetthesesuitcasesintoataxi.”“Notroubleatall.I’dbegladtohelp.”Theyoungmangotoutandtookoneofthe

suitcases

fromthebackseat.Afterplacingitontheground,heturnedtogettheotherone.JustasArthurpickedupthefirstsuitcaseandstartedwalking,heheard

the

loudnoiseofanalarm（警报）.Itwasfrom

thebank.Therehadbeena

robbery

(抢劫)!ParkAvenuehadbeenquietamomentbefore.Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmand

theshouts

of

people

runningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened?”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.Arthurstillcarryingthesuitcase,turnedtolookatthebankandwalkedrightintotheyoungwomaninfrontofhim.Shelookedatthesuitcaseandthenathim.Arthurwassurprised.“Whyisshelookingatmelikethat?”Hethought.“Thesuitcase!ShethinksI’m

thebankthief!”Arthurlookedaroundatthecrowdofpeople.Hebecamefrightened,andwithoutanotherthought,hestartedtorun.

Step1readingforthestyleWhat's

the

style

of

the

passage?A.Narration

（记叙）B.

Exposition（说明）C.

Argumentation

(议论）AstorywhenwherewhowhathowwhyStep2.Readforbasicinformation5w&1h

oneday;whenhewasonthewaytoworkalongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBankArthur,ayoungman,ayoungwoman

Arthurhelped

ayoungmancarryasuitcasebutmadehimselfasuspect（疑犯）ofthebankrobbery.HestartedtorunHowwillthestorydevelop?When:Where:What:How:Who:Why:

thesuitcaseinhishandTobecontinuedStep2.ReadforbasicinformationTheFirstNationalBankStep3.DiscussandWriteTheFirstNationalBankEndingFindoutthekeyclues(线索)basedonthebeginnings:Para1:

Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”Para2:

Thetaxi

stoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur...Step4Readthetwogivensentences-Arthurtookataxiandwenttothepolicestation.

-Arthurmightrealizethattheyoungmanmightbethebankthief.-WhatdidArthursaytothetaxidriver?

-WhatwouldArthurdoandsayinthepolicestation?-theyoungman=thebankthief??What'sinsidethesuitcase?Tip1:Focusonthegivensentenceofparagraph2first.Andsomeinformationinitmustbementionedinparagraph1.Tip2.Usethekeynounsinthegivensentencestoinfermoreinformation.(tone:funny→ahappyending)

moneyotherthingsStep5Predictpossible

plotdevelopmentWhatkindofendingwouldyoupreferforthisstory?AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.…...Someoneorsomethingfunny/amusingandlikelytomakeyousmileorlaughTip3:Sometimes,thegeneralkeywordcanguideustoimaginereasonably.Step6usefulsentences1.一...就...on/upondoing...,/theinstant..他一听到叫声，尽可能快速往前跑。Hearingtheshouts,hewasseizedbyasenseofanxiety，andacceleratedhisrunningasfastashecould,hisbodytremblingasifhewerecaughtnextsecond.On/Uponhearingtheshouts,heranasfastashecould.Theinstantheheardtheshouts,heranasfastashecould.一听到叫声，被深深地焦虑感所控制，他尽可能快速往前跑，身体颤抖好像下一秒就要被抓住了。Tip4:addsomedetailstothesentences（verbs,adj,adsStep6usefulsentences2.看到车，他打开车门，爬上了车。Seeingthecar,heopenedthedoorandclimbedintothecar.看到车，他快速地打开车门，立刻爬上了车，重重地关上门。Seeingthecar,herapidlyopenedthedoor,climbedintothecarinnotime,shuttingthedoorheavily.Tip5:usevividexpressions(adv,phrases)Step6usefulsentences3.意识到自己犯了一个大大的错误，他心底感到一阵尴尬（embarassed）(non-finiteverbs非谓语)Tip5:usedifferentsstructuresHavingrealizedhehadmadeabigmistake,hefeltembarrassedfromthebottomoftheheart.4.他感觉到如此的内疚以致于他不停地向他道歉。（guilty）（倒装句）Soguiltywashethathemadeapologiestohimagainandagain.WritingTime：Haveatry!Paragraph1:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”Usevividexpressions(adv,phrases)UsedifferentstructuresParagraph2:ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur…….WhatwouldArthurdoandsayinthepolicestati